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>>26315
I think my biggest issue with the sequel was that there was literally no sequence to it, and that really bugs me because the artist (Amazume) clearly knows that sequence is what makes a TG.
I also really didn't like the ending to it, because of what it implies (Jun liked being a girl, and is now stuck in a horrible state of gender confusion). While I understand what the artist was getting at (that that's how real transgendered people feel), it just doesn't work for something that's supposed to be fapped to.
I honestly hope the artist makes another sequel (even though that will never happen) that goes something like this:
- Jun is about to leave the countryside forever when suddenly, there's a knock at his door.
- It's Kawase, who is now older. Kawase beckons for Jun to come with him. Jun, although conflicted, goes along with it - but only because he notices the smell of the ocean on Kawase.
- Kawase leads him to a remote lake near the "hideout", which positively reeks of salt water. Sure enough, out comes the "thing" - now fully grown and almost as big as the "hideout" was.
- Without a single word being exchanged, Kawase and Jun nod as the "thing"'s massive tentacles pick them both up. Kawase starts his transformation almost immediately, but Jun is hesitant.
- Jun remembers what Kawase did with him that first time, to make him accept his 'girl self'. He pictures himself as a girl surrounded by copies of his male self.
- Meanwhile, the view pans back out to Jun's actual body, which is just now starting its change, hair growing long and breasts starting to form. Kawase is slightly further along.
- In Jun's head, the male clones watching him slowly begin to turn female, one by one, as his body continues to change. The clones begin to merge back into Girl-Jun, until it's just him on the bed, at the brink of orgasm but unable to make that last step.
- Then, Kawase appears, and helps Jun finish off his (now her) orgasm. Jun and Kawase eventually wake up on the lakeshore, naked and completely female. The "thing" is gone, having served its purpose.
- The final scene would have the right half of the page be Kawase and Jun walking away from the lake, their gender confusion over, knowing that they were meant to be together, still smelling of salt water. The left half would be the new group of boys opening a door similar to the one in Jun/Kawase's "hideout", revealing one of the "thing's" children.
Also, I wish that "thing" existed in real life, and that I knew where one was.
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