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Roommates (loli) Anonymous 12/10/06(Sat)11:32 No. 17319 ID: 5c8966

It all started when I was 19, in my first semester at college. I'd moved away from home and into my first apartment, and got my first roommate as well. He was a year younger than me, but unlike me he hadn't spent a year after graduating highschool saving up his money for tuition and rent. His parents died in an avalanche at a ski resort, and between their considerable savings and the payout from the life insurance, he could afford college and not have to work for years. I hadn't known it when I met him at orientation and we decided to share an apartment, but he also had custody of his 11 year old sister.

The apartment was big, and nicer than I could have ever afforded on my own, so all three of us had separate bedrooms (hers was supposed to be a laundry room or something originally.). I also discovered my roommate was a bit of a dick who neglected his little sister.

I don't think it was intentional, more a result of losing his parents and having to adjust his plans for the future to revolve around caring for his sibling, and he probably wasn't ready for that sort of responsibility. But unless he needed to give her a ride or buy her something she needed, he basically didn't interact with her. He also barely did anything with me; maybe once a week he'd play video games with me, but he spent nearly all his time in class or shut in his room studying.

His little sister was cute, with her blue eyes, freckles, and short, light brown hair, but obviously way too young for me. She didn't play with dolls or anything, so I guess she was mature for her age, but she also spent all her time shut in her room when she wasn't at school. And I don't think she had any friends at her new school either.

After a month or so with my new roommates, we'd settled into a routine. If they weren't exactly friendly, they weren't bad either; quiet, clean, and they were the only way I could afford a really nice apartment just a block from campus.

I wish I'd known then what I know now. It'd have saved me a lot of grief.


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Anonymous 17/10/04(Wed)05:53 No. 25156 ID: 527e2d

Back to the top with you were all patiently waiting!!!


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Anonymous 17/10/14(Sat)18:21 No. 25158 ID: a116a6

Just finished reading this.

FUCK, now I'm part of the Waiting Game Group.

But also, what a read!


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/10/17(Tue)02:19 No. 25159 ID: 07bd1b

>>25141

Sooner than that, next chapter's nearly finished, and it's a doozy. Expect it by the end of the week.


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Anonymous 17/10/18(Wed)07:24 No. 25160 ID: c47e15

>>25159

I am choosing to trust :O


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Anonymous 17/10/19(Thu)05:01 No. 25161 ID: 394241

>>25159
OH SHIT
I'mma mark this on my calendar.


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Anonymous 17/10/21(Sat)23:50 No. 25166 ID: ddf3f5

OP I SWEAR TO GOD IF THERE'S NO SEX IN THE NEXT ONE.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/10/22(Sun)15:37 No. 25168 ID: 63663e

The post-apocalyptic wasteland was a barren desert, the wind blowing a haze of sand across the ruins of civilization. The stillness was shattered by the roar of multiple V8 engines, a horde of classic muscle cars and hot rods, each with a variety of improvised armor, weapons, and spikes welded to them, screamed their way across the wastelands. The lead vehicle was driven by a man wearing mirrored aviators and a leather bomber jacket, while his companion in the passenger seat chose to wear a neon mohawk, football pads, and assless chaps.

"What a day, what a lovely day!" he shouted, clinging the spoils of their latest raid: a waifu body pillow and a bucket of gold jewelry.

Wielding a sawed-off shotgun, he screamed triumphantly as his car was the first to pass through the gates into the fortress looming over the barren plains like a rusted cancer. The harsh, guttural snarl of the engines died down one by one and the horde of raiders barred the gates behind them, then raced down the tunnels into the bunker below.

Gathering with the women and children of the clan, they waited with bated breath as their leader, a muscular man wearing a hockey mask and Speedo and little else, waved them all into silence.

"I see you! I see you all, my people! Road warriors, the strength of the clan! Women, the caretakers of the clan! Children, the future of the clan! I see you all! But now is the time to listen! Listen to the words of our prophet!"

A figure, clad in a hooded robe, stepped onto the stage as the leader took his own seat, then flipped back the hood, revealing a gas mask. The only sound in the bunker was the hiss of breath through his respirator, and then he held up one hand, fingers shaped to make the letter L on his forehead. The rest of the clan did the same, solemnly chanting, "loli is love, loli is life!"

Then the prophet sat down on the stage and slowly removed his mask, revealing himself to be OP.

"And now, my children, I shall tell you the next chapter of my tale..."

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The awaited day was tomorrow. I'd gone an entire week without emptying my balls in anticipation of the special day. I'd gone online and looked up how to have sex with a virgin. Most of the information was less than helpful and it became clear to me that a lot of the people giving advice were either virgins themselves or their 'pure and virgin' girlfriend had been riding the cock carousel for years and her current source of funds was only fooling himself.

Wow. That's a depressing and cynical line of thought. Anyway, I knew for a fact that my girlfriend WAS pure and virginal. For that matter, so was I. Well, definitely not pure, given my activities over the last year or so, but definitely still a virgin.

And all that was going to change tomorrow.

I sat at the table eating breakfast, a bowl of cereal with marshmallow bits that Sara had apparently talked Bill into buying for her. The non-marshmallow component of the cereal tasted like cardboard and the marshmallows were flavorless lumps of sugar and dye that turned the milk a rainbow-colored mess. My heart was racing with nervous anticipation of the coming day... or possibly I was having a heart attack from all the sugar. Maybe both.

Bill had tried the cereal once and never touched it again. Today, he'd opted for toast and an apple for breakfast, along with a copy of his astronomy textbook that he was glued to.

Sara skipped in, humming happily to herself in her frog panties and nightshirt that had definitely gotten shorter on her. Or maybe she'd gotten taller. Probably the latter.

I was so nervous I was even thinking awkwardly. I could tell I was even blushing the moment she came in to pour herself a bowl of cereal and reminded me that we were, finally, going to go all the way and have sex.

Bill closed his textbook and shoved it in his backpack, then snapped his fingers like he'd just remembered something.

"Oh, hey, I forgot to mention, I was thinking I'd leave after Dr. Andre's class this afternoon instead of tomorrow morning. That ok with you?"

"Why wouldn't it be?"

"Well, I'm already inconveniencing you by having you watch Sara for the weekend while I'm gone, I just want to make sure taking off a day early won't be a problem."

"Nah, it's fine. I get home before she does anyway, and tomorrow my only class is after she goes to school, so it makes no difference."

In actual fact, both of us would be skipping class tomorrow for sexy time.

"Cool. Ok, well, I left some money for pizza or something, and if you guys want to rent a movie or something..."

"Do people still rent movies? I thought they just used Netflix or Pirate Bay these days."

"No, they still have rental movies. You just get them out of a vending machine now."

"Huh. I honestly did not know that," I replied, wondering if that's what those red boxes in front of McDonald's that I never saw anyone using were.

"Anyway, if you're cool with it, then I guess I won't be coming back to the apartment. Leaving this afternoon let's me carpool with a couple classmates, so that saves me some gas money."

"Sweet. Have a fun weekend."

"You too."

Bill grabbed another backpack, presumably full of clothes and whatever else he would need during the class trip, and left the apartment.

"Better hurry and get dressed, kiddo. Don't want to be late for school. After all... it's bad enough you're skipping out tomorrow."

Sara grinned mischieviously as she dropped her cereal bowl in the sink and scampered off to get dressed. I waited for her to come out in a cute plaid jumper and pinched her butt as she walked out the door, eliciting an indignant squawk that culminated in her chasing me down the stairs of the apartment building and down the sidewalk until we had to part ways.

I took notes in class, but I really wasn't paying any attention. My thoughts were on my porcelain beauty, her gorgeous blue eyes and freckles, and smooth, soft skin...

It's really awkward walking from one class to the next with a boner.

I ate my lunch robotically, too distracted to even really notice what I was eating. Could have been lasagna with apple sauce for the sauce, string cheese, and toilet paper for the noodles for all I cared.

My afternoon class, I just sat there, leg jittering with nervous energy, tapping my pencil in between notes, counting down every agonizing second until class ended.

I jogged back to the apartment, too excited to walk but too lazy to run. I tossed my backpack into the corner, stripped down to my boxers, and did some exercises to work off my energy, then took a cold shower.

Clad only in boxers, I sat on the edge of my bed and waited. I was buzzing with anticipation, practically hyperventilating. It was finally going to happen! Oh geez. What if I fucked it up? What if I hurt her? What if she didn't like it? What if I came as soon as I put it in? Hell, what if it didn't fit in her at all?

I got up and paced around the room, fingers and lips tingling as I began to hyperventilate.

Then I literally slapped myself and said, "get it together!" I wasn't this nervous when I conned Sara into getting naked with me at the pond. Or when I coaxed her into giving me a handjob. Or a blowjob. Just chill. You've got this, man. You've got this. You know what it takes to satisfy your little lady, and you... think, you know what you're doing now. You've got this.

I focused on my breathing and slowly calmed down. I could almost hear that one song from Star Wars playing in the background. The one when Luke reaches out with the Force. You know the one. I relaxed and sat back down on the bed. I was at peace. I was happy. I was finally going to have sex, and it was going to be with the cutest, most adorable girl on the planet. I. Was. Calm.

Then I had a heart attack when the apartment door opened and Sara's backpack hit the floor with the force of the bomb that leveled Hiroshima. A herd of elephants stampeded down the hall, stopping just short of the door to my room... and then Sara casually came around the corner, leaned against the door frame, and said, "hey" like it was no big deal.

I almost cracked up. I really did.

"Hey yourself," I replied, grinning as I patted the bed beside me.

"Hay is for horses!" she exclaimed as she leaped onto the bed, pausing to take off her shoes and toss them out into the hallway. I nickered like a horse, eliciting a laugh from her, and helped her out of her jumper, blouse, and panties. Naked, she crawled across my bed and lay in the middle, grinning in anticipation as I removed my boxers and freed my massive erection.

"So, since Bill isn't coming home tonight, you want to start early?"

She hesitated a moment, blushing, then grinned even wider and nodded vigorously.

"Um... how... how do we start? I mean..."

"Well, little lady, you just leave that to me."

I kissed her on the forehead, looming over her, and I could feel her trembling nervously. Of course she was even more nervous than I was; she was just a kid, AND I wasn't about to have a monster dick shoved inside of me.

Well, ok, it's not that big, but c'mon. I'm slightly bigger than average, according to the internet, and I'm a grown man and she's a twelve year old girl. There's a bit of a size difference, and she was definitely on the losing end of the equation.

"Don't worry; I won't do it until you're ready. It might hurt a little, but it'll also feel really good," I said, hoping that was actually true. "If it hurts too much or you want me to stop, all you have to do is say something and we'll stop. Ok?"

"Ok," she said, obviously still a little scared.

"And I promise, I won't get mad or have my feelings hurt if we stop or you change your mind. Ok, sweetie?"

"Ok."

I kissed her on the lips and held it for a moment, and she slowly, hesitantly, put her arms around me in a hug, slowly gaining confidence.

"I love you, kiddo," I whispered.

"I love you too," she replied, and I could tell she meant it with all the passion a tweens heart could hold.

I lay down beside her and helped her into my lap, the usual position whenever I fondled her. I commenced the heavy petting with one hand, and gently, so as not to hurt her sensitive buds, felt up her little boobs with the other.

It took a while for her to get into it, but she slowly, slowly relaxed, tension leaking out of her tiny body as she surrendered herself to the sensation of my fingers sliding up and down her smooth slit.

Once I felt her begin to moisten up, I removed my off hand from her budding breasts and carefully inserted my index finger up to the first knuckle, while gently rubbing in the vicinity of her clit with the other. Her legs twitched and she wrinkled her brow a moment, but when no discomfort resulted she settled back in. I began slowly and gently moving my finger back and forth inside of her, intensifying my kneading of the soft flesh between her legs. Her breathing got heavier and faster, her crotch felt hot, and she was definitely moistening up, something the anonymous people of the internet said was important before I jellied my dick into her.

Having brought my little girlfriend to orgasm several times before, I waited until I judged she was close, then removed my finger from her vagina. I kept rubbing, slowly now, and kissed her on the forehead again.

"Ready, kiddo?"

She nodded, hesitation forgotten in the heat of passion, and I gently slid her onto the bed beside me and rolled onto my hands and knees over her.

"Spread your legs apart, kiddo. Like when I make you feel good."

She dutifully spread her legs and angled her hips up toward me, the nervous look returning to her face as she flushed nearly as red as her crotch. I positioned myself between her legs and laid down atop her, supporting my weight on my elbows.

"Remember, it's gonna hurt just a little, but it's gonna feel good too. If you want me to stop, just say so."

She nodded, biting her lip nervously, and craned her head as if trying to watch the deed; she couldn't see much, with me in the way.

I carefully lowered myself further, then used my hand to guide my dick to her crotch. I fumbled around a little, letting go of my dick to feel her up and try to locate the right spot,then grabbing my dick again and pressing the tip against what I hoped was the entrance. I felt like an idiot, and I was definitely blushing just as much as she was. Fortunately, Sara was too distracted with her end of things to notice that I was almost as clueless and hapless as her.

I gently pressed forward and my dick bent sideways; nope, didn't go in. I repositioned myself, rubbing the head of my penis up and down her moist slit until I found the right spot and pushed forward again.

Her pillowy soft lips parted before me, and the tip found itself pressed against something hot and damp. I pressed further and it went inside the moistness just a bit. Sara levitated upward away from my penis and I gently placed one hand on her shoulder in what I hoped was reassurance. She settled down, still straining to see what was going on, and I pushed forward again.

The head of my penis plunged into something mushy, moist, and hot; it was kind of like when Sara sucked my dick, but... different. Definitely different. There was something preventing me from going in further, but I pushed against it, slowly increasing the pressure. Sara squeezed her eyes shut and grit her teeth, but said nothing. In retrospect, she was actually holding her breath, but I didn't realize it at the moment.

I pushed a little more and suddenly the resistance was gone. Like, there should have been an accompanying sound effect. A pop, or a guitar string going twang! as it broke. Sara's eyes bulged and she clapped one hand over her mouth, stifling a yelp. I didn't need my hand to guide my penis anymore, so I held her in a hug, awkwardly keeping my weight off of her, and made reassuring shushing noises as she teared up.

"Do you want me to stop?"

She sobbed and threw one arm over her eyes to hide the fact that she was crying, but she shook her head no.

"Ok. I'm gonna keep going then. Just let me know if you want to stop."

I began pushing again until enough of my penis was inside that I could move back and forth without coming out entirely. I moved slowly and gently, and each thrust got me just a little bit deeper, until finally I was all the way inside of her. I'd bottomed out.

The sensation was VERY different from what I was used to when she sucked me off. For one thing, there weren't any teeth. Thank God. If there were, that'd probably be the basis of a horror movie or something. Actually, I think they made that one. Anyway, no teeth. And instead of firm, pliable lips and a slick, muscular tongue, my dick was wrapped in hot, wet, squishiness. And it was a tight fit! It felt like I could barely get my dick into her, it was so tight!

"Ok sweetie, I'm all the way in now. How you holdin' up?"

No response.

"Sara? You ok?"

"Uh-huh."

She removed her hands from her face, revealing red, tearful eyes, but she didn't seem too terribly upset.

"How's it feel?"

"It hurts."

"Bad?"

"Nu-no. Just... a little."

I squeezed her in another hug, and she put her arms around me to return the embrace.

"Ok. I'm gonna start moving now, ok?"

"O-ok."

I awkwardly found a way to support myself with my knees so I could move my hips, trying to find the right motion; was it straight up and down, or back and forth, or what? Shit, how did our cave-dwelling ancestors figure it out without someone explaining it all to them?

Actually, they were all naked and living in close proximity in a cave, so they probably grew up watching each other do it. Including their parents. Ew.

Focus, idiot!

I slowly moved back and forth inside of her, never pulling out very far, keeping most of my penis inside of her. The word vagina is actually Latin for sheath, and I could see why; hers fit my penis like a glove. A very tight, moist, glove nice and warm from the dryer. It felt absolutely amazing.

Sara lay beneath me, arms wrapped around me in a bear hug, her slender legs spread to her sides, knees drawn up parallel to her chest. Her light brown hair was spread around her head like a halo, hiding most of the pillow. Her eyes were squeezed shut, her teeth were clenched, and she was breathing fast, almost gasping. I could feel her tiny, barely-there boobs pressed against my lower chest. I was finally doing it; I was losing my virginity, giving it to her, and she was giving hers to me. There should have been a church choir singing, to make the moment even more beautiful. Sara had given herself, body and soul, to me. Such a beautiful girl, and she was all mine, as I slowly and gently thrust in and out of her...

I knew it had been at least a few minutes, but it still seemed too soon when I felt that familiar tightness in my balls signaling that I was about to come. I increased the speed of my thrusts, just a little, still careful not to hurt Sara, as I prepared for the moment. My balls were used to being emptied into her willing little mouth at least two or three times a week, and they'd been denied that for the week leading up to this. There was a bit of a backlog built up. The pressure grew and grew until I couldn't hold it anymore and with a shuddering groan I thrust myself as far into Sara's groin as I could go and blew my load deep inside of her. It was the greatest, most intense orgasm I'd ever had, multi-colored fireworks going off inside my brain as I pumped load after load of semen into her. This was the fulfillment of every instinct in the male body, and it was absolutely glorious. I pressed myself against what I thought must have been her undeveloped little womb, filling it up with my seed, pumping more into her again and again in a flow that seemed like it was never going to stop.

With a moan, I got suddenly lightheaded and it was all I could do not to go limp and crush Sara beneath me. I hugged one arm around her bare shoulders, the other one pressing her head against my chest as I panted for breath. Holy shit, that was amazing!

I finally caught my breath and lifted myself up to look at her; my little angel was slightly soiled. Her eyes were red and her face blotchy from crying, snot running from her nose.

"I-is it over?" she asked, voice wavering.

"Yeah sweetie, it's over."

She sniffled and wiped her hand across her face, smearing snot and tears around and not accomplishing much else.

"Good job, kiddo; you really took that like a champ. Does it hurt much?"

"... a little."

"Ok, well just hold still for a second..."

I slowly pulled my softening penis out of her with a gross squelch, and it was instantly followed by a steady trickle of semen. And some of it had a bright pink tinge to it.

"C'mon kiddo, let's get you cleaned up."

I helped her to her feet and she walked awkwardly to the bathroom with me, cupping one hand between her legs to keep from dripping my jizz everywhere. I helped her into the tub and got the water started while she slumped down into a seated position, both hands pressed against her crotch. She looked slightly dazed, and I began to get a little worried.

"You ok, kiddo?"

She nodded, then quietly said, "Can I be by myself?"

"... sure. Let me know if you need anything."

I shut the bathroom door behind me, and exhaled heavily. Shit. I hoped I didn't traumatize her or something.

I walked back into my room and realized that my bed was a mess. The sheet was soaked in jizz, a small amount of blood, and possibly some of Sara's pussy juices. It was a mixture of bodily fluids that I was quite certain had stained the sheet and was working its way into the mattress beneath. I yanked the sheet off and tossed it into the laundry basket, then pulled it back out and wiped my dick off with it before shoving it back in. Then I sat on the edge of the bed, listening to the water run in the other room, and the doubt set in.

I'd hurt her, really, really bad. She was traumatized for life. She'd never want anything to do with me ever again. Maybe she'd even tell someone about it. Maybe my life was effectively over.

Before I got too deep into self-flagellating thoughts, I heard the shower turn off, and a minute later Sara stepped out, hair still damp. She came and sat on the bed next to me, hands covering her crotch protectively, then wiped her nose with the back of one hand as she sniffled again.

"You ok?"

"Uh-huh."

"Does it hurt?"

"It's sore."

"I'm sorry, kiddo. It's like that every girl's first time."

"I know."

"Did you like it?"

".... a little."

"That's good. Did it feel good?"

"... kinda."

"Like when I help you feel good?"

"... a little. Not the same."

"You didn't orgasm?"

She shook her head. I kind of expected it, having read that most girls didn't orgasm their first time, but I still felt kinda bad about it.

"Well, that's normal. Sometimes it takes a few tries before a girl really gets to enjoy it."

"Did... did you like it?"

"It was great. But what really made it special was that I got to do it with you."

She looked away shyly when I said that, smiling for the first time since I'd put it in her. I put one arm around her in a hug and kissed the top of her head, the scent of her wet hair and strawberry shampoo invading my nostrils.

"I love you, kiddo. You're really special to me, you know that?"

"I love you too."

"And I wouldn't want to do this with anybody else."

"No?"

"No. Just you."

She leaned into my hug and rested her head against my chest.

"You want me to make you feel good now?"

"Nuh-uh," she said, shaking her head. She leaned forward to retrieve her panties from the floor and slid them on, silently signaling that her nether regions were off limits for the time being. Seeing the cartoon frog glare at me condemningly, I respected her wishes and, remaining nude myself, laid down on the bed and patted the mattress invitingly. She snuggled up against me and I grabbed my laptop.

"How about a movie?"

"Sure."

A comedy would probably help right about now, so I opened up my folder of pirated movies and hunted for the right one.

"How about... Shrek?"

Sara responded by making a fart noise with her mouth, and I waved my hand in front of my face as if warding off a foul stench.

"Oh, donkey!" I said in my terrible Mike Myers impression.

She giggled and snuggled beside me as I put one arm around her and started the movie.

Yeah, Shrek was definitely the right call.


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Anonymous 17/10/22(Sun)22:49 No. 25170 ID: 2e0c2e

>>25168
OP...OP never delivers... What? I don't... The world does not make sense anymore, the fabric of space time has fractures. OP DELIVERED!


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Anonymous 17/10/23(Mon)04:39 No. 25171 ID: 9d56f7

op delivered so damn much, great story op. you caught a lot of the feelings i had losing my virginity to my gf and put it into words. only difference was she was 2yrs older than me


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/10/24(Tue)05:38 No. 25174 ID: f0592e

5 years, 12 days. Was it worth it?


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Anonymous 17/10/24(Tue)06:49 No. 25175 ID: 9d56f7

>>25174
yes, but the question must be asked. whens the next chapter???


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Anonymous 17/10/25(Wed)23:17 No. 25177 ID: 6d0371

>>25174

You're amazing OP, I just finished it.

It was beautiful. Definitely one of my TOP 10 moments. With the whole story together and this kind of finish; it was real.

And thank you that you kept the story going for more than 5 years. I don't know if it was easy/hard at times, but know that it was worth it.

Hope there are more chapters in the future.

Thanks again <3


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/10/26(Thu)03:26 No. 25178 ID: 2cad3d

>>25177

The story is far from over. I was merely asking if the wait was worth it for the 'payoff' of the main character having sex with Sara.


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Anonymous 17/10/26(Thu)03:48 No. 25179 ID: 2e0c2e

>>25178
In short Yes.

In long yyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssss.


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Anonymous 17/11/02(Thu)05:59 No. 25184 ID: ff168d

>>25174
My reaction to reading this chapter

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=usfiAsWR4qU


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Anonymous 17/11/06(Mon)02:25 No. 25186 ID: 80f54d

HELL. YES!!!


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Anonymous 17/11/07(Tue)05:29 No. 25187 ID: dbcb84

>>25174
This is a really good story, I hope it has a relatively happy ending for the subject matter


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Anonymous 17/11/07(Tue)22:09 No. 25188 ID: 07f23c

>>25174
>that feel when you've been following one of the most amazing stories /elit/ for half a decade, getting cockteased and blueballed by it so many times, and you can't actually fap to the story's first true proper sex scene because you're on meds that have gutted your libido.

But it was worth it, OP. It was so very worth it.


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Anonymous 17/11/13(Mon)00:46 No. 25192 ID: 1195e0

>>25174
Holy shit what a journey... I have so many memories of this story. You are a god


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Anonymous 17/11/13(Mon)01:42 No. 25193 ID: 0c2267

hOLY FUCk our savior has returned thank OP

i'm gunna compile all the parts into one txt and post it later so everyone can just read the whole thing instead of scrolling through tons of posts

jesus christ it's been a long time

what a hell of a ride


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/11/13(Mon)04:50 No. 25194 ID: 02664c

>>25193

Next chapter will probably be around Christmas or New Year's.


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Anonymous 17/11/23(Thu)20:01 No. 25197 ID: 276187

I really hope we get to see her orgasm during penetration sex sooner rather than later, preferably a simultaneous climax


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Anonymous 17/11/24(Fri)02:29 No. 25198 ID: cc8911

Keep making her swallow cum loads.
Great work!


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Kryters 17/11/25(Sat)14:22 No. 25199 ID: 80d347

I actually thought was pretty lame, after making us wait so long. A pointless poking in the bedroom ? I was expecting a romantic drawn out hard shagging in the tent at the hunting preserve with wolves howling in the distance as she screamed your name, the full moon silhouetted her nubile body.


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Anonymous 17/12/01(Fri)14:45 No. 25208 ID: db85e4

I think the flow seemed natural enough, It's more believable story my only issues might be in flushing out the brother's character a bit more, we know he is self absorb and cold, at first I thought he had been abusing his sister then I thought he was distant, it seems odd he never talks about girls or sex or dating in the span of an entire year.


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Anonymous 17/12/02(Sat)22:45 No. 25209 ID: 6d0371

I just appreciate the fact he finished inside of her. That's really what made it for me.

Hopefully she will enjoy it more in the future, but the fact it wasn't perfect this time is what makes this story so real.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/12/13(Wed)08:00 No. 25225 ID: 6683c5

The next morning I stumbled out in my boxers, poured a bowl of cereal, and sat at the table, waiting for my brain to wake up. Maybe I should start drinking coffee.

Sara wandered in, hair sticking in all directions, night shirt sagging off one shoulder and wearing the cartoon frog panties from yesterday and I suddenly didn't need any caffeine to wake up.

"Mornin' kiddo."

"Mornin'."

I poured her a bowl of cereal and she flopped into her chair and started crunching away, staring into the void at That Which Man Was Not Meant To Know, located roughly in the center of the table. She was definitely not a morning person.

"How you feel?"

"Sore."

"Sore?"

"Yeah. Like... there's a bruise in my privates."

There actually probably was, given that it was her first time and all. And I'd certainly stretched her out a bit.

"It'll get better. You want a Tylenol?"

"No, it's not that bad."

We finished our breakfast and I put our bowls in the sink, then said, "Since we're both skipping school today, you wanna watch a movie?"

"Sure."

We migrated to the couch and I let her pick out a movie. She selected one from Bill's stack of DVD's and I raised my eyebrow; Dr. Strangelove didn't seem like the sort of movie a 12 year old girl would be into. For that matter, I didn't know if it was something I'd be into either.

Turns out, we both liked it. In fact, for the rest of the semester, either of us could crack the other up by shouting, "MEIN FUHRER! I CAN WALK!"

Sara didn't get all the jokes, and we were both somewhat distracted. She sat in my lap during the movie, and before long my hand had mysteriously found its way between her legs and was gently stroking her through her panties. After a bit, she shifted her position on my lap and sat Indian-style, crotch exposed, so I slid my hand into her panties and fondled her crotch directly.

We just sat like that for the rest of the movie, both of us laughing, her face slightly flushed as I slowly, gently rubbed her slit the entire time.

After the last nuclear bomb exploded and the credits ended, Sara suddenly spun around in my lap (trapping my hand in between her legs) and pounced on me with a loud, "RAAAAR!"

We hadn't wrestled in a long time. It was fun just... having fun. After a couple minutes of tussling about, I suddenly flipped her shirt over her head, blinding her and trapping her arms as I pinned her to the couch. Then I pressed my lips to her belly button and blew.

"PPPPPPBBBBBLLLLLLTTTT!"

"Aaaaah! Hahaha! Stoooop!"

"Never! Pppbbbbllllt!"

Then I took advantage of the opportunity afforded me and put my mouth over one of her little boobs. The whole thing would just fit inside if I opened my mouth... I blew against her puffy nipple and when that only resulted in a burbly noise, I shook my head back and forth and blew a raspberry.

"AAAAAAACK! NOOOOO!"

Sara squirmed her way out of my grasp, wiggling out of her shirt in the process, and stood, legs spread, slightly crouched, ready to dodge in any direction. She was clad in just her panties now, face flushed, breathing heavily, a grin on her face. I lunged for her and she scooted under my swinging arm, bounced off the couch, and jumped on my back.

"Gotcha!"

"Oh no!"

I flopped backwards onto the couch, careful to land on my butt first and then roll onto my back so I didn't squash her, and she shrieked, letting go in an attempt to escape. I rolled around to face her, grabbed her panties, and yanked them off as I stood up, launching her butt and legs in the air as I did so.

She landed flat on the couch with an indignant squawk, then shrieked as I tossed her panties in her face and started tickling her all over.

"N-n-ooo-ooo! Aaaaah! Stop!"

I kept tickling her until she couldn't breath anymore, then I relented and flopped onto the couch next to her. She sprawled beside me, stretching one leg across my stomach, and gasped for breath, still grinning.

"I think I won, kiddo."

"Nuh-uh!"

"Yeah huh."

"... Ok. You win."

"Ha. Told you."

I looked at her beautiful, naked body and gently rubbed my hand up and down the leg she had on top of me, feeling my erection grow inside my boxers.

"So... whatcha wanna do today, kiddo?"

"Let's spend the whole day naked."

"Now that's a plan!"

I slid out of my boxers and she sat up next to me, taking note of my growing boner.

"You wanna try sex again?"

"Uh-uh," she said, shaking her head. She subconsciously covered her crotch with one hand and winced slightly.

"Ok. You want some girl vitamins?"

She pretended to think about it for a second, then nodded cheerfully. I leaned against the corner of the couch and she laid down across the rest of it, on her belly. Her legs slowly alternated back and forth in the air above her butt and she held herself up on her elbows as as she took my penis into her mouth and began sucking.

I really am a lucky bastard, I thought to myself. I didn't even feel a twinge of guilt for corrupting this sweet, innocent girl either. Not anymore. She was all mine, and I was all hers.

I gently stroked her hair as her head bobbed up and down in my lap, and happily reflected that it was only Friday morning and Bill wouldn't be back until late Sunday evening. I had the better part of three days to do all sorts of naughty things with his little sister.

What would he do if he found out...

Sara cleared her throat and pulled my dick out of her mouth while she stretched her neck, then resumed sucking, and I forgot all about any concern for Bill finding out I was fucking his sister. It's hard to think about anything when a pretty 12 year old has her lips wrapped around your cock.

I continued gently stroking her hair as my balls tensed up and then shot my load into her mouth. She waited until I finished, then swallowed and carefully sucked me clean before sitting up and cuddling against me.

"You like the way that tastes, kiddo?"

"Uh-huh. It doesn't taste weird anymore. I like it."

"Well that's good. I like giving you your vitamins."

She giggled and hugged me, and I squeezed her back.

"Betcha I can kick your butt in Mario Kart!"

"Oh, you do, huh? You're on!"

Yeah. This was going to be a great weekend.


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Anonymous 17/12/20(Wed)01:12 No. 25238 ID: 0deb37

Wow, a week after a new post and still no replies?! What's going on?


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The+Bard 17/12/20(Wed)01:48 No. 25239 ID: 67e40d

>>25238
It's family invasion holiday portion of the year. That is my guess.


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Anonymous 17/12/20(Wed)03:30 No. 25240 ID: c47e15

>>25238

People check on this less often now


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Anonymous 17/12/20(Wed)04:23 No. 25241 ID: 73d817

>>25225
Keep on going bro, you still got rapt attention here


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 17/12/22(Fri)03:58 No. 25246 ID: c15c05

>>25241

Next update will be between Christmas and New Year's. Look forward to it.


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The+Bard 17/12/23(Sat)03:25 No. 25248 ID: 69067c

>>25246
Oh, I very much do. I can't stop reading this story.


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Anonymous 17/12/31(Sun)13:39 No. 25267 ID: 0cf92e

>>25246
STRAYA HERE
YOU GOT 14 MINUTES TO POST AN UPDATE OR YOU'RE A NIGGER


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Anonymous 17/12/31(Sun)21:30 No. 25268 ID: d0c7fc

This story made me get into working out tbh


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Anonymous 18/01/02(Tue)00:08 No. 25270 ID: ff5142

>>25267
He is a nigger


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Anonymous 18/01/02(Tue)15:20 No. 25271 ID: ed7a8b

to be fair, he didn't say which christmas and new year's.


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 18/01/03(Wed)06:56 No. 25273 ID: c93939

>>25271

Orthodox churches use the Julian calendar for holidays such as Christmas and New Year's. According to the Julian calendar, it is currently December 21st.


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Gragnost 18/01/07(Sun)01:35 No. 25282 ID: 551d98

Yeah yeah. Either way we want the promised next part.


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Anonymous 18/01/07(Sun)07:21 No. 25283 ID: e1cdb2

>>25273
Taps fingers...

Well?


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The+Bard 18/01/08(Mon)02:09 No. 25285 ID: c14470

>>25273
Please sir, may I have some more? -Oliver Twist, with an empty bowl and big-sad-orphan-boy eyes.

Just kidding. Take your time. Late and good beats early and suck every time.


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Anonymous 18/01/16(Tue)05:06 No. 25297 ID: e72d92

I need more, p-please.


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Anonymous 18/01/22(Mon)04:16 No. 25310 ID: 9d56f7

still waiting...


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OP!!L1ZTV3LGZl 18/01/22(Mon)23:27 No. 25311 ID: f06efb

Got my ass knocked down by the flu, still getting over it. Gonna make the next chapter a special one to make up for the delay. It'll go up once I'm feeling better and I'm not hallucinating from all the fucking Nyquil.


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The+Bard 18/01/23(Tue)04:25 No. 25312 ID: 8ab234

>>25311

Given how this flu is going it is good that you are still alive. I am hoping to dodge it myself. Good to know you are ok.


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Anonymous 18/01/23(Tue)14:32 No. 25313 ID: 0cf92e

>>25311
Protip: get some antibiotics, you have a chest infection.


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Anonymous 18/01/26(Fri)06:00 No. 25318 ID: 4bf957

Holy fuck, this thing is still going?


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Anonymous 18/02/06(Tue)00:40 No. 25342 ID: 5b50a8

bump


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Anonymous 18/02/07(Wed)00:10 No. 25346 ID: c9d098

So I'm the only one that got the gorram comment. River Tam and Kaylee Frye. Yep. Oh and reavers too.
Thanks I read through this in a couple of days. Outstanding story. Ill be back.


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Anonymous 18/02/22(Thu)11:46 No. 25394 ID: d6eb35

Update when? Come on OP.


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Anonymous 18/03/04(Sun)21:31 No. 25428 ID: a557d6

>>25225
Gotta give her her daily vitamins


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The+Bard 18/03/05(Mon)02:06 No. 25429 ID: 8fc537

*plays the speed up song on the mandolin to inspire OP*


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OP!T1tXaJv9os 18/03/05(Mon)04:16 No. 25430 ID: f79294

Sorry, hard drive shat the bed and I had to get a whole new computer.

----------------

Saturday began when I stumbled out of bed to shit, shower, and shave (in that order), then wandered into the kitchen for breakfast, not bothering with clothing. Sara wandered out shortly after me, yawning and scratching her butt, clad in the usual nightshirt and pink panties. I immediately spotted something unusual and blurted out, "You changed your hair."

"Yep. It kept getting in my face."

She'd pulled her hair back into a pair of pigtails, which changed her appearance more than I would have expected. Still...

"Looks good, kiddo."

"Thanks. Breakfast?"

I set a plate with toast and scrambled eggs in front of her as she flopped bonelessly into the chair and began to nibble her breakfast. She gently whacked my shins with her toes as we ate in silence, then I grabbed both our dishes and put them in the sink. Sara seemed to notice my nudity only just then, and with a mischievous grin she shucked off her shirt and panties so we were both in matching birthday suits.

"Whatcha wanna do today, kiddo?"

"Hmm... Boyfriend-girlfriend stuff!"

"Getting an early start, huh," I chuckled, feeling myself rise to the occasion. She giggled, and I took her by the hand and led her to my room, where we both hopped in bed.

I settled her in my lap and she spread her legs for me, and I began rubbing her smooth little slit. She looked over her shoulder at me with a blissful smile, and I leaned down to give her a peck on the lips. She settled back against me, smiling, and closed her eyes, enjoying the sensation. I had her perfect, total trust.

Which I, of course, abused shamelessly. I'd brought her to orgasm enough times to get a rough idea of how long it took and what signs she gave that she was close, so I concentrated on identifying those signs. Before long she was breathing heavily and had moistened up noticeably, and I increased the intensity of my petting, focusing on the area around her little clit. When her breathing turned into panting, her face flushed as red as her crotch, and she began to scrunch her toes and clench her fists... I eased off. I moved the focus of my rubbing to her lips and slowed down. Her breathing gradually slowed, and I began to pick up the pace again. As I felt her nearing climax a second time, I eased off again, prolonging it. She crinkled her forehead in what was possibly frustration, but I don't think she realized I was deliberately bringing her to the edge and then backing off before she tipped over. All she knew was that she was close, but no fireworks yet.

By the third time I'd brought her to the brink and backed off, my hand was starting to get slick with her juices and she was definitely feeling the effects. She was so close, and yet it hadn't happened yet; she NEEDED to orgasm, and she needed it bad.

Which was when, without feeling an ounce of guilt, I made the big move in my master plan and whispered into her ear, "You wanna try sex again?"

She opened her eyes and pondered the question while I continued gently rubbing up and down her hairless slit, then replied, "Is it gonna hurt like last time?"

"Not as bad. You might be a little sore, but it won't hurt as much as your first time."

She thought about it some more, and I offered more words of encouragement.

"Plus, we can try a different position; that might be more comfortable for you."

"..... ok."

"That's my girl. You're no chicken, are you."

"Nuh-uh."

"Ok. Get on your hands and knees."

"Like in the caveman movie?"

"Yup; just like that. Remember when we practiced in the tent?"

Sara rolled off of me and got to her hands and knees on the bed, while I sat up and positioned myself behind her. Straddling my legs on either side of hers, I held her waist with one hand and guided my penis to her slit with the other.

"Ok sweetie, I'm gonna go slow like last time, ok? I'm only gonna go in a little at a time. If it hurts too much or you want to stop, just say so, ok?"

"Ok," she said, a slight tremor in her voice. Her face and crotch were still flushed a bright pink.

I gently pressed the head of my penis to her slit and felt her pillowy soft lips part before it; a little rubbing up and down located the hottest, moistest part and I pushed forward, inserting the head into her vagina. It was so tight it felt like she was trying to pinch the tip off my dick. I began a slow, easy back-and-forth motion, not pulling it out, just moving it. When she seemed ok with that, I began to press forward, pushing deeper. I felt her tense up and she sucked in air between her teeth with a hiss.

"You ok, kiddo?"

She nodded, but didn't say anything. I continued the gentle back-and-forth movement, concentrating on not hurting her, and gradually thrust my way deeper and deeper inside her. After several minutes, I felt the head of my dick press up against something, and my crotch was mashed up against hers. I was completely inside her.

"How you doin', Sara?"

"Uh-huh."

"... what?"

"I'm ok."

"All right. Here we go then."

She tensed up again, so I waited a little bit until she relaxed slightly, then began to slowly, gently, thrust in and out of her a little at a time. Holy crap, it felt amazing. She'd gotten pretty good at blowjobs, but actually putting your penis inside a girl was way better. It was hot, wet, tight, squishy... honestly, there's no way to really describe it that doesn't make it sound kinda gross. You just have to experience it. If you've never tried it yourself, I definitely recommend it. 10 out of 10, would penetrate again.

Both hands on her hips to help her hold steady, I gently thrust in and out of Sara at a steady pace. Before long, she was breathing heavily again and clenching the sheets in her hands. My plan seemed to be working: her first time, she'd focused on being scared and how much it hurt. This time, Sara seemed to be enjoying my dick as much as she liked the heavy petting. I picked up the pace a little and she squirmed underneath me to keep herself upright, but made no protest. I took that as a sign to go even faster and began pumping my hips; Sara rocked back and forth in time to my thrusts, pigtails bouncing on either side of her head, panting and making little squeaks. I could actually feel my balls slap against her pussy as I fucked her.

"You ok?"

She just gasped for air, but eventually nodded vigorously. Then she suddenly tensed up, clenching the sheets so tight that her knuckles turned white, and buried her face into the pillow as she let out an odd sound somewhere between a moan and a squeak. At the same time, her vagina seemed to ripple down the length of my cock and squeeze it to the point that for a second, it was honestly difficult for me to pull out of her for the next thrust. She raised her head again, gasping for air, and seemed to suddenly go limp, and I realized I'd just felt her orgasm from the inside.

Just the thought of that instantly made my dick harder, and only a few thrusts later I felt myself tense up, my balls tingle, and I hilted myself in her crotch and fired my load as deep into her as I could. I hadn't pent it up like last time, but it still seemed to go on forever. Honestly, by the time I was finished, my balls were sore, like they were about to implode. Sara went limp, and my hands on her waist were the only thing keeping her top-down, bottom-up, as I caught my breath and waited for my erection to die down. Any excuse to stay inside of her for as long as possible.

All good things must come to an end eventually, however, and I pulled my now flaccid penis out of her with a barely audible, but definitely wet-sounding, noise. A bit of my cum slowly oozed out of her and down the length of her slit, and I patted her rear with possessive pride. I collapsed onto the bed beside her and she flopped sideways on top of me, still blushing and gasping for breath.

"How was that, kiddo? Better?"

She nodded, then replied, "uh-huh," breathlessly. I gently felt one of her little boobs with my hand, then reached up to take her by the chin and tilt her head so I could give her another kiss on the lips.

"Did it hurt?"

"Not as much. It's sore again. But it felt good."

"Yeah?"

"Really good."

"I'm glad. I like it when I can make you feel good."

"Me too."

I snorted at her comment and she giggled, snuggling up against me.

"So you think you wanna try sex again in the future?"

"Can we do it that way again?"

"Sure. We can do it however you want."

"I love you," she said dreamily as she rolled over on top of me and put her arms around me.

"I love you too, kiddo," I said, holding my little girlfriend to me. I closed my eyes and felt myself slowly drifting off to sleep; a nap sounded good right about now.

"How come in Dinosaur Planet all the muscley people wanted to eat meat and take over?"

"... what?"


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Anonymous 18/03/05(Mon)20:37 No. 25431 ID: 6d0371

Damn you OP, you make me cum like no other. Especially the part with the balls slap <3


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The+Bard 18/03/06(Tue)05:18 No. 25432 ID: 8fc537

>>25430
*Looks at the mandolin in disbelief*
It... It worked?


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Anonymous 18/03/06(Tue)06:38 No. 25433 ID: 8e2488

>>25430
She better be pregnant


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Anonymous 18/03/07(Wed)03:30 No. 25436 ID: d1edc9

You are a god, OP... No matter the delays, the waiting, whatever happens... You are number one


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Anonymous 18/03/10(Sat)15:04 No. 25444 ID: 06eb22

>>25430
10 out of 10... would penetrate again...

Had me rolling...


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Anonymous 18/03/22(Thu)23:36 No. 25467 ID: a557d6

>>25430
Back to her vitamins while she's sore.


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Anonymous 18/03/29(Thu)14:25 No. 25477 ID: 6d0371

Are they ever going to try ass, too? I'm so excited :D


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Anonymous 18/04/13(Fri)20:07 No. 25506 ID: 6d0371

Bump.

Not sure if you have to bump on 7chan to avoid 404, just making sure.


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Anonymous 18/04/20(Fri)14:34 No. 25514 ID: 93166e

>>25506
It's a low-traffic website.Some threads here are five years old


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OP!T1tXaJv9os 18/04/20(Fri)23:41 No. 25515 ID: c34b76

>>25514

THIS thread is six years old. It'll disappear eventually without bumps, but leaving the front page isn't the end of the world.


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Anonymous 18/04/21(Sat)08:14 No. 25517 ID: 56b278

>>25515
Hey OP, you doing all right?


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Anonymous 18/04/26(Thu)00:22 No. 25524 ID: c34b76

>>25517

Yes, just busy. Remember, I write whenever the mood strikes me and I'm not super busy, hence why there's long stretches of nothing.

I'm working on more, but I'm not going to rush it.


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Anonymous 18/04/27(Fri)09:37 No. 25526 ID: 56b278

>>25524
I get ya, I've been keeping up with this story from the beginning, or damn near, so I'm used to it. More of a general are you in good health, how's life treating you, that sort of shit.


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The+Bard 18/05/03(Thu)02:44 No. 25528 ID: ff7502

>>25524

At least your stuff comes out more often than the Song of Ice and Fire books.


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Anonymous 18/05/05(Sat)15:12 No. 25531 ID: 4a7dea

>>25524
Just a quick question. Is there any reason you stopped updating the Damocles ASSTR page?


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Anonymous 18/05/14(Mon)04:20 No. 25542 ID: c34b76

>>25531

I was never updating it in the first place. Read through this thread, someone was doing it on my behalf.


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Anonymous 18/05/28(Mon)12:58 No. 25564 ID: 6d0371

bump <3


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Steven R. Overton 18/05/30(Wed)04:06 No. 25569 ID: f7d3f6

I came to Elit in search of a compatible place to share my (abridged) memoirs, now getting a final polish and being posted in an adjacent thread. While browsing the different stories to take the temperature of this place (and finding it well suited to my tastes), I was drawn into OP’s story and have now joined the many unfortunate souls chained to our computers, ever anticipating the return of our own m'sieur Godot.

I can only beg his legion of other fans to take my word for it that I had my own narrative completely typed out, with the exception of a few details, when I encountered this story, and all similarities (and I see there are many) are completely coincidental. This in itself lends OP’s story a ring of authenticity for me, despite his (quite proper) disclaimer that it is purely a work of fiction.

From my own experience and exchanging notes with many others with similar histories, both as the older and younger partners in the relationships, I sense a very familiar pattern, especially in the growing emotional connection between the parties. These affairs often begin (relatively) innocently, develop organically and graduate to deep emotional and spiritual bonds, at least for the younger partner, who necessarily has a smaller well of emotional experience to draw from. I could go on and on, but I’m (mercifully) shutting up.

TL, DR: New reader; totally hooked!


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Anonymous 18/05/31(Thu)14:25 No. 25582 ID: 5cab3d

>>25569
Welcome aboard mate. Enjoy the wait lol.


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OP!T1tXaJv9os 18/06/11(Mon)00:58 No. 25599 ID: 2f48ee

>>25569

>references Waiting For Godot

I see you're a man of taste as well.

I'm working on the next update, but the creative juices aren't flowing, so it's slow going. It'll come. Like all good things, it'll be worth the wait.


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SRO 18/06/12(Tue)06:55 No. 25602 ID: f7d3f6

>>25599
That's fine, OP, don't try to run ahead of the muse. We'll be here.


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Anonymous 18/06/13(Wed)22:49 No. 25607 ID: 8eaae7

You probably don't need it OP, but I'll be happy to come up with ideas and stuff. Though I understand if you would feel it wouldn't be your own work anymore too


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Anonymous 18/07/08(Sun)07:06 No. 25690 ID: 6d0371

summer bump of love <3


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Anonymous 18/07/12(Thu)00:52 No. 25698 ID: 9f007d

>>25690
Was that an offer?


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OP!T1tXaJv9os 18/07/23(Mon)03:57 No. 25718 ID: c34b76

So... starting to feel like I should wrap up the glorious weekend between our main character and his loli girlfriend. Creative juices begin to flow once more.

SOON.


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Anonymous 18/07/23(Mon)08:33 No. 25720 ID: fa6ddb

>>25718
good...good...


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Anonymous 18/07/26(Thu)00:17 No. 25722 ID: 6fb75b

>>19481
>We finally settled on Wreck it Ralph
immersion ruined. That movie came out well after OP started his thread.
I can't fap to this anymore :(


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OP!T1tXaJv9os 18/07/30(Mon)05:05 No. 25727 ID: c34b76

>>25722

>begins writing story in November 2012
>movie came out literally 4 days before the first post
>roughly a year has passed in story

Even if the story was set in a specific year, you're still a silly sod.


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Anonymous 18/08/16(Thu)17:29 No. 25745 ID: 6d0371

Can't wait for another part <3


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Anonymous 18/08/18(Sat)07:03 No. 25748 ID: 842a1b

New to 7chan. This is amazing!


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Anonymous 18/08/18(Sat)12:05 No. 25750 ID: 1f9ddb

>>25748
Welcome to purgatory.


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Anonymous 18/08/19(Sun)21:58 No. 25753 ID: d1917b

it's been 5 months since the last chapter. can we get an update on how the next one's going? are you busy with life or stricken with writer's block?


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Anonymous 18/08/20(Mon)04:30 No. 25755 ID: 56b278

>>25748
As someone who has read this since the beginning and check back at least once a week, welcome to the club. The waits can be long but OP has never failed us thus far.


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OP!T1tXaJv9os 18/09/17(Mon)06:40 No. 25788 ID: 2f48ee

>>25753

Busy with life, but the next chapter is coming along nicely.


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Anonymous 18/09/22(Sat)04:40 No. 25791 ID: 9d56f7

>>25788
cant wait to read it!


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Anonymous 18/09/26(Wed)13:32 No. 25795 ID: 1c41c0

Best. Story. Ever


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Anonymous 18/09/29(Sat)22:01 No. 25798 ID: 6d0371

One week until 6 years anniversary! \o/


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Anonymous 18/10/05(Fri)23:45 No. 25804 ID: b6c85b

If the next chapter doesn't come out tomorrow I'm gonna be dissapointed


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Anonymous 18/10/15(Mon)03:35 No. 25829 ID: 681859

>>17508
If only you'd known, Anon.
If only you'd known.


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Anonymous 18/10/19(Fri)00:16 No. 25838 ID: 75e5f3

>>25788
Just found this after coming onto 7chan for the first time and damn this is good shit, no rush but please don't abandon this


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Anonymous 18/10/19(Fri)10:09 No. 25840 ID: 95b270

>>25838
He's been coming back to this for just a bit over 6 years. He's in it for the long haul, and so must you.


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Anonymous 18/11/01(Thu)19:52 No. 25849 ID: 262434

Inb4 next chapter comes out during no nut November


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Anonymous 18/11/04(Sun)22:58 No. 25856 ID: 51ecaa

I would fail NNN for an update to this.


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anon 18/11/12(Mon)05:17 No. 25860 ID: 16ee62

>>25856
Screw that! OP we need jelly!


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Anonymous 18/11/17(Sat)03:52 No. 25866 ID: 5a7e6d

Jelly! Jelly! Jelly!


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Anonymous 18/11/17(Sat)20:24 No. 25867 ID: 8da259

>>25866
Peanut Butter Jelly time...but you know...in an 11 year old pigtails nympho. LOL



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