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The Parasite Part 1 (fb, inc, scifi) Death By Snu Snu 12/07/27(Fri)01:06 No. 16783 ID: 97ab06

This is my first attempt at any kind of erotica (though I have written regular stuff before). I hope everyone enjoys it. first part is for the most part straight forward fb incest, but there will be much more (including heavy scifi elements) later on.

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Part 1

“Come on, Sis! Hurry up!”

“Why don’t you slow down you little shit stain!”

The boy ignored his sister and continued down the forest path. Emily sighed. Her parents were evil, making her keep an eye on her little brother, Derik. Despite the unbearable heat outside that day, he insisted on going out. He swore that he saw a meteor crash somewhere in the woods the night before and was hell bent on finding it and bringing it home. But the curious twelve year old couldn’t go out there on his own. Oh no! He needed a babysitter, and who better than his sixteen year old sister, who didn’t have anything better to do that day like sit in the air conditioning and eat ice cream. The only bright side to any of this was that she would be able to cool off a bit, relaxing in a pond back in the woods.

Ironically, the pond is where Derik ended up leading her and where he found the meteor. The football sized space rock sat in a small crater, just off the edge of the pond. Derik excitedly ran over and began examining it. Emily failed to see what was so fascinating about some stupid piece of stone, but she was more interested in something else anyway.

She stripped off her top and bike shorts, already wearing her favorite white and red bikini underneath. No one would hesitate to say that she was an attractive girl. She was slim, tall, had a good complexion, strawberry blond hair that reached down to her shoulders, her breasts were slightly larger than average for a girl her age, and her personal favorite asset, an ass that made jaws hit the floor when she walked by.

She tested the water with her foot, cold but it felt good in this heat. She slowly waded out into the water, and when she was waist deep she dove down, completely submerging herself. When she resurfaced, she flipped her wet hair back and wiped the water from her eyes before laying back and relaxing, floating on the water’s surface.

-X-X-

A disturbance in the previously calm water woke the creature. It was tired, its long journey on the rock through the void of space having exhausted it. It was lucky to have landed where it did, near a body of water, small as this particular pool was. Without a proper host, it needed water to survive. But it could sense one now, a host… the scent of ammonia and hormones attracted it. This host was exceptional… young, hormonal, sure to attract a food source with the proper incentive. There were other creatures in the water, but none suitable to provide food for it. They didn’t have the proper internal processes. But this new one… The creatures thermal vision could see the heat between two large appendages… it was ideal, perhaps even perfect. With a few flips of its tail it lifted itself off the dirt of the pond floor and began swimming for its target.

-X-X-

“Ow!” Emily gasped, jumping slightly in the water.

Derik looked up from the meteor and over to his sister. “You okay?” he asked.

“Yeah… I think a fish bit my butt.” She replied. She reached her arm behind her back, running her hand over the back of her bikini bottom, trying to find where she’d been bit. This pushed her chest out a bit, and from the corner of her eye she could see Derik ogling her. The little perv. She didn’t blame him. He was at the age where the only thing that interested him more than a pretty girl was a pretty girl in minimal clothing. But still, he should have the sense not to stare at his own sister’s goods.

Then again, she couldn’t help but notice that he was starting to get some goods himself.
She almost slapped herself when she realized what she just thought. What was wrong with her? That was her brother. Her twelve year old brother! Even if they weren’t related she shouldn’t be thinking about him like that. Where had such an idea even come from? She blamed it on the heat and dove under the water again.

About an hour later the two of them had returned home. Derik wasn’t able to bring the meteor back with them; it was too heavy, so he wanted to go back with a wheel-barrel or something. There was no way Emily was going back outside in that heat though. She would’ve made their dad go back with him while she got a shower, but apparently he had gone into town with their mother and little sister. So Derik begged and pleaded with her until she slammed her bedroom door in his face. She quickly stripped off her clothes and headed for her bathroom, hoping a nice cool shower would help clear her head.

But the whole time she stood under the cascading water, things only got worse. Despite her best efforts, her thoughts kept drifting back to Derik and the bulge that had appeared in his pants when he’d been ogling her cleavage. Why couldn’t she get it out of her head? He was her little brother! These thoughts were sick, not to mention illegal. But she couldn’t help it… it was almost like there was a voice in her head, compelling her.

(‘Take it, consume it, feed upon it! I hunger!’)

Emily shook her head and blinked in surprise. Now she was actually imagining a voice in her head. Great. What was next? Hallucinating that Derik was masturbating just outside the shower?...

Wait a minute.

Emily flung the shower curtain aside, finding that her little pervert of a brother was indeed standing there, fully clothed but fiddling with his prepubescent boy meat through his open zipper only a few feet away from her. He froze, the rest of his body becoming as stiff as his four and a half inch member, and his face turned a shade of crimson that Emily didn’t know existed. Her face had turned red as well, but because her blood was boiling in anger rather than because of shame. Derik finally came to his senses and tried bolting for the door, but his big sister was too quick and grabbed him by the hair. “And where do you think you’re going you little shit stain?” she demanded as she pulled him back by the scalp. He yelped as he fell back, collapsing down into the shower with his head at his sister’s feet. He groaned and rubbed the back of his head as he opened his eyes, looking up to the enraged goddess that was his sister.

All at once the boy was met face to face with the most amazing thing he’d ever seen. His face was so close to his sister’s pussy that he could see every detail. Shaved smooth as a baby’s bottom with the exception of a small diamond shaped patch just above her lips, the outer lips ever so slightly open, teasing the boy as to what might be inside, and her clit exposed by the taboo thought she couldn’t escape. The sight hit Derik like a wrecking ball and he lost control. With no more stimulation than that view, he came, the very first orgasm of his young life. And boy was it a big one. Ropes of the sticky white fluid surged from his immature cock, shooting so far that the first shot hit his sister’s stomach. The second didn’t reach half as far, most of it landing on his shirt, and a bit on his own chin. He shot two more times, each with less volume than the last, until one last small surge spilled out, a string of cum dribbling down the side of his shaft.

Emily couldn’t move, she was so shocked. Her brother had just exploded all over her without so much as a hand on his little prick… and she liked it. The feel of his cum against her naked skin was… exhilarating. She quickly turned off the shower to stop it from washing away. She wasn’t sure why. She should be screaming in disgust and disinfecting her skin… but instead she slowly placed her hand over her naval and lightly ran the tips of her fingers over her brother’s seed. The feel alone sent a surge of pleasure through her.

(‘Yes! Feed me!’)

Compelled, but not forced, by the voice in her head, she scooped up as much of the white goo as she could on the fingers of both hands. She raised one up to her mouth and lowered the other down to her pussy and, almost simultaneously, inserted her fingers into both holes. Pleasure shot through her body like lightning the second the cream touched both sets of lips. She rolled Derik’s cum around on her tongue while vigorously slathering it over and inside her pussy lips also. Every movement felt like it gave her a mini orgasm. It felt like something had slithered down inside her to suck up the goo between her legs, whatever it was, it was very real and it filled up her birth canal… and she loved it.

Through her mind numbing pleasure, Emily suddenly remembered something. “Derik!” she half shouted, looking down. He was still there, head between her knees, mesmerized by the spectacle before him. His dick was still rock hard,,, and the sight of it made Emily’s mouth water. “Stand up, Derik.” She said.

Derik obeyed almost like a mindless zombie slave. His eyes never leaving his sister’s flawless body, he sat up and pushed himself to his feet. With him standing before her, Emily was able to strip him down, tossing aside his t-shirt and practically ripping his shorts and underwear off. She took a moment to examine her little brother, now naked before her. He was not quite a foot shorter than her and had inherited their father’s brunet hair, which was a shaggy, tangled mess atop the boy’s head. His prepubescent body was slim, lacking much muscle definition, and was completely hairless everywhere below the neck. Not even any peach fuzz on his peaches. Emily definitely liked this. She preferred her men shaved clean of body hair, but bald as the day they were born was just as good. Licking her lips, Emily positioned her brother at the end of the tub and sat him down. Grinning devilishly at him, she crouched down before the boy, spread his legs apart at the knee, slowly moved her hands along his inner thighs as she leaned in, and let the boys little prick slide in between her lips.

Derik let out a soft moan as his sister began to work his dick, bobbing her head up and down along the shaft, massaging the head with her tongue, occasionally letting it pop out so she could suck on his balls for a second or two only to lick back up the underside of his shaft and take it back into her mouth. She giggled on his cock as she heard him moan again. The ecstasy the kid was experiencing must have been almost too much to handle. But if he thought a blowjob was good, he was in for a real treat with what she had planned next.

She swirled her tongue around his head one last time before releasing it from her mouth. “Seeing fireworks, little brother?” she asked, still working his cock with her fingers. He only groaned in response, making Emily giggle again. “Ready for the grand finale?”

Derik wasn’t quite sure what she meant at first. What could possibly be better than that? But as he watched her reposition herself, standing up briefly only to squat back down over him, splaying her legs and opening up her dripping pussy right over his erection, he realized exactly what she meant. He gazed up at her with wide eyes and an open mouth (Emily noted to make good use of that later), as if to ask if she was serious. She responded by licking her lips again and lowering herself slightly, the lips of her vagina folding around and caressing the head of his penis, but not letting it in quite yet. Derik moaned, the anticipation unbearable. “You like that?” Emily asked, leaning in to whisper it into his ear. “You like my pussy? You want to feel it around the whole thing?” It was all the boy could do to moan in response as his sister rotated her hips, moving the head of his cock along the length of her slit. “Just say the word and I’ll give you the greatest experience of your life, little brother.”

He didn’t beg like she wanted to hear. She didn’t give him what he wanted… he took it.

Derik grabbed onto his sister’s hips and thrust his own up, forcing his cock into his sister’s waiting snatch. Emily let out long, low moan as she felt herself being filled. It wasn’t nearly as big as some of her boyfriends were, but for some reason this felt so much better. As her little brother began to piston in and out of her, she felt it again… something snaking down from deep inside of her, moving down close to the entrance of her vagina. Soon the feeling connected to where Derik’s cock was, and as they met the boy let out a little shriek. He’d felt it too… and whatever it was, it had attacked itself to the end of his cock. “What is that?” he stammered, a bit scared.

Emily sent a death glare down at him. “Shut up and fuck me, cum stain!” she growled.

Derik obeyed and began thrusting again. He had to admit, whatever it was on sucking on the end of his cock felt really good, enhancing the already amazing feeling from Emily’s pussy (he also liked that this experience had earned him a new nickname, one he liked much better than shit stain). Soon Emily started bouncing up and down on him, his upward thrusts meeting her as she came down each time. Each time their movements met Emily let out a pleasure filled groan, and Derik did the same, music to both their ears. If there was a heaven, this must have been it.

Seen Derik felt a newly familiar pressure building in his loins. “Emily… I think it’s… happening again.” He said between pleasured moans.

His older sister grabbed onto his shoulders and started bouncing harder. “Do it!” she ordered. “Do it inside me! I need it!... It’s h-hungryyyy!” Her words evaporated into orgasmic moans as she came long and hard on her brother’s cock. The feeling of Emily orgasming on his dick sent Derik over the edge and he came too, ejaculating jet after jet of his seed into her. The thing inside Emily sucking on his head drank it down like a starved vampire drinking blood, not letting a drop escape. Emily soon collapsed on top of her little brother and they laid there together for fifteen long minutes before the thing released Derik, allowing his now flaccid meat to escape Emily’s cunt.

The voice was suddenly back, telling Emily what to do again.

(‘Suck.’) It ordered.

She was too tired to argue and she slunk down along Derik’s body, resting her head against his thigh and slurping his soft little cock into her mouth, suckling on it as her heavy eyelids dropped. She thought she felt some kind of tiny, strange lumps on his head at first, but the feeling soon vanished and she ignored it, passing it off as a delusion from her exhausted state. The two siblings fell asleep there in the bathtub, Emily gently suckling on the twelve year old through their nap, neither caring at the moment if they were caught.

-X-X-

Inside of Emily’s womb, the creature rested. It was right in thinking that this new host was almost perfect. In less than two hours the new host had already filled its belly with the precious nourishment it needed. And judging by how much she enjoyed feeding her new partner for life, whether she knew it was there or not, the creature suspected it would never go hungry again. It would be free to feed and reproduce to its heart’s content. But still, there was something about this new host that the creature wasn’t quite sure about. The host could question the creature’s commands, even question them. This had never happened before. It didn’t take long for the creature to figure out that its new host was of a sentient species. It had ideas, emotions, intelligence… the ability to think. This could prove to be problematic…

Or very, very interesting.


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Zed 12/07/27(Fri)02:37 No. 16784 ID: eb0190

This could be the beginning of something amazing. :3


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Anonymous 12/07/27(Fri)23:55 No. 16796 ID: 4584f5

>>16783

MOAR!!! SO GOOD!


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Jotter 12/07/28(Sat)10:21 No. 16805 ID: b71470

A most interesting premise. I'll definitely be keeping my eye on this.


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Anonymous 12/07/29(Sun)03:47 No. 16812 ID: 3ee408

>>16784
Completely agree with this statement. Keep writing this regularly please. We need moar of this.


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Death By Snu Snu 12/07/31(Tue)04:00 No. 16850 ID: cad22a

well Im glad people are liking this. Ill post more when i get it done then, no idea when thatll be, but Ill try not to keep you all waiting too long


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Anonymous 12/08/03(Fri)14:46 No. 16923 ID: df45c0

Well well, quite interesting. Please continue, this could turn out to be an interesting story.


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tSade!O9S.2cqv5k 12/08/05(Sun)02:14 No. 16936 ID: e1353d

Oh, I think I love this already.


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Anonymous 12/08/05(Sun)14:54 No. 16938 ID: dae456

Fantastic, this place needs a new, good story like this.


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Anonymous 12/08/17(Fri)16:57 No. 17032 ID: 7ae15e

bump, this is pretty good so far


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Part 2 Preview Death By Snu Snu 12/08/18(Sat)05:19 No. 17037 ID: 223e05

hey guys. sorry I havent updated yet. been busy with junk and stuff. anyway the next part is about half done, hopefully completely done before the weekend is over, so I figured I'd tease you guys with the first few paragraphs. not much in the way of sex, but there will be once the chapter is complete. enjoy.


Part 2

While the creatures belly may have been full, the rumbling in Emily’s own gut roused Emily from her slumber a few hours after “punishing” her little brother. She awoke with a pleasurable sigh, finding Derik’s still rock hard cock in her mouth as she rested her head on his inner thigh. As she opened her eyes, she smiled around the miniscule dick. Just hours ago she would’ve been vomiting if she’d found herself in this position with Derik, but now it felt like the most natural thing in the world. She was already starting to like… whatever was inside her. “I don’t know what you are or how you’re doing this to me…” she said, letting Derik’s member pop out of her mouth. “But I just might not have you surgically removed.” She felt it writhe around in her womb in response, followed by her stomach growling again. “Now let’s get me something to eat.”

Out of the bathroom and through her bedroom, she stepped out into the hall still fully naked. For some reason she had no qualms about being spotted as such; no doubt the creatures work. She made her way down the stairs and through the house, into the kitchen where she proceeded to make herself a salad. She didn’t particularly care for how they tasted, but they were healthy and kept her from getting fat, which made her feel good about herself (and of course kept the boys staring). “Oh, darn it! We’re out of dressing.” She grumbled as she looked through the contents of the fridge door, finding the sauce she was looking for missing. “Well this is going to suck…”

“Emily?”

The girl looked over her shoulder, finding her father, Clint, standing in the Kitchen doorway with bags of groceries in his arms. She found the look on his face, a strange combination of shock, disgust, and arousal, to be amusing, obviously a reaction to finding his sixteen year old daughter completely naked in the kitchen of all places. Trying to keep it hidden, Emily let a sly smirk cross her face. (“This will suck indeed.”) she chuckled mentally. “Hi, Daddy.” She said as if nothing were amiss.


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Anonymous 12/08/21(Tue)03:10 No. 17052 ID: 599813

>>17037
Oh god, do the rest


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Anonymous 12/08/21(Tue)07:58 No. 17053 ID: 5f644f

Fesus Jucking Christ. This is like chocolate, except fucked up. And I can masturbate to it.

Moar, you dashing stallion. Moar I do say!


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Anonymous 12/08/24(Fri)19:42 No. 17067 ID: c7e21a

snu snu don't leave us hangin! back to the top with you!


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The Parasite Part 2 (Mf, inc, scifi) Death By Snu Snu 12/08/29(Wed)00:54 No. 17086 ID: d6f811

Part 2

While the creatures belly may have been full, the rumbling in Emily’s own gut roused Emily from her slumber a few hours after “punishing” her little brother. She awoke with a pleasurable sigh, finding Derik’s still rock hard cock in her mouth as she rested her head on his inner thigh. As she opened her eyes, she smiled around the miniscule dick. Just hours ago she would’ve been vomiting if she’d found herself in this position with Derik, but now it felt like the most natural thing in the world. She was already starting to like… whatever was inside her. “I don’t know what you are or how you’re doing this to me…” she said, letting Derik’s member pop out of her mouth. “But I just might not have you surgically removed.” She felt it writhe around in her womb in response, followed by her stomach growling again. “Now let’s get me something to eat.”

Out of the bathroom and through her bedroom, she stepped out into the hall still fully naked. For some reason she had no qualms about being spotted as such; no doubt the creatures work. She made her way down the stairs and through the house, into the kitchen where she proceeded to make herself a salad. She didn’t particularly care for how they tasted, but they were healthy and kept her from getting fat, which made her feel good about herself (and of course kept the boys staring). “Oh, darn it! We’re out of dressing.” She grumbled as she looked through the contents of the fridge door, finding the sauce she was looking for missing. “Well this is going to suck…”

“Emily?”

The girl looked over her shoulder, finding her father, Clint, standing in the Kitchen doorway with bags of groceries in his arms. She found the look on his face, a strange combination of shock, disgust, and arousal, to be amusing, obviously a reaction to finding his sixteen year old daughter completely naked in the kitchen of all places. Trying to keep it hidden, Emily let a sly smirk cross her face. (“This will suck indeed.”) She chuckled mentally. “Hi, Daddy.” She said as if nothing were amiss.

“Wha… What are you doing, sweetheart?” Clint questioned, doing his damnedest not to stare as Emily bent over, pretending to look through the fridge as she gave him a good look between her legs.

“Making lunch.” She replied nonchalantly.

“But why… why are you…”

“Naked?” she giggled, finishing his sentence. “Oh, sorry. I didn’t think anyone would be home for a while.”

“What about… um…”

“Derik? Asleep… Is this bothering you that much, Daddy? It’s not like you haven’t seen me naked before.”

“Not since you were three!” He retorted, not missing a beat. “Now please… go put some clothes…”

“So where are mom and Beth?” she asked, cutting her father off.

“You’re mother took your little sister to a friend’s house and then she’s going to be at the gym for a few hours.”

(“Perfect.”) She thought. “Okay… so you went to the store? Get any salad dressing?”

“Look Emily, could you please just—“

“You didn’t, did you? Darn it. I hate salad without something to help it go down… Maybe you could give me something, Daddy.” She started toward him, making sure to push out her chest and sway her hips a bit. She felt the creature wriggling around inside her again. It was excited, knowing its next meal was coming. As she came closer, she noticed a distinct bulge forming in her father’s pants and his face flushing red. The creature was definitely up to something here. She could understand arousing her horny, pubescent little brother, but her father? Her father who she knew for a fact her mom gave head to every night and fucked at least once a week, having to hear everything coming from the room next to hers? She wasn’t buying that. She remembered her biology teacher saying something about pheromones. She figured that has something to do with it and forgot the subject. She had other matters to attend to.

Emily stepped right up to Clint, pressing her breasts up against his chest. She wrapped one arm around her father to keep him from getting away, and with her free hand she began to gently squeeze and massage his painfully erect member through his pants. The second she touched him, Clint dropped the bags in his hand, cans and other food stuffs scattering across the floor. “Emily!” Clint half shouted, wanting desperately to push her away but a combination of the creature’s pheromones and his own subconscious desire for his daughter preventing him.

Emily placed a finger against his lips and pushed him against the wall, her other hand never leaving his groin. “Don’t fight it. You know you want this. I’ve seen the way you look at me… It’s the same way Derik does, only a little more controlled…” With her free hand she grabbed onto one of his wrists and brought it to his chest, helping him massage her breast at first. But he soon got into the rhythm and when she released his hand he didn’t stop. She grinned and moved her free hand down to join the other at his crotch. She made quick work of his belt and fly before pulling his jeans and boxers down, and unleashing the nine inch python inside. “Mm… Mom sure is a lucky girl.” Emily purred as she began to massage her father’s member directly. “How can she fit this monster inside of her?”

“Emily…” Clint protested, his hand never stopping its work at her breast.

Before he could say another word Emily dropped to her knees, moving one hand to her father’s balls and the other beginning to pump his shaft. Looking up to him and winking quickly, she leaned forward and her tongue slithered out of her mouth, the tongue darting across the underside of the head quickly. Clint, still somewhat conflicted, grimaced but let out a moan of pleasure. Encouraged, Emily dove in again, moving her hand aside for a moment to mover her tongue up along the underside of her father’s cock, then wrapping her lips around the tip of the head, giving it a wet kiss before pulling away again and looking up at him. “Bet mom doesn’t do it this good.” She grinned.

He glared down at her, almost a condemning look…but then a wicked smile crept onto his face. “She does it better.”

She chuckled, hardly able to believe what she was seeing. He was challenging her, and she was more than willing to accept that challenge. Opening her mouth wide, she dove in, taking in five delicious inches of Clint’s massive cock before it hit the back of her throat. Clint let out a long, low moan in approval. Emily grinned around her father’s cock and got to work, slowly pulling her head back along the shaft. Her thumb and index finger wrapped around it as well, she slowly moved her hand up along it as well, just behind her lips, lightly pressuring the pole. She pulled her head off completely only for a moment to swirl her tongue around the head, earning another moan from her father, before going back down, her head bobbing back and forth, slowly but surely working her way further down with every stroke until finally her nose was hitting against his groin and a good portion of his dick down her throat.

“Damn, Sweetheart! Where did you learn to give head like that?” Clint gasped as his daughter bobbed up and down on his meat.

She pulled off, continuing to pump his shaft with her hand. “I dated a black guy for a week.” She smirked, winking at him. She got up from her kneeling position, her hand never leaving his member and, with the other she began to unbutton her father’s shirt. “Now what do you say…” One button. “…that we get these clothes off…” Another. “…you throw me on the table…” A third. “… and fuck…” Button. “… me…” Button. “…senseless.” She didn’t bother undoing the rest, instead ripping Clint’s shirt apart, sending the remaining ones flying all over the floor.

“You’re mother will literally kill me if she ever finds out we’re doing this.” Clint said nervously as Emily pulled his pants and boxers down. She stepped back and admired the sight of the man now fully naked before her. Barely a hint of fat on him, Emily was glad to find that her mother apparently made him shave everything on his lean, athletic body below the neck. Happy with what she saw, she grabbed him by the cock and led him over to the table.

“You leave her to me.” She said. (“And my new little friend.”) she mentally added. “Now quit being a bitch, throw me on the table, and FUCK. ME.”

Needing no more encouragement, he did exactly that, picking her up under the arms and hoisting her up onto it as she let out a playful scream. Propping herself up on her elbows, she grinned devilishly as her father got between her legs, finally having given up on resisting her. After positioning himself between his daughter’s splayed legs, Clint grabbed onto his daughter’s hips and pulled her back until her ass was teetering on the edge of the table. He rested the very tip of his python between her lips and looped down at her with savage grin. Finally, she couldn’t take it anymore. “Ravish me, you animal!”

And he did.

With a powerful thrust, he forced his nine inches into his daughter’s eager snatch, her accepting him with a pleasured groan. She could feel the creature thrashing around inside of her womb, beginning to work its way through her cervix so it could attach itself to its new food source. After getting over the initial shock after a few seconds, Clint began to pump, thrusting his member in and out of his daughter relentlessly. No starting slow, no getting used to it, it was brutal. Emily imagined that this was the way her mother like it. “Oh! Oh yeah, daddy! Don’t hold back! Fuck your little girl! Ravish me! Rip my insides up with your huge piece of meat! Harder!” Clint obeyed, moving his hips in and out with more force. He was so overwhelmed that he didn’t even feel the creature attach to him.

After a loud grunt, Clint looked down to his daughter. “Baby, I’m gonna—ah!” he couldn’t even finish the sentence before he exploded, unleashing the biggest load of his life into the girl, which the creature drank eagerly, filling its belly. After the first shot Emily sensed the creature telling her to feed. She dislodged her father from her pussy just as a second rope of cum shot out, splattering all over her stomach and tits. She dove in before a third could be let loose, attaching her mouth to his cock like a starving infant to a nipple. The remaining spurts of cum filled her mouth completely. She refrained from swallowing for the moment. When she pulled herself off of her father, he collapsed, falling back into the chair behind him.

Satisfied, Emily rolled off of the table and moved over to where she left her salad bowl, letting the creamy contents of her mouth spill out onto the mix of lettuce and vegetables. There was enough to completely veil the top of the bowl in the white cream. She grabbed a fork and mixed it up a little before taking a bite, purring pleasure over how good it tasted. “Thanks for the salad dressing, daddy.” She said, trying to seem innocent. Clint didn’t hear her, as he had passed out after their little session. She sighed and shook her head before wandering off back to her room.

-X-X-

In her womb, the creature was more than content, it was over stuffed. After spending so long starving in the void, it was confident it would never go hungry again. This was good. Now it could focus its efforts away from merely staying alive. Now, it could focus on repopulation. It had already began its first reproductive cycle since the destruction of its planet, and had managed to trick the girl into incubating its eggs.

Now all it needed to do was find hosts for its babies before they hatched.

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So I'm going to be quite honest... I got bored writing this chapter. Odd as this may be to say about a man fucking his daughter, it felt too... vanilla, too boring for this kind of story. But, I have every intention of rectifying that in the next part by introducing some more elements involving the creature, as well as girl/girl action, the two of which will mesh together nicely. but until I can get that part up, please excuse me if you find this chapter as lackluster as I do.


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Anonymous 12/08/29(Wed)05:24 No. 17087 ID: 990c77

It was way better than lackluster. I can't wait for the next one.


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Anonymous 12/08/31(Fri)19:24 No. 17097 ID: d03805

I agree, not a bad chapter at all. Simple in just being a bit of incest maybe, but then there's the Mind Controlling Alien Parasite Inside Her Womb and all. Can't wait for the next chapter, wondering whether it will be her mom or little sis that gets the parasite first. Damn, popping her sis' cherry with some sort of alien worm cock would be hot. Either way it sounds like someone's getting pumped full of eggs, so I'm sure the next chapter will be at least as good as the first two.


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Anonymous 12/09/06(Thu)03:18 No. 17141 ID: 891be7

This stuff is great. I'm really enjoying the older sister-little brother relationship, and that cliffhanger has me drooling.


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Anonymous 12/09/17(Mon)01:06 No. 17193 ID: 12b8c7

looking forward to the next chapter, dude. don't leave us hanging!


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Anonymous 12/10/14(Sun)06:39 No. 17395 ID: e6e26e

Back to page one.


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Death By Snu Snu 12/10/14(Sun)08:23 No. 17396 ID: 5f86d0

hey everyone. sorry the next part is taking so long. been real busy lately. its coming along, slowly but surely. just be patient. if nothing else, I promise Ill update before the end of the year


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Anonymous 12/10/18(Thu)01:18 No. 17444 ID: aa6a6b

>>17396
ty


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Anonymous 12/10/19(Fri)20:46 No. 17457 ID: ffab56


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Anonymous 12/10/24(Wed)05:45 No. 17495 ID: ce04f2

TO PAGE ONE!!

My favorite elit story. I haven't read them all though, so, you know. It may not mean much.


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Anonymous 12/11/02(Fri)03:09 No. 17576 ID: ce04f2

bumpity bump bump bumpity bump bump,
look at this thread grow
bumpity bump bump bumpity bump bump,
to page one you go!


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Anonymous 12/11/16(Fri)03:50 No. 17689 ID: ce04f2

BUMP FOR AWESOME!


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Treecko !mcEVilkunM 12/11/17(Sat)15:22 No. 17698 ID: d9179c

would like to see more


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Anonymous 12/11/22(Thu)02:33 No. 17747 ID: 830f0e

bump for epic


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Anonymous 12/12/28(Fri)02:53 No. 17977 ID: 2a0004

nearly the end of the year....bump
(hope it gets updated)


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Anonymous 12/12/31(Mon)04:16 No. 17991 ID: 1e6acf

bump for epic


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Anonymous 13/01/03(Thu)22:19 No. 18024 ID: 9a3235

Why are the good authors always so busy. :(


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Anonymous 13/03/01(Fri)16:38 No. 18412 ID: 426a95

okay, its march already. what happened to this story?


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Anonymous 13/03/13(Wed)07:46 No. 18499 ID: 6ee95f

Are you busy or did you stop caring? I'm definitely still interested in more sir.


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Anonymous 13/05/24(Fri)07:17 No. 19003 ID: 426a95

its now a week away from june. OP, is there more?


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Anonymous 13/06/22(Sat)01:48 No. 19243 ID: cd7461

Please don't let this be dead OP, this story is so original and has all of the best aspects of a story: originality, a good writing style, incest, and underage material.


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Anonymous 13/07/31(Wed)16:49 No. 19471 ID: 426a95

we're still waiting for more, OP. its almost august already.


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Anonymous 13/08/06(Tue)23:35 No. 19522 ID: 3fb583

I'm also still here. Please just let the wait be Death by Snu Snu pulling a Buttons and the story not be dead.


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Anonymous 13/10/01(Tue)18:53 No. 19819 ID: f02be3

still waiting, OP. its 1 October now.


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Anonymous 14/03/08(Sat)00:48 No. 21323 ID: 6bfccc

any progress on this, OP? its march 2014 now.


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Anonymous 14/03/21(Fri)08:41 No. 21391 ID: e40034

If OP doesn't come back to this, can anyone else channel their mojo and finish it?


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Should I continue? Not OP 14/04/07(Mon)02:24 No. 21498 ID: 54482a

DISCLAIMER: Not OP

Emily groggily opened her eyes and could already feel the warmth in her womb; the creature’s lifespan was reaching its peak – it was going to reproduce this month. Emily pulled at her grey, cotton shirt and shivered when she felt the pressure of her hands rubbing the soft fabric against her breasts, simultaneously letting her legs fall off the side of the bed. With a quiet thud, she was up and about. She quietly pulled an airy grey shirt over her exposed butt and took her oversized sleep t-shirt off, and replaced it with a light pink blouse that only served to emphasize her well-endowed cleavage. She left her room, ate some yogurt, and promptly took off to school – she was going to pay her woods teacher a surprise visit before school.

Emily approached the door to the wood shop, on the side of the school – far from any prying eyes. She knocked quietly, three times, and waited for a response. The door opened.

“Emily? What are you doing here so early? Is the front office closed right now?”

Emily quickly put on a scared expression and feigned crying.

“Mr. Allen, please let me in – there was a man following me to school, and I think he’s still following me,”

Mr. Allen quickly pulled her into the wood shop and closed the door behind her, and she reciprocated by hugging him tightly and pressing her unsupported breasts against him. He blushed, obviously uncomfortable.

“Emily, should I get the principal? We need to report things like that, if there are men following girls to school,”

“No – please don’t leave me by myself,” she said, as she sunk to the ground, tears in her eyes.

“Then you can come with me,”

“Oh, please, Mr. Allen, I can’t,”

He looked more and more uncomfortable, being alone with a female student dressed the way she was. He stole a glance at her skirt, which was riding up her legs, and those knee-length socks.

“But you can’t stay here; I’ll get in trouble,” he said, as he grabbed her by the arm and pulled. She let out a gasp as his arm pulled half of her shirt off.

“What are you doing, Mr. Allen?” she asked, letting the rest of the shirt fall down, exposing her breasts.

They heard multiple footsteps approaching from down the hall. “Hey, Allen? Where’d you put the miter jigs?” A group of boys walked in on the teacher and shirtless Emily, and were dumbfounded. Emily used this opportunity to drop her skirt and stood in her youthful splendor in front of the group. She pushed Mr. Allen against a wall and whispered to him: “Well, it seems as though we’ll have an audience today.”


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Anonymous 14/05/30(Fri)08:34 No. 21848 ID: b6a8fc

yeah, you should continue, OP. I've been lurking and bumping for months.


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Anonymous 14/06/01(Sun)19:55 No. 21863 ID: 8a961e

>>21498
This just feels like repetition of what's happened. She's fucked two people, oh look, a third man. The idea that the parasite would need to find another woman to reproduce in, leading to all women eventually having the parasites within them and being utterly under the control of their sexual urges and their parasites.
I'd write it if I could be fucked to write it.


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Anonymous 14/06/01(Sun)20:00 No. 21864 ID: 8a961e

>>21863
Plus, it was too much of a jump. The parasite shouldn't just control her mind instantly now, just influences her to be horny and then drives her primal impulses home, eventually turning her into a fuck slave, effectively.
You need to keep the standard of story there still.
This is erotic literature, too many people are forgetting the 'literature' part recently.


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Anonymous 15/03/23(Mon)23:53 No. 23407 ID: 79e18f

bump. is there any interest of the author to write more of this?


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Anonymous 17/03/17(Fri)08:02 No. 24956 ID: 595e00

Why do all the good stories have to die? Im Bumping this. Would any anon care to continue this please?



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