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Sharing this pretty weird story Hipster Slut 17/11/23(Thu)14:48 No. 17847 Board: /lit/ [Reply]
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Now see what happens when you sleep:

https://letterpile.com/creative-writing/Childrens-Short-Fiction-The-Watchers


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Hipster Slut 19/04/21(Sun)14:09 No. 17970

i like to read books while sleeping


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Hipster Slut 19/04/22(Mon)11:44 No. 17972

Writing own stories is good hobby, i think. The idea was born, but there is one catch. Such a grandiose plan will pull only an experienced and very talented writer, and not a beginner. Therefore, we must start with fairy tales. I am begginer so can not write interesting and adventure stories. Plus my essay in colege also looks bad,so I use help of https://edusson.com/admission-essay-writing-service




Shounen Ai Volume 4 Anonymous 18/04/27(Fri)06:06 No. 46821 Board: /sm/ ID: 5cc63f [Reply] [First 100 posts] [Last 50 posts]
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Anonymous 19/04/22(Mon)09:53 No. 50662 ID: 996041

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Anonymous 19/04/30(Tue)03:46 No. 50744 ID: f9187e

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Ireland's summer f/m Hailvim 17/04/09(Sun)23:42 No. 24982 Board: /elit/ ID: fee4c0 [Reply]

I now find the urge to share with you, the reader, this story of mine, out of pure improvise. However, before I get started I need to comment a few bits regarding the story. First, the names of the people involved have been changed to suit an English reader (so the names don't sound exotic) and to protect the identity of all of us that were involved in it. Secondly, it contains sexual acts with minors, everything is consensual nonetheless, yet I find the need to warn you.

Note: the story is very slow paced. And I may continue it sporadically.

My name was Richard, a fourteen year old teenager in the wilds for the first time in his life, all alone in Ireland. To understand why I was alone in a foreigner country some bits of my early life need to be explained. I come from a Mediterranean country, therefore English is not my mother tongue so we all have to learn it in the school. My parents, having no financial troubles, decided to send me to Ireland the month of July, with a family, to improve my fluidity in English (which I really did) as well as to know a different culture. The idea sounded great, I was really looking forward to the day I would board the plane, being alone, with no parents for an entire month.

Yet now, I found myself alone, without friends, surrounded by other teenagers with similar age, actually, older, fourteen was the minimum age to go in such an adventure (at least with the company I was doing this activity). One thing that was really making me nervous was the staggering majority of girls in the group. I had never, in my entire life, found myself surrounded by these many girls. A bit of background information: I went to an all boys school, the only girl I felt comfortable with was a neighbor of the same age called Theresa; and adding up that, my nerdiness was noticeable... I mean, I was pretty good looking, skinny, light brown hair, a tad strong; not a chubby nerd, yet no qualities that I possessed were of any help in that situation. Being social was one of my strong parts, having to force myself to meet strangers was not.

The flight was a real life savior, an extremely nice guy named Luka sat down next to me, and he was coming with the group (a common blue t-shirt which we all had to wear during trips was the key here). We got to know each other pretty well, he was 16 and it was his second time staying with a family, his tips and trick were some of the most important bits of information that anyone would give me that crazy month of July (specially the part related to Irish customs). However, what really made my day was to know where he was going to stay, in the same street as mine, just four homes away!

The plane landed, in Dublin, now only a two hour bus ride separated us from our host families. We headed south, and as we went, the weather was getting better and better. I got to know other people, specially a girl named Clara, which happened to go to an sc Message too long. Click here to view the full text.


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Hailvim 17/04/12(Wed)00:59 No. 24991 ID: 54bbea

I may go slower after this one, but I am determined to finish. I am really enjoying writing old memories.

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"What happened!?" I was still dripping wet.

"I wanted to see if my knight would come should the princess be in need." Declared Sara with a big and innocent smile in her face.

Fuck me. It wasn't cold outside, but running while wet wasn't a great sensation. I was going to scold her, but in her face, I recall quite clearly, she showed no remorse nor guilt whatsoever, Sara was playing a girls game.

"Well, I came, now, I need to dry up." I replied dryly.

"You also have the black tattoos, like the warrior in your story!" She lost me once again.

"What do you mean? I need to go to the bath."
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Hailvim 17/04/12(Wed)15:38 No. 24992 ID: 97d987

On Friday nothing special happened, a complete normal day with a nice interesting Gaelic drums play as that day's activity. If you are wondering why I can recall these events after such long time, there is a trick. Like this day, which in the afternoon I was pretty bored, after having read a few chapters, I had a notebook (which I still have) were I made small notes that I found interesting, nonetheless, it is far from being described as a diary.

On Saturday we went to Dublin. All the students gathered together and after a couple of hours going up and down downtown Dublin, we were set free. Which my group of friends and I spent laying down on the grass in the Central Park. I got home at seven, dinner time. After I had finished eating I asked Sara whether she wanted to play some Gaelic football with me, which she obviously didn't refuse. I remember being a bit tired, but I really wanted to break the ice with her. Everything went smoothly, though I had to renew my lost abilities from the past week. About thirty minutes playing, Jane told us she was going to her sister's house, which gave me the idea to invite Luka. After another thirty minutes playing, Luka and I were exhausted, lying down does on the grass does tire you.

Luka and I agreed to call it a day, we both needed a shower. Sara and I got home, and went to our bedrooms. I wanted to rest a few minutes before going to the shower, but was interrupted by Sara asking to play Monopoly. I agreed, but before playing, I had to shower, I stank. I grabbed my pajamas, and left them in the bath. I was going to get my slippers, turned back, and found Sara waiting with her pajamas on her arms in front of me.

"'Seems I was faster than you." I told her.

"Yes you were. But I wanted to shower with you."

It was in that very instant when I realized two days ago, I agreed to shower with her. Well, could help it now.

"Oh-okey. I need to grab my slippers, be right back."

I got back into the bathroom to find Sara naked with her panties pulled a few centimeters, just about to show her slit.
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Bkil 17/04/15(Sat)08:44 No. 24997 ID: 0e3738

Slow pace is fine. This is a good story. Thanks for posting it!




Irresistible hotstuffprovider 19/03/14(Thu)23:56 No. 63401 Board: /cake/ ID: ebdf64 [Reply]
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Azumanga Anonymous-San 18/03/02(Fri)21:29 No. 35580 Board: /a/ ID: 24ac78 [Reply]
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For what purpose?
Osaka's face looks like shit now....


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Anonymous-San 18/03/12(Mon)09:47 No. 35590 ID: a89f4e

kiyohiko azuma was never worth reading, the only people who care about him are meme chasing niggertiters wannabe posers


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sage Anonymous-San 19/02/20(Wed)03:37 No. 35851 ID: d6ab75

his style clearly evolved from drawing yotsuba

>>35590
depends what you enjoy, i think its a short and sweet comedy series that doesn't overstay its welcome




Hipster Slut 15/03/27(Fri)08:06 No. 17409 Board: /lit/ [Reply]
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Hello, /lit/erates.

Could I have some constructive criticism? I accidentally wrote an overly involved thing while responding in a thread. It might have potential?

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I grew up in an extremely Southern Baptist household, which meant that I also grew up thinking that ritual cannibalism and live burial wasn't weird. You may take every stereotype you're now thinking of and then apply it to the first ten years of my existence. Young earthers high on Jesus, the Spirit, dodgy epistemology, and an ensuing even dodgier understanding of the hard sciences. We were the chosen few and demons crept in every shadow. Little hawks that knew it was the most noble to join the service of our country (for She was Blessed) or the Lord. Perhaps they were the same thing.

It was a gradual descent from this all-consuming light, but eventually when my eyes adjusted to the dark I was quite dissatisfied with the gaps in my knowledge re: reality. I hid textbooks I stole from the public high school in the ceiling of my church's youthroom. They supplemented and frankly surpassed my homeschooling on the four days of the week I was there. It was a simple matter to stand on stacked chairs and poke a ceiling tile aside with a yardstick. There was no insulation in that layer, which was fortunate.

I still love mythology. When people talk about their gods, they talk about themselves, except for when they talk about their government or dreams or truth. It's ugly and fascinating.

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So, the homemade bomb club is a result of zero parental supervision, mutually enabling pyromania, and unscrupulous fireworks stands.
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Hipster Slut 15/04/09(Thu)01:29 No. 17415

Psh, Pshaw! You Southern Baptists with your organized national structure and you're endless efforts to mollify the PC Psychos; how can you summon up the gall to actually classify yourself fundamentalists? Now, I grew up in a zealot Missionary Baptist household in the rural South, and my only contact with Outside Civilization was our trips to the nearest vice-filled City...a cotton-farming burg of maybe a thousand souls, sixteen miles away; we made this journey three or four times a year for the first sixteen years of my life. Yes, William Faulkner wrote stories about boys like me.

Which didn't mean that by the time I was fifteen I hadn't decided that all that religious fluffernutter that had been ramrodded down my throat was complete bullshit; I kept my incipient Atheism to myself until I was big enough and fast enough to outrun my Dad if he decided to kill me...and to whip him if he did manage to catch me. The folks never really accepted my (lack of) beliefs, though; vindictive people, Baptists.

As for a critique of your written account, I am really left not knowing what to make of it; how is growing up in a repressive, fanatical household (which I can sympathize with) have to do with your delvings into the exciting and colorful world of Improvised Explosives (which I can also sympathize with)? What we have is a beginning and an end (just like in the Bible, remember; "I AM ALPHA AND OMEGA..."), with nothing connecting the two. We go from Prayer Meeting to pipe-bombs. We need another two chapters, maybe more, to tie the narrative together into a whole.

I would be interested in reading the completed tale. I will leave you with words spoken to me often during the tail-end of my formative years, "Kill a Commie for Mommy" (for whatever reason, my Mom never developed any true-blue, red-blooded affection for this sentiment; Baptists...go figure.)


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Hipster Slut 15/04/21(Tue)03:25 No. 17419
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Seems a little long winded. Know what I mean? The prose is good, nice and meaty. Add a dash a dash of youthful desperation, synthesize a story arc, maybe give it a little more scope. Your experience is a relatable one, to me and doubtlessly many others, so if I were you I'd attempt to add a bit of something. A sinister suggestion of unanswered possibility perhaps. Pick an experience out of that vast wealth of sensory knowledge and supply it with that acidity you felt when you were knee deep in it and see what comes.




meetup norway Stian 15/07/16(Thu)06:19 No. 99723 Board: /fag/ [Reply]
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Anonymous 18/02/16(Fri)16:24 No. 45544 Board: /cd/ [Reply]
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Hi :)


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Anonymous 18/12/08(Sat)10:03 No. 46118

moar..




Anonymous 19/07/05(Fri)12:42 No. 1529 Board: /civ/ ID: 97f293 [Reply]
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How about allowing unlimited immigration but only as long as they're young girls?


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Anonymous 19/07/10(Wed)04:19 No. 1531 ID: a115ac

Jeffrey Edward Epstein, cut that out. You know they monitor all communications into and out of jail, this isn't going to help your case at all.




Intergalactic Planet Faggot 19/08/09(Fri)10:20 No. 100751 Board: /fag/ [Reply]
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Hi. I see you there.
I know why you're here.
Yes, you're allowed to post about gay shit. We won't mind. 8ch is dead and /hm/ and /lgbt/ are total shitshows. Come in, sit down. Have a drink - have three.





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