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My Sister is a Dickgirl SNT-NEL 12/02/11(Sat)10:15 No. 15127 ID: b808a3

Reposting this, for some reason. Even though I felt weird trying to fap to futa lit, I was okay with this one, for some reason.

I remember a long while back, some folks here added to it, and things were great, but then for some reason the mods took it down? I think it was cause it hadn't been updated in forever. But, yeah. RESURRECTION(I hope)
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Meh DickgirlFan 14/10/27(Mon)17:47 No. 22624 ID: 2f1d92

Well, if you are truly busy and need help to finish the story, I would love to give a go at writing this, and would love to see this continue on far into the future and as it is, and frankly, it hasn't been updated nearly consistently enough. I am in college and only have so much time, but I have a few nights a week I'm not doing anything. We could bounce ideas of each other or set up a main plot, where we wanna see the chapters start and end, what we want them to include, then as you are working on the next chapter I could be working on the chapter after that, then I would simply adjust mine to match any specific details of yours that would conflict with it, and we'd have chapters out at a faster rate, maybe two within a month or so.


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Anonymous 14/10/28(Tue)03:07 No. 22627 ID: 988526

>>22624
The story itself is written by a group of writers. Really all you have to do is write another chapter. As for an ending, again, written by group so an ending is not needed.

Just make your own chapter, it does not have to be "canon." Just dont be shit.


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cooperation DickgirlFan 14/10/28(Tue)06:49 No. 22629 ID: 2f1d92

>>22627
Well yes but seeing as he has an idea for the chapter and is still planning to be around and working on it, my writing a chapter would not only disrespect him but disrupt his own work when, while working together, we could easily pump out more, better chapters at an increased pace


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Anonymous 14/10/28(Tue)13:29 No. 22637 ID: cb71d6

>>22629

I agree with this.I believe you two working together would achieve a greater story than if you two were to just do your Own thing. Hopefully this is how things will go from now on


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Anonymous 14/10/29(Wed)16:32 No. 22647 ID: 0ffa9f

Bump bump, fap fap, wait wait.


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Anonymous 14/10/30(Thu)11:15 No. 22658 ID: def664

I hate doing this


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Monday DickgirlFan 14/10/31(Fri)01:17 No. 22662 ID: 32b365

Okay, NewAnon, I'm giving you until Monday to respond to my post or I'm going to go ahead and attempt to start on a new chapter. I would much prefer to write with you rather than against you, but the story must go on.


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Anonymous 14/10/31(Fri)05:07 No. 22663 ID: 97a50f

Oh my god
Let this die!

I read this story here years ago. It's good yes but not exactly a NYT bestseller. Authors gone and its hard to emulate.

Let it die.


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Anonymous 14/10/31(Fri)06:51 No. 22665 ID: 0ffa9f

Nooooo,it cannot die until Gail is DP'ed and Chase is buttfucked.. It has been foretold!


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DickgirlFan 14/10/31(Fri)07:30 No. 22667 ID: 2f1d92

>>22663
Dude seriously? This is like one of the best erotic stories I've ever read, and thats pretty close to thousands of stories, and with a little polishing it could be the best without a doubt. I refuse to let this story which I've been rereading for years die before it is as complete as it can reasonably be. I owe it to the characters and all the people this story has connected to do my best to assure a proper end.


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newanon 14/10/31(Fri)16:59 No. 22672 ID: ebd729

Seems like I've missed a bit, haha. I'm pretty busy personally, I've got some other writing commitments to finish up to be honest, but if you want to pick it up go for it! I'd be more than happy to bounce ideas off of, so go for it. I'll try and respond to them as best I can.


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Email DickgirlFan 14/11/01(Sat)19:02 No. 22692 ID: c50977

>>22672
Well here is my email renzy2@yahoo.com so if you would you said you had a plan somewhat laid out for the next chapter, if you don't mind that I write it instead I would love for you to send your plan to me and I can get started almost immediately.


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newanon 14/11/02(Sun)09:31 No. 22700 ID: 408c22

>>22692
Well I've sent you a little type up, best of luck!


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Anonymous 14/11/07(Fri)00:14 No. 22746 ID: def664

So how much longer now?


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DickgirlFan 14/11/07(Fri)01:13 No. 22747 ID: 18df3a

I've started writing off of newanon's plans, so it should possibly be roughly done by sunday night. I will have him edit it first so it may not be exactly then, however of the actual work as of now its about anywhere from 1/4 to 1/3 of the way done.


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Anonymous 14/11/10(Mon)00:20 No. 22769 ID: def664

>>22747

Please post the next chapter today!


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Late DickgirlFan 14/11/10(Mon)11:33 No. 22773 ID: 2f1d92

Hey all I apologize for the delay, a ton of shit came up this weekend I haven't had time to write at all. I tried to rush through it in an hour or so but it just didn't feel right so I had to cut it, and take my time or it won't be good.


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What I have DickgirlFan 14/11/12(Wed)05:41 No. 22785 ID: 2f1d92

Notes: This isn't a full chapter or edited yet, I will be adding more to it but its taking a while and I ended up writing a lot more than I thought I would, so, here it is.
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I couldn’t believe our plan was going so well. As the three of us redressed and calmed ourselves slightly so as not to be completely obvious if we were seen, my mind tried to wrap itself around how eagerly Gail seemed to be about this crazy idea. Perhaps Cassie was a better manipulator then she knew, or maybe Gail was just way more open minded then I had expected. Cassie was the first to poke her head out of the bathroom door; she glanced back and forth before waving us forward with a nervous smile, her cheeks slightly red with a faint blush, and both mine and Gail’s faces were the same. Our hearts pounded in our chests as we crept along the abandoned hallways in the unused part of the school. We decided to leave out towards the football stadium, there was a line of trees behind it and plenty of cover to that point, and once we made it beyond there we would be home free, literally. We quickly ducked out the exit and made our way stealthily all the way to that tree line before standing full upright and looking at each other, all our faces were so eager and we couldn’t help but fidget at how uncomfortable our lower halves were. As we turned and began to head back to mine and Cassie’s home, a thought flickered through my mind. Since the plan was going so well, I wouldn’t have to take Gail’s place and Cassie’s cock would steer clear of my ass. For some reason, though wasn’t as huge of a relief as it should have been, and was only slightly bitter, but I was too horny to care at that point.

We made it back to the house without too much problems, but the thought of how naughty the whole thing was only added to our nervous excitement. By the time we made it in the door, checking to be sure that mine and Cassie’s parents weren’t there still, both I and Cassie had large obvious bulges straining against our pants, and the fact that hers was larger was actually a bit embarrassing to me. And by the way Gail was biting her lip, whimpering, and fidgeting back and forth, I had no doubt she was absolutely drenched between her legs, and I couldn’t wait to feel for myself. We had for some reason stopped in our living room, and between how eager and how nervous I, and I’m assuming the girls, were we stood, staring back and forth between each other in awkward silence.

Finally, with a grunt of impatience, Cassie pulls her shirt and bra straight up and over her head in one motion, leaving her rather large, full breasts bare and causing them to bounce lightly. Her hands then immediately shoot down to fumble with her pants, and after a brief moment, she lets them fall to the ground with a sigh of relief as her hard, long girly cock is freed from her restricting pants. She gives a nervous grin as she glances between Gail and me.

“W-well…. Someone had to start us off… Are we gonna do this or not?” Gail gives a whine of need at the sight of Cassie’s futa cock, the one that had been floating around the back of her mind and filling the naughtiest of her dreams ever since that video Cassie had Chase bring her unawares. Gail clenches her knees together, a hand slides down under her skirt as she immediately begins to play with her pussy which at this point I imagine felt neglected and in terrible need. Gail walks a step or two forward, falling to her knees in front of Cassie, her lips inches from my sister’s cock. She places a hand on Cassie’s thigh, her soft warm breath hits Cassie’s cock as she moans from her own hand, and she looks up at Cassie with big, wanting eyes.

“I… I wan uhhn….May I? P-aaaa-please?” Gail whispers across Cassie’s cock, her lips parted slightly, her hand creeping closer towards Cassie’s base. Cassie clenches her hands, bites her lip, but finally she takes her right hand and places it in Gail’s hair at the back of her head, then her left takes Gail’s hand from her thigh and wraps it around the smooth, soft, wide base of her cock, giving Gail’s hand a light squeeze. Cassie groans even from that contact, having never felt another girl’s hand down there, or anything else for that matter, and they were much softer than Chase’s.

Cassie then, using both her hands, positions her tip against Gail’s lips, already a drop of pre-cum smears onto them, causing Gail to instinctively lick her lips, and she delights at the somewhat sweet taste. Then, together, Cassie pushes Gail’s head forward just as Gail goes to suck the delectable cock into her mouth, causing Gail to go much further than intended, her lips hitting their hand wrapped around Cassie’s base, Cassie’s tip almost at her throat. They both moan loudly, Gail’s vibrating her mouth around Cassie, who groans and squeezes Gail’s hand onto her base hard, the sudden intense pleasure almost driving her to an orgasm then and there.

“You two aren’t planning to keep the fun to yourselves?” I ask as I finish stripping of my own clothes, my own cock just as hard and eager as Cassie’s. Though, part of the reason for the blush on my face is because I remembered that Cassie is indeed bigger than I. I’m getting shown up to my girlfriend by my own sister. But that thought barely had any effect at that moment, because I had a shit eating grin at the stunning sight before me. I had my admittedly sexy, voluptuous sister with her boobs bouncing free as my almost as sexy girlfriend plays with herself and sucks on my sister’s girl cock. I walk over next to them, slightly behind Gail to the left, looking down at their preoccupied hands.

“What… no fun for me? Oh, wait… I know.” I chuckled as I knelt down beside them both, groping Cassie’s boob and giving her nipple a quick tug as I lower myself, but she was too preoccupied with Gail sucking her cock like it was a delicious popsicle, not that I could blame her. I almost even felt jealous, almost. I leaned forward, lifting Gail’s shirt and bra up just enough to bare her lovely, perky breasts and her little pink erect nipples. I lean forward to suck on her left one, easily pulling her whole breast between my lips, tongue teasing her nipple with flicks and swirls.
I also pull her hand, currently going to town on her pussy and clit, up and out of her skirt and panties even as she protests and tries to pull her hand back. I give her a light nip on the breasts, instead wrapping her soft wonderful hand around my cock, to keep her busy. She hesitates, then slowly begins to stroke me, her fingers covered with her slick juices from moments before, which lubed me up quite nicely. While she does that, I place a hand on either side of the waistband of her skirt, pulling it and her panties down in one go, all the way down to her knees, which makes her shiver and groan more around Cassie’s cock, which in turn makes Cassie jerk slightly and groan. I grin to myself around Gail’s soft tit, loving that I could make a chain reaction of pleasure between them.

I take this cue and slide my left hand slowly down Gail’s smooth stomach, then down each thigh once, teasing her, before finally I bring my hand down to her core and plunge a long finger inside, curling it up into her G-spot with ease. This causes her to buck/jerk slightly and moan load, her mouth slamming down to nearly take Cassie into her throat yet again, Cassie gasps loud and leans her head back from ecstasy.

“Oh fucking hell…. Chase… do that again… Gail… your mouth feels amazing. I… I may not last long.” At this point Cassie begins to thrust into Gail’s mouth, her cock pulsing ever so slightly, a drizzle of pre-cum now begins to slip out of her tip, coating Gail’s tongue. Gail’s eyes look up at Cassie eagerly, her moans from my hand almost continuous as I relentlessly flick and curl into her G-spot. Gail lifts her hand off of Cassie’s base, Cassie moving her hand to the back of Gail’s head, as she places her hand back on Cassie’s thigh, Gail begins to bob her head back and forth quickly, each time going all the way back down to where their hands had been, timing her mouth movements to Cassie’s thrusts but moving even faster.

Upon hearing Cassie’s voice and the thinly veiled struggle within it, as well as feeling Gail’s drenched, hot pussy begin to contract around my finger, I know I’m about to get a two for one orgasm. I chuckle with delight, pulling my mouth off of Gail’s boob and bringing it up to her ear to whisper teasingly.

“You want my sister’s cum in your mouth? Tastes good huh? I’d sure love to see it.” Without giving her a chance to answer or react, I slip another finger into her wet pussy, stretching the walls a bit as they swirl and flick and thrust into her like mad. I even slide my right hand down her back, even down over her small but plump ass. My fingers inside her begin to make her go crazy, as she moans and groans endlessly on Cassie, sucking faster and faster, her lips like a vice. Cassie keeps gasping from each of Gail’s movements, her cock pulsing more and more as she tries to hold back the flood of cum filling it.

I grin evilly, thinking to myself that Cassie isn’t the only devious one in the family, I give Gail’s ass a slap, positioning my hand perfectly, then without warning I slide my middle finger between her cheeks, pressing it firmly against her tight little ass hole, causing her eyes to go wide and buck forward onto my fingers with what sounds like a muffled cry, the buck causing her to orgasm instantly, her body spasming, tightening hard around my fingers as they become covered in juices, her mouth slamming all the way down onto Cassie’s base, shoving her swollen head into Gail’s tight throat.

Cassie also instantly gives off a cry of pleasure, her hands clenching hard in Gail’s hair, her hips trying to buck as her tip explodes with shot after shot of hot, thick, ropes of cum, straight into Gail’s throat. Gail gags slightly at first, but refuses to move her head and manages to take all of Cassie’s load, which I could tell was a big one. As both of their bodies finally calm down, and all hands are removed from each other’s’ bodies, Cassie slowly pulls her hips back, her still mostly hard cock sliding out of Gail’s lips who almost seems wistful without it. As Cassie pulls all the way out, a bit of her left over cum drips onto the floor between the girls, and she drops onto her knees, leaning into Gail.

Cassie and Gail stay there for a moment, before Cassie whispers something in Gail’s ear I can’t quite make out. Right as I open my mouth to speak, Gail turns and tackles me, kissing me deeply and eagerly. I only take a brief moment before I kiss her back just as passionately. Its only as I open my mouth to tongue kiss her, and realize I’m tasting Cassie’s sperm, that I know what’s going on too late. Before I can react Gail pushes a decent amount of Cassie’s cum as far into my mouth as she can, causing me to cough and sputter as she sits back up with a giggle, her face bright red in a blush but her eyes gleaming.

“That’s what you get knob.” Cassie turns to face me, kneeling next to Gail, putting an arm around her shoulder. “Though I gotta say, you have great taste in women.” At this both she and Gail laugh some more.

“Yeah Chase… that’s what you get! For not warning me, and….” Gail blushes a bit and looks to the side. “For not doing it all the way…. Dammit. Teasing me isn’t nice.”


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Anonymous 14/11/12(Wed)09:06 No. 22786 ID: 988526

>>22785
I hardon says you did well enough. Like to see the finish, edited chapter.


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Anonymous 14/11/15(Sat)05:10 No. 22797 ID: def664

I cant wait to "read" more of this. Hopefully writing/editing the next chaptet won't interfere with your life.


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Anonymous 14/11/16(Sun)12:29 No. 22799 ID: f5b1c2

>>22785
Switches from past tense to present tense a few paragraphs in.


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Silence 14/11/16(Sun)21:12 No. 22801 ID: a620b0

>>22785
Yeah, the switch from past to present tense is kind of weird. Along with the some of the dialogue (and a slew of other things I noticed), but like you said you're still editing...


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DickgirlFan 14/11/18(Tue)18:34 No. 22814 ID: 631755

>>22799
>>22801
Yeah, I'm working on that, sorry for the delay also. It was just a bit hard because this is supposed to be like a first person retelling of a past event but it often uses present tense, as well as past tense can get awkward in some scenarios. As for any other weirdness I suppose it may be due to the fact that while this is Chase's story I don't want to ignore the thoughts and character developments for Cassie and Gail.


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Anonymous 14/11/20(Thu)05:54 No. 22830 ID: def664

>>22814

I Don't want to sound like a dick. But when's the next chapter?


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Anonymous 14/11/23(Sun)06:40 No. 22864 ID: def664

*sigh* bumping


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Anonymous 14/11/30(Sun)13:51 No. 22888 ID: def664

Okay it's dead. I'm done bumping this shit


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Finals DickgirlFan 14/12/02(Tue)09:29 No. 22893 ID: 2f1d92

Sorry college has been kicking my butt and then thanksgiving break came up and I've had literally no down time between studying and seeing family and packing unpacking and repeat. I'm working on the next chapter but without help I need to ask for patience. Come Christmas break in three weeks if i haven't gotten it out I'll make sure to do a double update. Promise.


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EDITED CHAPTER: NOT NEW DickgirlFan 14/12/03(Wed)19:06 No. 22898 ID: 59ac93

Note: I think I fixed the perspective errors. If you see anything wrong please let me know I'll fix it. Wanted to put this out and say I've started on the next chapter. I don't have an outline for this one so much but sex will ensue, promise. ;)
I couldn’t believe our plan was going so well. As the three of us redressed and calmed ourselves slightly so as not to be completely obvious if we were seen, my mind tried to wrap itself around how eagerly Gail seemed to be about this crazy idea. Perhaps Cassie was a better manipulator then she knew, or maybe Gail was just way more open minded then I had expected. Cassie was the first to poke her head out of the bathroom door; she glanced back and forth before waving us forward with a nervous smile, her cheeks slightly red with a faint blush, and both mine and Gail’s faces were the same. Our hearts pounded in our chests as we crept along the abandoned hallways in the unused part of the school. We decided to leave out towards the football stadium, there was a line of trees behind it and plenty of cover to that point, and once we made it beyond there we would be home free, literally. We quickly ducked out the exit and made our way stealthily all the way to that tree line before standing full upright and looking at each other, all our faces were so eager and we couldn’t help but fidget at how uncomfortable our lower halves were. As we turned and began to head back to mine and Cassie’s home, a thought flickered through my mind. Since the plan was going so well, I wouldn’t have to take Gail’s place and Cassie’s cock would steer clear of my ass. For some reason though, it wasn’t as huge of a relief as it should have been, and was only slightly bitter, but I was too horny to care at that point.
We made it back to the house without too many problems, but thinking of how naughty the whole thing was only added to our nervous excitement. By the time we made it in the door, checking to be sure that mine and Cassie’s parents still weren’t there, both I and Cassie had large obvious bulges straining against our pants, and the fact that hers was larger was actually a bit embarrassing to me. And by the way Gail was biting her lip, whimpering, and fidgeting back and forth, I had no doubt she was absolutely drenched between her legs, and I couldn’t wait to feel for myself. We for some reason stopped in our living room, and between how eager and how nervous I, and I’m assuming the girls, were, we stood, staring back and forth between each other in awkward silence.
Finally, with a grunt of impatience, Cassie pulled her shirt and bra straight up and over her head in one motion, leaving her rather large, full breasts bare and causing them to bounce lightly. Her hands then immediately shoot down to fumble with her pants, and after a brief moment, she let them fall to the ground with a sigh of relief as her hard, long girly cock was freed from her restricting pants. She gave a nervous grin as she glanced between Gail and me.
“W-well…. Someone had to start us off… Are we gonna do this or not?” Gail gave a whine of need at the sight of Cassie’s futa cock, the one that had been floating around the back of her mind and filling the naughtiest of her dreams ever since that video Cassie had me bring her unawares. Gail clenched her knees together, a hand slid down under her skirt as she immediately began to play with her pussy which at that point I imagine felt neglected and in terrible need. Gail walked a step or two forward, falling to her knees in front of Cassie, her lips inches from my sister’s cock. She placed a hand on Cassie’s thigh, her soft warm breath hit Cassie’s cock as she moaned from her own hand, and she looked up at Cassie with big, wanting eyes.
“I… I wan uhhn….May I? P-aaaa-please?” Gail whispered across Cassie’s cock, her lips parted slightly, as her hand creeped closer towards Cassie’s base. Cassie clenched her hands, bit her lip, but finally she took her right hand and placed it in Gail’s hair at the back of her head, then her left took Gail’s hand from her thigh and wraps it around the smooth, soft, wide base of her cock, giving Gail’s hand a light squeeze. Cassie groaned even from that contact, having never felt another girl’s hand down there, or anything else for that matter, and they were much softer than mine.
Cassie then, using both her hands, positioned her tip against Gail’s lips, already a drop of pre-cum smeared onto them, which caused Gail to instinctively lick her lips, and she delighted at the somewhat sweet taste. Then, together, Cassie pushes Gail’s head forward just as Gail goes to suck the delectable cock into her mouth, causing Gail to go much further than intended, her lips hitting their hand wrapped around Cassie’s base, Cassie’s tip almost at her throat. They both moan loudly, Gail’s vibrating her mouth around Cassie, who groans and squeezes Gail’s hand onto her base hard, the sudden intense pleasure almost driving her to an orgasm then and there.
“You two aren’t planning to keep the fun to yourselves?” I asked as I finished stripping of my own clothes, my cock just as hard and eager as Cassie’s. Though, part of the reason for the blush on my face was because I remembered that Cassie is indeed bigger than I. I was getting shown up to my girlfriend by my own sister. But that thought barely had any effect at that moment, because I had a shit eating grin at the stunning sight before me. I had my admittedly sexy, voluptuous sister with her boobs bouncing free as my almost as sexy girlfriend plays with herself and sucks on my sister’s girl cock. I walked over next to them, slightly behind Gail to the left, looking down at their preoccupied hands.
“What… nothing for me? Oh, wait… I know.” I chuckled as I knelt down beside them both, groping Cassie’s boob and giving her nipple a quick tug as I lowered myself, but she was too preoccupied with Gail sucking her cock like it was a delicious popsicle, not that I could blame her. I almost even felt jealous, almost. I leaned forward, lifting Gail’s shirt and bra up just enough to bare her lovely, perky breasts and her little pink erect nipples. I leaned forward to suck on her left one, easily pulling her whole breast between my lips, tongue teasing her nipple with flicks and swirls.
I also pulled her hand, currently going to town on her pussy and clit, up and out of her skirt and panties even as she protested and tried to pull her hand back. I gave her a light nip on the breasts, instead wrapping her soft wonderful hand around my cock, to keep her busy. She hesitated, then slowly began to stroke me, her fingers covered with her slick juices from moments before, which lubed me up quite nicely. While she did that, I place a hand on either side of the waistband of her skirt, pulling it and her panties down in one go, all the way down to her knees, which made her shiver and groan more around Cassie’s cock, which in turn made Cassie jerk slightly and groan. I grinned to myself around Gail’s soft tit, loving that I could make a chain reaction of pleasure between them.

I took this cue and slid my left hand slowly down Gail’s smooth stomach, then down each thigh once, teasing her, before finally I brought my hand down to her core and plunged a long finger inside, curling it up into her G-spot with ease. This caused her to buck/jerk slightly and moan loudly, her mouth slamming down to nearly take Cassie into her throat yet again, Cassie gasped loud and leaned her head back from ecstasy.
“Oh fucking hell…. Chase… do that again… Gail… your mouth feels amazing. I… I may not last long.” At this point Cassie began to thrust into Gail’s mouth, her cock pulsing ever so slightly, a drizzle of pre-cum started to slip out of her tip, coating Gail’s tongue. Gail’s eyes looked up at Cassie eagerly, her moans from my hand almost continuous as I relentlessly flicked and curled into her G-spot. Gail lifted her hand off of Cassie’s base, causing Cassie’s hand to join her other hand at the back of Gail’s head, and as she placed her hand back on Cassie’s thigh, Gail began to bob her head back and forth quickly, each time going all the way back down to where their hands had been, timing her mouth movements to Cassie’s thrusting but moving twice as fast.
Upon hearing Cassie’s voice and the thinly veiled struggle within it, as well as feeling Gail’s drenched, hot pussy begin to contract around my finger, I knew I was about to get a two for one orgasm. I chuckled with glee, pulling my mouth off of Gail’s boob and bringing it up to her ear to whisper teasingly.
“You want my sister’s cum in your mouth? Tastes good huh? I’d sure love to see it.” Without giving her a chance to answer or react, I slipped another finger into her wet pussy, stretching the walls a bit as they swirled and flicked and thrusted into her like mad. I even slid my right hand down her back, down over her small but plump ass. My fingers inside her began to make her go crazy, as she moaned and groaned endlessly on Cassie, sucking faster and faster, her lips like a vice. Cassie kept gasping from each of Gail’s movements, her cock pulsing more and more as she tried to hold back the flood of cum filling it.
I grinned evilly, thinking to myself that Cassie isn’t the only devious one in the family, I gave Gail’s ass a slap, positioning my hand perfectly, then without warning I slid my middle finger between her cheeks, pressing it firmly against her tight little ass hole, causing her eyes to go wide and her hips to buck forward onto my fingers with what sounded like a muffled cry, the buck caused her to orgasm instantly, her body spasming, tightening hard around my fingers as they became covered in juices, her mouth slammed all the way down onto Cassie’s base, shoving her swollen head into Gail’s tight throat.
Cassie also instantly gave off a cry of pleasure, her hands clenching hard in Gail’s hair, her hips trying to buck as her tip exploded with shot after shot of hot, thick, ropes of cum, straight into Gail’s throat. Gail gagged slightly at first, but refused to move her head and managed to take all of Cassie’s load, which I could tell was a big one. As both of their bodies finally calmed down, and all hands were removed from each other’s’ bodies, Cassie slowly pulled her hips back, her still mostly hard cock sliding out of Gail’s lips who almost seemed wistful without it. As Cassie pulled all the way out, a bit of her left over cum dripped onto the floor between the girls, and she dropped onto her knees, leaning into Gail.
Cassie and Gail stayed there for a moment, before Cassie whispered something in Gail’s ear I couldn’t quite make out. Right as I opened my mouth to speak, Gail turned and tackled me, kissing me deeply and eagerly. I only took a brief moment before I kissed her back just as passionately. Its only as I opened my mouth further to tongue kiss her, and realized was tasting Cassie’s sperm, that I knew what was going on too late. Before I could react Gail pushed a decent amount of Cassie’s cum as far into my mouth as she was able, causing me to cough and sputter as she sat back up with a giggle, her face bright red in a blush but her eyes gleaming.
“That’s what you get knob.” Cassie turned to face me, kneeling next to Gail, putting an arm around her shoulder. “Though I gotta say, you have great taste in women.” At this both she and Gail laughed some more.
“Yeah Chase… that’s what you get! For not warning me, and….” Gail blushed a bit and looked to the side. “For not doing it all the way…. Dammit. Teasing me isn’t nice.”


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Anonymous 14/12/04(Thu)07:12 No. 22901 ID: f5b1c2

>>22898
What do you have against linebreaks?


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Anonymous 14/12/11(Thu)13:37 No. 22949 ID: def664

bump


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Anonymous 14/12/13(Sat)05:11 No. 22968 ID: def664

Fuck me and my taste in fapasta


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Anonymous 14/12/19(Fri)19:05 No. 22993 ID: 988526

BUMP FUCKER!


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bump AnonKEYBOARD 14/12/29(Mon)03:03 No. 23026 ID: cce2a2

Update this pls


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Anonymous 15/01/08(Thu)01:05 No. 23084 ID: 988526

bump fuckers. someone continue it


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Anonymous 15/01/11(Sun)13:08 No. 23098 ID: def664

>>23084

Face it. It's dead. It's been like a month since the guy last said anything.

And I actually thought this story was going to get resurrected


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BUMP! Anonymous 15/01/12(Mon)00:30 No. 23101 ID: 988526

>>23098
Same, but writers are faggots


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VAGINAL SPIDERS 15/01/15(Thu)04:38 No. 23113 ID: 58a838

Jesus Christ it's been like a year since I've been here.

I keep telling myself to get back to this, but full time actual adult employment is tough on creative thinking time.

No promises, but I'm going to try to read through everything that's been posted since I quit like a fag, and I'll steal what I like/ignore what I don't.

Don't wait up for me though


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Anonymous 15/01/16(Fri)06:01 No. 23120 ID: 988526

>>23113
Unless you mean ignoring the one non-canon shit chapter, doing ignore what been posted. Lets try not to fuck the continuity.


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Anonymous 15/02/01(Sun)14:28 No. 23189 ID: def664

Totally not in denial that this story is never going to get continued *bump


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Anonymous 15/02/03(Tue)06:16 No. 23200 ID: c350f2

update this pls my dick is killing me!!!


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Anonymous 15/02/16(Mon)22:22 No. 23281 ID: def664

RIP


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Anonymous 15/03/03(Tue)12:15 No. 23342 ID: def664

Why did this have to die again? Was it just to get everybody's hopes up for nothing?


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REBOOT AnonyMPC 15/04/01(Wed)16:45 No. 23438 ID: a609fb

Since this story's been abandoned, I thought I might take it on. It's a little out of my wheelhouse, but it does have incest, which puts it right in my interests and... well, we have to stretch outside of our comfort zone once in a while, right?

The thing is, I just can't continue someone else's story. It doesn't feel right. And my style might wind up clashing with the OP's enough that a continuation would be jarring. Also, if you're familiar with my work, you know I like a little more explanation and setup.

So, I've decided that I'm going to reboot the story, like Hollywood does, except unlike Hollywood, it's possible the original author might just pick up where they left off, and that's more than okay.

So, let's begin...

Chapter One:

My little sister Cassie seemed different since returning from her summer adventure program, but I had no idea how different. She just seemed distant, moody.

I thought she was just suffering from a bad case of puberty. I was right about that, but that was only a small fraction of what was going on. Her time at the Moreau Girls Development Island Adventure Camp had changed her, and not just giving her confidence and leadership skills and self-reliance like the website she'd found when she begged our parents to send her claimed to do.

If anything, it was the opposite. She was shy, she wouldn't go out unless we dragged her. She used to love dressing up in skirts and frilly blouses, but now she wore baggy shorts and a long t-shirt. Only her long hair and the necklace she wore around her neck would have made her look girlish.

But again, I didn't think too deeply, I just thought it was puberty. Or maybe she missed her new friends at camp. She did talk about them, in vague but glowing terms, saying they opened up a whole new world for her. Her friend Kat would chase her through the woods, and she spent a lot of time swimming with her friend Octavia, or Robin who's beautiful singing voice made her feel jealous. But after the first welcome home party, she withdrew.

I missed her. She was twelve, I was fourteen, but we always felt like partners in crime. She may not have dressed like a tomboy, but she acted like one around me... maybe just because she was imitating me, she wanted to be like me, like little siblings often do with their older siblings. And I liked having her around because of it, who doesn't like being worshipped, right? Also, she really was fun. We'd fight, but it was more play-fighting than anything, we'd get into wrestling matches that sometimes seemed to get intense, like a matter of life or death but by the end we'd be laughing and exhausted no matter who won (I usually let her win in the end).

That had stopped, even before she went to camp, I was just starting to get worried it might be weird, if I accidentally touched her breast or butt or something. No, the truth was, I was worried that I enjoyed it too much when I did, that I might cross a line, or she'd start feeling weird.

Yet, she seemed so down, I had to do something, and the only thing I could think of was wrestling with her.

School hadn't started yet, and our parents were at work, and Cassie was down on the couch watching TV with a blank expression on her face. I plopped down beside her... she looked at me, then away. “Camp really changed you,” I said.

She made a strangled honking sound of surprise, kind of like a... quack, I guess, then caught herself and said, “What?”

“Yeah, you're even more of a butt-head than ever.” I nudged her shoulder with my shoulder, and her panicked expression softened, became a tentative smile. It was just a mild insult, stingless because she knew I didn't really mean it. “Come on, admit it, you just lied around on the beach all day.” She didn't, actually, because she didn't have a tan, her skin was pale, nearly white. It was almost like she didn't get any sun at all. That was weird, actually, but they probably just used SPF-100000000000 sunblock.

“I did not,” she said softly. “I did... lots of stuff. Stuff you wouldn't believe.”

“Nuh-uh,” I said, giving her a look over. “You look soft. Like you haven't even been exercising at all.”

“Looks can be deceiving.” She looked away from me, fingered the little necklace she got at camp idly.

“No, I don't think so,” I said. “I bet I could take you down. One round. Of course, you're too chicken to fight me.”

Her eyes slid towards mine. “I am NOT a chicken.”

“No? Prove it.”

“I don't want to.”

“I thought so. Chicken.” I made mock chicken sounds at her.

“Don't do that. It's offensive.”

“To who? Chickens? It's meant to be.” But I needed to let her off the hook. “Come on, if you're too chicken to fight me, let's settle it another way. A video game... let's just do SOMETHING,” I said, my voice going pleading, and then I added, sincerely. “I missed doing stuff with you.”

“I missed doing stuff with you, too,” she said. And I thought maybe there were tears in her eyes. “But it's different now.”

“Only if you let it be.”

She took a deep breath, almost a sigh, then stood up... and crouched. “Fine, come on.”

I grinned, and leapt to my feet, facing her, then crouched as well. I moved first, a feint, but she expected it, and after a few more false starts, we collided, becoming a mass of limbs each squabbling for dominance. She actually was stronger than she was before, and gave me a real fight as we fell to the floor climbing over each other. Her skin seemed weirdly soft, too, a little oily, even before we started sweating.

Softness wasn't the real surprise, though. The real surprise was when I suddenly ran into something surprisingly hard, where there shouldn't have been anything hard. What the hell was THAT?

***

Chapter Two

I dismissed it immediately. Who wouldn't? Some things, the mind isn't capable of comprehending until you're forced to. I made absurd rationalizations... it was just her knee, despite that her knee was nowhere near there. We were moving around a lot, maybe I just lost track. I looked back at her, and she seemed to be taken aback too, pushing me with her hands to keep me away while her legs were wrapped around me.

I wasn't going to go down that easily, so I reached up. I wasn't going for her chest, but I thought she reacted like I did. “No, don't!” she said, but I didn't listen. And my hand did brush against her breast, which seemed bigger than I'd ever noticed, felt bigger than it looked, and I thought, “Oh shit,” as I had before when I accidentally touched her inappropriately. But I couldn't back off, my hand went for her shoulder, and got snagged under her necklace.
“No, don't touch my face...” she cried, and jerked away, suddenly... so suddenly, that my hand snapped the chain to her necklace. It went flying into a corner.

Cassie's body rippled, like a pool of water on a rainy day, and suddenly, the sister I knew was gone. Her soft lips were entirely gone... instead, protruding from her lower face was an obscenely larger orange beak, turned upwards. More than that, I now saw that her white skin was covered, not completely, but in patches, by soft feathers.

She wasn't human. Not anymore. Not completely.

It had happened in the camp. I'd heard about these things... they were whispered on conspiracy theory websites I'd frequented, but I thought they were always bullshit. Secret experiments in genetic cross-breeding, experiments that only worked on the young, and worked especially well on girls. The rumors said that they'd developed a holographic image inducer, that would make them LOOK normal, as long as they kept it on them, that they could be among us and nobody would know. Of course, that detail was why I didn't think it could possibly be real, after all, it was like something out of the X-Men. I think Nightcrawler had one in the comics.

Now, though, I knew, that was Cassie's necklace, why she wore it all the time. She was some fusion of human and animal.

“No...” she whispered, realizing what happened, looking down at her hands. She climbed off me and ran off up to her room, with a sound like a long mournful quack.

***

Oh... oh, no... I meant to take a break here, since this was about where the other one started, and then reread the original story make my 'adaptation' of the rest. But now, as I edited this and checked against the original, I see my mistake now. I simply misread the title all along, I thought it said “My Sister is a Duckgirl.”

Wow, I'm embarrassed. My apologies. I guess I should abandon this. I've got nothing against futa, but it's not really my bag... even writing duckgirls was stretching it, really.

By the way, on an unrelated note, happy April 1st.


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Anonymous 15/04/02(Thu)07:06 No. 23439 ID: 5cd970

That's almost funny enough to make up for the fact that I almost thought there was something new in this story and I got exited.


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Anonymous 15/04/13(Mon)05:25 No. 23474 ID: 433925

>>23438
haha
This is fucking nice
>kind of like a... quack,
>Her eyes slid towards mine. “I am NOT a chicken.”
>“Don't do that. It's offensive.”

I love your subtle foreshadowing


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Anonymous 15/05/30(Sat)08:51 No. 23618 ID: a5fcdc

it's sad to see such a great story die


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teasing Tim 15/07/20(Mon)17:54 No. 23745 ID: 8138a8

The last line written thus far is "Teasing me isn’t nice.” I refuse to let this thread die like that.


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Anonymous 15/07/29(Wed)02:47 No. 23777 ID: def664

It's been months. But for some reason i still have hope this this will be continued.


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Anonymous 16/08/24(Wed)10:48 No. 24633 ID: 3350f2

Can't let a classic fall off. BACK TO 1!


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Anonymous 17/12/21(Thu)21:37 No. 25244 ID: 3e4500

please dont let this die



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