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My Sister is a Dickgirl SNT-NEL 12/02/11(Sat)10:15 No. 15127 ID: b808a3

Reposting this, for some reason. Even though I felt weird trying to fap to futa lit, I was okay with this one, for some reason.

I remember a long while back, some folks here added to it, and things were great, but then for some reason the mods took it down? I think it was cause it hadn't been updated in forever. But, yeah. RESURRECTION(I hope)

My Sister is a Dickgirl 1 SNT-NEL 12/02/11(Sat)10:16 No. 15128 ID: b808a3

My Sister is a Dickgirl
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This time I knew I was in trouble. The look on my big sister's face made it clear that I was dead meat. I wasn’t going to give up without a fight though.
We crashed onto the bed and wrestled like mad, grunting and growling like a couple of crazy animals. It lasted a few minutes before she distracted me with a charley horse and pinned me to the mattress. We were both panting for breath and I was suddenly very aware of her boobs pressing against my back as she held me down. It was a good thing I was on my stomach. The grappling match had left me with a painfully stiff hard-on, embarrassing but not terribly unusual. A gentle breeze could often make me hard those days. Acting tired, I relaxed and pretended to give up. I planned on trying to throw her off when she moved up to administer the standard thwacking, but she stayed laying on top of me and didn’t move.
Afraid that she was thinking up some new and even worse punishment, I quickly flipped myself over on the bed and almost succeeded at knocking her to the floor. She squealed and shoved me back down, hopping up to sit on my chest with her thighs locked around my head. Her leg had brushed against my crotch as she moved up, and to my surprise she suddenly reached back and grabbed my dick through my pants.
“I thought I felt a little pin-prick,’ she said, grinning evilly down at me.
“Shut up,” was my witty comeback.
“Make me.”
struggled to push her off but her knees had a deathgrip on my head, squeezing down around it like a nutcracker. Still grinning, she reached down and started unbuttoning her fly.
“I think you need to see what a real one looks like,” she said, her voice quieter but no less malevolent.
I winced, afraid to look as she pulled out her cock.
This was *soooo* not right. I could already imagine the many years of therapy that were lying in wait for me. Still, I couldn’t help but look. She had some trouble getting it out, and when she finally succeeded it was obvious why. She was just as hard as I was. Seeing a rigid PENIS sticking out from the fly of a teenage girl sitting on your chest is an experience that’s not easy to describe, especially when that girl is your sister and you realize that her dick is bigger than your own. I found myself staring up at it in in a state of mild shock. It wasn’t bad as far as PENISes go I guess; it was maybe five inches long and looked really smooth and clean. It was also, though I hate to admit it, almost *cute.*
She pinned my hands to the bed and looked down at me with a wicked gleam in her eyes. Her cheeks were turning a hot red color like she was blushing. I expected her to slap me with it or something, but she just sat there with her dick pointing slightly down at my face. My heart was hammering in my chest, and I suddenly realized that I was getting really turned on. There were so many things wrong here that it was hard to keep track. And it was about to get even worse.
Cassie’s grin had faded, replaced with an expression of…I wasn’t sure what. Her face was suddenly serious and her boobs were rising and falling with her breathing. Her cock hung stiffly only a few inches away, aiming almost direcly for my mouth.
“Suck it,” she said quietly, almost in a whisper.
I stared at her dick for a moment, not sure exactly what I wanted to do. I’d never even thought about trying something like this before, but...
Without even fully realizing I was doing it, I lifted my head up and gave her cock a little lick. It smelled like the body wash she used and didn’t really taste like anything. Not bad so far. I took the head between my lips and gave it a few experimental sucks. It felt warm and very stiff. Cassie gasped and leaned down over me, pushing herself further into my mouth. I started sucking harder and took as much as I could, feeling it twitch every time the head nudged against my throat. I wasn’t sure if I was doing it right, but the way she was gasping and panting led me to believe that she liked it. She was gripping my hands so tight it almost hurt. Suddenly her whole body tensed up, and before I knew what was happening there was a sudden gush of warm, salty liquid in my mouth. She let out a low groan as her cock jumped again, pumping out more of her stuff. It tasted kinda gross. I guess I could have pulled my head away, but I think I was too stunned to move. For some reason I hadn’t expected her to cum the same way a boy did.
After a few more squirts, Cassie’s body relaxed and she slowly rolled off me. She sat at the edge of the bed and looked at me for a second, then suddenly stood up and ran out of the room. Not sure what else to do, I went to the bathroom to spit the stuff out. I rinsed my mouth, feeling ashamed as I realized I was still hard as a rock. It was all very confusing. Did this mean I was gay? I walked to Cassie’s room and stopped outside the door. I could hear the sound of quiet sobbing from inside. I didn’t know what I should do. I wasn’t even sure why she was crying. The situation was just too fucking weird. I went back to my room to fire up my Xbox and tried to forget about it for a while.
Cassie avoided me for almost a week. I didn’t know if she was disgusted with me or just ashamed of what had happened. I wasn’t sure how I felt about it, but I knew that I didn’t want things to stay weird between us forever. That weekend I waited until mom had gone to bed and then went down the hall to Cassie’s room. I could see a faint light coming from underneath the door so I knew she was probably awake. I knocked softly.
There was a moment of silence. “Yeah?”
“Can I come in?”
Another pause, but shorter this time. “Okay.”
I went in and closed the door behind me. Cassie was sitting on the edge of the bed wearing only a bra and a pair of boxers. It looked like she’d been reading a book. My eyes immediately locked on her boobs. They were pretty big and were pushing out of the top of her bra like she was starting to outgrow it. I forced myself to look up at her eyes, but she wasn’t looking at me. Neither of us said anything for a few moments.
“Uh, I just wanted to say I’m sorry for, um…” I trailed off, not sure how I should finish. There wasn’t exactly a Hallmark message for this kind of thing.
Cassie finally looked up at me, looking shocked. “*You’re* sorry? Jesus.” She got up and gave me an awkward hug. It was my turn to feel a bit surprised. She hadn’t hugged me in years. I’d been more expecting her to scream and maybe throw something. I could feel her boobs pushing firmly against my chest, and it was starting to have an effect on me. My shorts suddenly felt much tighter.
“It wasn’t your fault. I made you do it.” She said, her head restling lightly on my shoulder. “Do you hate me?”
“No.” I didn’t. In fact, hugging her like this was making me feel warm and lightheaded.
“Good.” She pulled away with a smile, but her smile quickly faded as she looked down and noticed my hard-on though my shorts.
“God, you are such a perv.” She punched me on the chest and walked back to her bed.
“Yeah, well, so are you.” I said, then as she turned back to glare at me I quickly lunged in and yanked her boxers down around her knees. Cassie shrieked and tried to hide herself as she reached to pull them up. I was still able to get a pretty good look. She didn’t have much hair on her crotch. Her PENIS was semi-hard and I could see that she had a small set of balls hanging down below it. It was pretty weird seeing a package on the body of a sixteen year old girl, but I was starting to get used to weird things.
“You are *so* dead!” She growled.
I decided to make a pre-emptive strike while she was still dealing with her underwear. I tackled her backwards onto the bed, managing to gain the upper hand as she kicked and growled at me. After a quick but frenzied struggle I was able to flip her onto her stomach and pin her hands.
Resting my weight on top of her, I started wondering what I could do to embarrass her and pay her back a little. The fact that I’d managed to pin her on her own bed while she was half-naked was probably pretty humiliating by itself. I wasn’t in much of a hurry to decide. Rare victories like this needed to be savored. Also, her butt was rubbing against me as she tried to push me off, and it felt kinda good.
“Let go!” She twisted underneath me and I felt my dick slip between the cheeks of her ass. It lay trapped between us, pointed up at the small of her back.
Sometimes I called her ‘Assie’ because her rear end was kinda big, but mostly just because the name pissed her off. Right now though it was nothing to joke about. Her boxers were only covering her ass halfway and the warmth and softness of her butt was feeling really good even through my shorts. I had an idea that I shouldn’t be doing this…it seemed almost like rape. It was the only position I could keep her down in though, and I knew that the second I let up she would kill me.
Just then I noticed that she’d mostly stopped struggling. She was still twisting around a little but it didn’t seem like she was trying very hard to knock me off. Mostly it was just making my dick rub against her ass even more. After a few moments it dawned on me that she might be doing it on purpose. I’m normally a bit quicker on the uptake, but the idea that Cassie could somehow *want* me to dry hump her butt just seemed crazy.
Crazy or not, it was starting to feel pretty damn nice. I decided to risk seeing if I could make it even better. She didn’t move as I let one of her hands go and worked my shorts open. I pulled her boxers down a little more, then moved back into place with my dick laying on her naked butt. I noticed quickly that the feel of skin on skin was much, much better. I moved my hips a little so that my cock rubbed slowly back and forth on the crack of her ass. I didn’t know if this was what actual sex was like, but it felt awesome.
I got so lost in the sensations of pushing against her butt that I didn’t realize I was about to cum until it was already happening. I couldn’t move, or even think as my stuff started launching out all over her back. I’d played with myself plenty of times, but this was the most intense cum I’d ever had. I moved off of her when it finally stopped, suddenly feeling ashamed of myself. Cassie’s back and shoulders were streaked and messy with my sperm. Not seeing anything else to clean up with, I used my shorts to mop it up. She was still laying there quietly like she had been the whole time. The only way I knew she was even alive was from her steady breathing.
I sat back on the bed, unable to keep from staring at her butt. There was just something about the curves of her hips and ass that was really hot. If I hadn’t already known she was ‘different,’ there would have been no way to tell from this angle. Acting on a sudden urge, I reached over and gently squeezed her ass with both hands. I kinda expected her to yell at me, but all I heard was something that sounded like a quiet moan. Wondering how far she would let me explore, I slowly pushed her cheeks apart until I could see her little pink butthole. It looked clean and was glistening slightly with sweat. Feeling strangely drawn to it, I moved my hand down and rubbed it lightly with my thumb. She gasped and I felt her jump a little, but she didn’t say anything or push me away. I rubbed it again, then took my hand away and stood up. Maybe she liked me touching her butt, but I had no idea what I was supposed to do down there.
Cassie rolled over on her back and looked at me. Her dick was very stiff and lying back against her stomach, the tip all shiny and wet-looking. I could see the shapes of her nipples poking against her bra. She just laid there watching me as I sat down next to her and put my hand around her cock.
I started moving my hand slowly up and down, noticing how soft the skin felt despite how stiff it was. Even her dick seemed girly. I was thinking about sucking it a little when she suddenly moaned and raised her hips. I instinctively pumped a little harder as I saw a thick white jet of cum shoot out over my hand and land on her stomach. She kept flexing her hips as a few more spurts came out, then she fell limp with a long sigh. The sight of her cumming had made my own cock fully hard again. She saw it sticking up as I stood to wipe off my hand and her stomach. She groaned and rolled her eyes.
“Go to bed, Knob,” she said, tugging her boxers back up. “Just remember that I owe you a beating.” She grinned evilly and I made a hasty exit before she decided to make good on it.
Things were quiet for a few days. It was obvious to me that I was getting more and more attracted to my own sister, and it was just as obvious that it didn’t bother me much. I knew it was wrong but it didn’t feel like what we did was hurting anybody. Anyway, thinking about it too much just gave me a headache, so I stopped worrying. I did know that the idea of playing with another guy’s dick still grossed me out. With Cassie it was different.
One afternoon we were doing chores. I’d felt hyperactive all day, and when I saw Cassie leaning over in the kitchen to get something from under the sink I couldn’t resist the urge to snap her with a damp rag. Her ass was just too tempting a target. The cloth impacted against her butt with a startlingly loud crack, and she yelped and spun around with murder in her eyes. I ran, laughing like a maniac the whole time.
She cornered me in the living room before I could make the stairs. I tried to fake her out and jump past, but she caught me and tackled me down onto the couch.
I did my best to escape, but her wet hands gave her an unfair advantage when grabbing my clothes. They also hurt when she pinned me face down with her knees in my back and started spanking me hard on the butt.
“If you’re gonna act like a brat, you’re gonna get treated like one,” she said, her voice sounding stern though I was sure that she had a huge grin on her face. It wasn’t really a typical spanking either. She rested her hand on my butt for a little while in between smacks, sometimes even squeezing it a bit. It was embarrasing and the spanking part hurt, but the more gentle stuff felt kinda good. After a few minutes she suddenly reached underneath me and put her hand on my crotch like she was checking to see if I was hard. And if course, I was.
“Perv.” She gave me another hard whack on the ass, then let me up and went back to the kitchen. I followed slowly, my rear end smarting and my dick hard as a rock. I watched Cassie’s butt as she walked, suddenly feeling more horny than I ever had in my life. She went back to the sink and a few seconds later I moved up from behind and grabbed her, my dick pressing against her ass. Even though I hadn’t planned it that way, my hands ended up right on her boobs. They felt warm and heavy and really nice in my palms.
“Stop it.” Cassie pulled my hands off her chest and wriggled away toward the counter.
I was way too turned on to listen. I caught her and put my hands back on her tits, squeezing them a little as I started rubbing against her like I’d done on her bed. I felt like I was going to cum even with our clothes still on. I kept expecting her to stop me again, but she didn’t. She just leaned forward, putting her hands on the counter as I played with her boobs and slowly humped her butt. After only a few minutes I started to cum, feeling a rush of sticky heat fill my underwear. I rested up against her for a bit, feeling her boobs moving slowly up and down in my hands as she breathed. It felt really neat.
Suddenly she turned around and pushed me down on my knees. I watched as she quickly undid her pants, her stiff cock falling out almost right away. I didn’t hesitate. I started sucking it as hard as I could, hearing Cassie groan softly as she flexed her hips toward my mouth. I reached around and started feeling her butt as I sucked on as much of her dick as I could. The look on her face told me that she was really enjoying it, and I started to wonder what having my own sucked would feel like. She put her hand on my head and ran her fingers roughly through my hair, then a few seconds later her cock got even harder and started squirting in my mouth. It didn’t taste as gross as I remembered, and I decided to swallow it and see what would happen. It didn’t kill me. Cassie moaned and leaned back against the countertop, and I kept sucking her gently until she pushed me away. She gave me a weird little smile as I stood up, then smacked me again on the butt.
“Okay,” she said, suddenly looking serious again. “Stop fucking around and finish your chores.”

SNT-NEL 12/02/11(Sat)10:16 No. 15129 ID: b808a3

My Sister is a Dickgirl2
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Note: This is a sequel to My Sister is a Dickgirl and requires reading the prior piece to fully understand.
The Piece

I started becoming friends with a girl I knew at school. Her name was Gail and she was kind of shy and nerdy, but in a cute way. We were hanging out more and even went over to each other’s houses a few times, though it still seemed like just a ‘friends’ thing. There were plently of times when we were alone together but I was too nervous to try anything. I wasn’t sure that she wanted me to anyway.
Then Gail mentioned that her parents were taking a trip and wouldn’t be home all weekend. She seemed even shyer than usual when she asked if I’d like to come over on Friday night after they left. I think I said yes, though my pulse was suddenly pounding so hard that it drowned everything out. My imagination was racing all week long as I wondered what she had in mind. I wasn’t really expecting to get in her pants or anything. Despite what had already happened with Cassie I would’ve been happy just making out with a girl, even though I was worried I’d mess it up somehow.
By Friday afternoon I was so nervous I could barely keep still. I was sitting on my bed watching the clock when a sudden sound from my doorway make me jump. It was Cassie, standing there with a smirk on her face.
“Lemme guess…” she said, “you’re sneaking over to your girlfriend’s house tonight.” My sister leaned up against the door and crossed her arms, the teasing grin never leaving her face. “Want me to buy you some condoms? Lube maybe?”
“We’re just friends, ok?”
“Yeah, right. That’s why your hands are shaking. What, afraid she’s gonna molest you and take your precious virginity?”
I glared at her, hoping her head would melt.
“Well fine,” she said, straighening up and turning to leave. “I *was* going to offer you some advice, but if you’re just gonna be a little douche, forget it.”
I sat there for a few minutes as I fought a painful battle with my ego. When it finally surrendered, I got up and went to Cassie’s room where she was busy folding clothes.
“What advice?” I asked, hoping she wasn’t just messing with my head.
“Oh nothing. I forgot you’re fourteen now. I’m sure you know everything there is to know about girls.”
I bit my tongue before I could say something stupid, like how she wasn’t exactly an absolute expert on girls either, what with her cock and all. “Hey, I know plenty. I just don’t wanna do anything that’ll gross her out. If something does happen, I mean.” I hesitated, feeling lame. “I haven’t exactly made out with a lot of girls or anything.”
Cassie looked at me. “You ever even kiss before?”
I stared at the floor, embarrased.
“Don’t sweat it, Knob. Its not hard. Just do it like they do in the movies.” I looked up and saw a wicked grin slowly spreading over her face. “Help me fold these and maybe I’ll show you a few things.”
I helped. When everything was folded neatly and put away, Cassie sat on the bed and motioned me to sit up next to her. I sat up, wondering exactly what it was that she planned to show me.
“Okay, the main thing is to start off slow.” She said, moving in and pulling my arm around her shoulders. “Don’t get too grabby and stuff, that’ll freak her out. Just get close and the rest kinda takes care of itself.”
I slid myself over further until her body was pressed snugly against mine, my hand resting on her upper arm. She smelled good. Cassie lifted her face up toward me and closed her eyes, her lips only inches away. I wasn’t sure how far she wanted to take this, but the opportunity was definitely there.
“This is the part where you kiss her, dumbass,” she said quietly.
I leaned in toward her, keeping my eyes open to watch her reaction as I touched my mouth to hers. Her lips felt incredibly soft and warm. She didn’t respond right away, but after a few seconds she started kissing me back. After a minute or so she opened her mouth and I felt her tongue pushing against my lips. I let it in and started chasing it with mine, my dick getting hard almost instantly. Kisses like that had always seemed gross when I saw other people doing it, but my opinion was quickly changing now that it was happening to me.
Cassie was slowly edging herself into my lap as our kissing got hotter. I pulled her closer against me, feeling her tits pressing firmly against my chest. She only kissed me harder and slid her hands around my waist.
It suddenly occurred to me that I was making out with my own sister. My response to that was to slide my hands up and grab her ass firmly with both hands. Cassie moaned and started sucking on my bottom lip. I got the feeling that she wasn’t playing around. I wasn’t exactly sure what was happening here, but I did know that I liked it.
After a few more minutes I let go of her ass and moved my hands up front. She moaned again as I palmed her boobs. I squeezed them and she started grinding herself slowly against my lap. I could feel the bulge of her hardon rubbing up against mine, and for some reason that made me hornier than ever. I broke the kiss and lowered her up onto the bed. I’d seen this part in movies before too, the part where they get naked and fuck like crazy.
Straddling her, I grabbed the hem of her shirt and pulled it up. She surprised me a little by raising her arms and helping me take it off. With that out of the way, I reached under her back with the intent of taking her bra off too, but I couldn’t seem to unhook it for the life of me. Finally Cassie did it, and the second it came loose I caught her naked boobs in my hands and gave them a firm squeeze. It was my first time feeling them without her bra in the way, and they felt great. Warm and soft and firm all at the same time. I leaned in and kissed her again, feeling her nipples getting harder each time they brushed against my fingers. I suddenly wondered what they’d feel like in my mouth, and I decided to find out. I moved from sucking on Cassie’s tongue to sucking on one of her nipples. She gasped and moaned softly as I switched back and forth from one to the other. She seemed to really like what I was doing, but I was too damn horny to concentrate on it for long.
I undid her jeans and pulled them off. Her boxers joined them on the floor a few seconds later. I was a little surprised that she wasn’t trying to stop me. Cassie usually liked to make things difficult, but this time she was just laying there with her eyes closed. Naked. I’d never seen her fully naked before, and I had to stop for a minute just to take it all in. Her big firm boobs were rising and falling quickly with her breathing. I moved my eyes up her flat stomach and over the wide curves of her hips. Her dick was stiff and sticking almost straight up. I ran my hands slowly up and up over her smooth legs, suddenly at a loss for what to do next. She was so sexy that I wanted to touch all of her at once. I also had an incredibly strong urge to fuck her, but I couldn’t. So I did the only thing I could think of. I turned her over and undid my pants. I slid them up and off, then lay on top of her with my body pressed firmly up on hers. My dick nestled right up between the firm cheeks of her ass like it belonged there. Her naked skin felt awesome underneath me as I started humping against her butt.
Cassie was moving too, grinding her big ass up at me in little circles. It felt great, but I still wanted more. Then I got an idea. I gathered up a bunch of my spit and rubbed it over both my dick and the cleft of her ass. When I started moving again, the slipperyness felt much better. After a minute I decided to try something different. I took hold of my dick and started rubbing it up and up firmly over the length of her crack, sometimes poking it in to see what she’d do. She didn’t say anything, though she was breathing really fast and heavy. I appled a little more pressure, really liking how it felt to have the head of my dick wedged firmly between her cheeks.
Suddenly, I felt a sensation like something pushing back against the tip of my cock. I eased off a little and then pressed in again. Cassie groaned softly and something seemed to nip at the head of my dick. It took me a second to realize what it was. Her butthole. I froze for a moment. I knew that you could have sex that way too, but it was something I never imagined myself doing. A weird thrill shot through me, and I just had to see what would happen if I pushed a little more. She groaned again and I felt the pressure against the head of my cock increase.
“Wait…” Cassie said, her voice sounding unusually husky. “Top drawer…vaseline.”
I jumped up and went to her dresser. Sure enough, there was a tube of vaseline in there. It was actually some kind of lotion, but it was good enough for me. My hands were shaking a little as I squirted some out and rubbed it all over my dick. I rubbed some more into the crack of her butt and quickly got back on top of her. I found the spot again and pushed slowly, this time feeling the pressure slowly spread around the head of my dick. It was going in.
Then she clamped up on me and I almost came right there. After a second she relaxed again, and I felt my cock pushing a little deeper inside. It felt completely awesome. Her butthole kept clenching at my dick like it didn’t want it there. Cassie was gasping and digging her fingers into the sheets. For a second I wondered if it hurt, but then I felt my pubic bone come to rest against the soft skin of her butt and realized that I was all the way inside. Balls deep in her ass.
Instinct took over, and I grabbed her by the shoulders and started fucking her. It was so intense that I forgot about being gentle or anything else, the only thought in my head was the feeling of her butt squeezing up around my cock. Cassie squealed and squirmed underneath me, her voice alternating from low grunts to high-pitched squeaks. She might have been trying to push me off her, but by then I was too far gone. I felt her ass grabbing at my dick and her body shuddering underneath me, and with a final thrust I pushed in deep and started cumming harder than I ever had before in my life.
I shuddered, my cock jerking spastically in the tight grip of her butt. As the last pulses faded I fell limp on top of her body, my head spinning. She was panting and groaning softly, the muscles in her ass still trying to push me out. I started feeling guilty at how I’d lost control and pulled out of her as gingerly as I could. I checked my dick, feeling relieved when I didn’t find any blood or poop on it. I wiped it off with my underwear and sat up next to my sister. She hadn’t moved much. I wondered if she was ok. I started rubbing her back a little, hoping she wouldn’t hate me. After a few seconds she suddenly rolled over and punched me hard on the arm.
“Ow,“ I replied.
“Well that’s what you get. That hurt!”
“Sorry.” Looking more closely, I saw that the sheet underneath her and the middle of her stomach were all wet with cum. There was lot of it, and it sure wasn’t mine. “Doesn’t seem like it hurt *too* bad though.”
She realized what I was looking at and punched me again, but not as hard this time. She got up and grabbed a towel, seeming embarrassed as she wrapped it around herself and headed for the bathroom. I gathered up my clothes and left, still dazed by what just happened. I had another hour left before I was supposed to go over to Gail’s, but I definitely wasn’t feeling nervous anymore. When Cassie was done in the bathroom I went in to take a shower. A minute later she opened the door and poked her head in.
“Just don’t expect all your dates to go like that, Knob. You’re not even close to being that smooth.” She left before I could think of a witty response. Anyway she was probably right.
After my shower I went back to my room and got ready. I was still looking forward to seeing Gail, but I was nowhere near as excited as I’d been earlier. I’d just had sex with my sister. Real sex. In the butt. Anything else that happened that day was bound to be a letdown.

SNT-NEL 12/02/11(Sat)10:17 No. 15130 ID: b808a3

I remember after the second part, a lot more was added by writers here, but I can't find those parts after it was taken down.

Anonymous 12/02/17(Fri)05:39 No. 15210 ID: cc8230

Then Shucks Buster, today's your lucky day!
I had always heard the phrase "quivering in anticipation" but I'd always thought it was just a figure of speech. Yet here I was, barely able to climb out my own window because my whole body was trembling. It wasn't because I was cold, even the nights were pretty warm this time of year, and it wasn't because I was I was afraid, Mom was at work and Dad wouldn't wake up till morning if a tornado tore the roof off and dropped a Mariachi band in full swing on his bed. I honestly didn't know why I was trembling, and the only possible reason I could think was because I was nervous about going to Gail's house.

It was strange, I'd just had sex, no scratch that, I'd just buttfucked my sister. I hadn't trembled at all any of the other times we'd messed around, but here I was, reaching one foot down, trying to avoid the Chrysanthemums my mom had just planted last weekend, and shivering like a dog shitting peach pits. I couldn't figure out why, but I guess it was because I hadn't really anticipated any of the things my sister and I had done, they'd just happened. Going to Gail's was different since I knew I could screw this up.

I wondered why she'd called me over. I knew her family was pretty religious, and she'd always seemed like one of the good kids, always going to Bible study, never getting in trouble at school, always dressing modestly. I'd always thought she was cute despite her normally minimal makeup, but whenever I'd gone over to her house to study, it always had been just... studying. We hadn't even held hands. Then all the sudden she tells me to come over out of the blue? When her parents aren't around? I could tell she thought she was being really bad. I wondered how she'd react if I told her I'd sucked my sister's dick?

On second thought that probably wouldn't be a very good conversation opener. My trembling seemed to have calmed down once I was walking. She only lived a couple blocks away which made this whole thing possible since neither of us could drive yet. A couple cars passed me on the way, but other than that I was completely alone. I had thought it might be a little creepy but instead I found it peaceful and soothing.

When I spotted her house I started trembling a little again, but I managed to get it back under control by the time I had turned onto the walkway to her door. I knocked and it wasn't ten seconds before Gail was standing at the door, wearing jeans, a tee shirt and a slightly sheepish expression. Even as she stood there I couldn't help but make a quick comparison between her and my sister. Gail had a lean boyish figure and a delicate face whereas Cassie had the more stereotypical curves... and a penis. I didn't know for sure that Gail didn't have a penis, but I'd be willing to wager some serious cash that she was dickless. Of course it wasn't exactly fair to compare Gail to my OLDER sister, but somehow I couldn't see her getting C cups and a big bubble butt in the next two years. Still, despite their differences, they were both really pretty each in their own way. It takes all kinds I suppose.

We stood there in the doorway for a few seconds until Gail awkwardly invited me in. It seemed clear to me that she hadn't really planned this out and I had no fucking clue what I should do, but I figured I needed to say something to break the silence before too long. My face was starting to get a little hot and if she turned any redder I was worried I'd witness the first case of spontaneous cranial explosion.

"Thanks for inviting me over." God that was lame.

"Y.. you're welcome." She seemed to relax despite her initial stutter and a bit of the tension left her shoulders. "I was thinking we'd watch a movie?" I think she'd started that as a statement, but it had ended up as a question.

"Yeah that'd be great. What are the options?" And from here the initial tension seemed to slip away. We went in the kitchen, got some popcorn and sodas, and sat down on the couch watching Alien. One of the things I liked about Gail was that she was an absolute film nut. She would sometimes rent a movie, watch it once through normally, then watch it again with the Director's commentary and all the extras, then watch it again watching for all the little things the Director had pointed out, all in one or two nights. The whole reason we'd started talking in the first place was because she'd whispered a movie quote in the middle of class that had made me laugh out loud. Gail might be shy, but she had a hilariously sarcastic sense of humor.

Ridley Scott was one of her all time favorites, and all through the movie she was pointing out little factoids and easter eggs I'd have never known to look for like the one about how Ridley hadn't warned the cast that the Alien was going to burst out of the guy's stomach, so he could get a more natural reaction. The thing was, she had seen this movie so many times she could probably have quoted it to me line for line, and yet she still got scared and jumped every time the Alien got somebody. I'd wondered about the cliché of taking a girl to a scary movie to get her to hang on to you, but damnit if it wasn't working like a champ tonight. Gail ended up practically glued to my side, but I made sure to keep my cool. I was hard as a rock, but Cassie had warned me not too get too grabby, and just to let it progress naturally. I wanted nothing more than to just pull Gail right into my lap, but I settled for just leaning my head a little closer every time she jumped.

That turned out to be a bad idea, because one time she jumped and the top of her skull nailed me right in the cheekbone, hard.

"OH GOSH, I'm so sorry!"

"Oh... god... the pain... I... can't feel... my legs!" I said in my best William Shatner impersonation. She smacked me with a throw pillow. "Hey I'm injured here!"

"Don't blaspheme!" She said, but she was smiling. I grabbed the pillow from her and threw it at her face, but she batted it away. "How dare you, you'd hit a woman?"

"You betcha." I said, and I whipped the other pillow at her unprotected stomach. She screamed and tried to return fire, but I'd already jumped up and ducked behind the loveseat. She started to chase me, but she was only wearing socks and she slipped on the wood floor, breaking her fall with her hands. I hesitated for the tiniest fraction of a second, but then I decided to go for it. I jumped on her, turning her on her back and tickling her. I made sure to give the "danger zones" a wide berth, but it was still pretty exciting and I was already semi hard from having her cling on me half the movie. She tried to tickle me back, but I'd gotten to her too early and she could only offer light resistance.


"No." I said, grinning evilly.

"Please stop!" she said laughing so hard she could barely get the words out.

"Why would I want to do that?" I asked. I realized after I'd said it that I'd put just a hint of a suggestion on the end of that. I realized it even more after I realized her lips were touching mine. It was a chaste kiss, but my hands automatically went from tickling to holding her slender ribs. We stayed there, neither moving, our lips still touching, but nothing else really happening. I was too worried about freaking her out to move, and I had absolutely no clue what she was thinking. Finally she leaned back and there was a wicked little grin on her face. I hadn't known she had a wicked little grin in her repertoire, but it was a good one, and it turned me on even more.

"Well that sure worked." she said with a little laugh, then she squirmed out from under me and hopped back on the couch. I hesitated for a second, but she patted the cushion beside her impatiently saying "comon goof, the movie's not over yet."

I sat back down, uncertain what to do. I kept myself turned slightly toward her, but Gail seemed once again totally engrossed by the movie. She still jumped at the scary parts, but she didn't cling to me like before. When the credits were rolling she got up and stretched saying, "Thanks for coming, that was a lot of fun."

Damn, I thought. Out loud I said "Yeah, good movie."

"Oh definitely, the Scott brothers are two of the greatest directors in Hollywood now. They always pay attention to the tiniest details.

"Yeah." I said non-commitally, I didn't really know or care too much about the Scotts, and in fact I was rather inclined to think they'd done a poor job with this movie since he hadn't managed to scare Gail over to me a second time, but I didn't want to mess up whatever had happened there. Still, I was looking to see if there was an opening for me to stay longer and maybe pick up where we'd left off with the tickling.

I looked up to see her yawning. Double damn. "Oh man," she said, still yawning a little "that caffeine did absolutely nothing for me. I'm about to fall asleep standing up." I looked at the clock and it was barely midnight. I was just waking up, but I didn't see a way to stay longer without seeming rude and pushy.

Still, I was hard as a rock, and it didn't even go away when she said a sleepy "Good night." and I stepped out into the night. Damn and blast your eyes Gail!

It took nearly a block and a half before Pvt. Bucky finally came to the "At Ease" position, but then I remembered how Gail's lips had felt on mine and he immediately snapped back to attention. Damn my vivid memory. Damn Gail for messing with me like that. Damn me for being a freakin idiot. Damn damn damn damn damn!

I climbed back into my room, but my shoe caught on the sill and I tumbled in a heap on my floor, face first. Damn. As if that wasn't enough I heard laughter coming from somewhere in the dark room. I couldn't see in, but my antics in the backlit window had been perfectly visible. Goddamn.

"So what did she do? Slip you a roofie and take advantage of you?"

"Shut up."

"Ohh, went that well did it? Poor bee bee." I couldn't see her yet, but I could almost picture the shit-eating grin on her face as she'd said that last line.

"What are you doing in here anyway?"

"I was just curious to see how you did. My little bruduh id gwowing up so fast." I sighed and resigned myself. She'd come knowing I would fail spectacularly and now she got to gloat.

"Go away."

"Not a chance, I want the juicy little details and I'm not leaving till you spill 'em." I resigned myself, and obligingly spilled them. I thought about playing the kiss up a bit, but I decided just to stick with the facts. She laughed telling me she could just picture my face, but she didn't laugh too hard or too long. I'd been prepared for worse.

"Ahh well," she said at length after I'd finished, "you actually didn't do that bad little bro. You knew she was a bible thumper, and it takes time and effort to get into their pants, but I think it's safe to say she wants your Willie. Now you just have to not fuck up."

"You think so? I'm honestly not sure, I was pretty inviting the rest of the night, but Gail shut me down pretty emphatically."

"Bah, it's a first date, and she's a good girl. Still, it's a good sign that she asked you over when her parents were out of town, it shows she's got a little naughty streak. If you play it right you could have a little freak on your hands."

I actually laughed at that, "Freakier than us?"

I was a little worried when I said it, but Cassie just laughed too, "Well... no probably not, but freaky by regular standards is still good." My eyes were adjusting to the light and I saw her swing her legs over the side of my bed, putting them on the floor and leaning out a bit. "And besides, at least you got laid tonight, which reminds me, I still owe you a beating."

"Oh god..." I started, but Cassie had already launched herself out at me. I tried to dodge, but she caught me with her arm and tackled me. I tried to fight back, but she was only wearing a thin tank top and boxers so immediately half my blood went straight to my dick sapping the majority of my strength. She flipped me on my stomach and sat on my back tickling me without mercy. She knew all my weaknesses and soon it was too much for me to take. "Please... stop... please..." was all I could manage between laughing like an idiot and gasping for breath.

"No, I don't think I will. This was one of your better ideas little bro, and I'm kinda partial to it." It was getting to the point where I couldn't even say anything anymore, I was laughing so hard I simply couldn't breath in, and I was starting to see bright spots dancing through my field of vision. "Soooo..." she said lazily, not relenting one bit despite my obviously failing attempts to breath. "What will you do if I stop?" She let up juuuust enough to give me one breath, but it was still nearly impossible to talk."

"You win... please."

"I know I win, but what will you do for me?" There was a tone of excitement in her voice, the same as when I'd heard her say 'Suck it' the first time. Despite the fact that I couldn't even breathe, I was really fucking turned on, and at the same time, terrified of what she wanted as vengeance. What if she wanted "an eye for an eye" so to speak?

"Well?" she said and reintensified her assault. It was too much to bear.

"Anything." I managed to croak.

"Are you sure? You won't puss out on me now?" She sounded strange, unlike I'd ever heard her before. I could feel her excitement throbbing as it ground into the small of my back, but I was desperate for air.

"I promise." The words were an agony, trying to find enough air to force them out was excruciating and in the end they barely even qualified as a whisper, but it seemed to be enough. She relented, and I lay on the ground gasping for breath. Cassie stood up, letting me breathe. Suddenly I heard her sob.

"I can't do it, God what was I thinking?" She said and started to run for the door. I snapped my hand out and just barely managed to grab her ankle, tripping her up. I crawled after her, wrestling her down and pinning her with my body.

"It's ok." I said, "I'm not upset, I'm not mad." She stopped struggling and I rose up, straddling her with my arms and legs. She turned over toward me and I could see that she was still tearing up.

"I wanted to... to..."

"It's ok." I said, trying to make it easier on her. I had known what she was planning from the tone of her voice.

"It's not ok, I was going to force you into it. I was going to keep going till you passed out. I've never known that I could do something like that. I never thought I would be doing any of this. It's so fucked up you know?"

I didn't know what to say, so I kissed her. She tried to force me away, to say something for a moment, but soon she was kissing me right back. Her arms locked around me, crushing me into her breasts. This time it was my tongue that pressed against her lips seeking admittance. She opened up immediately, hungrily, and for a while I was lost in the sheer incredible feeling of it.

She flipped on top of me and pressed her whole body down on mine, never breaking the kiss. Her dick kept sliding over mine from one side to the other as we both writhed. Sometimes one of us would thrust toward the other, pressing into each other's hips and pelvis, just short of full blown dry humping eachother. Every part of her was soft, yet not unpleasantly so. She had curves but no flab. Her skin was firm and smooth as I ran my hands up under her shirt, and she groaned as my hands brushed the sides of her breasts. She kept sliding those back and forth across my chest as well, but she rose up when I caught the hem of her shirt allowing me to pull the fabric over her head. She took off my shirt, and then reached down to unzip my pants. She reached inside, wrapping her hand around me and pulling up, sliding her hand lightly across my skin before reaching down to wrap around me again. I'd been so horny all night that I almost came from just that, but I pulled away just before I got to the brink. I sat for a moment, willing myself not to come, focused on controlling the growing urge to just release, but in the end I managed to stop it, felt the need drain away.

Cassie giggled, and I had an idea. "How about we made it so that the first person to come is the other person's slave, and they have to do whatever the other person asks?" Cassie froze a little.

"Are you sure you want to do that bro?" That strange note was back in her voice, the slight strain, as if she were trying to hold back a cough.

I knew what she wanted, and to be perfectly honest, no I wasn't sure, but I was feeling reckless and it seemed like a pretty good idea. Besides, even if I lost, it wasn't like I really had anything to lose. I'd already sucked her off, twice. If the simple fact that someone has a penis could make you gay, then I was already fucked, and a tiny part of me was actually curious.

"Yeah, of course I'm sure." I said with a confidence I almost felt, and before she could object, I'd stood up, sliding my pants and boxers too the ground and ripping off my shirt. Cassie didn't argue further as I slid her boxers, freeing her girly little cock (never you mind that it was bigger than mine), and I couldn't help myself. I wanted it, I honest to god wanted it. I leaned down and without preamble slurped her inside.

"Oh God! Cheater!" She said, and pulled me around till we were each hip to mouth and took me balls deep into her mouth, her unbelievably hot and wet mouth. Holy hell! Having a not quite fully developed dick does have some advantages!

I tried to focus on doing my job and ignore the growing urgency in my lower half. I decided the best current plan of action would be to go all out. While she played with mine, licking at the head, sucking me slowly, and sometimes pulling me all the way inside, I went absofuckinglutely nuts on her, bobbing my head as fast as I could, pulling her in each time till her head was hitting the back of my throat. What I lacked in grace I was attempting to make up for in enthusiasm. Still, she almost got me when she moaned. The vibrations sent a tingle up my spine that almost made me blow, but I also gave an involuntary moan of my own at almost the same time, and apparently it had the same affect on her. She thrust her hips up, driving into my throat hard enough to make me gag, but I managed not to let go, still keeping my lips around her head as she fired shot after shot into me. I swallowed and slid back down her shaft, milking her with my tongue and the roof of my mouth while still keeping my teeth sheathed with my lips. The first swallow was the hardest, the salty jizz was just so slimy it almost made me want to gag anew, but I had gotten it down, and after that there were no problems.

Her cries as she climaxed did finally send me over that edge and she didn't gag, keeping me inside the entire time. Even when I grew so sensitive that I actually wanted to pull out and started to pull away, she followed me, keeping me inside. It was almost painful, but it soon felt almost more amazing than the actual orgasm itself as her warm tongue and throat massaged me.

When we were both spent, and she'd grown limp, I let her fall out of my mouth, and I turned back with a smile. "I win. Get the vaseline."


"You're damned right."

She was back in a second, and lay on my back, making her drape her hanging tits over my flacid cock, rubbing me lightly with the nipples and the soft skin. It felt great and it looked hot as hell with her on all fours, her ass raised slightly, her muscles working under the surface of her skin as she moved slowly back and forth. Soon I was hard, and slightly sore from having come twice already, but only slightly.

I made her lean forward with her knees almost touching her elbows and the soft curves of her cheeks beautifully presented. I lubed us both up, but I was almost desperate by now. I pressed into her, feeling the same resistance. As I pressed in Cassie cried out softly and it felt like she was trying to give me a second circumcision, but I was too far gone to care. When the head slipped in I shoved forward, slamming balls deep into her once more.

"Ow, asshole."

"Yes, exactly, very good Cassie." I managed to say.

"Twice in one day, you know you're going to get it don't you?"

"Yep, but right now I can't bring myself to care." And I couldn't, because I'd just drawn back again and now I slammed into her once more... and again... and again... faster and faster. She was so hot and she squeezed me so tight I couldn't care about anything else. I grabbed for a handhold. I'd meant to grab her shoulder, but I ended up getting her head. My fingers wound in the hair, and before I could really think about whether this was a good idea or not, I'd grabbed and pulled, yanking her head back as I slammed into her over and over. She cried out so loud I was worried she might wake even dad up, but I couldn't care, I just felt too good. I fucked her so hard I could hear her breasts slapping against her chest as they bounced back and forth. Finally she squeezed me again and I let go, my muscles squeezing over and over as I shot my load deep in her bowels. When I was done, I collapsed on top of her and she fell over. We lay for a while on the carpet, with me still inside her, just spooning as I massaged her warm soft breasts over and over.

After a long silence, Cassie finally spoke up saying, "You're gonna need some stain remover for the carpet."

Anonymous 12/02/17(Fri)05:43 No. 15211 ID: cc8230

It was a while before i found the will to get off my sister to get the stain remover. I eased up, pulling my now lip cock out of Cassie's cum filled ass. Cassie laid there, exhausted. Her skin sheened with our sweat glistening in the twilight ambiance of my room. She looked beautiful. I used an old T-shirt and cleaned up her ass and the carpet as best i could and threw it in the hamper. as i slipped on my boxers i herd a quiet timid voice break the silence.

"Hey, Chase?" i was shocked. Cassie hadn't used my actual name in almost 5 years.


"Those are my boxers..." now i felt like an idiot.

"I'll be back in a moment, i just need to sneak down to the kitchen and get the carpet cleaner and a wet rag so it can dry through the night. We don't want mom or dad seeing a wet spot on the floor do we?"

"Just make it quick." she replied

I left her there on the floor and sneaked down to the kitchen, grabbed what i needed and headed for my room.
When i got back, Cassie was still in the same place. I took off her boxers and put on my own.

"You're going to have to get up," i said looking at her with my hand out. She grabbed it and i helped her to her feet and handed her her boxers.When i looked at the floor, there was a second cum stain. i looked at Cassie with a raised eyebrow.

"Yeah, i came too, ok? Wasn't my fault." She was right.

"I'll clean it up and see you in the morning. Thanks for the advice you gave me today and all the other things."

"Sweet talk aint going to get you out of payback, knob."

"Hey, i'v given you a blow job at random, and you lost fair and square. I think we're about even." i snapped back.

"Maybe, but i'll decide that on my own."

"Well i'll see you in the morning, ok?"

"Yeah, alright. But im going to the kitchen anyways, so after you clean this mess up, i'll take it back with me."

"Alright." i replied. She was being nice for once, so i'd let her.

I followed the instructions on the bottle and hoped it would be spotless in the morning and handed Cassie the bottle and rag.

"Not a bad job, it should be gone in the morning." she said.

"I hope." She leaned in and gave me a kiss, catching me off guard. "Night Chase, see you in the morning." She left quietly and i crawled into bed. She said she'd get me back, so this kind streak she just had would most likely be gone in the morning. I started to think, how am i going to progress with Gail? How will next time go when she invites me over while her parents are out?

I was too tired to think anymore. After all i did just blow all i had left in my sisters ass not but fifteen or twenty minuets ago. I needed to get to sleep, i was going to have a long day tomorrow.

When i woke up, i felt like my body was a cloud. I rolled out of bed and looked at my clock, 9am. Thank God for Saturdays. I slipped on my socks and looked at where Cassie and i made a mess the previous night, barely noticeable, thankfully. I went downstairs and grabbed a poptart and a glass of milk and flipped on the TV. There was a note on the coffee table from mom saying she went to our aunts house with dad for coffee and would be back after lunch. I looked around and noticed Cassie wasn't even up yet, so i disposed of the note so she wouldn't get any ideas.

I flipped on the tube and surfed the channels for something good. TNT had a movie marathon and Full Metal Jacket was playing. I laughed and knew what Gail was doing this morning. It was another half an hour before i heard Cassie stirring out of her room. She looked like she felt the same way i did. She fell onto the couch next to me and said "Hows the carpet?"

"Looks good, wouldn't see it unless you where looking for it." i replied. "How do you feel?"

"Uuuuuuhhhhggg, you?"


"At least your ass doesn't feel loose." she said.

"I plan to keep it that way." i replied seriously.

"Buzz kill..." She tried to look disappointed but was too tired still.

"Its a no-fly-zone for everyone, especially you."

"Hey! you still owe me, punk." she said as she tried to punch me.

"Nobody gets my ass. Im already fucked up enough sucking my sisters COCK and fucking her in the ass, so i dont think i need a cock going up mine. Besides, no one at your school knows you have a penis right? Who else is going to give you a blowjob?"

I was right. Everyone at her school thinks she's a normal girl. She has guys flirting with her and girls she hangs out with at lunch. If they knew, she'd be looked at like a freak, unless some lesbian looked at it like a natural strap on or there was a dude with a vagina, but those chances where slim.

I knew i hurt her feelings, as tears filled her eyes. "That was a low blow asshole! I hate you!"

"Hey wait! I didn't mean it like that!" She pushed me back and ran off to the bathroom, so i hurried after her. I opened the door to her crying on the toilet.

"Hey look, im sorry. I didn't mean to hurt your feelings like that"

"Just leave me alone fuck face! I never want to speak to you again!" she cried as she threw a roll of toilet paper at me.

"Cassie! I didn't mean anything like that! You're my sister. Even if you hate me there isn't many people i love as much i love you." i felt really bad. I cant believe i hurt her that bad.

"You really mean it?" she asked me drying her tears.

"Why would i lie?" i replied.

She got up and hugged me tight, holding my head in between her soft breasts.

"Ok, squirt. If your butt cherry means that much to you i won't make you go that far, but you have to make it up to me."

"How?" i replied. I thought i was making a big mistake.

"You have to do the morning chores,"


"And give me a blowjob while you do them."

"But what if" i started.

"Mom and Dad won't be home until around two, so we got plenty of time."

How in the hell did she know? I threw away the note before she got up. "How did you?"

"I saw the note when i went to the bathroom when you where still asleep."

It looks like i was screwed anyways. At least i won't get fucked in the ass. "Ok, i guess i got no choice." i wanted to anyways.

I looked up and kissed her, holding her tight and leading her back to the toilet. She opened her mouth and slipped her tung into mine. I sat her on the toilet and continued to kiss her as i massaged her breasts with one hand and brushed away her hair with the other. I lifted her shirt and started to suckle her nipples and she let out a little moan of satisfaction. This was unfortunately turning me on too. I proceeded to move down to the top of her sweat pants and kissed her navel before i pulled out her cock. I started to rub it gently and continued to tease her belly and breasts before i leaned down and teased her head with my tung, licking with the tip around her head. She laced her fingers in my hair moaned a little louder and said, "You're teasing me Chase." 'What should i do?' i thought. I then ran my tung down the shaft and back up again, took the head into my mouth, and wrapped it with my tung. She gave an instant reaction and pulled my hair. This wasn't going to take long. I sucked on her tanking only a little at a time, teasing her more and more, but soon i was giving her my all. I could feel her build in my mouth and soon her cum was filling my mouth. I stood up and kissed her, filling her mouth with her own secretion in a sloppy wet frenchie for the ages.

"That was amazing, squirt. If you get the chores done early enough, you can take a shower with me and ill give you a little appreciation in return."

"Mean it? Then we're even?" i asked.

"Yeah. Even." she replied.

I was out the door and already at the dishes. There was no way i was going to stay blue ball'd before mom and dad got home, but Cassie was going to make it almost unbearable. She decided to help me put the dishes on the top shelf, topless, fold clothes, also topless, and stood in her doorway with her bare ass hanging out as i vacuumed the hallway. Needless to say i was about to tear a seam in my shorts before the torture was over.

Finally i was done. Eleven twenty five, plenty of time to dispose of my hard on. I grabbed my clothes and headed for the shower, where Cassie was waiting with only a towel covering her waist. "Bout time, knob. Want me to get rid of that stiffy before mom and dad get home?"

"you promised you would, and you didn't help the situation at all." i replied, trying to get my pants off.

"What was i supposed to do? Be good and let you take your sweet time?" she grinned.

"Lets hurry into the shower."

She already had the water running and pulled me in by my cock, but didn't start right off. "Look at you, perv. Really think you could get away with this erection blocking your way?"

"Shut it." i said.

"Make me."

I pinned her to the wall of the shower with her breasts in my hands, kissing her deeply. My rock hard cock pressed into her stomach, which she immediately started stroking. When i broke the kiss,, she giggled at me and said, "Ok, i'll be quiet, for now." I couldn't hold it with how she was teasing me earlier, and after only a few pumps i blew my first load all over her stomach. "That's all?" she said. "Not even close." i replied.

She giggled and sunk to her knees. How the water effected her hair and made her body shine was amazing, and seeing those soft perky boobs wet and dripping got me hard again instantly. Cassie did to me what i did to her earlier, just teasing my cock with the tip of her tung. I could see her start to rub herself as she took me into her mouth, her tung wrapping my cock at the base before coming to the top and kissing the tip. I looked down when she started to delicately tease the bottom of my ball sack and saw she was fully jacking off. I grabbed the back of her head and started to fuck her face slowly when she engulfed my cock, letting her get more pleasure out of it than me. It wasn't long before she came, moaning onto my cock. I shuddered as it reverberated on my cock before she pulled away.

"I'll do something else for you. Lie down." she said.

So i did. She crawled up on me and took the tip into her mouth and started to massage the shaft with her supple breasts. It felt amazing. She started to move her body, sliding my cock in her boobs and licking the tip as the head was exposed. Is this what heaven was like? I looked at her and we made eye contact. She got the message, and took the tip back in and pumped my shaft fast with her hand as i let out all that i had. She gagged a little but managed to swallow most of it. She looked up at me with a little stream of my cum running out of her mouth being washed away by the shower. "We need to get changed before mom and dad get back."

"yeah..." i managed to wheeze out.

We got dressed and sat on the couch as Full Metal Jacket was ending when mom and dad walked through the door.

"M-I-C, K-E-Y, M-O-U-S-E!" sang the TV.

"What are you two watching?" mom asked as she approached behind us.

"Oh, that disturbing movie." she said

Cassie and i just laughed as she went to the kitchen. It was time for our normal day to resume, but now all i could think about was Gail. Maybe I'll get a chance to be with her in the following week. I should ask Cassie for more advice when i get a chance.

Anonymous 12/02/17(Fri)05:44 No. 15212 ID: cc8230

A couple days passed before i had the chance to speak to Gail, so i asked Cassie for a little more advice. "Hey sis, have a moment?" i asked knocking on her door.

"Sure, come in." she replied as i entered the door.

"What do ya need punk? I have an english report due tuesday."

"Sorry," i replied. "But i was wondering how i should go about talking to Gail after that stunt."

"Simple, just have a normal conversation with her."

"But after that kiss.." i started.

"If you're so worried about it just sneak it into a conversation, but don't think its going to go anywhere fast. She is a "good bible girl" after all."

I frowned because i knew she was right. I had every chance in the world to fuck it up, and didn't want to blow it. I guess i'll be my normal self until something happens again, if ever.

"So, what is your paper about?" i asked Cassie to get my mind off how bad i would fail with Gail.

"I have to do a summary on Edgar Allen Poe." she replied.

"Sounds like a choice you made. The both of you are equally messed up in the brain." I grinned trying to get a ruse out of her.

"You should look in a mirror sometime, knob. I think you're worse than the both of us combined." she laughed.

"Ha ha. Thats funny. You're funny." I turned and walked for the door when she had me by the belt. I looked up and she kissed me backwards on the lips.

"Sure you don't want to help me?" I knew what she was implying.

"I don't want to be a bother. Plus, what grade are you getting in english?"

"If i ace this report, i'll have a B- by mid-terms, so i won't have to take the exam." she replied.

"How about this, if you ace the report, i'll do something nice for you. Sound like a good motivation to you?"

She just looked at me with a half frown. I could feel her semi hard, but she just kissed my forehead and agreed to the conditions. I started out the door when she stopped me again. "Gail's seen Cloverfield too, right?" I nodded at her.

"Watch that."

"Why?" i asked. She didn't say a thing. I left her room and wondered what i was going to do for Cassie, and how another movie night would go with Gail. Why Cloverfield?

>> Anonymous 09/04/21(Tue)15:21 No. 929

It was about lunch time before Gail asked me over again. "My dad is on a company trip on the other side of the country and mom is staying the night with her sister who is having a baby at the hospital tonight, so i thought would you come over for another movie?"

I was overjoyed so i couldn't refuse. After that the rest of the school day flew by faster than an F-18 at mach 2. When i got home, i rushed to my room, scribbled some nonsense down on my homework and went for something to eat. I sat down and mom told me the good news, but i didn't expect it to become even better.

"Chase, your father and i are going to a friend of mines' wedding shower, so we wont be back until early morning, just to be on the safe side." One time, dad almost crashed after only a couple of drinks. He cant hold his liquor.

"Hey mom," Cassie spoke up. "did you know the varsity team is going to the playoffs? We don't have school tomorrow because of it."

"We don't?!" i interrupted.

"Nope. Thats why me and a couple of my friends are going to the rally tonight." Cassie replied.

"Just don't get too out of hand." Dad said as he slipped on his dress jacket.

They walked out the door, and i looked at Cassie with a dumb struck expression on my face.

"Whats wrong with you?" she asked. "Gail asked me over for a movie tonight and both her parents won't be home until tomorrow night, and i had no idea school was canceled for tomorrow."

Cassie had a sadistic look in her eye now. "It looks like bible girl wants to make her move tonight." My heart must have stopped because i couldn't tell if i was still alive or not. Cassie just looked around and said, "I'll go get Cloverfield for you." I just shook my head ok and sat there like a shell shock victim. I couldn't think, i couldn't breath, it was as if i had just been hit by a truck. I could probably go on forever in that state of shock but Cassie was standing in front of me with Cloverfield in her hand.

"You better call her and find out when she wants you to come over." she said, so i snapped out of it and said, "You're right."

I picked up the phone and dialed Gail's number and waited for her to pick up. "Hello?" she said in her cute little voice. "Hey Gail, when do you want me to come over?"

"When do your parents go to bed?" she asked.

"My parents left already for a wedding party and wont be back until tomorrow." i replied.

"Oh! Do you want to join me for dinner? I rented a movie too."

"Ok, I'll be there in half an hour, and i'll bring a movie too, just in case." i replied. "Ok! See you soon then!"

I hung up the phone and flew to my room and grabbed some nice clothes and jumped in the shower. When i got out, Cassie was waiting for me.

"You seem to be in a hurry."

"Dinner." was all i said in my mad rush.

She leaned into me and hugged me. "Good hunting Chase. Im wishing you luck, but dont get any ideas yet. She's still
a good girl, remember that."

"Thanks." i replied. I leaned up and kissed her and went out the door and headed to Gail's.

No matter how much Cassie said it, i was still a nervous wreck. The walk over to Gail's felt like a marathon. I still couldn't tell if Cassie was playing head games or not, but i had to play it cool regardless. After what felt like hours of walking, i reached my destination and knocked on the door. Oh my god, the suspense!

I was greeted with a nice surprise when Gail opened the door and ushered me in. She was wearing what everyone would consider modest clothes, but it was beautiful to me. She had on a tighter than normal girls T-shirt and a long dark green skirt that really brought out her piercing green eyes. Her dark brown hair was straightened and gave off a partial glare in the sunlight. Did i stop breathing again? In all with that outfit, i could finally tell she had some curves to her.

"Um, would you like something to eat?" she asked timidly.

"Yes, that would be great, thank you." i said as i walked in.

"What are we having?"

"Im not a good cook so i made some grilled cheese." she said looking at her feet blushing.

"I love grilled cheese! have any tomato soup?"

"I couldn't reach it, its on the top shelf."

"Let me help." i said, walking with her to the kitchen.

"Its in that one." she said pointing at the furthest section. With out warning i wrapped my arms around her waist and lifted her up. She squealed in surprise and giggled as i held her there as she grabbed the Cambles soup. When i let her down, she slipped through my hands that went part way up her shirt and her butt brushed against my crotch. "Thanks Chase, i couldn't get it myself." she said with a smile as she grabbed a pot and put it on the stove.

"Can't have grilled cheese with out tomato soup." i replied, hoping she didn't look down at my pants.

Dinner wasn't like how you saw in the movies. We just ate and talked, talked some more and cracked a joke or two. I still had the thought of Gail's ass pressing into my crotch and my hands still up her shirt, so Sargent Stiffy felt like he was trapped in the POW camp of my pants. Damn being 14. We did the dishes, made some popcorn and sat down for a movie.

"What do you want to watch first?" she asked.

"Well, i brought Cloverfeild, so lets watch yours first." i replied.

She put the movie in the DVD player and hit the movie menu button. I knew what it was right away what it was. "Phone Booth!" i exclaimed.

"You've seen it? I haven't, so don't ruin it for me." she said. As if i wasn't in enough suspense already, the movie made it worse. It felt like forever before it ended, and i drank way too much soda.

"i need to go to the bathroom, where is it?" i asked.

"I'll take you to it." We walked down the hall and up the stairs when she attacked. "Waahh!" i wailed as she buried her fingers into both of my sides, proceeding to tickle me as i writhed on the floor.

"Stop! I... gotta... no! Aha ha ha ha ha!! STOP!"

"No way, not after how you got me last time!" she yelled. I wasn't going to piss myself, no way, no how, so i did to her what she did to me. I wrapped my arms around her to restrain her and buried my lips into hers. She stopped and placed her hands on my chin as she stayed on top of me. I broke the kiss and she just stayed there. "What was that for?" she asked.

"Payback, and i really like yo.." I was interrupted by her kissing me now. Her lips where softer than i remembered. I held her close and opened my mouth a little, and she did the same. I slipped my tongue into her mouth, and she responded by pressing harder into mine. I could have stayed like that forever, but a suddenly remembered my need to piss. We broke the kiss and i said, "Ok, i need to go to the bathroom. You go start the movie and i'll join you in a moment."

"Ok." she replied. She walked down the stairs looking back at me with a devilish grin that reminded me of Cassie. I was going to need an extra minute in there.

After some proper levitation of my build up of both kinds, i made my way back to the living room. Gail looked stunned. Her face was beat red and she was fidgeting on the couch. "Whats the matter? We've seen Cloverfeild before." i said, but when i looked at the TV, i was stunned beyond words. On the TV, a girl was fingering herself while sucking of an asian version of my sister. She was moaning on the other girls cock as she deep throated it like a champ. I instantly had a hard on again but turned off the TV and took out the disk. Damn you Cassie, you got me back anyways. I must have said it out loud because Gail said, "Your sister?"

"Yeah, now i know why she told me to take this movie. This is her sick idea of a joke." i said.

"I.. umm.. i.. i was.. k kinda interested." Gail replied.

I looked at her, and almost came right there. Her fingers where wet and i could see a drop of something running down her leg. I was only in the bathroom for a couple minuets, but i guess it was enough time to effect her. I was at an impasse to take advantage of this situation or not, but my cock got the better of me.

With out warning i kissed her hard enough to put us both on the couch. Her legs instinctively wrapped around me, her fingers laced into my hair as i twisted my tongue around hers as one of my hands found its way up her shirt onto her developing breasts. I broke the kiss and nibbled on her earlobe a little making her giggle, but it turned into a moan the moment my tongue grazed her neck. I got the picture. I started to tease her neck with my tongue before i full on suckled it. This made Gail moan louder and tighten her grip around me. "Chase," she said in a weakened voice, "Can you go lower?".

I lifted her shirt up and unclipped her bra, which was a front wire thankfully. Her breasts where beautiful. Her skin was a perfect pail white with perfect nipples perfectly centered. They where too enticing to just look at, so i started to fondle one between my fingers as i teased the other with my tongue, switching back and forth every so often, causing her to moan and grind into me and pull my hair gently. After a while, i leaned back up and kissed her again and said, "Are you sure you want to do this?"

"Just because i have strict catholic parents doesn't mean i don't want this, but it is my first so be gentle." she replied, pulling my shirt over my head. I leaned back in and kissed her, running my hands down her sides, pulling her panties down. They where soaked. I slowly worked my way down her, kissing her neck and nipples and her navel before i reached where no man has been before. It was a work of art by all means, especially so that it wasn't a penis. She had very little hair, and what was there was above her clit. Her skin was smooth and soft, and it smelled like roses. I lowered tongue down and flicked her clit, causing her to spasm a little bit. I liked this reaction, so i placed my mouth on it and sucked her clit, flicking it with my tongue. Her legs tightened around me and moaned as i continued. I grasped her butt and lowered my tongue into her opening, making her damn near pull my hair out. It tasted sweet and unspoiled as i dug my tongue deeper into her. It wasn't long before she had me pulled up into a kiss when she had torn my throbbing hard on out of its cage.

"Give it to me, Chase. I cant wait any longer."

My body gave an instant YES MA'AM as she guided me to the opening. She wrapped her legs around me and pushed me in little by little until i was all the way in. If i hadn't rubbed one out earlier, i would have came right there. We laid there, out of breath when she got over the pain and told me to move. It felt a million times better than my sisters ass. It was so hot and wet as it squeezed around me with each slow thrust. Gail moaned with every one, squeezing my with her arms and legs as i played with a nipple and kissed her neck. It was amazing. I started to thrust faster and faster as i built to orgasm, but Gail came before me, getting so tight i thought my cock would be crushed, but with one more thrust, i pored all i had into her.

We laid there out of breath and cuddling as my secretion oozed out of her, when she said, "Want to spend the night?"

"How could i say no?" i replied.

"I love you Chase."

"I love you too Gail". I was in for the greatest night of my life.

Anonymous 12/02/17(Fri)05:45 No. 15213 ID: cc8230

When i finally came to, Gail and i where spent. It was close to 7am, and we practically rewrote the Karma Sutra overnight. Apparently, Gail was a big fan of porn on top of her already large movie fanaticism, but has never seen a dick girl before and was a little curious. Boy could i have fun with this. Her bed was stained with sweat, cum and what was left of her virgin blood, so we needed to do the laundry right away before her parents got home.

"Gail, we need to clean things up." i said in a raspy voice.

"Chase, i don't think i can walk. my legs are numb."

"Im sorry." i replied.

"Don't be, it was amazing. All the masturbating in the world couldn't satisfy me better than what you did last night." Needless to say this swelled my ego. Both of them.

We got up and stripped the bed and headed to the laundry room. I had to help Gail walk down the stairs, otherwise she walked mostly normal aside from walking a little sideways. We tossed in the sheets and headed for the shower. When i went in after adding the fabric softener, Gail was wearing glasses. "Glasses?".

"Contacts. Our little secret." she replied. She looked inhumanly cute with glasses, so i couldn't understand why. I just left it alone. We got into the shower, and washed each other up. I teased her a bit with the detachable shower head. It was fun, but we couldn't risk another session. We where on borrowed time as it is.

After we got out, we remade her bed and headed for the door, when i got the shit scared out of me. Gail's dad was pulling into the drive. "Fuck, where boned." i heard myself say aloud. "Quick! Out the back! The garbage cans will help you hop the fence into the tree line next door!" I had no time to reply so i kissed her and rushed out the back.

My head was going a mile a minuet, filled with thoughts of death after capture and Gail's soft pink succulent flower. I was a man now but id like to live a bit longer. I hopped the fence and melted into the trees. It was just starting to get brighter, but it was dim enough for me to sneak back home. I must have ran the whole way.

When i got home, Cassie was asleep in my room curled up to one of my pillows. "How was it?" she asked.

"Amazing." i replied. "Thanks for the dick girl porn, now she's curious about it."

"That was the plan." she replied.

"Ok, ill bring her over on one condition," i said.

"Name it."

"I get her pussy."

"I can live with that." she replied. "You're a pedo you know." Her answer was a pillow into my face. "Get some sleep stud, we got planning to do." She said as she left my room. 'What am i getting myself into?' i asked myself. What ever it was, it was bound to be fun.

Anonymous 12/02/17(Fri)05:47 No. 15214 ID: cc8230

When I rose from my sex induced coma, it was dark out. How long did I sleep? Was it still the same day? I looked at my clock, and to my surprise it was only 3:30. Was that right? Did it mean in the morning? All of a sudden I was startled by my cell phone, which meant it was in the afternoon. "Hello?" "Chase, are you watching the eclipse?" it was Gail.

"Eclipse? I was beginning to think I was going crazy." I said. She giggled and said "Hurry or you're gonna miss it. I'll see you at school tomorrow." We traded goodbyes and I went to the door.

I can say I've never seen an eclipse before, so it was a cool sight, but it also reminded me of "The Ring". I was half expecting that creepy girl to come out and step on the town, but I got an unexpected boob padded hug from behind from Cassie instead. A lot better in my opinion.

"Looks cool, huh little bro?" "Yeah, it does. Wait, that isn't a moon, it's a space station!" She laughed and replied, "Too many movies has corrupted your brain, I think." "I think you've corrupted me more than Gail," I replied. "Maybe I should further that corruption a little more. By the way, how we going to bag her in a threesome?"
"I'm not sure to be honest. But I can't believe I agreed to it," I replied.
"Well, I thought of a few ways and i had to masturbate last night to some of them, but you're going to have to drill her a few more times before any of them work. You need to get her addicted to your cock first," she stated.
"Get bold. Make her horny, then let her suffer. Make advances. Pinch her butt at school walking down the hall. Before you know it she'll be demanding cock." Cassie stated as she went for the door.

"So... How?" I said before Cassie entered the house. "Just come up to my room and I'll teach you a few things." she replied. "Mom and Dad?" "Oh, yeah." She apparently forgot. "Tonight, then. We have a month or so before spring break, and that would be our best bet to snag Gail in our little trap." She entered the house and I began to think of how hot it would be to make a Gail sandwich, and how much all of us would most likely enjoy it. Ah, great. Now I had another stiffy.

It would be quite a while before nightfall so I decided to take a little stroll. As I walked I met my friend Nate. He was a skinny kid with shaggy hair and still acted like he was 8. By comparison, I was really mature especially with the development of my sexual appetite. We paled around for a while, went to the 7/11, and just wandered. We talked about random things, and headed our separate directions when it started getting dark. It killed time for me at least.

I was just entering the door when Mom and Dad were heading to the bedroom. I guess it was getting late. I headed upstairs and turned to Cassie's room, knocked and entered. "Hey runt, ready for seduction 101?" "Of course," I replied.

"Come here, and stand behind me." she ordered, and I obeyed. "Now act like I'm Gail and hug me."
She taught me the caressing and teasing, but it's a little harder to do when you're sister is a dick girl. It was starting to get intense. After only half an hour of serious teaching, we were naked and I was sliding my fully rigid cock between Cassie's soft, supple cheeks.

I decided to put her advice to work. I suddenly stopped and put on my clothes and went for the door. "What the hell Chase?" she exclaimed with a severely disappointed face. "I'm putting the advice you gave me into action." I said simply. "For Gail, dipshit! Not me! I know where you sleep."
"Hindsight's 20-20, my dear sister," I replied. I wanted her to come to me. It was only a matter of time. I slipped into my room, striped off my clothes and pretended to be asleep. It felt like hours before I heard Cassie sneak in. All of a sudden the covers where torn off me and I was lying there stark naked in front of my sister. "I've been furiously horny now for more than a whole day, and I'm going to get my way, and my way is that I want you in my ass NOW!" I just grinned and pulled her on top of me, burying my tongue into her mouth. Her response was to crawl further up on me so I could suckle her lovely luscious tits. I engulfed them into my mouth like a magnet, twisting and flicking her delicate nipples intensely with my tongue. I was getting harder by the second. I needed her now.

"Cassie. Now," I said as I looked at her ass grinding my throbbing erection. She was wearing panties, first time I've seen, with the head of her girly pink cock sticking out of the top. "I'm way ahead of you Chase," she grunted as she pulled aside the back of her panties. She took a finger and scooped a load of petroleum jelly, and inserted it into her ass while teasing my cock with her tits. She finger fucked her ass, lubing it up and loosening it, moaning softly into my stomach before she crawled up on me again. She smeared some of the excess lube on my cock with her puckering ass, raised her hips and used a hand to guide it into her. Slowly, inch by inch, I made my way into my sisters only love tunnel, twitching and throbbing the entire way down until I was completely in her.
Slowly, Cassie started to ride my cock, tightening and squeezing as she went up and down, her cock pressing hard against her blue striped panties. I couldn't continue for much longer. My hands tightened around her waist and hers pressed harder on my stomach as she quickened her pace. Her ass was too tight. I couldn't hold. I thrust hard up into her, climaxing and spilling all the content of my balls into her ass, and as I did so, I moved my thumbs up her raging cock. The effect was spectacular. With my final spurt, my secretions leaked out of her ass just as my beautiful sister came a stream straight up onto her supple tits. We laid there exhausted when she turned to me and said, "Remember what I've told you, and Gail will be putty." I couldn't eke out a word to my sister, glistening with her own cum. I had a lot of work ahead of me and a short amount of time to do it. We kissed goodnight before Cassie left to her room, my cum still seeping from her ass. I needed to sleep.

>>> Anonymous 09/04/21(Tue)15:21 No. 931
> That's all I have. Now we just need someone to take it up again.

SNT-NEL 12/02/19(Sun)01:29 No. 15233 ID: b808a3

HOLY SHIT thank you. I think it's about time someone took up the mantle. Give me about two weeks to determine if I can mimic the writing style well

not human Anonymous 12/02/29(Wed)09:22 No. 15319 ID: 81911a

write faster human!

Anonymous 12/02/29(Wed)15:10 No. 15321 ID: fb869d

Write faster of bring the Wrath of Thor down upon you!

Anonymous 12/03/02(Fri)07:28 No. 15340 ID: 5beeb6

also bump

Anonymous 12/03/04(Sun)12:58 No. 15358 ID: 322206


for my pleasure 12/03/05(Mon)07:40 No. 15364 ID: 81911a

faster goat!

write it Anonymous 12/03/05(Mon)08:59 No. 15369 ID: 13c732

Write it fast, but make the story great

i walk the nigger with the 7chan 12/03/06(Tue)10:13 No. 15378 ID: 81911a

still taking too long. please! i have come to need it on my journey through life

Anonymous 12/03/06(Tue)11:02 No. 15379 ID: 5e4098

holy fucking shit I remember when this was first posted. I love you guys. fap time!

Anonymous 12/03/07(Wed)05:41 No. 15391 ID: 5b4d71

Give us a sign that you are still alive great one!

Anonymous 12/03/07(Wed)09:35 No. 15394 ID: 20d97d

Look, he's not writing it, he was re-posting it, he never said that he would continue writing it.

!JUD7F1CtU. 12/03/07(Wed)16:32 No. 15398 ID: d1057b

I was thinking about trying to continue on where the original author left off - but my writing style is completley different, I'm not particularly into what he/she was and I would not do it justice.

Anonymous 12/03/07(Wed)19:26 No. 15399 ID: 5b4d71

Try anyway or write your own version of this that goes how you want it to

i am horny 12/03/08(Thu)05:42 No. 15406 ID: 81911a

i concur. write it as well as you can and we will raise our /elit/ salute to you, my erect penis.

Your writing style Anonymous 12/03/08(Thu)10:57 No. 15408 ID: 13c732

You can rewrite it your way and we can see how good it is

Anonymous 12/03/09(Fri)01:01 No. 15411 ID: 81911a

you are not! allowed! to pass!

!JUD7F1CtU. 12/03/09(Fri)16:58 No. 15417 ID: d1057b

By that I meant the first (or maybe) second time it was revived I thought about it, a few authors gave it a shot but generally failed - I write much more in depth sex scenes but this author seems to enjoy the relations between the characters a lot more. It's all much more innocent and happy than what I could write. I simply would not be able to do it so I'm not going to.

Anonymous 12/03/09(Fri)18:16 No. 15418 ID: 867046

try any way and then if we complain then stop writing I for one would like to see what you can do you can either continue this or write your own version with a similar or different plotline

SNT-NEL 12/03/10(Sat)07:05 No. 15425 ID: cbc4dc

OP, here. Between work and school, I've mainly been compiling a fact/continuity document so that I don't fuck the story up with any paradoxes. It mainly deals with physical character descriptions, relationships up to specific points, important events, that boring kind of shit. I wrote it up to streamline the process of continuing the story, but I think the more people who want to pick it up, the better.

I should be done with a draft of the fact sheet on monday, if that would help anybody. And then will have at least a page of continuation by thursday. Let's see if I can make the deadlines.

GJ Anonymous 12/03/10(Sat)08:55 No. 15428 ID: 13c732

Well it sounds like through work and dedication things could get done. I suggest keeping up the character relations. The help I think, but more in depth sex scenes might be nice too. Sounds like progression is being made. Will patiently wait for more

Anonymous 12/03/10(Sat)10:53 No. 15430 ID: 867046

this is good and i agree

Anonymous 12/03/13(Tue)07:38 No. 15462 ID: 81911a

im serious nigga, im craving this book story

Anonymous 12/03/13(Tue)07:39 No. 15463 ID: 81911a

>>15462 story* not book

SNT-NEL 12/03/16(Fri)04:46 No. 15483 ID: cbc4dc

Posting an attempt at continuation. I'm mainly seeking advice, like what I should do to make the writing more efficient, and what I should do to emulate the writing style better.

I know I gave you guys the standard excuse of work and school, but to be honest, the reason why I haven't started on the next sex scene with Cassie is because Street Fighter x Tekken is so fucking fun.

After my nightly run in about an hour, I'll get back to writing more, if anyone even likes how I did with the short continuation page.

SNT-NEL 12/03/16(Fri)04:48 No. 15484 ID: cbc4dc

We exchanged sheepish, knowing smiles throughout class, but I could tell Gail was a bit hesitant when it came to being public about... “Us.” I didn't get it. If not for the adorable smirks, I'd never guessed this was the same girl who pretty much begged me to jam it in. In a way, it was like starting from square one. She was chaste and shy at school, and her parents weren't out of town all that often. This was gonna be a lot tougher than I thought. I had to either hope for opportunities at school where we'd be alone, or find some plausible way for her to come over to my place. That didn't really seem likely, considering her religious family... It'd probably be best if they never even knew about me.

The bell for next period rang, and I started to panic. We only had about a month for me to get Gail addicted to my cock, so every day had to count. While Gail put her books up, I gently touched her arm. When she looked at me, I leaned in close and whispered, “Let's meet at lunch. Behind the...” Fuck, I hadn't thought this through. I put so much effort into trying to sound suave, and being unsure if I pulled off or not, I forgot where I wanted to meet. Come on, where do the couples meet in the movies, damn it? The slight curve of Gail's amused smile was so damn distracting, too...

“The gym?” I looked back up into her eyes, shaken from my daze. “Uh, yeah! Behind the gym. We should meet there.” Damn it all. I've been so consumed with the thought of getting Gail into a threesome with my sister, I ended up sounding like a total jackass. Again! She let out a tiny giggle, and we kind of awkwardly stood in front of each other while everyone else shuffled out of class. “So, uh, later.” She smiled at me again, and I could see the faint hint of a blush creeping across her cheeks. “Bye,” was her simple reply.

When the lunch bells finally chimed in, my palms were sweating from thinking of all the possibilities with Gail and my sister. They were all the more reason not to fuck this up. I found Gail behind the ramp railings near the back gym entrance. She looked cute as hell waiting there, standing on one leg with her other foot pressed against the wall she was leaning on. As I approached, she backed away from the wall, wringing her hands together. “Hi...” She said, finding the ground a bit interesting. It was too much for me. I nearly crushed my lips against hers in my eagerness.

She flinched at first, obviously surprised at how forward I was being. To be honest, I was surprised with myself, too. Soon enough she was kissing me back, just as hard, and I had my arms around her waist. The way she kissed and sucked at my lips made me think maybe she was just as pent up as I was after only a few days. Well, maybe that wasn't fair, since I couldn't count the amount of times I came inside my sister's ass...

After a particularly loud smack, I finally broke off from the kiss, and took her by the hand. “Let's, uh, go somewhere,” I said, panting through most of the words. She looked up at me, her eyes kind of glazed over, and nodded. We ended up behind some shrubs and trees at the edge of school property, and we didn't waste time getting to work on each other.

I sealed my lips against hers, but she made the first move in terms of tongue action. I slid my hand from her waist to her budding breasts while I did my best to return the tongue massage she was giving mine. I really wasn't sure how far she wanted to go, since we were still at school, and all, but I decided to go for broke. I let the tips of my hand dip just slightly past the waistband of her pants, and waited for an objection. There were none.

Anonymous 12/03/16(Fri)11:21 No. 15489 ID: 81911a

more moar mor mo

Anonymous 12/03/17(Sat)01:39 No. 15493 ID: 867046

pretty good but the Introspection was a bit long for the small paragraph you gave us if you had written more it would have worked

Anonymous 12/03/17(Sat)01:40 No. 15494 ID: 867046

pretty good but the Introspection was a bit long for the small paragraph you gave us if you had written more it would have worked

SNT-NEL 12/03/17(Sat)05:24 No. 15496 ID: cbc4dc

Still working on fact/reference/analysis document, since I skipped some of it to just begin the attempt at continuation. Just realized a bit of a conflict between multiple authors.

"Besides, no one at your school knows you have a penis right? Who else is going to give you a blowjob?"

Conflicts with

"Hey mom," Cassie spoke up. "did you know the varsity team is going to the playoffs? We don't have school tomorrow because of it."

""We don't?!" i interrupted."

Because of this, I went from assuming Gail and Chase are in the 8th grade, to assuming they are Freshmen at the same school as Cassie. Also, because it's convenient for the plot angles I want to throw in.

Does anyone think this is a bad idea?

Also, more continuation should be posted before the nights over.

SNT-NEL 12/03/17(Sat)08:24 No. 15497 ID: cbc4dc

It was the hottest thing when Gail moaned a breathy sigh right into my mouth as we were making out. It was obvious I had a decent chance of bringing this into any direction I wanted, but I ended up sliding my eager fingers over her panties, right onto her mons. I wrapped my free arm around her waist, and gently pulled and guided her so her back was against my chest, and my painfully hard cock was pressed right up against nice ass. Granted, Cassie had an amazing, big bubble butt, but Gail's backside was awesome in it's own right. We grinded against each other pretty intensely while I found the crotch of her panties, and started to slide my middle finger up and down her covered slit.

Her gasps and sighs gave way to more of a cute mewling, almost a whine. I looked over her shoulder, and saw her eyes were closed, clearly trying to get into the action. She opened her eyes and looked at me with a half-lidded expression that said she wanted more. Her small, yet soft ass cheeks felt really great enveloping my boner, almost as good as Cassie's felt. It almost felt good enough for me to forgot about the ultimate goal me and my sister had in mind. Instead of giving her what she wanted, I decided to feign ignorance. I kept one hand busy inside her pants, and brought my other around to cup her cheek, tilting her face up so I could resuming the French Kissing. I could occasionally hear the sound and feel the vibrations of her whines of desire, but I was persistent enough with the kiss so she wouldn't actually get the chance to say how much she wanted it. She writhed and twisted against me, her body asking for more, and it was just too damn much for me. Maybe conditioning Gail for a threesome could wait until tomorrow. I finally slid my finger beneath her panties, and dipped into her dripping wet pussy lips. She was definitely ready for my dick.

Maybe some higher power actually wanted me to sandwich the cute girl in my arms with my sister, because that's when the lunch bell rang. You know, the one that meant lunch was over, and it was time to get back to class. Panic and disappointment sank my heart to unfathomable depths. “Fuck! We gotta get to class.” Gail turned her head slightly so she could look up at me with an adorable pleading expression I would normally be unable to resist. “Come on, Chase, let's just skip class!” I paused, and chose my words carefully, slowly removing my hand from her pants. “Your parents would kill you. You know that...” Even though I had my ulterior motives, and things seemed to be going just as planned, I honestly felt bad for her. She averted her eyes in defeat, and began to catch her breath. “Yeah... You're right...” I gently caressed her cheek with my thumb. “And it probably wouldn't help if they began to suspect anything... and stuff... I promise I'll take care of you first chance I get, okay?” She did her best to smile at me through her immense disappointment. “I love you.” I smiled back down at her, resisting the urge to shove my erection against her butt over and over again. “Love you, too, Gail.”

I knew how hot and bothered I got her, and normally I would be concerned about my own raging boner, but I knew Cassie would be waiting for me at home. Thank goodness for sisters with dicks. It was that very thought that got me through classes the rest of the day. I had to walk from every class with either my bag or shirt tail kinda covering up my boner, since all I could think about was how awesome it felt inside Gail's pussy, the delicious flare of Cassie's hips, etc, etc. Like I said, I didn't lose my mind because I had faith in Cassie's sexual appetite. It makes sense that she's my sister, since she's as horny as I am most of the time. I could feel myself fading into a background of despair when I got home and realized my sister wasn't home.

After a short exchange with my parents, I found out Cassie had gone over to a friend's, and would be spending the night. Fuck. I mean, there was the whole sexual frustration thing, but also it didn't make much sense to me. Even though Cassie had a pretty active social life, she avoided certain activities like sleepovers and sports teams for obvious reasons. Too much risk of someone finding out about the cock between her legs. Mom must have seen what I was thinking on my face.

SNT-NEL 12/03/17(Sat)08:25 No. 15498 ID: cbc4dc

“Her friends must have really wanted her to go,” she said simply. I didn't have a response ready, so she continued. “I think it's good that she's doing more things like the other girls do. I know we've talked about this, Chase, but you understand how difficult things can be for her, right?” This was a bit weird for me, too, since we almost never brought it up. “Uh, yeah.” She gave me a pat on the head and smiled. “Good. You should probably go out with friends more often, you know.” With that, she left.

Not only was Cassie not there to take care of my boner right then, but she wouldn't be back till morning! And it was almost always too risky to attempt early morning fun. I'd have to go through an entire school day before I could have any more fun with her. I sighed in defeat, and left to so something I hadn't done in what seemed like forever: Fap. It didn't work. It just wasn't enough to satisfy me after having regular buttsex with my sister, and vaginal sex with Gail. I even began to rummage through Cassie's room to see if she had a stash of dickgirl porn. She actually did, and it barely did the trick. When I came, I realized I had been imagining the models on screen to be Cassie fucking the shit out of Gail. It worked, but wasn't nearly as satisfying as cumming inside Gail's pussy, or my sister's ass.

When I got home from school the next day, I was surprised at how much I was hoping Cassie would be back. Unfortunately, it seemed no one was home, not even Mom or Dad. I let out an angry, frustrated groan, and tossed my backpack into some corner. I stomped into the kitchen, and stopped and was frozen in my tracks soon after. I recognized the girl facing away from me working on something in the kitchen as my sister only because of how shapely her ass was. And, oh my God she was wearing Daisy Duke short shorts. The swell of her cheeks, the curve of her thighs, everything was accented by the tiny garment. If I hadn't recognized the butt I had ogled on countless occasions, I wouldn't have known it was her, considering the uncharacteristically ridiculous outfit she was wearing. She never wore clothes quite this slutty. Cassie turned, and smirked when she saw me. My jaw nearly hit the floor.

Her big boobs jostled unrestrained beneath the crop tank top that ended abruptly right below her breasts. Her midriff, no scratch that, most of her torso was exposed, even the curve of her waist into the flare of her hips because her shorts were so brief. The blue denim shorts also reminded me of how great Cassie's legs looked. They seemed to go on forever in that ridiculous outfit of hers. I couldn't believe she was wearing red high heels, either. She liked to dress nice, and occasionally show off a hint of how nice her body was, but usually wasn't a fan of high heels. Nor was she a fan of make-up, something she was also wearing as I stood there speechless, ogling her in the kitchen. She had on crimson red lipstick, and a little mascara, or eye-liner, or whatever, or both. I don't know the difference. Taking all of these things into consideration, it seemed like my sister was doing her best to look like a whore. I don't think I was ever as hard as I was at that moment, staring at my sister dressed like some kind of surreal whore from another dimension. Of course she was the first to speak.

“Mom and Dad are out. They went to a dealership a few towns over looking for a new car for mom.” She paused, probably for effect, and slowly strutted up to me. I was mesmerized by the sexy cock of her hips as she approached. She then spoke in a husky, sultry voice I don't think I've ever heard her use before. “They won't be back until after dinner.” I completely lost it.

I nearly tackled her to the ground in my desperate attempt to lock lips with her. Her wide eyes betrayed how surprised she was with my reaction. I guess she was too stunned to resist much, because I had her pinned on the ground instantly. She still had this incredulous look on her face when I finally mashed my lips against hers in a passionate soul kiss. It took her a moment to recover from the shock of the situation, but soon enough she began to kiss me back. While I snaked my tongue past her lips, I lifted up the front of her crop tank top so that her breasts her exposed.

SNT-NEL 12/03/17(Sat)08:25 No. 15499 ID: cbc4dc

Since they were big, the top didn't go back down on it's own. I fondled her for a while, and she let out several appreciative gasps and moans. Palming those luscious, soft tits of hers was really satisfying, especially after another day of thinking up ways to get Gail hot and bothered, and ready for our trap. It wasn't enough, though, and I think it wasn't enough for Cassie, either.

I broke off the kiss, and started on unbuttoning my her obscene short-shorts. I was too excited, and probably wasn't thinking straight, and got frustrated when I couldn't do something as simple as taking her shorts off. I put my hands on the back of her knees, and forcefully pushed her legs forward so that her butt lifted off the floor, and rested on my knees. Her laboured breathing was occasionally interrupted by “oophs,” and grunts as I pressed her thighs nearly against her stomach. Her ankles ended up resting on my shoulders, and I finally managed to get those damned sexy shorts off. Thankfully she wasn't wearing anything underneath. I unzipped, and fished my rock hard cock out, and pointed it at the pink pucker of her delicious ass, just as her own stiff dick was aimed up, right at her face. I was about to go for it when I realized I didn't want to go in dry. My pulsating member was resting on top of hers while I tried to find the words that I had lost in the excitement of the moment. If you were there, you'd understand why it was so difficult to form the question 'Where's the vaseline?' Cassie saw the look on my face, and pointed to the kitchen table next to us. She let out a few airy gasps and sighs that probably translated to “Over there.” It was good to know that Cassie was just as much at a loss of words as I was.

With her ankles still propped up on my shoulders, and ass still resting on my upper thighs, I stretched over to grab the tube of vaseline. I hastily smeared it over my dick, and also lubed up her ass. I fingered her cute asshole a little because of the amazing sounds she made. One, then two fingers slide right in. I pumped my index and middle finger inside of her back and forth while fondling her balls, and judging from her extended squeals of delight I probably would have gotten her off if I kept going. Instead I removed my fingers and grabbed a hold of my dick, positioning it at her entrance.

I swirled the head of my dick around her asshole, and gently prodded it a few times before pressing in hard enough slide the tip past sphincter. It felt so good I immediately drove it home, thrusting my dick far enough inside her ass so the base of my crotch was pressed against her butt. It felt so good, I couldn't help but hunch over Cassie, doubling over from the pleasure. I found that Cassie was pretty flexible, since her legs were still over my shoulders, and I leaned forward far enough so that we were nearly face-to-face. She was staring into my eyes, her mouth open, with an expression that showed surprise, pleasure, and even a bit of distress. This, combined with the make-up she was wearing, made for an effect that was hard to describe. Seeing my older sister, a girl who was solely my tormentor until very recently with such a cute wide-eyed look on her face was more than I could take. Before I could even pull off one stroke, I came inside Cassie's ass with the force of a tsunami.

We continued staring into each others eyes, both panting like crazy. My didn't soften, and after a while I could feel some of my own cum dribble down along my balls. Finally, she broke the silence with a “So, uhm...” that was quickly cut short when I started to move my dick back and forth. The combination of vaseline and my own semen inside Cassie's ass made for a sloppy, yet exquisite feeling around my dick as I began to fuck her at a casual pace. She let out a leisurely, happy sigh when I circled my fingers around her dick. I thought her legs might be getting tired, so I backed my shoulders up so she could let them fall to my sides. She smiled up at me and lazily half-wrapped her legs behind me. It was kind of weird, but in a pleasant way, since we hadn't often had sex facing each other. That might have actually been the first time we tried the missionary position. I used circular motions to tease her cock while I continued to fuck her at an easy speed, and brought my other hand up to palm her tits again, something I couldn't get enough of. Seeing Cassie with such a content, almost innocent expression on her face as I fucked her actually gave me butterflies, I'm embarrassed to say. She looked really beautiful like that, so I leaned down to kiss her some more.

Before I knew it I was fucking her faster and faster while jerking her off just as quickly. I removed the hand I was using to grope her tits so I could wrap my arm around the back of her shoulders, slightly elevating her from the ground while I thrust into her over and over. Her response was to wrap both of her arms arms around me in a tight embrace. The fucking got really intense, and I could clearly make out the sloppy slapping noises of our bodies making contact. Her mouth was once again open, and she was moaning right at me. When things got frantic, I could tell Cassie was rapidly approaching her own orgasm, as I was racing towards my second. Her big tits constantly bounced up and down, and she was gasping for breath. Right before we came, Cassie actually looked frightened, like she wasn't sure if she could handle the climax that awaited her. “Oh, God, Chase! Chase!”

Cassie came first, and it was amazing, to say the least. I was still jerking her off, so her dick was pointed right at her tits and face. She had a good amount of cum saved up, I guess. The first spurt was powerful enough to streak over her right cheek. Some landed on her tits, and a little bit even landed in her open mouth as she let out her orgasm-groans. My older sister came all over herself, and that's what sent me over the edge. I came inside Cassie's ass for the second time that day. I realized it was like getting the best of both worlds. I still got to cum inside Cassie, and I finally got to see what my sister's face would look like covered in jizz, even if it wasn't mine. Actually, the fact that it was hers made it hotter. We stayed like that for what felt the longest time, until we both could catch our breaths. I was still inside her when she sat up and gave me a small little smile that said 'Thank you.' Some of her own cum was dribbling down her chin.

SNT-NEL 12/03/17(Sat)08:28 No. 15500 ID: cbc4dc

All hastily written without editing, because I didn't know if any of it would be worth editing. Once again, any criticism I could use to improve my writing like this >>15493 would be great.

Also, does anyone still want me to finish that reference document?

Anonymous 12/03/17(Sat)09:56 No. 15503 ID: 8f21c4

it is good.

Anonymous 12/03/17(Sat)18:05 No. 15505 ID: 867046

the thank you at the end was a little weird to me and felt slightly out of place I feel like the thank you devalued the sex they had but the sex scene was well written and really got me going and yes please post the reference document a little advice try to branch out the sex scenes in terms of fetishes like you can have Cassie and main character guy fuck at school or some light bondage just tying up and maybe Cassie can fuck Main character guy also this will be useful in leading Gail into the threesome with his sister and whatnot and people will get the opportunities to read various fetishes and what not

Tl;DR well written ended on a weird not great sex keep it up

Anonymous 12/03/17(Sat)18:06 No. 15506 ID: 867046

weird note

Anonymous 12/03/19(Mon)20:04 No. 15531 ID: 81911a

fus roh dah?

Anonymous 12/03/20(Tue)20:30 No. 15546 ID: 27d867

Tl;DR well written, ended on a weird NOTE, great sex, keep it up

Anonymous 12/03/23(Fri)21:32 No. 15584 ID: 3dfb69

thanx op i cum on cat she hiss at penis

Anonymous 12/03/24(Sat)15:43 No. 15597 ID: f09f53


dafuq did i just read

SNT-NEL 12/03/25(Sun)07:29 No. 15606 ID: cbc4dc

Thanks for the feedback and compliments!

It seems like a good idea to include various ranges of fetishes to keep things fresh. I have to admit, though, I kind of only write what I can actually fap to. I'm not so knowledgeable of fetishes, so anyone can feel free to respond with what they may want to see in the story, but like I said, I usually won't include anything that makes my dick soft. We'll just see! Also, Dickgirl fucking guy is not something I can fap to. Seems pretty silly, yeah, but for some reason that small detail results in the material not doing it for me.


Working on next update right now. I gotta admit, I'm a sucker for porn with plot, and I'm a sucker for romantic shit, and drama, so I'm gonna try to develop the story in the next update. As a result, there probably won't be much sex to look forward to. But there's plenty of that stuff down the line!

Anonymous 12/03/25(Sun)21:20 No. 15613 ID: dff0ec


>Also, Dickgirl fucking guy is not something I can fap to.

Well I could. Write it!

Anonymous 12/03/28(Wed)23:28 No. 15666 ID: 452099

Man, I remember this story. I wrote a chapter for it back in the day, but I'm assuming no one liked it since no one had it saved.

Keep up the work, though. Nice to see this continued.

Anonymous 12/04/05(Thu)13:31 No. 15737 ID: 4ce3aa

I love this story, very well written. Post more!

Anonymous 12/04/05(Thu)17:33 No. 15739 ID: ea8492

dickgirl sister needs pussy beneath dick, otherwise great.

Anonymous 12/04/13(Fri)22:27 No. 15821 ID: 68060d

Bump for great justice. This deserves to stay on the front page.

yup yup 12/04/17(Tue)08:19 No. 15858 ID: 81911a


yes it does

yup yup 12/04/17(Tue)08:19 No. 15859 ID: 81911a


yes it does

Anonymous 12/04/18(Wed)06:43 No. 15876 ID: 0abb9b

bumpy bumpy coz it has been 5 days since last bump

gggt 12/04/19(Thu)17:39 No. 15889 ID: d85743

Been looking for this for ages. Glad its been picked up.

Anonymous 12/04/23(Mon)06:15 No. 15932 ID: 81911a

no it hasnt, or at least, its taking too long!!

Bumpy Anonymous 12/04/26(Thu)00:46 No. 15968 ID: 92a5d2

Bump bump bump

Anyone though of moving this? Anonymous 12/04/26(Thu)00:51 No. 15969 ID: 92a5d2

Has there been any though to moving this to a different site where there is less chance to lose this to not being bumped.

Something like hentai-foundry might be a good place to set a known site type of thing.

Anonymous 12/04/29(Sun)10:24 No. 16005 ID: 7732d5


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Anonymous 12/05/13(Sun)07:07 No. 16133 ID: e50bd5

it has been a while since tha last update isnt it? please need fapping

Anonymous 12/05/17(Thu)22:28 No. 16198 ID: 70873f

bump bump

Anonymous 12/05/18(Fri)03:43 No. 16201 ID: 81911a


Anonymous 12/05/21(Mon)11:45 No. 16228 ID: 2e5ff3

safety bump

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Anonymous 12/05/31(Thu)10:22 No. 16299 ID: 04c8d1

i like where it was going, but fapping material is needed

Anonymous 12/06/05(Tue)09:54 No. 16329 ID: b4c459


Anonymous 12/06/13(Wed)08:41 No. 16401 ID: 2e5ff3

Why does this ALWAYS happen? I give up on waiting. I'll just assume that this thing is dead and over with. It's a shame too.

Obs 12/06/14(Thu)16:18 No. 16416 ID: 16dac1

I'm not op, I'm not guy who originally wrote the thing, I don't have much experience writing "elit," I don't use 7chan much, I don't know how long I'll keep writing this shit and I don't even have motherfuckin spell check,
but I do love this particular fapfic, because it was the first one I read when dicking around on the chans ruined my life
so here it is, if you don't like it... uh just say so and I'll stop writing

The days cluttered and the seasons changed but my life had reached an unenviable and probably inevitable sexless stasis. As if by some divine law the unbelievable amount of luck I had in the last few months had now mathematically relegated me back to the welcoming but determinate comforts of my hand. Gail was now my "girlfriend;" corsages and entire pages reserved in the yearbook. Ironically due to our official status it was now nigh impossible to further our physical relationship. Catholic shame: that wry old bastard reared its ugly little head like the motherfucking Hoth Shield Generators erected on her mons pubis. And of course, during one of my grand sweeping romantic gestures: asking Gail out to the harvest dance, her parents caught wind of our relationship; promptly telephoned my parents: requesting a meet up, congradulated us all on what a happy couple we made at said meet up, then without fail, heroically chaperoned every interaction between me and Gail from that day forth. The rebels were alerted to our presence. Admiral Ozzel had pulled out of lightspeed too close to the system. And I choked the clumsy bastard every single night.
Cassie and I were also experiencing some turbulence, we had sharply curtailed our "encounters" due to the ever increasing presence of our own parents. And she had distanced herself ever since me and Gail were officially deemed "an item" under the all encompassing auspices of Pope Benedict the 16th. Our interactions were limited to a series of perverse practical jokes, all initiated by her. One week I went down with the flu, she was dispatched to purchase some medicine and naturally she brings back suppositories, "They were all out of everything else. Just make sure you get it up there..." She leaves with a wink. Cat faced and triumphant. Then at the breakfast table she'd watch intently as I chew cautiously on slightly more elastic than usual oatmeal, suddenly bursting into uproarious guffaws. "Cassidy... please, mind your manners at the table." Mother scolded. "Is your oatmeal too bland, Chase? You looked like you swallowed a bug! Here let me mix some honey in it for you..."
But mostly Cassie kept to herself in her room chatting with her "internet friends" and webcamming with strange people. Apparently given her choice attributes there was more than just a niche audience that lauded her with praises and gifts. Non-descript little packages arrived regularly at the house. I intercepted one once, I gave it a good shake, it was full whatever was in there was crammed in there pretty good. I carefully removed the packaging and opened the box. I pulled whatever was inside out, it was one of those knee high rainbow colored socks with the individual toys. I was a little disappointed before something else fell out onto the floor: it was a pink dildo, obscenely big, with sets of fat nubs that protruded cartoonishly on the sides.
"See something you like, cowboy?" Cassie's voice made me almost drop the box. "Don't snatch!" She decrees as she lands one of her trademark punches to the arm. She recovers her parcel and picks up the dildo, giving me a haphazard swing with the toy before retreating back to her room.

A few days later, Mom and dad were gone shopping I notice Cassie's door slightly ajar. I was kinda in a hurry to get ready to go to one of Gail's volleyball games, with her parents of course, me and Gail had hoped to find more opportunities to hang out outside of class and we decided that I would sign up as a equipment manager while she tried out for any sort of indoor sport. She made volleyball, first try. With the hypothetical conversations with her folks playing out in my head and considering the fact that I was quite fed up with Cassie's shenanigans, normally I would have simply just ignored her, but I heard her familiar giggle and I paused for a second peering in from outside. I heard her moan along with a host of other indistinct voices. "Oooo, haha you guys want me to do one more? You guys are crazy!" Intrigued and slightly confused, I craned my neck to see. She was on all fours on her bed in front of her laptop, she wore too a yellow tank top and too much eyeliner. There was a small army of dildos on her dresser to the right, including the pink one that kind of looked like a character from Sesame Street. "Oh my god, you guys are gonna kill me. You want to see? Hehe." She began to crawl around and I nudged the door for a better angle as her bare ass wiggled into view, she was wearing the rainbow colored socks. Three anal beads hung from her perfectly snug little asshole, which was surprising considering their size, they looked heavy and expensive, black and dimpled, swinging only slightly as she shuffled across on her knees. Suddenly she looked over her shoulder, and ass, at me. "Oh what's up, bro?" She pursed her lips and jiggled her ass. "Haha, say 'hi' to my brother, guys!" A low bit chorus greeted me from her laptop. I closed the door in disgust and retreated to my room.

Anonymous 12/06/16(Sat)04:59 No. 16428 ID: ef566f

what to do, what to say, hmmm.... need to read more (longer chapters) before i like it (aka fap to it)

Anonymous 12/06/17(Sun)22:08 No. 16444 ID: ab28cf

was looking for this on the web and found a beginning part that hasn't been posted here yet. so this goes before op's post


“Knock it off already.” Cassie had the remote control firmly entrenched in her hand and was doing her best to keep it out of reach. The TV was stuck on basketball, which sucked. I knew that there had to be some combination of leverage and brute force that would cause my sister’s fingers to open and let me gain command of the remote. Getting up and walking to the TV was simply out of the question.

“Knock what off?,” I replied, making another grab. Cassie just rolled her eyes and pushed me away. Time for a desperation move. I stuck my thumb in my mouth just long enough to let it collect a good amount of spit, then, distracting her with another lunge for the remote, I slid my thumb past her defenses and rubbed it over her left ear.

“Ewww! Fucking gross!” Her grip loosened just enough for me to pry the device from her hand. My victory was sweet, but it was also short.

“Okay, Knob. You asked for it.” She grabbed me by the wrist and deftly twisted it behind my back, using her three-year age lead and height advantage to throw me down on the couch. She pinned me on my stomach and quickly moved into a sitting position on my shoulders, resting her full weight down on me to keep me from escaping. It was pretty much over. I knew what was coming next, and with one final effort I raised my free hand and succeeded in changing the channel before she could wrestle the remote away. Yes! No matter what happened now, she could never take that away from me.

I closed my eyes as I heard her unzip her pants. My embarrassment was unreal as she began whacking me on the back of the head with a blunt, meaty object.

As a boy, it’s not easy growing up with a sister who has a bigger penis than you do.

My family isn’t exactly normal. Cassie’s dad was killed in car crash when she was only a year old. Mom got married again and had me, but my dad ran off with a car show model when I was seven, leaving my mom to take care of us by herself. We’ve been though some rough times, but I think we’re closer because of it. And also weirder.

My sister Cassie is…well, different. When Cassie was born she was what they call ‘intersexed,’ which is the name for what happens when your parts are mixed up between being male and female. They decided to operate and make her into a boy, but as she got older it started to be obvious that she wasn’t supposed to be one. Now at sixteen you couldn’t guess that she was anything other than a slighty tomboyish teenage girl. She looked like a girl, dressed like a girl, and even smelled like a girl. She pretty much *was* a girl in every way except for what she had between her legs. A lot of people seem to think that’s the only place that counts, but living with Cassie has taught me that its what’s in your head that really matters.

It was a little strange growing up with her, but I pretty much got used to the fact that she had a ‘thingy’ like I did. The strangeness increased when she hit puberty and started growing boobs, something that the doctors said was unusual since she hadn’t been taking hormones. They gave her some to try out and her boobs got even bigger. Her hips got wider too and she started getting taller. I was still pretty small for my age and it soon became clear that she could beat me up pretty easily. Not that she ever really did, but anytime we had a wrestling match she would win pretty easily. We usually got along well, but as we both got older things started to get…complicated.

Our mom was working long shifts at the hospital, leaving Cassie in charge at home. I didn’t enjoy being bossed around by my sister, so sometimes I got pretty rebellious. Then Cassie developed her unique way of dealing with me, and I quickly learned that making her mad was a bad idea. That didn’t always stop me, however.

Sometimes she got really irritable. She didn’t seem to have many friends even though she was smart and wasn’t bad looking. She liked guys and even had a boyfriend for a while when she was fourteen, but he’d peeked at her once when she was changing in his parent’s poolhouse and totally freaked out. He broke up with her right after that and she’d hadn’t had a boyfriend since. She was probably pretty lonely. Sometimes I felt sorry for her, but she could also be a real pain to live with.

She was in one of those moods one night when I suddenly got a hyperactive urge to tempt fate. I crept up behind her as she was laying sidelong on the couch. She was watching basketball again. I waited until one of the players made a three-pointer, then I reached down with lightning speed and snapped her bra as hard as I could.

“He shoots, he scores!” I yelled, then ran for my life. It was the typical kind of foolishly suicidal thing you do when you’re thirteen and bored out of your mind.

She snarled and lunged, but I was already sprinting back upstairs, hoping that I could barricade myself in my room before she caught up. I almost made it. She shoved the door open with her shoulder before I could get it completely closed and jumped on me.

This time I knew I was in trouble......


Also found a part that goes in between part 1 and part 2

A month went by. Cassie and I messed around a few more times but we didn’t really do anything different. Then it was my fourteenth birthday. Cassie had hinted earlier that she was going to give me something ‘special.’ Of course with her that could mean anything, so I wasn’t sure if I should be excited or afraid. I ended up forgetting about it entirely until the night of my birthday.

Everyone had gone to bed. I was almost asleep when I heard the quiet noise of someone opening my door. I rolled over on my back to look, and In the dim blue glow from my clock I could see it was Cassie. She didn’t say anything, she just sat down on the edge of the bed and pulled the covers down to my knees. I was wearing only a pair of briefs. She reached out and put her hand flat on my stomach, resting it there for a second before running it slowly down along my thigh. I didn’t know what she was planning, but the way she was touching me was quickly getting me hard. She seemed to notice and moved her hand up over my crotch, rubbing my hardon lightly through my underwear. It felt great.

Cassie tugged my briefs down and leaned over, seeming to look at my dick for a while. Then I held my breath as she suddenly grabbed my cock and lowered her head down to it, sliding it almost all the way into her mouth before she started moving her lips and sucking. Oh. My. God. It felt so warm and wet. My whole body started trembling and I felt my hips pushing up like I was trying to hump her mouth. I hadn’t imagined that anything could feel so good. It only took her a minute or so to make me cum, and all I could do was lay there and gasp as I felt my dick jump and start exploding in her mouth. Cassie slowed down but didn’t stop. I couldn’t tell if she was swallowing it or not, but she didn’t take her mouth away even after I was done. I was still so hard it almost hurt. When it was obvious that I wasn’t going soft she started blowing me again, holding my cock around the base while she rubbed my thigh with her free hand. I watched her head bob up and down, thinking how incredibly hot it was that she was sucking my dick. This time I lasted a lot longer and was able to enjoy it more. When I came in her mouth again it was over with quicker than the first time, but it felt even more intense.

Cassie let go of my cock and sat up, wiping her chin with the back of her hand. She looked at me and grinned as she smacked me lightly on the thigh.

“Happy Birthday, Knob,” she whispered.

“Thanks.” I meant it. That was easily the best present I’d ever gotten. She threw the covers back over me and left. I fell asleep almost immediately.

More time passed. I started becoming friends with a girl I knew at school.......

Anonymous 12/06/25(Mon)21:07 No. 16529 ID: 2978df

weekly bump

Anonymous 12/07/03(Tue)06:23 No. 16567 ID: 500fb8

almost lost hope bump

Anonymous 12/07/09(Mon)00:31 No. 16589 ID: 2e5ff3

Lost hope but I'm desperate *bump*

Anonymous 12/07/09(Mon)00:33 No. 16590 ID: 2e5ff3

I already lost hope but I'm desperate so I'll bump anyways

Anonymous 12/07/18(Wed)07:35 No. 16674 ID: 2e5ff3

buckle fucker

Anonymous 12/08/03(Fri)05:34 No. 16912 ID: 2e5ff3

Seriously? Is this dead or what?

Anonymous 12/09/03(Mon)01:37 No. 17110 ID: bd288d

bump to motivate SNT-NEL to keep writing this

Anonymous 12/09/03(Mon)20:02 No. 17122 ID: e23812

SNT-NEL 12/09/19(Wed)06:25 No. 17212 ID: 70490d

Heya, I don't have any real excuse for my ridiculous absence. As always, real life, etc, etc. I actually got a girlfriend, and was pretty proud I met her in real life, not online. Of course, bad end followed by depression. But, anyway, I have a small update to kick start another go at this thing.
Continuation picks up from

After drying off and getting dressed, instead of wandering off to do our own things, I found myself sitting with Cassie flipping through boring channels, again. She was leaning back against the couch with a loose-fitting T-shirt and cargo pants that made for a much more modest appearance, especially compared to her earlier scandalous choice of attire. He hands were resting on her small tummy, and she wore an expression of soft satisfaction, the curve of her lips barely evident. That was when my curiosity finally kicked in. What the fuck? My sister spends the night at her friend's then shows up the next day to entice me with her whore outfit? I know we'd been fucking for a while, but something about the whole thing just piqued my curiosity. It got the better of me, and I just had to interrupt her moment of peace.

“So, you must have wanted me to fuck you pretty hard, huh?” I realized my question was pretty uncharacteristically bold, but Cassie responded in the expected manner, punching me in the shoulder hard as hell. Her eyes were blazing, as were her cheeks. I don't think I've ever managed to make her blush that furiously. I wasn't sure what she was so embarrassed about; We could have been considered fuck-buddies at that point if she wasn't my sister. “Ouch! I was just messing with you!”
“Don't ever tell anyone I actually wore that shit!” Her outburst seemed pretty out of place to me, and that would have been evident to Cassie if she wasn't being so defensive. Still, the pain in my shoulder, and her now semi-angry look just fueled my curiosity. I'm mostly sure that's why I didn't antagonize her like always. Mostly sure.

“Okay, okay! Calm down, jeeze!” After another moment of looking at me fiercely, she went back to watching the TV. When it felt like she had enough time to cool off a bit, I broached the subject again. “The outfit was amazingly hot, though... Why were you wearing it? I know for a fact you wouldn't ever wear something like that to school... And I doubt that's sleepover attire.” She kept watching the TV for a while longer before answering me, her slightly angry tone replaced with one that I knew was meant to feign annoyance.

“Uh! What's with the questions? Why does that shit matter to you, anyway?” I smiled, beginning to deduce the answers myself. I moved closer to Cassie, smiling at her knowingly. She looked nervous, and very worried, but was slumped in her couch spot in a way that made it difficult for her to scoot away from me. She may have been too lazy to do so.

“I think,” I paused for effect, locking eyes with her, “You wore that outfit for me.” I did my best not to sound like I was making an accusation. I think the only reason Cassie didn't verbally lash out at me again was because she felt like she was being cornered. I figured she was so defensive about it all because of Sibling Logic. You know, the whole thing about caring about each other deep down, but doing our best not to show it. The thought never crystallized in my mind as an actual sentence, or whatever, but I realized my general mentality was I'd be giving my sister an advantage over me if she knew I cared about her, or something. I think that's how she felt at the time. Maybe the whore outfit was her way of doing something special for me, but she didn't want me to know that. I really, really wanted to know, though! So, I went on. “You must have known how I'd react to you dressing like that... I'm just trying to figure out what could have gotten you so worked up that you'd go to such lengths to get me horny...” I figured it out, but not in time to stop myself from saying something so stupid. Cassie gave me a hurt look that told me how much common sense I lacked. I'd wanna fuck like crazy, too, if I was around that bunch of hot, frolicking bimbos Cassie calls friends. I felt too dumb to say anything else immediately. Instead, I gave her an apologetic look, and put an arm around her shoulders, and just slumped back into the couch, like how she was. I let my stupidity settle down before starting again.

“Then... why did you go?” She sighed, sounding kinda forlorn.

“I just wanted to hang out with my friends... “ I squeezed her shoulder, silently pleading to her for a real explanation. Her lips quivered a bit, and seemed to be holding back a lot. Maybe she really wanted to talk about something, but didn't for some reason. After a really long pause, I called out to her one more time. “Alright... I just... Really wanted to feel 'Normal.' I almost never get to do anything or hang out with anyone... Because of this.... thing. Something always makes me horny! I hate it! All of my girlfriends dress like sluts, and they don't realize they're teasing ME just like everyone else. And, the few guys I talk to who AREN'T doing so just to get into one of my slutty friend's panties end up hitting on me. Not to mention some of them are pretty hot, too. I can't be around anyone without the risk of popping a boner! And.... I guess, when we started doing it, I felt like my urges were a bit more under control, and I thought I could try being one of the regular girls, again. It was almost a disaster, and I ended up horny as fuck. That's why I went to the sleepover, and that's why I wore that stupid outfit for you. Are you happy, now?” She turned away right when she finished, and I knew she was blushing really hard. At first I was stunned that she opened up to me like that. I realized how little I really knew about her aside from her role as a sibling tormentor. As crazy as it sounds, it's like forcing me to give her a blowjob did more than just pave the way for a sexual relationship with my sister. Maybe it actually brought us a bit closer together simply as siblings.

“... I'm sorry I was being so dumb,” I said, wrapping my other arm around her waist for a more secure hold. I was visibly struggling in my search for words to comfort her, so I gently let my head rest against hers. “You can always hang out with me, you know...” I was startled at how lame I sounded, and quickly did my best to rectify it. “Uh! Er, I mean, if you really have to. And, I don't think the outfit was stupid... It was pretty hot, actually.” She lightly slapped me on the arm, giggling a little.

“Shut up, Knob. You're awful at this!” I really was, but she honestly didn't look like she minded all that much. She turned to me and gave me a silly grin, truly in a much better mood. In many ways she was exactly like a typical girl. Like, it seemed as if she mostly just wanted me to hear her out to comfort her. It dawned on me that she couldn't really talk to anyone about this stuff... Mom was kind of detached in her own way that's hard to explain. I doubt she's even told her best friend about her dick, since she apparently thinks of her as a slut. And, she never told me anything until that point. You know, because she was always so busy punching me, or asserting her dominance as the older sister.

We just sat there for a while, smiling at each other like goofballs. She looked so dumb, grinning like that! She probably thought the same thing about me. Soon, I found myself lost in her eyes, and our smiles began to tone down and wilt until my blank expression mirrored hers. Slowly, her eyes went from wide and silly to half-lidded, to fully closed. I felt a thud in my chest when I realized her face was slightly upturned towards mine, too. I really wasn't sure how something so small could get that kind of reaction from me, considering I pretty much fucked her brains out less than half an hour ago. My wandering thoughts were put on hold when I pecked Cassie on the lips tentatively before drawing back planting mine on hers a bit more firmly. We kissed for a little while, long drawn-out closed mouth kisses punctuated with the smacking sound of lips leaving lips. For some reason I liked kissing like that. I guess part of the allure was I was doing something so relatively innocent with a girl I had just ass creampied twice. Cassie let out a little mewling sound which wasn't quite a moan. We were still mostly sitting in a kind of weird position for making out; Our backs against the couch, shoulders slightly turned to each other. I realized at some point we were open-mouth kissing, but without tongue. I could feel her airy sighs while we made out, both of us becoming more hungry for each other. When I moved my hand to rest on her thigh, I could feel her sighs finally escalate when she began to huskily moan right into my mouth as we made out. I'm not sure how she managed it in that weird position, but suddenly I was on my back, and Cassie was crawling up to me along the couch. Our legs tangled together, and she supported herself atop me partly by one of her hands on my chest, and one on my shoulder. I had to lean forward a bit, and she had to tilt her head a bit further up in this position, but we quickly got back into the groove of devouring each others faces. We were really swapping spit and spiraling tongues and sucking face at that point, but it was somehow extremely slow, and sensual. For me, there was no sense of sexual urgency, or anything. I was just enjoying the intimacy at that point. I think Cassie felt the same. Our lips finally separated with a wet, loud smack, our lips joined together by a strand of saliva. Her eyes looked glazed over, almost dazed, to me, and she was panting really hard. Once again, we just looked the others eyes, panting at each other. I later found out the make-out session really inspired Cassie to help out with Gail. In fact, I'll go out on a limb and say my sister is a genius when she's horny.

SNT-NEL 12/09/19(Wed)06:27 No. 17213 ID: 70490d

Aaaaaand I already messed up. I wrote a tame shower scene for right after Cassie got fucked and drenched. Gotta find it/rewrite it.

Anonymous 12/09/20(Thu)08:52 No. 17218 ID: b3c2ff

ur back!! luv it

Anonymous 12/09/26(Wed)06:45 No. 17251 ID: d1f6fa

keep up the great work! Reads very similar to the "OP"

Anonymous 12/09/28(Fri)01:21 No. 17256 ID: d85743

disappointed that Cassie won't get to enjoy her brother's ass

Anonymous 12/10/15(Mon)23:26 No. 17416 ID: f0f0e1


Anonymous 12/10/16(Tue)09:27 No. 17426 ID: c67f7d


Anonymous 12/10/18(Thu)00:17 No. 17443 ID: 2d3df5

moar. need to fap. please. balls no longer blue but purple-black...

Anonymous 12/10/18(Thu)07:01 No. 17448 ID: 262a20


me too

Anonymous 12/11/20(Tue)22:15 No. 17733 ID: b91f48

pls moar also bumpy bump

Anonymous 12/11/24(Sat)15:15 No. 17768 ID: 146fb6

also disappointing to me

Anonymous 12/12/12(Wed)09:02 No. 17847 ID: def664

We will never, ever, EVER see an update to this. I just wanted to let y'all know that.

Anonymous 13/01/10(Thu)07:36 No. 18091 ID: def664

Maybe we'll get an update to then when we stop world hunger and create world peace? Which will probably happen fucking sooner than someone updating this fucking story!

Anonymous 13/01/10(Thu)07:36 No. 18092 ID: def664

Maybe we'll get an update to then when we stop world hunger and create world peace? Which will probably happen fucking sooner than someone updating this fucking story!

Anonymous 13/01/27(Sun)08:27 No. 18204 ID: 94d89b

It has no updates. This story is over. Full story and a bit of background here

Anonymous 13/01/30(Wed)16:12 No. 18224 ID: d1f6fa

Not sure if this is by the original author, the writing style seems similar but not exactly the same, but I found more of this story that follows at the end of the orginal: >>15129

My evening with Gail was...well, weird. She was clumsy and seemed about a million times more nervous than I was. I thought it was cute, though. We messed around on her computer for a while and then sat down to watch a movie. After a few minutes I moved closer and put my arm around her like Cassie had showed me. Gail seemed tense, but she didn't pull away.

I don't remember exactly how it started, but before long we were making out. I'd just gotten her to open up and let my tongue in when she suddenly burped right in my mouth. It wasn't even gross really, just surprising. I started to laugh it off but Gail covered her face with her hands and ran to her room, looking like she wanted to die. I spent about ten minutes in the hallway trying to get her to open the door, but she wouldn't answer me. I finally left after saying I'd call her later.


Cassie was on the phone with one of her friends when I got home. I tried to get her attention but she ignored me and kept talking. I knew she'd probably just laugh, but I needed some advice about how to convince Gail that I didn't hate her. An hour later my sister was still on the phone. Her blabbing was starting to get on my nerves, and feeling the need to be annoying I went over and sat next to her, immediately putting my hand on the crotch of her shorts. She glared and pushed my hand away, but I kept putting it back. She gave me another shove and mouthed the words 'stop it'. I grinned and continued grabbing at her dick, feeling it get harder every time I touched it. Distracted by her conversation, Cassie relented and I slid my hand into her shorts and grabbed her cock directly. It was warm and seemed to throb stiffly as I put my fingers around it.

She was talking about some guy at school now. I leaned in and rubbed my face in her boobs, making a 'wakka wakka' sound like Pac-Man eating dots. She smacked me on the head with the phone and pushed me away, keeping her elbow out so I couldn't get too close. My hand was still tugging her dick though. I could feel the tip getting slick with precum as I started jacking it up and down with a stronger grip. I was just debating whether or not to take it out of her shorts when the front door opened and our mom walked in. Shit. She wasn't usually home this early.

I yanked my hand out of Cassie's pants and slid further away from her on the couch, grabbing clumsily for the remote. I turned on the TV on just as Mom walked up and gave me a kiss on the cheek. Out of the corner of my eye I saw Cassie shift her body to one side to hide the bulge in her shorts. I doubted that Mom had seen anything, but it was still a close call.

She was just swinging by to pick something up on her break. A few minutes later she was gone again, and a few minutes after that Cassie finally hung up the phone.

"How's your butthole?" I asked casually, still flipping channels. She came over and punched me hard on the shoulder before grabbing the remote away.

"That's for when I was on the phone." She sat back down and clicked to the sports channels. "Short date," she commented, looking at the clock. "Must've gone real well."

I told Cassie what happened. As expected, all she did was chuckle. "Ha. She'll get over it. Just be glad she didn't throw up on you."

"Oh?" I said, raising an eyebrow. "Speaking from experience?

She flipped me off without even looking. "Suck it, douche."

"Take it out and I will," I said, only half-joking.

She threw me a quick glance and rolled her eyes. I was a little surprised when she reached down and started undoing her shorts. She pulled her dick through the fly and sat there, her hand still on the remote.


I hesitated for a second. I hadn't been expecting her to actually do it. But what the heck. I slid down next to her on the couch and put my mouth around her cock, feeling it quickly getting hard again as I ran my tongue around the head. It tasted clean and just a little salty. I could smell Cassie's faint perfume as I began sucking at her penis. I'd almost forgotten how much I actually liked doing it. So I sat there and gave my sister a blowjob while she watched Sports Center, her body shivering and her stiff cock pulsing every so often in my mouth as I sucked up and down on as much of it as I could.

She acted like she was trying to ignore me at first, but after a little while I felt her fingers brushing against the back of my head. She played with my hair gently as I bobbed on her dick. I took my time, licking and sucking slowly until I finally felt her body tensing up. She groaned loudly and put her hand behind my neck as she came, holding my head down over her cock as she shuddered and spurted into my mouth.

"Oh fuck," she gasped, her body shivering. I kept sucking until she started to go soft, feeling rather proud of myself for making her nut so hard. She'd even cum more than usual. A plan came to me and I kept it in my mouth as I let go of her cock and sat up. Cassie was laying back with her eyes half closed and didn't try to stop me as I moved up and kissed her on the lips. She kissed me back right away, seeming more into it than I expected. I almost backed out, but once she opened her lips to tongue kiss me I quickly opened mine and pushed all her cum right into her mouth. She shoved me away and sat up, making a sour face.

"Gross!" She said, wiping her mouth. "Why do you have to be such a dick?"

I shrugged. "It's my job." She glared and I made a swift retreat upstairs in case she decided to retaliate.

* * *

A week passed and Gail was still avoiding me. I had no idea why she was acting so lame and it was starting to make me mad. Cassie was out with her friends more often and I was getting pretty bored hanging around the house by myself. One night I decided I'd had enough, so I sneaked out. Technically I didn't really need to sneak as there was no one there to catch me, but I didn't want my skills to get rusty.

I went over to Gail's house and hid in the front yard. I waited till it looked like her parents had gone to bed, then I crept up outside her window and peeked in. It was open slightly and I could see Gail sitting at her computer in her pjs, looking geeky and cute as she adjusted her glasses. I tapped on the window and called her name. Her head jerked around and for a second I thought she was going to scream.

"It's me, Bobby," I whispered quickly, hoping that the rest of my evening wouldn't involve police dogs and helicopters.

She relaxed a bit and came over to the window. "What are you doing here?"

"I needed to talk to you. Can I come in?" I smiled, hoping that I looked more charming than creepy.

She hesitated for a moment. "Ok. Wait a sec."

A minute later she opened the front door and let me in. We went to her room and she shut her door and locked it.

"We have to be quiet," she whispered, looking nervous as we sat down on her bed. "My dad would kill me if he found you here."

"Why? We aren't doing anything."

"Doesn't matter. He'd freak if he knew anyone was in my room this late."

"Okay, so we'll be quiet," I assured her. "I just wanted to talk for a minute. You've kinda been avoiding me."

Gail blushed and looked down. "I'm sorry. I just...I thought you wouldn't want to see me again after...you know."

"Aw. Don't be a re-" I stopped myself before the rest of the word came out. I was so used to talking to my sister that I'd almost called Gail a retard.

"Don't be ridiculous," I said instead, mentally congratulating myself on the save. "It's perfectly fine. Not even a problem. Definitely a negative on the problemo scale."

She gave a hesitant little smile. "You sure?" She looked so cute that I couldn't resist putting my arm around her.

"Super sure." Our eyes met for a second and then we were kissing again, right back where we'd left off. Except this time we were on her bed and her parents were home, so it also had the added element of risk. Hot.

Gail's lips were cool and tasted slightly like toothpaste. For a minute she didn't kiss me back but then she seemed to relax and loosen up a bit, even letting me stick my tongue a little ways in her mouth after she finally opened it.

I wasn't sure about her, but I was getting really turned on. Especially when I thought about that dark mystery in her pj bottoms, the legendary female vagina. Thanks to Cassie I'd had experience with tits, butts, and even a dick, but authentic girl parts were still a great and exciting unknown. Not that I expected Gail to let me explore that far, but I liked to think that anything was possible.

Right then I was concentrating on the possibility of getting to touch her boobs. I rubbed along her side, feeling the softness of her pj top and her warm skin underneath. She was kissing me harder, seeming more and more into it by the minute. Right at the same time that I got enough courage to put my hand on her tit she caught my tongue and started sucking on it wildly. I squeezed lightly at her boob, feeling my dick twitch excitedly as I imagined her sucking on it the same way.

Before long I had both her small tits in my hands and was slowly pushing her back on the bed. Everything was going better than expected, despite the fact that Gail came millimeters away from kneeing me in the crotch when she moved her legs apart so I could lay on top of her. We ended up dry humping slowly and awkwardly with our clothes on, my hand sneaking unchallenged under the waistband of her pj bottoms. At first I encountered only bare skin, then at last my fingertips touched the softest, curliest hair imaginable, the fuzzy runway leading down to the promised land.

Just when I thought I was cleared for landing, there came a sudden knock on Gail's door.

"Time for bed, hon." A man's voice called. "Did you brush your teeth?"

Gail shot up so fast that she headbutted me right on the nose. Hard. I fell off the bed with a loud thump, literally blinded by pain.

"Yes, Dad!" She said, almost in a panic. "Everything's fine! Goodnight!"

There was a short pause. "Okay. Goodnight sweetie!"

Meanwhile I was lying on the floor, seeing stars and doing my best not to bleed all over the carpet.

"Oh my God," Gail whispered, finally seeming to realize that she'd almost killed me. "Are you ok?"

"What? Who are you?" I mumbled weakly. "Where am I?" I probably shouldn't have said that, as Gail immediately began to freak out. At least now I knew that she wasn't the type of person to count on in crisis situations.

I got up and managed to calm her down before she could start yelling. My nose did hurt like hell, though, especially when she started shoving kleenex up there to stop the bleeding.

Gail apologized nonstop as she helped me escape out the window. I promised to call her and staggered away down the street. My head and my balls both ached, one from violence and the other from frustration.

Cassie was home watching TV. She did a double take as I walked in, then burst out laughing. Insult, meet injury. It probably didn't help that I still had the kleenex stuffed up my nose.

My sister followed me into the bathroom, watching as I threw away the tissues and examined my bruised and swollen honker.

"Well, don't keep me in suspense." She finally said. "What happened?"

Even though I knew she'd just tease me about it, I told her. Cassie giggled, snorted, then giggled again.

"I'm sorry," she said. "But you gotta admit that's kinda funny. You got beat up by a 13-year-old girl. Maybe you should wear a helmet next time, stud."

I sighed. Whatever. Gail was actually fourteen but I wasn't in the mood to argue. I took some aspirin and went to my room to lay down, eager to forget my humiliation.

I was dozing off when I heard the door open and saw Cassie come in. She turned out the light and sat down on my bed, her warm butt pressing against the side of my leg.

"Sorry for laughing," she said quietly, her face unreadable in the near darkness. "So I guess you two are getting pretty serious now, huh?"

"I guess."

"So you just wanna bone this girl? Or is it something more?"

I paused, wondering why she was asking all these questions. "I dunno. I just like her."

Cassie sighed and flopped down on the bed next to me.

"She's lucky. I wish I had a guy who wanted to sneak in my window."

I rolled my eyes. "They're probably afraid you'd beat them up." She made my point by socking me on the arm.

"Ha ha," she said, looking up at the ceiling. "I'm serious. At least you can get a girlfriend. Me? Most of the guys at school won't even talk to me, let alone ask me out. And even if someone did, what do you think he'd do if we were making out and he reached down my pants and found this?" She smacked her hand roughly between her legs. "He'd freak, that's what he'd do."

I frowned. Sometimes it was easy to forget just how different she was. I was so used to the fact that my sister had a dick that it almost seemed natural. Cassie, dick. Dick, Cassie. The two just kind of went together, like oreos and milk.

"So?" I answered, shrugging. "Find a guy that doesn't care. I'm a guy, and I don't care."

Cassie sighed again. "You're a perv. You don't count."

"Yeah, well there are a lot of pervs out there. You just gotta find the right one."

We lay quietly for a minute shoulder to shoulder, both staring up at the roof. Although there was no way in hell that I would ever admit it to her, I thought Cassie was kind of pretty, sometimes even hot. There had to be plenty of guys out there who'd like her for who she was.

"Hey Knob," she said softly.


"Wanna show me what you and your little girlfriend did tonight?"

I started feeling warm as I pretended to think it over. "Sure."

She smiled. "I'll try not to headbutt you. But no promises."

I responded by rolling over and kissing her. Her lips were soft and moist and followed mine almost like we were glued together at the mouth. I went slow, replaying what I'd done earlier with Gail as I rubbed my sister's shoulders and sides. Maybe I could pretend to be Cassie's boyfriend for a while, at least till she found a real one. The idea of it was actually kind of cool.

So was the way she was kissing me. I struggled to follow the script as her hands moved down along my back and grabbed my ass. I was already laying between her legs, one hand rubbing her tits as I tried to keep up with kissing her. I let her have my tongue and she started sucking on it just like Gail did. I wondered if that was something that came naturally to girls.

I slid my hand up under her shirt, playing around with the impenetrable fortress of her bra before giving up and reaching downward into her pants. Her dick was stiff and practically jumped into my hand. I tugged on it gently, feeling her suck even harder on my tongue as I did. I had a feeling that we were gonna end up doing a lot more than just dry humping.

As if by mutual agreement we both stopped at the same time and pulled off our shirts. I could see the edge of one of Cassie's nipples peeking out over the top of her bra, and she noticed me staring and quickly squirmed out of it. Then she took her big bare tits in both hands and started playing with them, hefting and squeezing them as I watched, almost hypnotized.

"You like that?" She asked with a smirk.

"Yeah," I answered thickly, reaching out towards her. She let me take over and I grabbed her boobs, rolling them around and kind of knocking them together, enjoying how warm and soft and resilient they were. Her nipples were hard and tickled my palms. I swiftly came to the conclusion that tits were fucking awesome.

Cassie's cheeks were turning pink and she was starting to look really turned on. I was so hard that I could feel my pulse in my dick. The way I was leaning over her brought our crotches very close together, and I moved in further until the stiff bulge in my pants was rubbing against the slightly larger bulge in hers. It felt good. Weird, but good. My sister started rubbing back against me, seeming to agree.

I suddenly needed to find out how it would feel without pants in the way. I got up and stepped out of my jeans, noticing that Cassie was watching my every move, even staring at my cock as it popped free of my underwear. I took her pants off next, working them down over her hips until they slid all the way off. She was actually wearing panties this time, white ones with little pink flowers on them. The tip of her dick was poking out from under the waistband and I could see a small wet smear of precum on her lower stomach.

I climbed up again and put my dick next to hers, sliding them against each other with only the soft cotton of her panties between us. It felt awesome. I started rubbing harder, thinking it might be cool to cum this way.

Cassie was really blushing now. She looked incredibly sexy laying there under me. This was the first time we'd really done anything face to face besides kiss, and instead of being weird it was actually really, really hot.

So hot that I was moving up and straddling her head before I even knew what I was doing. My cock was pulsing stiffly right in her face, with me in the exact same position she'd been in when I'd first sucked her off. I expected her to make some smartass remark, maybe even push me away. She shocked me by immediately taking my cock in her mouth and sucking at it almost frantically.

I gasped, putting my hands on the wall to steady myself as my sister swallowed my dick. She seemed really into it, even putting her hands behind my butt and pulling me in closer. Her mouth was incredibly warm and wet, and after just a few seconds of watching her lips move up and down over my shaft I was already on the verge of nutting.

Cassie groaned as I started spurting off in her mouth, her soft little moans only making me cum even harder. She held me tight until I was done, then let go as I moved over and lay back down on the bed, panting and drained.

She nestled up against me, resting her head on my arm almost lovingly as she started playing with my hair. A minute later she leaned in and kissed me softly on the mouth. I thought it was pretty nice until she forced my lips open with her tongue and shoved a huge wad of my own cum into my mouth, almost making me gag. Shit. I should have known better.

"Urrgh," I groaned, rolling over to spit the stuff into my hand.

Cassie watched with an evil grin. "Payback is a bitch, huh?"

"Yeah," I responded darkly, still drooling cum into my hand. "And so are you."

"Ouch, that stings." She rolled her eyes and rose up on her elbows, no doubt to mock me further. "So what--"

Unfortunately the world will never know what my sister was about to say next, because at that moment I took my handful of cum and thrust it menacingly toward her face. She immediately shrieked and jumped out of bed.

"Don't you dare!" She warned as she backed away toward the door.

I followed, still holding out my hand. "Come on. I hear its good for your skin." She shrieked again and bolted out into the hall. I chased her down the stairs, her in nothing but her panties, me bare-ass naked; both of us giggling like idiots.

Cornering her in the kitchen, I managed to grab her wrist with my free hand and held her still long enough to slap my cummy palm right on the crack of her ass. She jerked away, her tits bouncing.

"Eww," she said, stopping to feel her butt. Then she took a step toward me, rubbing the jizz between her fingers. "Hey," she said thoughtfully. "I bet this would look really great in your hair."

She chased me back upstairs. Our spirited game of cum-tag ended in my room as she tackled me and swiped her sticky fingers across my cheek and chin.

"Wow, you look younger already," she grinned. "Maybe it is good for your skin."

I wiped my face and glared. Cassie let me up and sat on the bed with a sigh.

"Okay. Truce," she said. "You got me, I got you. We're even."

"Fine." My eyes fell to her dick, which was still semi-hard and tenting the crotch of her panties.

"Well, not quite even," she added as she saw where I was looking. She flopped back on the covers and looked at me expectantly. I wasn't really in the mood to suck her dick after the stunt she'd pulled, but she did look kind of good laying there half naked on my bed.

Feigning reluctance, I went over and started rubbing my hand up and down along her thigh. Her skin was silky and warm. Just touching her was making me hard again, and that made it difficult to stay mad at her. Argh. Why did girls have to be so damn sexy?

I put my other hand on one of her tits and gave it a squeeze. Cassie didn't move or make a sound. She just kept laying there, seeming content to let me play around with her. She kept quiet even when I gave her nipple a tweak, and, curious to test the limits of her silence, I grabbed the waistband of her panties and tugged them down over her legs. Her dick was fully hard again, throbbing slightly as it rested against her stomach.

But I wasn't interested in her penis right now. I pushed her legs apart so that I could get a look at her butthole. There it was, right below her smooth little balls, dark and inviting. Acting on a sudden urge, I ducked in and gave it a quick little lick. It tasted a bit sweaty, but not bad.

I licked it again. Cassie gasped and drew her legs up toward her chest, giving me better access to her butt. I think it was safe to say that she liked it. I started poking my tongue at her ass, the puckered hole relaxing as I licked deeper. It seemed like a nasty thing to be doing, but I was hard as a rock the whole time.

Cassie's gasps and moans were getting me even hornier. Thinking about how much I'd enjoyed fucking her last time, I stood up and quickly put my dick to her butt. She was already wet with my spit, and I gasped as my cock began to inch its way in between the cheeks of her ass, slowly disappearing into her hot, clenching hole. I started thrusting, shaking a little as I felt her inner muscles grip down on my dick. So. Damn. Good.

My sister groaned, kicking her legs out wide and grabbing my shoulders as I fucked her missionary style on my bed. Her tits were wobbling and her eyes were closed tightly in a sexy frown. Remembering that I was supposed to be her boyfriend, I decided to be romantic and kiss her. I did and Cassie immediately bit my lower lip, dragging it between her teeth. It hurt but felt kinda good at the same time.

I repaid her by screwing my dick even deeper into her ass. Her butt was squeezing me, jerking me like a clenched fist. I was about to cum so I just plugged away at her as hard and deep as I could, feeling my balls tensing up as they got ready to unload.

I came. My dick felt like it was turning inside out as I exploded into Cassie's ass. A few seconds later she startled me by cumming too, arching her back and groaning as her cock began to jump without even being touched, her jizz shooting wildly out onto her boobs. Even though I was still in a daze, the sight of Cassie cumming all over her own tits was basically the hottest thing I'd ever seen. And to top it off I was pretty sure some of it went in her mouth. At least she couldn't blame me for that.

We were both panting as I slowly withdrew from her butt. I looked down at the sticky mess on her tits for a second before leaning in and licking some of it off of her nipple. Cassie shivered.

"Perv," she sighed.

"Yep." I grabbed her shirt and started cleaning her up, hoping she wouldn't be too mad when she noticed there was cum all over it. She lay there like she was half asleep for a while then finally sat up, wincing as she swung her legs out of bed and staggered off naked towards the bathroom.

I hopped into bed and stretched out, feeling much better. My nose didn't hurt so bad anymore. I'd also cum twice in my sister, once in her mouth and again in her butt. It was amazing just how much something like that could lift your spirits.

I was almost asleep again when I heard Cassie's voice.

"Hey Knob, you forgot your blanket."

I rolled over blearily, wondering what the hell she was talking about. Right as I did she tossed her cummy shirt right at my face. It hit me with a cold, gooey slap.

"And wash that," she said, grinning. "Or I'll make you eat it." With that she was gone.

I groaned, then turned over and went right back to sleep.

Anonymous 13/02/01(Fri)09:00 No. 18232 ID: def664


You are doing God's work, son.

Anonymous 13/02/17(Sun)23:37 No. 18342 ID: 72f93b

Keep on keeping on man you are AWESOME!

Anonymous 13/03/07(Thu)05:17 No. 18464 ID: 4a7ed5


Anonymous 13/03/15(Fri)13:22 No. 18514 ID: def664

Why do I even bother trying

Anonymous 13/03/15(Fri)18:56 No. 18520 ID: 99fc43

Is this getting saved anywhere? I'd like to keep a copy for posterity.

Anonymous 13/04/04(Thu)13:55 No. 18635 ID: 2b9cd1

Just ag bump for a good story I don't want to see die

NewAnon 13/05/22(Wed)09:46 No. 18988 ID: fe1611

I'd be interested in continuing. It might take a few rough drafts to nail the style. I'd also be interested in Maybe letting the sister go all the way with the brother?

Anonymous 13/05/23(Thu)11:07 No. 18995 ID: 1c1bff

Do so continue this story and let the sister go all the way with her Brother

Anonymous 13/05/23(Thu)14:56 No. 18998 ID: def664

Please do so! it's been forever since anybody even tried.

LOL 13/07/16(Tue)01:21 No. 19375 ID: 724cc1


I've copied everything in this thread, with the exception of >>18224 because I've never seen it before, and I've seen the earlier section in other threads on chans, so I"m considering it 'canon'. The version I've uploaded to Pastebin starts off from the ED article, which I'm assuming is the most accurate source material.
I formatted it to read like an actual book; at least in my personal file (if anyone knows a site I can upload it to, I'd be more than happy to, other than google drive. Pastebin doesn't seem to keep my formatting).
I've edited it for continuity errors and spelling. There are a few sections that need a little work with grammar and flow, but that's only because they're from different authors, and I haven't gotten a chance to fix, but I plan to.
I've also expanded on a scene that didn't make sense to me how it was originally written to make it flow a little better (Unfortunately the section I've added to is part of the original canon, so what I've done might be considered heresy).

I would love to see this story expanded upon, because I don't think where this thread left off is a good end point

Let me know what you guys think, I'd love to work with you all to improve this story

Anonymous 13/07/25(Thu)06:07 No. 19441 ID: 7249ed

it has been ages since this got anything new, but even if its just s minor fix its great to read it again, sure hopes someone continues *hint hint nudge nudge*

Anonymous 13/07/26(Fri)01:44 No. 19445 ID: f74fe7

if you think you can continue this do so!

LOL 13/07/26(Fri)02:18 No. 19446 ID: 724cc1

I meant I'd work with you guys to fix up what's already here, I'm not sure if I'd be all that good at writing anything, or even where to take the story

LOL 13/07/31(Wed)03:37 No. 19469 ID: 724cc1

Good news everyone! I've gone through and edited everything, and here it is:


If the formatting is fucked up, it's because I used Google Docs to save the file as a .docx, if that's a problem I can resave it as a PDF for people.

I've expanded and edited a lot of stuff from this thread, so I'd suggest reading through it, you'll get a lot more out of it than what's posted here

Also, after having gone through the entire story, I'd really like to add to it, but I'm not sure of how to get Gail in on Chase and Cassie's relationship. If anyone has any ideas, I'd love to hear them.

And I added stuff that could lead to Cassie getting to bang Chase's ass, if you guys want, if not that's cool

In the mean time I'll be writing whatever I want and posting what I think is good

LOL 13/07/31(Wed)03:44 No. 19470 ID: 724cc1

Also, this shit is like 25,500 words

Anonymous 13/08/02(Fri)00:05 No. 19482 ID: 0b3a54

Could you put it as a pdf? My comp hates .docx files.

Anonymous 13/08/02(Fri)00:15 No. 19483 ID: 0b3a54


Why not let her bang Chase's ass? As long as it's written well.

Anonymous 13/08/03(Sat)02:34 No. 19487 ID: 842362

Currently making it into one. Should be done tomorrow.

LOL 13/08/04(Sun)02:37 No. 19499 ID: 724cc1

Here you go. Sorry about the wait everyone, I'm a slow writer, and it's going to take a while for me to get from where the story left off, to any sort of 'milestone' (like a threesome, or Chase taking it in the butt, or whatever) without it feeling rushed. But here's a PDF version of what I've got saved on my personal file. I keep finding small errors everywhere throughout, which only means there are still some I haven't found


When I've got a chapter written I'll post it here, and a link to an updated PDF file

LOL 13/08/11(Sun)23:07 No. 19555 ID: 724cc1

So here's the first part of what I've written, I've got more, but I'm a little stuck and this had a pretty good breaking point. Just for clarity's sake, this is in continuation to >>17212 . Sorry it took a week, but let me know what you guys think. Also, if the formatting is messed up, I'll just delete this post and redo it


I don’t know why none of us thought about it, but Gail telling her parents she was working on some nebulous ‘school project’ would have been a perfect reason to get her over to my house regularly. I just would have preferred for there to have not been an actual science fair project we had to do. The next day in science class was when it was announced, with the actual fair being the week before spring break. Naturally, Gail and I decided to sign up as a team.
Thankfully, science class was towards the end of the day, because from that point on all I could think about was how much time Gail and I would have together. Apparently, she was on the same page, because as soon as school ended, she was waiting for me at my locker. “Hey,” she said, smiling when she saw me. “I was thinking we sho-” was all she could get out before I was kissing her. I had my hands on her hips and was about to stick my tongue into her mouth when I felt a tap on my shoulder.
Someone behind me said “you shouldn’t be doing that in school.” Gail and I broke our kiss and I turned around to see some teacher with a stern look on her face, and a handful of kids giggling.
“Sorry” was all I said before I turned around to fumble with my lock. By the time it was opened everyone around us had dispersed. “Wanna come over to my house tonight?” I asked, turning to Gail. “My mom is working a late shift, so we’ll have a lot of free time.” I raised my eyebrows in a suggestive manner; mostly for her amusement, but hopefully it would drive the point home.
“That’s what I was thinking.” She was blushing. “But, I wanted to say we should go to my house so my parents know why I’ll be spending so much time with you.”
I made a face. “Your parents are nice, but I get the feeling they don’t like me.”
“They like you, you’re smart, funny, and nice. It’s just... they think 13 is too young to have a boyfriend. They just want to protect me from bad influences. Like you,” she said smiling and punched me lightly in the arm. She helped me get my books and close my locker, then we walked to hers. I understood the bad influence part, but I preferred to blame Cassie for all of this instead.
Gail’s locker was one of about 10 that were tucked away in a little corner at the end of the hall, but only her’s and two other lockers had locks on them, so I was reasonably sure we had a little privacy. As she was working on opening her lock, I rested one hand on her lower back, and the other on her stomach. I whispered “I like the way you feel” as I moved a hand down to cup her ass, and another to cradle her breast.
She was blushing when she said “not here, we could get caught again!”
“But I never finished what I started outside of the gym.” Gail bent over to pick up a book, and pressed her ass firmly into my thigh, and wiggled a little bit. She was standing back up before I could feel her up, though. “You’re cute when you blush,” I said, kissing her soft lips.
“Oh my gosh!” She tried to swat at my hands, giggling. “You’re too much sometimes. Come on, let’s get going.” She held my hand and we walked out of the school. I was a little disappointed we didn’t do anything in that hallway, but I knew we’d have a lot of time together.
The walk home was uneventful; we talked about ideas for the science fair, tv shows, and a new superhero movie that was coming out this summer. When we got onto Gail’s street, she let go of my hand and moved a couple of inches away from me. She was just as reluctant of her parents knowing we were together as me.
Walking into her house, it was strange how nervous I felt. I had been over to Gail’s house a handful of times to study with her, and her parents never had a problem with it. There’s no way they knew we were dating; and certainly no way they knew we were fucking, so why did I feel like there were butterflies in my stomach?
Gail’s parents weren’t on the ground floor, so we went into the living room and sat at the family computer. She wasn’t allowed to have her own computer, so this made it very easy for her parents to monitor her internet activity. She booted up the computer, and typed ‘Middle school science fair projects’ into a search engine, looked around her house, and whispered to me “what’s your favorite kind of porn?”
I was a little surprised, so it took me a second. “Barely legal teen anal” was the first thing that popped into my head. I made a mental note to thank Cassie for that fetish. She giggled at my response, but typed that into a new tab in private mode, and clicked on the first thumbnail that caught her eye.
“That’s kind of kinky.” She was grinning as she reached down and started to rub her hand on my growing erection. “Don’t worry, all the stairs creak, so we’ll hear anyone moving.” She turned back to the video to see a blonde girl slowly push a dildo into her ass, moaning silently. Thankfully Gail had the foresight to mute the speakers.
After a few minutes, I could hear heavy breathing, and noticed Gail’s hand was on her crotch. She was rubbing both herself and me in time with the girl in the video’s thrusts. I was about to ask her if she needed help with that, but a sudden creaking sound made all the blood rush away from my penis so fast it almost made me dizzy. She must have been more prepared for this, because she immediately sat up and closed the private tab, and sat bored looking, scrolling through the search results. “Gail, are you home, honey?” Her mom’s voice come from the staircase as she descended.
“Yeah, Chase is here too. We’re looking up science fair project ideas.” She did an amazing job of sounding normal immediately after being interrupted like that.
“Oh, hi Chase! How are you today?” Gail’s mom walked into the living room and leaned against the doorframe, crossing her arms. If she was any indication for how Gail would look in 25 years, Gail was definitely set to be beautiful her whole life.
“I’m good, Mrs. Parker. How are you?” I reached down to get a notebook from my bag, to take notes. No matter how thankful I was for the excuse to have Gail over at my house after school to fuck her brains out, we still had an actual project to work on.
“I’m great,” she said smiling. There was something about her, maybe she was just really friendly, but it always felt like she was flirting with me just a little whenever we spoke to each other. “You two come up with any ideas yet?” She pulled up a chair and sat behind us, resting her head in her hands, and her elbows on her knees. This close to her, I could smell her perfume, and when I looked back at her, I could see a hint of cleavage down the neck of her shirt. Sergeant Stiffy was back to half-mast from the thought of Gail having breasts as large as her mom’s one day.
“Maybe a big papier-mache volcano with baking soda and vinegar lava?” Gail did a good job of sounding extremely non-plussed about the whole matter. Maybe she wasn’t putting on an act.
“I think that’s a little too simple for you, sweety.” Mrs. Parker kissed Gail on the cheek and stood up. As she walked past me, she ruffled my hair. “I have to go to the store real quick, before I start on dinner. Will you be joining us, Chase?”
“No thank you, I told my mom I’d make dinner for my sister and me tonight. We just wanted to figure out a list of ideas for our teacher to approve by the end of the week.”
“Oh, you can cook? Gail, this one’s a keeper!” She was laughing as she walked into the kitchen. Gail made an exasperated sigh and shook her head. If I wasn’t so impressed by her ability to act, I’d be insulted. “Gail, your father’s taking a nap upstairs, so keep the noise down, you two.” With that, she was out of the house, and a few moments later starting her car.
Gail waited until the car was driving down the street before she took my hand and pushed my fingers into her pants. “Want to finish what you started behind the gym?” Her panties were wet, and her pussy was extremely hot. She let out a cute little sigh as I pressed a finger down on her clit, and had to cover her mouth when I moved lower and inserted a finger into her vagina. I leaned over to nibble on her ear, and she started to stroke my cock again. I worked a second finger into her pussy, and began to rub her G-spot. “Mmmm, you are a keeper” she whispered, and with her free hand she began to fondle her breast.
I could tell she was getting close, so I put my hand on the back of her head, and turned her towards me to french kiss her. “It looked like you were enjoying that video.”
“A little...” she said, in between hitched breaths.
“Good, then you’ll like this.” I stood her up, and undid the button and zipper on her pants. With my free hand, I pulled her pants and underwear down just below her ass, and stuck a finger between her cheeks. A sharp gasp was her only response as I began to rub her puckered asshole and intensly fingered her pussy.
Gail had to lean forward onto the computer desk to support herself, and she started to buck on my hands shortly after. “Oh my gosh... Fuck! Chase-” She had to slap a hand over her mouth to stifle her moan as she had the most intense orgasm I’d ever given her. Her burning hot pussy was rhythmically clamping down on my fingers, and she was pressing her asshole so hard on my other finger it pushed in about halfway. For the next 20 seconds I continued to finger both her holes as her entire body shuddered.
Eventually she calmed down and I carefully removed my fingers. She nearly collapsed, so I helped her into her chair, shit eating grin plastered on my face as I redid the fly on her pants. I started to lick her juices off my fingers and said “looks like you enjoyed yourself.”
“Shut up” was all she could say, breathless, smiling, and blushing. After getting her breathing under control, she sat back up. “We need to find a few ideas before my mom comes back.” She was right, even though my cock was throbbing painfully and begging for release.
After writing down a list of 10 ideas for our teacher, Gail was in the middle of emailing me the corresponding links we found when her mom’s car pulled into their driveway. She was walking in the door as I was packing up my bags. “Get everything you needed to taken care of?” She asked, poking her head into the room.
I made sure to stay far away from implying anything about me not getting taken care of when I responded with “Yep, we have a list of ideas to get checked by our teacher for tomorrow.”
“Ok! Are you sure you don’t want to stay for dinner, Chase?”
“Yeah, I should probably be getting back soon, or else my sister will get mad at me.”
“Do you need a ride?” Gail’s mom jingled her keys.
“No thanks, I only live a couple blocks away.”
“So gentlemanly!” She was giggling to herself as she went back to the kitchen. “Ok then, be safe.” I looked over at Gail to see her roll her eyes and shake her head.
As I was walking out the door Gail said to me “sorry about my mom, she’s kinda weird” loud enough for her mom to respond with more laughter. Then she whispered “and sorry about not taking care of this” as she cupped my crotch with her hand. With that she sent me on my way.

Anonymous 13/08/15(Thu)05:28 No. 19563 ID: 82ba92

i like where this is going, also MAOR PLS!!

LOL 13/09/02(Mon)08:23 No. 19626 ID: 724cc1

Sorry about there not being an update for almost 3 weeks. I had to deal with family stuff, and I just got a job. I've finished the chapter I was working on, so I made a new .pdf for you guys.


If you have any suggestions for how I can improve, or where you want the story to go, lemme know and I'll ignore and berate you.


The walk home was kind of boring, but I was hoping Cassie would be able to help me with my severe case of blue balls. When I got home, I found her in her room doing homework at her desk, so I sat down on her bed and told her about the science fair and what I did to Gail after school. I also mentioned my need for release, and asked Cassie for her help.
“You sure she’s not the one trying to get you addicted to her pussy?” She said, laughing as she stood from her desk to walk over towards me. “I told you to get her horny, then make her suffer. It sounds like she’s the one doing that to you. Or maybe...” She put her finger to her mouth and looked pensive.
I took the bait. “Maybe what?” I had a feeling where this was going.
“Maybe she’s just a huge slut.”
I threw a pillow at her. “That’s my girlfriend you’re talking about.”
“Well if this seduction stuff is too hard for you, I’ve got something hard for you.” Cassie ended her statement with a gesture towards her crotch. No matter how terrible the set up for that joke, she was right; I had made a deal with her, and if this option didn’t pan out I’d be giving my anal virginity to her.
Cassie sat down next to me, and placed her hand on my crotch. “You know, it does feel good.” She was whispering in my ear, and started to undo my pants. “When you fuck me in the ass, your cock hits a special place, deep inside of me, and I can’t help but cum.” Her soft hand was wrapped around the head of my throbbing cock. “You make the cum gush out of me, Chase. And I love it.” Her warm mouth was enveloping my whole dick, and she began to suck and bob her head up and down. I layed back on her bed and closed my eyes, feeling my orgasm mounting.
And then she stopped. My cock felt cold being in the open air. I opened my eyes and looked over to see her laughing at me. “See, that’s how you do it. Get her horny, and make her suffer.” She stood up and began to undress. “The way I see it, you need to be punished. It’s the only way you’ll learn.” I felt a little scared, and she must have seen it on my face. “Don’t worry, your butt cherry is safe for now. But you are going to do something new for me.” Cassie got onto her hands and knees on the bed behind me. “I want you to give me a rimjob.”
“Uh... you want me to use my tongue... there?”
“Yeah, this is your punishment. I want to know what it feels like to have someone’s tongue there.” Cassie looked a little embarrassed, and began to blush. “Besides, I just took a shower, so I’m clean.” I had seen it done in porn, as I’m sure she had too. I was reluctant, but figured it couldn’t be too bad, and she did have a cute looking asshole. Plus there was the slight ache in my balls constantly reminding me that if I do this, she might help me afterwards.
After getting undressed, I moved onto the bed and sat under her, holding myself up by her hips. This close, I could notice the musky smell from Cassie’s balls, and her asshole was entirely hairless. I guess I just never realized she must shave everything down here. I must have spent too long working up my courage, because she began to wiggle her hips back and forth and asked, “You forget why you’re back there, Knob? Or do you just like the view?”
“Trying to think if there’s enough mouthwash in the world for after this.” Her response was to hit my thigh with her foot. Moving my head closer, I laid my tongue flat on her asshole and gave a few tentative licks. This time Cassie responded with a light sigh. I didn’t know what I was expecting, because it tasted just like skin; she was telling the truth when she said she was clean. “How’d that feel?”
“Really good, but can you jerk me off too?” Cassie had gotten into the ‘face down, ass up’ position, resting her head on a pillow. Lubing my hand with some spit, I started to work her cock and licked her from her taint to her asshole. “You learn fast.” In all honesty, it wasn’t bad. And seeing how much Cassie liked it, I wanted to give it my all. With each lick, her hole loosened up a little bit more, and she began pushing her ass into my face in time with my strokes. Once her muscles had relaxed enough, I decided to get adventurous and stuck my tongue into her asshole. “Mmmm, keep doing that,” was all she could say between breaths, humping my face. I could feel her cock beginning to throb in my hands, and her cute moans told me she was getting close to cumming. By this point, Cassie’s hands had found their way down to my cock, and she was matching both my pace and fervor. “Can you keep your tongue in my ass while I cum?”
“Uh huh.” I took this as an opportunity to really drive her wild, and tongue fucked her as fast and deep as I could. My jaw was getting sore, but I wanted to make her happy, so I powered through it.
“Oh god, Chase-” Cassie began to grunt in time with her asshole contracting on my tongue, and her cock pulsed in my hand rapidly. I couldn’t see what was happening, but I felt load after load of her hot cum gush out onto my cock, lubing it up for her hand.
By the time her orgasm had subsided, it felt like Cassie had spurted out at least a tablespoon or two of cum onto my dick, and was slowly jerking me off. I pulled my tongue out to gingerly work my jaw and Cassie moaned one last time. Her asshole was still relaxed enough that it was slightly open, and it seemed so inviting. She flexed her sphincter, making it look like her ass winked at me before sitting up and facing me. Seeing the mess we had made all over my crotch and her bed, I asked, “I take it that felt good?”
Cassie leaned in to kiss me, but then looked at my mouth and hesitated. She kissed me on the cheek instead. “You want to find out for yourself?” She actually winked this time, still working my cock.
“No thanks.”
She rolled her eyes and pushed me onto my back. “Don’t worry, I won’t be rough. We’ll just need to start slow,” Cassie said as she licked her cum off the underside of my shaft. Her mouth felt hot and wet as she enveloped it over the head of my penis, sucking lightly. I could feel myself getting close, and I assume Cassie could too, because once again, my cock felt cold in the open air.
“Not again.”
“Hey Chase... How bad do you want to cum?” Cassie asked with a sly grin on her face. She was teasing my cock to keep me on the verge of climaxing.
I groaned again. “Pretty bad, but not enough that I’ll go along with what you want to do to me.”
“Oh come on, it won’t be that bad.” She had placed my cock against her cheek, and some of my pre-cum was smearing on her face. “I’ll let you do something to me...” She let that sentence trail off as she lightly dragged my cock back to her mouth, and rested the head on her outstretched tongue. That new sensation was almost too much, but Cassie had her weight pressed onto my hips, so I couldn’t do anything but ride that wave of pleasure down until it was a dull ache in my balls, begging for release.
It couldn’t hurt to hear her out, so I reluctantly asked, “What do you have in mind?”
She licked the underside of my penis, just to make me squirm more before saying, “I’ll let you cum on my face if I can play with your ass. I promise to go easy on you.”
“I knew that’s where this was going.”
“I’ll even let you take a picture or two,” she pleaded. My only response was another groan. I had a feeling this was still Cassie wanting to prove her point about coercing people while they’re horny. But she never would let me take pictures of her, so this was definitely unexpected; she must have really wanted my ass.
But my resolve won out over my desire to see her covered in cum again when I firmly stated, “not going to happen.” I was hoping she wouldn’t just abandon me in this state, and I worried I might have been a bit too blunt for her to want to continue.
“Your loss,” Cassie said, then immediately pulled the head of my cock into her mouth. She was fondling my balls with one hand, and working my shaft with the other. I let out a low groan as she hungrily worked my cock, edging me closer to orgasm. She eased herself off my hips, and I pushed my fingers through her hair to better guide her head. I kept thinking Cassie was going to try something with my ass again, but her fingers never wandered too far down below my balls.
Every time she bobbed her head down, a wave of pleasure radiated out from my cock, pulsating through my body. She had drooled down the shaft until her hand was well-lubricated, working at least twice as fast as her mouth, and I was almost at my limit. “Cassie…” I trailed off; the feeling of her mouth was borderline painful, but she understood I was about to cum. Cassie re-positioned my cock to rest it on her tongue as she continued to jerk me off. She looked me in the eyes, made a cute little sigh, and started to pump my dick so eagerly I could hear her bed squeaking under me.
Finally I reached my climax, and I had to fight to keep my eyes open. I watched as my cum began to pour out onto Cassie’s tongue, and I grunted as I involuntarily clenched, each time sending thick ropes of jizz into the back of her mouth. Her mouth was beginning to overflow, when she took the entirety of my cock into her mouth again, letting my cum spill out down my shaft and balls. “Oh fuck!” I groaned, and had to close my eyes when Cassie began milking the rest of my cum out. I laid my head back to ride out the rest of my orgasm, and could feel both of Cassie’s hands on my hips, and knew she was only using her mouth
I gave a few more squirts and then a handful of empty twitches before I had to pull Cassie’s mouth off me. She swallowed what was left in her mouth, then gave me a huge smile. “How’d that feel?”
“Amazing,” was all I could say between heavy breaths. I was still laying on her bed and closed my eyes again. My heart felt like it was going to tear itself apart from how fast it was going.
“You know, maybe we’ve been going about this all wrong.”
“...What do you mean, the seduction stuff?”
“Yeah. I think its not working because you’re too easy to manipulate.”
“No I’m not,” I wanted to sit up to emphasize my point, but my arms felt too heavy to lift.
“You need to start bringing Gail over here more regularly if you want our plan to have any chance of success.”
“What, so you can help?”
“Well you’re not getting anywhere fast by yourself. She made you walk home with blue balls, and in case you’ve forgotten, you’re supposed to be getting her worked up.”
“I’ve got all up until spring break to work with her. Today was just a warm-up.”
“Well, you know what’ll happen if you can’t get her.” Cassie emphasized her point by resting her hand on my inner thigh and moving it up and back towards my ass. My eyes were closed, but I knew she had that same shit-eating grin she always had plastered on her face whenever she thought about my ass.
I sluggishly swatted her hand away and said, “I know, but that’s not going to be a problem.” I didn’t want to let on, but I was a little worried from what Cassie was saying. Maybe it would be easier if I could convince Gail to spend more time at my house. “I’ll try to convince her...tomorrow.”
“Don’t fall asleep on my bed, knob, I’ve got to clean up this mess before it stains.” I had only registered about half of what she said, but I felt her pull me up onto my feet. I felt awake, so I didn’t know why she thought I was falling asleep, but she handed me a bundle of clothes and pushed me out of her room. I don’t even remember falling asleep in my bed.

Anonymous 13/09/02(Mon)23:43 No. 19628 ID: 5bfa68

Man SO GOOD! I hope Cassie takes his Cherry

changed my name lol Vaginal Spiders 13/09/03(Tue)01:52 No. 19629 ID: 724cc1

I feel like that last bit was rushed, I'll probably edit it some, and if I do, I'll just make a new .pdf. I wrote it last night and I was kinda tired, and I'm not too happy with how it turned out

Anonymous 13/09/03(Tue)15:29 No. 19637 ID: 2b3979

seemed fine to me, when did they make this deal though? don't get me wrong, i hope he loses and gets plowed, think i just missed a chapter somewhere, want to go read it

VAGINAL SPIDERS 13/09/03(Tue)16:25 No. 19638 ID: 724cc1

When I was editing and adding in stuff to make the story flow better, I added in their bet. It was originally to explain Cassie's motivation for a threesome, and to give Chase the impetus to help her achieve that goal. It starts on page 18 of the most current pdf with Chase saying he'll do something nice for Cassie if she does well on a report, then on the bottom of page 21 she gives him an ultimatum.

I added all of that in because it felt a little rushed and flimsy for Chase to suddenly just jump on board with Cassie wanting to bang Gail.

Anonymous 13/09/19(Thu)22:52 No. 19737 ID: 2b3979

bumping for justice

Anonymous 13/09/22(Sun)19:52 No. 19755 ID: 8f305c

Bumping, NEED MORE

Anonymous 13/10/08(Tue)01:22 No. 19874 ID: 15b81c

bumpy bump

NewAnon 13/10/08(Tue)14:32 No. 19885 ID: 50bdac

Well i've finally decided to produce a chapter. If everything goes well and i'm happy with the final product it should be up within the next 24 hours. Mr VaginalSpiders seems to have taken charge so i'll leave the chapter as something he can tear apart and use, depending on if it fits into any works he might be currently doing. Also, any help with continuity and criticisms would be appreciated

NewAnon 13/10/14(Mon)08:41 No. 19916 ID: 50bdac

Well. Here it is. Please note that this should probably be thought of as non canon, until it is assimilated into the PDF File, that appears to be floating around as I am in no way affiliated with this story, up until now. Criticisms are welcome and appreciated.

I awoke the next morning and thought back to last nights activities. It was clear to me now that Cassie was after my ass, and she was raising the stakes, and applying pressure. I didn't quite know how that made me feel, her touching me... there. Throwing the sheets away I slumped out of bed and stretched. I know the stakes, If I don't win over Gale, then, she can do whatever she wants to me. Touch me, lick me, even fuck me.
"Morning knob!" Cassie yelled as she burst through my door. Interrupting my train of thought.
"Oh!" She began smiling as she peeked a glance at my barely dressed body. "Good morning to you to knob."
My tired state caused me to lag a little. "What?" I mumbled before clicking immeadiatly.
"Someones been having happy thoughts" She giggled, kneeling down and planting a kiss on the strethed fabric of my underwear.
"You just need some fairy dust and you can fly!"
Cassie turned and laughed as she turned and left my room. My face red from embarrasment.
"Grrr Get Out!" I yelled, but she kept on laughing.

We walked to school together, wehere Cassie began to detail our plan.
"Right, it's tuesday now, so you've got 3 days to drive her insane. Tell her you're busy untill friday. Now, as we talked, just keep it ligth to begin with, some innocent kisses, a pinch on the bum, y'know amature stuff, then come day 2 you ramp it up...."
"Oh god, why is it so hard to concentrate..." My mind was still ablaze over the thought of failure. "Maybe it wouldn't be so bad. I mean Cassie seemed to enjoy last night, and she does seem really interested. She was even willing to let me take pictures..."
"Hey Chase, you listening to me?" I looked up and was met with a stern gaze.
Truthfully, i'd only heard every second word, but I got the point.
"Yeah, yeah. Pinch her ass I got it."
"You alright? You've been acting strange all morning?"
"Yeah, I'm fine. Please keep going."
"Right. As I was saying, on day 2, you take her into the bathrooms, and you tease her, finger her a little, make out some more maybe, but make sure you do it right before the bell. Are you following? Get her all worked up, then your forced to leave, it's perfect."
I nodded along, this actually did sound like a good plan. Trust Cassie to come up with it.
"And now here's where it get's good. You tell her to meet you in the stall, eat her out a little, get her all worked up, eat her out or something, by this time she should be ready for it, and tell her you'll be right with a condom. However when you leave i'll accidentally walk in. I'll walk into the stall, break the ice, and then you walk back in as well. Hopefully she'll leave the whole situation, confused and aroused. Then when she comes over that night, we'll explain everything to her. And if everything goes according to plan she'll be too horny to turn us down! Sound good?"
I was stunned. I had no idea Cassie was this, meticulous.
"My god. You are nothing if not thorough. But if you think it's crazy enough to work i'll trust you."

I met up with Gale later that day, and stealthily began enacting phase 1. Likewise the next day, Phase two went off without a hitch. I was getting excited, this thing might actually work. On the eve of thursday, I crept into Cassie's Room.
"You all set for tommorrow?"
"Yeah I think so. If Gale is as horny and frustrated as I am right now, I don't think we'll have much of a problem."
"Oh I can help you with that I suppose."
Cassie leaned forward and unzipped my pants, pulling them down to the ground. I just stood with my head tilted back while Cassie got to work.
She pulled my underwear to my knees and my erect cock sprung out. She licked her lips and took the head in her mouth, licking it. I groaned as she picked up the pace really getting into it, I felt her small hands grasp my ass for support, her fingers massaging my cheeks. I didn't even notice as her fingers slowly began amking their way towards my ass. I continuned moaning.
"Oh Cass...."
Her fingers found my ass, and slowly began to rub it, I let my guard down, loosing tension.
"Mhmm... That feels good." I mianed not realising my situation.
Then Cassie struk, she slipped her finger into me, then twisted her finger around, hitting my prostate. The motion sent a chill up my spine, I then realised what she had done.
"What? Cassie! UNghh... Noo..."
I didn't have time to finish the sentence before I came hard. I blasted a seemingly impossible amount of cum out, filling Cassies mouth and sending the rest all over her face in the most intense orgasm of my life. She slipped her finger out as I looked down upon her face, covered in cum, with that same shit eating smile.
"Oh come on, you can't deny that you enjoyed that!"
"... It's not that... It's just."
"Just what! What's bothering you! Chase, i'm only trying to do whats best for the both of us. I enjoy doing "It" so there's no reason for you not too!"
"It just makes me feel wierd! All right! I just don't know where I stand. It's all really confusing."
"Does it matter where you stand? Are you worried about being gay? Because you're not! You have a girlfriend whom you love and care for, and then there's me. You have everything you could ever want, so why does it matter. You are who you are. Stop worrying about labels and just get on with your life. That's what I realised after messing around with you, and it's helped me deal with everything. These past few weeks have been the best of my life, and I imagine your's too? So why not make it even better?"
I took a moment to take in everything Cassie had said. Undeniably there was a lot of truth in those words. But I still wasn't ready to make a decision.
"Your right. I won't promise you anything, but you've given me a lot to think about, thanks sis."
Cass smiled, a small tear in the conrner of her eye forming.
"Now with that said and done. You couldn't return the favour? Pretty please?"
Laughing I nodded, pulling down her pants, as her cock flopped out. I took the head in my mouth, hearing Cassie moan in pleasure. God she was cute. I mirrored her use of hands, as I slipped them around her, grasping her firm ass. My fingers massaging smoothly untill I found her hole, No coercing neccessary I applied some pressure and slipped right in. I fit two fingers in there, thrusting her ass, while sucking her off. She moaned in a higher pitch than usual.
"Ngh Chase... I'm about to blow.. You can stop sucking now..."
No. Not this time. I picked up my pace on both ends untill I felt her tense up, where upon I took as much of her into my mouth as possible as she came in my mouth. Filling it with her salty sweet cum. I swallowd, with a lound exaggerated gulp. It wasn't the nicest of liquids, but so long as it made her happy, I didn't care.
"....Chase" She said quietly.
I stood up and looked her in the eyes. Tears were forming. She embraced me with a kiss, before pushing me on the bed. We made out for a solid 5 minutes, with our pants still on the ground. Our dicks touching each other. Eventually we got hard again, we started grinding against one another, while jacking each other off, untill again we came. We got cleaned up as best we could and I kissed her once more, goodnight. I snuck out the door and waited for tommorrow. Step 3.

Anonymous 13/10/16(Wed)19:38 No. 19928 ID: 5f08c9

a lil to short but good on its own way

Anonymous 13/10/17(Thu)08:26 No. 19936 ID: dee78e

Loved it. Only criticism I have is the minor grammatical issues like using your instead of you're. But beyond that, please, please, please make more.

Anonymous 13/10/17(Thu)10:53 No. 19937 ID: 054fb4

Not the same, the previous authors put great detail into characters. You seem to merily skip forward as fast as possible.

NewAnon 13/10/17(Thu)11:24 No. 19938 ID: 50bdac

Thank you all for the feedback. Seems to be issues with character description, length and grammatical errors. All seem like an easy fix as by adding more detail I can increase length. I find I often cut out on lengthy description, as I personally prefer more action and find that not a lot happens in a long piece. But if it makes the chapter seem more succinct then sure. I was going to just post this here as a test, then edit it again and replace it with version 2.0 or something? Would anyone be objective to this approach?

Anonymous 13/10/21(Mon)21:42 No. 19972 ID: ee8f2c

go ahead, if theres something off anons will let you know

Anonymous 13/11/08(Fri)07:05 No. 20132 ID: ab2d9f


why not? Shade 13/11/10(Sun)04:24 No. 20151 ID: eea7f2

Well, since no one has done anything on this for awhile, I've decided to give it a shot. I've read this story many times, and read the original many years ago. I love it and hate to see it die... I wish someone else would, as writing it will ruin some of the pleasure of the story for me, but I don't see that happening. I'm going to start where the pdf left off, not from the newest version by an anon person. I will try to focus on both the sex AND character relations. I'm in favor of Cassie getting Chase's ass, and will happily take requests, depending on how i like them. Nothing is too freaky, though. So feel free to ask. Here goes nothing.

Lickit 13/11/11(Mon)03:10 No. 20158 ID: 49e734

I agree shade. I've read this several times too, but couldn't come up with any ideas myself, except of course that Chase should give himself to Cassie. After all, turnabout IS fair play. I say ....
GO FOR IT. would love to read it.

VAGINAL SPIDERS 13/11/11(Mon)07:24 No. 20159 ID: 724cc1

Didn't mean to drop the ball on this, but yeah, go ahead. If you write something I don't like I'll just make fun of you or something.

Anonymous 13/11/11(Mon)12:16 No. 20161 ID: 356a89

I'd like to see Gail get DP'ed and loving it.

Anonymous 13/11/21(Thu)07:41 No. 20311 ID: b5eec4

Please write, I'd love to read it.

Anonymous 13/11/28(Thu)19:48 No. 20353 ID: b5eec4

Can you please actually do this? The story can't end without Cassie getting Chase's ass.

Shade 13/12/08(Sun)22:49 No. 20433 ID: eea7f2

Don't worry guys i am gon na do this, its just taking me some time to put my ideas into words. But im working on it

Anonymous 13/12/13(Fri)04:03 No. 20460 ID: b5eec4

Hooray, I can't wait to read it

UPDATE Shade+ 13/12/21(Sat)10:04 No. 20506 ID: 4497fe

Okay so i have a general idea of where I'm taking the story, and have started trying to write, but this first time is taking awhile because i constantly double check myself and try to emulate the original style, i ask you all to just be patient I will come through on this.

Anonymous 13/12/22(Sun)11:45 No. 20511 ID: 388aec


more important to get it done right than to get it done fast, imo, don't rush if you don't want to

Anonymous 14/01/08(Wed)04:44 No. 20622 ID: b5eec4

just bumping

VAGINAL SPIDERS 14/01/25(Sat)19:59 No. 20912 ID: 724cc1

I don't mean to rush you, but hurry the fuck up, dude.

Derier 14/02/02(Sun)05:40 No. 21013 ID: 71e85a

Since it's been over a month and a half since the resurrection was continued I've written a short continuation of my own that picks up were it left off. I don't have a great deal of practice with this but if people like it I'll put together a longer update over the next couple of weeks:

The morning was tortuous for me and I’m sure for Gail too. We sat next to each other in one class where I made a point of rubbing my leg against hers almost constantly, feeling her breath hitch every time my leg made her skirt ride up her thigh. I had been getting steady relief from Cassie for my pent up sexual frustration but she didn’t have any outlet like that. I knew from experience how poor a substitute masturbation was for sex and I could tell that inside she was climbing the walls of her mind with frustration. At one point the teacher started going through an in-depth explanation on the board and I used the opportunity to let me hand drift under the table.

Her breath caught and I saw her knuckles whiten around her pen as my finger skimmed the bare skin of her thigh, lifting her skirt higher before they slid under the fabric. I was still inches away from her pussy but I could feel the heat emanating from her and slid my hand higher until it brushed her panties. Her eyes were wide, fixed straight ahead as her breath came in sharp, shallow pants and I saw her bite her lip as my knuckle pressed into her. She was soaking! My dick, which had already been hard from my teasing up till now became painfully erect, straining against the seam of my jeans as I felt her mons yield and part through the thin fabric. I rubbed her for a moment and blew out a slow breath, was that lace?

I worked against her panties for almost a full minute while the teacher droned on, his marker squeaking against the whiteboard then I edged them aside and rubbed her bare pussy. I was moments away from dipping a finger inside her when the teacher finished his sentence with a flourish and turned back around to face the class. It took all my focus to move my hand slowly, and naturally away and back on top of the desk. I met Gail's eyes with my own, they were hooded and lustful and I felt a pulse of expectant pleasure run from the my belly to the tip of my painfully hard cock at the promise that they held. If Cassie's plan didn't work today, it never would.

It was lunchtime before I saw Gail again. I had ducked out of my class as soon as the bell rang and raced to meet Cassie en-route to the bathrooms at the back of the school where Gail had all but demanded I meet her. Breathlessly I filled her in on what had happened and where I would be meeting Gail. I saw her cheeks flush and she licked her lips, grinning at me as she playfully thumped my shoulder.

'Look at you stud! Go get her. Just remember,'

'I know,' I grinned, 'This isn't the payoff. That comes tonight!'

'Damn straight.' She muttered, 'Don't mess this up.' I saw the flush in her face and heard the familiar husk in her voice. She was just as horny and hot for this as I was. I glanced around to make sure we weren't being watched and reached out and rubbed my palm on her crotch. Sure enough, she was rock hard, just like me. She smirked at me and I grinned back.

'I won't let you down.' I made to run and then hesitated, 'And Cassie...'


I stepped in and hugged her briefly, 'Thanks Sis... for everything.'

She had tensed but then returned my hug after a moment, 'You're welcome Knob.' She punched my shoulder again, 'Now go and work her up!'

Anonymous 14/02/04(Tue)08:24 No. 21042 ID: 2b9af0

That was excellent, I could imagine it happening very clearly.

Anonymous 14/03/31(Mon)22:24 No. 21464 ID: d31623

Oh gee, I missed the updates here? Wow, those were good updates. I'm hoping Cassie gets his ass.

KiryuEX 14/04/07(Mon)07:32 No. 21501 ID: 513f4e

Hey guys! If anyone is curious, I'm compiling this story here: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/KiryuEX/13198/My-Sister-is-Dickgirl

I'm not taking any credit, I just want to share this story with the world. I am giving credit to the writers and posters on this board.

It is a work in progress though.

Anonymous 14/04/08(Tue)17:42 No. 21505 ID: 423987

Hi, I'm new here, been surfing through stories for a few weeks, and I recently wrote some futa on male stuff. Didn't want to clog this thread up with my work though, so I'd appreciate it if someone could tell me where and how I should post it.

Anonymous 14/04/08(Tue)19:41 No. 21506 ID: 6fffdb

top of the page, don't go into any thread.

Anonymous 14/04/08(Tue)20:22 No. 21509 ID: 423987

Ok, cheers, putting it up in a couple of hours.

VAGINAL SPIDERS 14/04/09(Wed)07:12 No. 21512 ID: 58a838

Sorry about dropping the ball on the story, but between work, and my personal life, it's been hard to find the time or the energy to try to work on this.

Thanks for keeping this going after me. Whenever I find the motivation I'll make sure to pick up where you guys left off. My only concern is the pacing felt kinda rushed, and if its cool with you guys, I'd prefer to expand on the intervening period

I'm very interested to know what where the edits you made to the story. Not trying to be an ass about it, I'm just curious.

VAGINAL+SPIDERS 14/04/09(Wed)07:14 No. 21513 ID: 58a838

Also, nice find on the Christian Alan thing. How'd you track that down? I had been searching for the original for a while when I started compiling and editing this story, but I could never find anything

KiryuEX 14/04/09(Wed)11:05 No. 21518 ID: 19d82d


I didn't make any edits to the story itself, just errors in the text (i.e. spelling, punctuation, paragraphs, etc.). Sorry if I didn't make that clear. I orginally saved this page and copy/pasted my own txt file for personal use (I never downloaded any of the pdf files).

As for Christian Alan, I typed a sentence from Part 3 in quotes into Google and found his asstr.org site.

pelleg 14/04/10(Thu)09:35 No. 21526 ID: f9e579

I have some ideas I'm excited about, enough for at least 3 additional decent sized posts. I'm pretty busy for the next two weeks, but if nothing's been added by then, I'll try my hand at continuing the story, around the end of April.

KiryuEX 14/05/03(Sat)21:40 No. 21676 ID: 8303ab

I've posted this story again here:
in an attempt to keep this story from dying.

Anonymous 14/08/18(Mon)18:25 No. 22311 ID: 65943f

anyone continuing?

VAGINAL SPIDERS 14/08/19(Tue)06:00 No. 22315 ID: 58a838

I'd love to continue where I left off, but I just started a new job (again), so it'll take me a while to settle in

NewAnon 14/08/20(Wed)19:52 No. 22324 ID: e7698c

Well, I've had a general plot planned out or another chapter, which I've begun work on now since interest seems to be kicking up again. Hopefully I can get that out to you guys soon.

Anonymous 14/09/03(Wed)09:35 No. 22376 ID: 47e8a3



NewAnon 14/09/03(Wed)15:13 No. 22377 ID: 7952db

Well, I just finished this. It's really late here so I'm going to sleep. I did a quick check for grammar and everything seems in order, though I likely missed a ton. Sorry.

In any case, let me know what you think.

I began walking towards the bathroom stalls, the ones near the back of the school, just far enough away from any prying eyes. Thankfully Cassie was waiting close by, as we had agreed, so our exchange could be quick. As I walked I nervously glanced over my shoulder. The last thing I wanted was to be seen. My heart was pounding in my chest as I made my approach; the toilet doors were there, male and female, side by side. I took one final cautious glance at my surroundings before I opened the door to the females toilets, I couldn't let anyone see me coming in here after all.

The door closed behind me with an eerie creak as I looked down the long row of open bathroom stalls. Of the dozen that were there only one was closed. I took a deep breath, walking further down into the female lavatory, my footsteps echoing loudly in the empty room. When I reached the end of the stalls I slowly raised my trembling hand. All I had to do was knock, though in my current state I just placed it against the door and it rattled against it for me. Please be in there, please be in there I thought

“U-uh… Occupied. Sorry.” A familiar voice called. I let out a sigh of relief as I recognised it to be Gale.

“Oh thank god it’s you.” I said out loud, the words leaving my mouth in one conjoined mess.

“Chase?!” She asked excitedly from within the stall. She didn’t even wait for an answer before I heard her fingers fumbling with the lock on the other side of the door. The lock quickly swung from the red occupied sign to the green available one and seconds later the door flung open, revealing the red flustered face of my girlfriend, Gale. I looked over her panting frame and couldn’t help but notice the thin coating of vaginal lubricant that dripped from her fingers. Before I had chance to comment she grabbed me from outside the stall, pushing the door shut behind us, a few small magnets keeping it conveniently closed. After all, for Cassie and I’s plan to work it needed to remain unlocked.

“Woah, Gale!” I muttered, shocked by her aggressive behaviour. She smiled seductively at my tone as she grasped at the waistline of her skirt, pushing it to the ground, taking her panties with it. Her hands quickly slid down her top too, undoing the buttons that held it together with rapid vigour. Soon she stood in just her bra, though that too soon came unclipped and fell gracefully to the ground. My penis was straining in my pants, its outline visible to even those with poor sight.

“Woah… Gale.” I repeated again, with a lot more enthusiasm.

“Mhmm… Fuck Chase hurry up and take those pants off, you’re killing me!” She moaned.

I wasn’t one to keep her waiting, especially in this kind of condition. Besides, I was in no position to turn her down. I quickly fumbled at the zipper with my trembling hands, eventually finding it and giving it a tug, next came the button and before long I found myself pushed back against the toilet seat with my pants and underwear around my ankles. I looked up at Gale’s face, her eyes locked in on my erect shaft. Fuck I was hard. Her gaze drifted slowly up to mine, a wicked smile that dropped with seduction.

“Well… Hurry up and put it on already!” She moaned, her face quickly turning from one of needy pleasure to one of frustration. My heart began to pound at my chest, “this is all part of the plan” I thought to myself, though I knew that Gale wasn’t going to like what I had to say. I quickly grabbed my wallet from my pants in an attempt to make the act believable.

“Uh… Shit… I uh… I don’t think I have one!” I said, as I flipped through my wallet, knowing full well there was nothing there.

“What the hell do you mean?! How could you forget! Where the hell are we going to get a condom now?” She yelled, though still in a hushed tone.

“I… I don’t know… I might have one in my locker, do you think you can wait that long?” I asked, as I began to pick up my pants. My heart was beating even faster now, I knew that in just a few short minutes Gale would know Cassie’s secret; our secret. All I had to do was leave just as soon as Gale said yes… Any second now… Gale?

I looked up at Gale and she looked down at me. Something told me that my answer wasn’t good enough for her. She inhaled deeply, blowing the air back out through her flaring nostrils. She groaned loudly, before finally speaking again.

“Nope. I can’t wait dammit! Switch positions with me!” She barked in a ton of desperation. I quickly jumped to my feet, wiggling around in the small cubicle as she made for the shut toilet seat. Her body rubbed up against mine in the process which made my cock twitch even more in my pants. Before I had time to ask any question she looked up at me with a smile, spreading her legs wide to give me a view of her glistening wet pussy. Damn did it look good. I swallowed loudly as she outstretched her arm and hand, flicking her pointing finger downwards, telling me to take a knee though I was happy to oblige. I placed my hands on her thighs, gently lowering my head towards her dripping snatch. I opened my mouth wide, placing my lips around her groin, gently teasing her folds with my tongue while she moaned above me. Each time I teased her with my tongue her legs spasmed, squeezing my head like a clamp, though the pressure was a welcome feeling; a sign of a good job. Within a few mintues she shot her hands down, clinging them to my head as she held me in close. Her cries were become shorter and sharper, a tell tale sign for what I knew was coming.

“Mhmm…. Chase! Almost… There!” she squealed between breaths as my tongue swirled around her insides, teasing her clit as she approached orgasm, something she’d been denied for so long. As her breathing reached fever pitch a loud squeak rung throughout the bathroom and then Gale fell silent. I braced myself for her orgasm, though strangely nothing happened. I pulled my mouth from her snatch and freed my head from her grasp, looking up at her bright red face, frozen with confusion. It’s only then that I realise what had happened. I turn around slowly as the figure that stood behind us came into view. All I could think was the word shit, repeated over and over again in my mind. How could I forget, the most crucial part of the plan. Well, it was too late to change it now, because behind us with a confused look of her own my Cassie, her panties and shorts around her ankles and her cock in hand.

I was frozen in between the two of them, having no real idea of what to say. I stared up at Cassie and she looked back at me, a look of anger and confusion laid deep in her eyes. I could just tell what she was thinking. “WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU STILL DOING HERE?” though she would never dare say it aloud. Though as she glanced up at Gale, preparing herself to speak, she couldn’t help but take a peek at her naked features. Her firm breasts, her soaking wet pussy. It was starting to affect her and before she knew it she found her cock starting to pule in her hand. It began to harden, tensing slowly and pushing against her skin as she suddenly realised what was going on.

“Aghhh! No!” She shouted, pulling her hand away in an attempt to stop her erection, though it was too late. Her penis stood tall and proud at a modest 5 inches, though Cassie was quick to react. She bent down and grabbed her pants, pulling them up and over her erection, though the bulge was still noticeable.

“I-I’m sorry…” She began yelling. I was unsure of whether this was a ploy or my sister was actually scared. This entire plan was hers after all, she seemed so confident and in control, it never occurred to me how much she was putting on the line. If Gale wasn’t accepting of her, then she could ruin her life. After a few bouts of sorry Gale finally spoke up, pulling herself back in from her confusion.

“Cassie…? You… You’re a…? You have a penis!” She exclaimed, the tone of her voice came as a shock to both Cassie and I. It wasn’t a tone of repulsion, or even anger. It was one of curiosity, interest and most surprisingly a tone of lust.

“Yeah… It’s a rare birth defect.” She said shyly. I looked between the two women, trying my best to gauge their reactions. Cassie was still playing shy and innocent, which seemed to working in our favour.

“But then… That means the dick-girl porn that you sent. What was that supposed to be, some way to break the ice? Were you trying to tell me something?” Gale spoke, looking to Cassie for answers, though she turned away shyly, I guess it was time for me to step in.

“Look Gale… That was, originally just a joke that Cassie played. She hasn’t told anyone about her condition, let alone her friends. It’s a secret that only out family shares. I hope that we can trust you enough to keep it a secret too?” As I finished my sentence I thought back upon it, realising how well things were going considering. Just a few more good ones like that, and maybe she’d understand…

“Yes! Of course, I’ll keep my mouth shut. I won’t tell I soul, I care for you too much, both of you.”

“Thank you Gale!” Cassie said, before taking the ballsy move and barging right past me. She embraced Gale in a hug, on that lead to a bright red blush forming across her cheeks. Of course I hadn’t forgotten that gale was kind of turned on by the dickgirl porn, something I hoped that we could use to our advantage. While Cassie was still wrapped around Gale’s naked body I decided I should move things along and jump right into the deep end.

“Cassie’s in an awkward position Gale…” I began speaking, hoping to god this would work. “There aren’t many guys who would be interested in her if the… knew her secret and at the same time she can get kind of frustrated, sexually. It’s been tough.”

By this time Cassie had pulled herself from Gale and was now standing back beside me. I could see the effect my words were having on Gale as the pieces slowly fell into place one by one. For some reason a burst of adrenaline just came over me, like a last ditch, hail mary in an attempt to quell Gales Doubts. I took my right hand and gently slid it down the waistband of Cassie’s shorts and slowly slipped it into her panties, grasping her still rock hard erection. I almost laughed as I felt it. And she calls me the perv.

I work my fingers around her head, gently rubbing it, teasing her ever so slightly as she shudders in pleasure beside me. Nervously I take a glance at Gale and much to my surprise she isn’t angry! Her face was still blushed bright red, though ever so slightly I could her tooth emerge from her mouth, biting softly on her lower lip. Holy crap was she actually getting more turned on?! I decided to test my luck. Using my free hand I grasped the back of Cassie’s pants and gave them a gentle tuck, pulling them over her shapely ass and tumbling down onto the bottom of the bathroom floor. Gale’s eyes flew open and he hand instinctively twitched, positioning itself closer to her vagina. She wanted to touch herself, I could tell. Her lip was trembling, her whole body shaking as some sort of perverted fantasy played out before her eyes, though she still held on. That was, until Cassie started moaning. My devilish sister decided to turn things up a notch, throwing her head back into the air as a small series of moans began to escape her lips, driving both me and Gale crazy until finally Gale caved. She slid her hand into her pussy which at that stage was literally dripping with need. The wet noises she made when her fingers slid in and out were so loud I could barely hear Cassie’s moans. However just as things were getting interesting I felt a wrist clamp down on my hand. I looked down, tracing the hand back until I was looking at Cassie.

“Not here.” She said, plainly and simply. My mouth was agape. I couldn’t believe that she wanted to wait, though, who was I to stop her. She wanted more than just a hand job from me after all; she had a bigger prize in mind. As the two of us stopped our little show Gale was pulled out of her trance to, her fingers falling limply from her snatch as she was denied orgasm yet again.

“Gale…. I hope you...” I began speaking; attempting to form an apology in my head, though Gale was quick to interject.

“Holy shit, that was so fucking hot!” She squealed in delight. I looked at Cass to my right and we both smiled at each other. And while I couldn’t account for her, my heart just did a little summersault.

“So… This was you’re little ploy to get me involved was it?” Gale asked outright. She was still breathing heavily and each word came out after a short delay. Cassie smiled mischievously.

“More or less. We weren’t sure how you’d take it.” She said.

“Well… It’s certainly a shock, though… Damn. I’m too aroused. Fuck I need to get off!” Gale moaned.

“Then I have a proposition for you. Our parents are out this evening… In fact they left this morning. Why don’t you come over this even to… talk things over.” She replied slyly. Gale thought about things for a moment, before a smile of her own spread across her face.

“Not good enough.” She replied. “Why don’t we just leave school right now?” She said smugly, as Cassie giggled to herself.

“I like the way you think.”

BUMP! FUCKING HORNY 14/09/07(Sun)05:51 No. 22395 ID: c587c0

FUUUUUUCK! SOMEONE UPDATE THIS! Oh fucking christ, I have the biggest, bluest balls right now!

NewAnon 14/09/07(Sun)07:21 No. 22396 ID: e8d32f


I did have a plan for the events that follow. I was waiting to see if my contribution was well enough received first, haha. So you reckon it's good enough to go on?

BUMP! HORNY 14/09/07(Sun)22:04 No. 22398 ID: c587c0

It's good. It meshes well with the story but as for overall quality, we need more to properly judge.

For now, you are doing a fine job.

BUMP! Anonymous 14/09/10(Wed)02:09 No. 22409 ID: c587c0

Bump to keep this on top page. Needs more attention.

Anonymous 14/09/10(Wed)12:51 No. 22411 ID: 82266d

So glad I saw this had been continued. Carry on good sir.

NewAnon 14/09/14(Sun)04:09 No. 22424 ID: fc5020

Thanks for all the kind words. I'll be sure to get on the next part!

Anonymous 14/09/15(Mon)11:12 No. 22431 ID: def664

Holy. Fucking. HELL!

It's been over 2 years Since I last read this. I had no idea someone was still writing chapters for it!

I am dying to read the next chapter. Please for the love of GOD finish this!

NewAnon 14/09/15(Mon)16:34 No. 22433 ID: 8c80f2


It's been a group effort between several people, though there's been a large gap between the latest entry and the one before that.

Not sure if it's possible to "finish" this kind of story, haha. Though, there is a definite goal that I imagine a lot of people are routing for. More on that in the next chapter :)

Anonymous 14/09/16(Tue)07:48 No. 22441 ID: def664


I see. Well I definitely can't wait fior the Next chapter. I'm looking forward to reading what yiu guys come up with next

NewAnon 14/09/18(Thu)14:14 No. 22456 ID: 9269d6



Anonymous 14/09/22(Mon)19:44 No. 22479 ID: 3fac47

Please.... Hurry.....

This is fucking epic.

Anonymous 14/09/28(Sun)11:47 No. 22501 ID: def664

Bumpity wumpity

Anonymous 14/10/04(Sat)13:45 No. 22528 ID: def664


NewAnon 14/10/04(Sat)13:47 No. 22529 ID: 4028aa

Haha, I will write another piece, it's just a matter of me finding the time. I have some other writing obligations to fulfil first. I have a plan in place for the next chapter, so if someone wants to take over they're more than welcome, I'd be happy to bounce ideas around.

Anonymous 14/10/09(Thu)01:37 No. 22548 ID: def664

Damn it you people! Keep this shit on the front page!

Anonymous 14/10/14(Tue)18:36 No. 22569 ID: def664

How much longer do we have to wait?

Anonymous 14/10/18(Sat)13:33 No. 22580 ID: def664


Anonymous 14/10/19(Sun)21:22 No. 22584 ID: 4549bd



Anonymous 14/10/21(Tue)17:06 No. 22587 ID: bfcbce

that's all folks!

Anonymous 14/10/23(Thu)23:39 No. 22604 ID: def664

$10 says next chapter won't even have a sex scene

newanon 14/10/24(Fri)02:39 No. 22605 ID: 34b875

It's almost like you're daring me not to include any sex, haha. Seriously though, I haven't even started on the chapter. I've been busy with other things I'm afraid. All I can say is that I have a plan in place, but that's about it. I'm just going to have to ask for a little patience.

Anonymous 14/10/24(Fri)11:14 No. 22607 ID: def664


This is better than nothing. Thanks for keeping us updated.

Anonymous 14/10/27(Mon)03:19 No. 22621 ID: def664

bumping for justice!

Meh DickgirlFan 14/10/27(Mon)17:47 No. 22624 ID: 2f1d92

Well, if you are truly busy and need help to finish the story, I would love to give a go at writing this, and would love to see this continue on far into the future and as it is, and frankly, it hasn't been updated nearly consistently enough. I am in college and only have so much time, but I have a few nights a week I'm not doing anything. We could bounce ideas of each other or set up a main plot, where we wanna see the chapters start and end, what we want them to include, then as you are working on the next chapter I could be working on the chapter after that, then I would simply adjust mine to match any specific details of yours that would conflict with it, and we'd have chapters out at a faster rate, maybe two within a month or so.

Anonymous 14/10/28(Tue)03:07 No. 22627 ID: 988526

The story itself is written by a group of writers. Really all you have to do is write another chapter. As for an ending, again, written by group so an ending is not needed.

Just make your own chapter, it does not have to be "canon." Just dont be shit.

cooperation DickgirlFan 14/10/28(Tue)06:49 No. 22629 ID: 2f1d92

Well yes but seeing as he has an idea for the chapter and is still planning to be around and working on it, my writing a chapter would not only disrespect him but disrupt his own work when, while working together, we could easily pump out more, better chapters at an increased pace

Anonymous 14/10/28(Tue)13:29 No. 22637 ID: cb71d6


I agree with this.I believe you two working together would achieve a greater story than if you two were to just do your Own thing. Hopefully this is how things will go from now on

Anonymous 14/10/29(Wed)16:32 No. 22647 ID: 0ffa9f

Bump bump, fap fap, wait wait.

Anonymous 14/10/30(Thu)11:15 No. 22658 ID: def664

I hate doing this

Monday DickgirlFan 14/10/31(Fri)01:17 No. 22662 ID: 32b365

Okay, NewAnon, I'm giving you until Monday to respond to my post or I'm going to go ahead and attempt to start on a new chapter. I would much prefer to write with you rather than against you, but the story must go on.

Anonymous 14/10/31(Fri)05:07 No. 22663 ID: 97a50f

Oh my god
Let this die!

I read this story here years ago. It's good yes but not exactly a NYT bestseller. Authors gone and its hard to emulate.

Let it die.

Anonymous 14/10/31(Fri)06:51 No. 22665 ID: 0ffa9f

Nooooo,it cannot die until Gail is DP'ed and Chase is buttfucked.. It has been foretold!

DickgirlFan 14/10/31(Fri)07:30 No. 22667 ID: 2f1d92

Dude seriously? This is like one of the best erotic stories I've ever read, and thats pretty close to thousands of stories, and with a little polishing it could be the best without a doubt. I refuse to let this story which I've been rereading for years die before it is as complete as it can reasonably be. I owe it to the characters and all the people this story has connected to do my best to assure a proper end.

newanon 14/10/31(Fri)16:59 No. 22672 ID: ebd729

Seems like I've missed a bit, haha. I'm pretty busy personally, I've got some other writing commitments to finish up to be honest, but if you want to pick it up go for it! I'd be more than happy to bounce ideas off of, so go for it. I'll try and respond to them as best I can.

Email DickgirlFan 14/11/01(Sat)19:02 No. 22692 ID: c50977

Well here is my email renzy2@yahoo.com so if you would you said you had a plan somewhat laid out for the next chapter, if you don't mind that I write it instead I would love for you to send your plan to me and I can get started almost immediately.

newanon 14/11/02(Sun)09:31 No. 22700 ID: 408c22

Well I've sent you a little type up, best of luck!

Anonymous 14/11/07(Fri)00:14 No. 22746 ID: def664

So how much longer now?

DickgirlFan 14/11/07(Fri)01:13 No. 22747 ID: 18df3a

I've started writing off of newanon's plans, so it should possibly be roughly done by sunday night. I will have him edit it first so it may not be exactly then, however of the actual work as of now its about anywhere from 1/4 to 1/3 of the way done.

Anonymous 14/11/10(Mon)00:20 No. 22769 ID: def664


Please post the next chapter today!

Late DickgirlFan 14/11/10(Mon)11:33 No. 22773 ID: 2f1d92

Hey all I apologize for the delay, a ton of shit came up this weekend I haven't had time to write at all. I tried to rush through it in an hour or so but it just didn't feel right so I had to cut it, and take my time or it won't be good.

What I have DickgirlFan 14/11/12(Wed)05:41 No. 22785 ID: 2f1d92

Notes: This isn't a full chapter or edited yet, I will be adding more to it but its taking a while and I ended up writing a lot more than I thought I would, so, here it is.

I couldn’t believe our plan was going so well. As the three of us redressed and calmed ourselves slightly so as not to be completely obvious if we were seen, my mind tried to wrap itself around how eagerly Gail seemed to be about this crazy idea. Perhaps Cassie was a better manipulator then she knew, or maybe Gail was just way more open minded then I had expected. Cassie was the first to poke her head out of the bathroom door; she glanced back and forth before waving us forward with a nervous smile, her cheeks slightly red with a faint blush, and both mine and Gail’s faces were the same. Our hearts pounded in our chests as we crept along the abandoned hallways in the unused part of the school. We decided to leave out towards the football stadium, there was a line of trees behind it and plenty of cover to that point, and once we made it beyond there we would be home free, literally. We quickly ducked out the exit and made our way stealthily all the way to that tree line before standing full upright and looking at each other, all our faces were so eager and we couldn’t help but fidget at how uncomfortable our lower halves were. As we turned and began to head back to mine and Cassie’s home, a thought flickered through my mind. Since the plan was going so well, I wouldn’t have to take Gail’s place and Cassie’s cock would steer clear of my ass. For some reason, though wasn’t as huge of a relief as it should have been, and was only slightly bitter, but I was too horny to care at that point.

We made it back to the house without too much problems, but the thought of how naughty the whole thing was only added to our nervous excitement. By the time we made it in the door, checking to be sure that mine and Cassie’s parents weren’t there still, both I and Cassie had large obvious bulges straining against our pants, and the fact that hers was larger was actually a bit embarrassing to me. And by the way Gail was biting her lip, whimpering, and fidgeting back and forth, I had no doubt she was absolutely drenched between her legs, and I couldn’t wait to feel for myself. We had for some reason stopped in our living room, and between how eager and how nervous I, and I’m assuming the girls, were we stood, staring back and forth between each other in awkward silence.

Finally, with a grunt of impatience, Cassie pulls her shirt and bra straight up and over her head in one motion, leaving her rather large, full breasts bare and causing them to bounce lightly. Her hands then immediately shoot down to fumble with her pants, and after a brief moment, she lets them fall to the ground with a sigh of relief as her hard, long girly cock is freed from her restricting pants. She gives a nervous grin as she glances between Gail and me.

“W-well…. Someone had to start us off… Are we gonna do this or not?” Gail gives a whine of need at the sight of Cassie’s futa cock, the one that had been floating around the back of her mind and filling the naughtiest of her dreams ever since that video Cassie had Chase bring her unawares. Gail clenches her knees together, a hand slides down under her skirt as she immediately begins to play with her pussy which at this point I imagine felt neglected and in terrible need. Gail walks a step or two forward, falling to her knees in front of Cassie, her lips inches from my sister’s cock. She places a hand on Cassie’s thigh, her soft warm breath hits Cassie’s cock as she moans from her own hand, and she looks up at Cassie with big, wanting eyes.

“I… I wan uhhn….May I? P-aaaa-please?” Gail whispers across Cassie’s cock, her lips parted slightly, her hand creeping closer towards Cassie’s base. Cassie clenches her hands, bites her lip, but finally she takes her right hand and places it in Gail’s hair at the back of her head, then her left takes Gail’s hand from her thigh and wraps it around the smooth, soft, wide base of her cock, giving Gail’s hand a light squeeze. Cassie groans even from that contact, having never felt another girl’s hand down there, or anything else for that matter, and they were much softer than Chase’s.

Cassie then, using both her hands, positions her tip against Gail’s lips, already a drop of pre-cum smears onto them, causing Gail to instinctively lick her lips, and she delights at the somewhat sweet taste. Then, together, Cassie pushes Gail’s head forward just as Gail goes to suck the delectable cock into her mouth, causing Gail to go much further than intended, her lips hitting their hand wrapped around Cassie’s base, Cassie’s tip almost at her throat. They both moan loudly, Gail’s vibrating her mouth around Cassie, who groans and squeezes Gail’s hand onto her base hard, the sudden intense pleasure almost driving her to an orgasm then and there.

“You two aren’t planning to keep the fun to yourselves?” I ask as I finish stripping of my own clothes, my own cock just as hard and eager as Cassie’s. Though, part of the reason for the blush on my face is because I remembered that Cassie is indeed bigger than I. I’m getting shown up to my girlfriend by my own sister. But that thought barely had any effect at that moment, because I had a shit eating grin at the stunning sight before me. I had my admittedly sexy, voluptuous sister with her boobs bouncing free as my almost as sexy girlfriend plays with herself and sucks on my sister’s girl cock. I walk over next to them, slightly behind Gail to the left, looking down at their preoccupied hands.

“What… no fun for me? Oh, wait… I know.” I chuckled as I knelt down beside them both, groping Cassie’s boob and giving her nipple a quick tug as I lower myself, but she was too preoccupied with Gail sucking her cock like it was a delicious popsicle, not that I could blame her. I almost even felt jealous, almost. I leaned forward, lifting Gail’s shirt and bra up just enough to bare her lovely, perky breasts and her little pink erect nipples. I lean forward to suck on her left one, easily pulling her whole breast between my lips, tongue teasing her nipple with flicks and swirls.
I also pull her hand, currently going to town on her pussy and clit, up and out of her skirt and panties even as she protests and tries to pull her hand back. I give her a light nip on the breasts, instead wrapping her soft wonderful hand around my cock, to keep her busy. She hesitates, then slowly begins to stroke me, her fingers covered with her slick juices from moments before, which lubed me up quite nicely. While she does that, I place a hand on either side of the waistband of her skirt, pulling it and her panties down in one go, all the way down to her knees, which makes her shiver and groan more around Cassie’s cock, which in turn makes Cassie jerk slightly and groan. I grin to myself around Gail’s soft tit, loving that I could make a chain reaction of pleasure between them.

I take this cue and slide my left hand slowly down Gail’s smooth stomach, then down each thigh once, teasing her, before finally I bring my hand down to her core and plunge a long finger inside, curling it up into her G-spot with ease. This causes her to buck/jerk slightly and moan load, her mouth slamming down to nearly take Cassie into her throat yet again, Cassie gasps loud and leans her head back from ecstasy.

“Oh fucking hell…. Chase… do that again… Gail… your mouth feels amazing. I… I may not last long.” At this point Cassie begins to thrust into Gail’s mouth, her cock pulsing ever so slightly, a drizzle of pre-cum now begins to slip out of her tip, coating Gail’s tongue. Gail’s eyes look up at Cassie eagerly, her moans from my hand almost continuous as I relentlessly flick and curl into her G-spot. Gail lifts her hand off of Cassie’s base, Cassie moving her hand to the back of Gail’s head, as she places her hand back on Cassie’s thigh, Gail begins to bob her head back and forth quickly, each time going all the way back down to where their hands had been, timing her mouth movements to Cassie’s thrusts but moving even faster.

Upon hearing Cassie’s voice and the thinly veiled struggle within it, as well as feeling Gail’s drenched, hot pussy begin to contract around my finger, I know I’m about to get a two for one orgasm. I chuckle with delight, pulling my mouth off of Gail’s boob and bringing it up to her ear to whisper teasingly.

“You want my sister’s cum in your mouth? Tastes good huh? I’d sure love to see it.” Without giving her a chance to answer or react, I slip another finger into her wet pussy, stretching the walls a bit as they swirl and flick and thrust into her like mad. I even slide my right hand down her back, even down over her small but plump ass. My fingers inside her begin to make her go crazy, as she moans and groans endlessly on Cassie, sucking faster and faster, her lips like a vice. Cassie keeps gasping from each of Gail’s movements, her cock pulsing more and more as she tries to hold back the flood of cum filling it.

I grin evilly, thinking to myself that Cassie isn’t the only devious one in the family, I give Gail’s ass a slap, positioning my hand perfectly, then without warning I slide my middle finger between her cheeks, pressing it firmly against her tight little ass hole, causing her eyes to go wide and buck forward onto my fingers with what sounds like a muffled cry, the buck causing her to orgasm instantly, her body spasming, tightening hard around my fingers as they become covered in juices, her mouth slamming all the way down onto Cassie’s base, shoving her swollen head into Gail’s tight throat.

Cassie also instantly gives off a cry of pleasure, her hands clenching hard in Gail’s hair, her hips trying to buck as her tip explodes with shot after shot of hot, thick, ropes of cum, straight into Gail’s throat. Gail gags slightly at first, but refuses to move her head and manages to take all of Cassie’s load, which I could tell was a big one. As both of their bodies finally calm down, and all hands are removed from each other’s’ bodies, Cassie slowly pulls her hips back, her still mostly hard cock sliding out of Gail’s lips who almost seems wistful without it. As Cassie pulls all the way out, a bit of her left over cum drips onto the floor between the girls, and she drops onto her knees, leaning into Gail.

Cassie and Gail stay there for a moment, before Cassie whispers something in Gail’s ear I can’t quite make out. Right as I open my mouth to speak, Gail turns and tackles me, kissing me deeply and eagerly. I only take a brief moment before I kiss her back just as passionately. Its only as I open my mouth to tongue kiss her, and realize I’m tasting Cassie’s sperm, that I know what’s going on too late. Before I can react Gail pushes a decent amount of Cassie’s cum as far into my mouth as she can, causing me to cough and sputter as she sits back up with a giggle, her face bright red in a blush but her eyes gleaming.

“That’s what you get knob.” Cassie turns to face me, kneeling next to Gail, putting an arm around her shoulder. “Though I gotta say, you have great taste in women.” At this both she and Gail laugh some more.

“Yeah Chase… that’s what you get! For not warning me, and….” Gail blushes a bit and looks to the side. “For not doing it all the way…. Dammit. Teasing me isn’t nice.”

Anonymous 14/11/12(Wed)09:06 No. 22786 ID: 988526

I hardon says you did well enough. Like to see the finish, edited chapter.

Anonymous 14/11/15(Sat)05:10 No. 22797 ID: def664

I cant wait to "read" more of this. Hopefully writing/editing the next chaptet won't interfere with your life.

Anonymous 14/11/16(Sun)12:29 No. 22799 ID: f5b1c2

Switches from past tense to present tense a few paragraphs in.

Silence 14/11/16(Sun)21:12 No. 22801 ID: a620b0

Yeah, the switch from past to present tense is kind of weird. Along with the some of the dialogue (and a slew of other things I noticed), but like you said you're still editing...

DickgirlFan 14/11/18(Tue)18:34 No. 22814 ID: 631755

Yeah, I'm working on that, sorry for the delay also. It was just a bit hard because this is supposed to be like a first person retelling of a past event but it often uses present tense, as well as past tense can get awkward in some scenarios. As for any other weirdness I suppose it may be due to the fact that while this is Chase's story I don't want to ignore the thoughts and character developments for Cassie and Gail.

Anonymous 14/11/20(Thu)05:54 No. 22830 ID: def664


I Don't want to sound like a dick. But when's the next chapter?

Anonymous 14/11/23(Sun)06:40 No. 22864 ID: def664

*sigh* bumping

Anonymous 14/11/30(Sun)13:51 No. 22888 ID: def664

Okay it's dead. I'm done bumping this shit

Finals DickgirlFan 14/12/02(Tue)09:29 No. 22893 ID: 2f1d92

Sorry college has been kicking my butt and then thanksgiving break came up and I've had literally no down time between studying and seeing family and packing unpacking and repeat. I'm working on the next chapter but without help I need to ask for patience. Come Christmas break in three weeks if i haven't gotten it out I'll make sure to do a double update. Promise.

EDITED CHAPTER: NOT NEW DickgirlFan 14/12/03(Wed)19:06 No. 22898 ID: 59ac93

Note: I think I fixed the perspective errors. If you see anything wrong please let me know I'll fix it. Wanted to put this out and say I've started on the next chapter. I don't have an outline for this one so much but sex will ensue, promise. ;)
I couldn’t believe our plan was going so well. As the three of us redressed and calmed ourselves slightly so as not to be completely obvious if we were seen, my mind tried to wrap itself around how eagerly Gail seemed to be about this crazy idea. Perhaps Cassie was a better manipulator then she knew, or maybe Gail was just way more open minded then I had expected. Cassie was the first to poke her head out of the bathroom door; she glanced back and forth before waving us forward with a nervous smile, her cheeks slightly red with a faint blush, and both mine and Gail’s faces were the same. Our hearts pounded in our chests as we crept along the abandoned hallways in the unused part of the school. We decided to leave out towards the football stadium, there was a line of trees behind it and plenty of cover to that point, and once we made it beyond there we would be home free, literally. We quickly ducked out the exit and made our way stealthily all the way to that tree line before standing full upright and looking at each other, all our faces were so eager and we couldn’t help but fidget at how uncomfortable our lower halves were. As we turned and began to head back to mine and Cassie’s home, a thought flickered through my mind. Since the plan was going so well, I wouldn’t have to take Gail’s place and Cassie’s cock would steer clear of my ass. For some reason though, it wasn’t as huge of a relief as it should have been, and was only slightly bitter, but I was too horny to care at that point.
We made it back to the house without too many problems, but thinking of how naughty the whole thing was only added to our nervous excitement. By the time we made it in the door, checking to be sure that mine and Cassie’s parents still weren’t there, both I and Cassie had large obvious bulges straining against our pants, and the fact that hers was larger was actually a bit embarrassing to me. And by the way Gail was biting her lip, whimpering, and fidgeting back and forth, I had no doubt she was absolutely drenched between her legs, and I couldn’t wait to feel for myself. We for some reason stopped in our living room, and between how eager and how nervous I, and I’m assuming the girls, were, we stood, staring back and forth between each other in awkward silence.
Finally, with a grunt of impatience, Cassie pulled her shirt and bra straight up and over her head in one motion, leaving her rather large, full breasts bare and causing them to bounce lightly. Her hands then immediately shoot down to fumble with her pants, and after a brief moment, she let them fall to the ground with a sigh of relief as her hard, long girly cock was freed from her restricting pants. She gave a nervous grin as she glanced between Gail and me.
“W-well…. Someone had to start us off… Are we gonna do this or not?” Gail gave a whine of need at the sight of Cassie’s futa cock, the one that had been floating around the back of her mind and filling the naughtiest of her dreams ever since that video Cassie had me bring her unawares. Gail clenched her knees together, a hand slid down under her skirt as she immediately began to play with her pussy which at that point I imagine felt neglected and in terrible need. Gail walked a step or two forward, falling to her knees in front of Cassie, her lips inches from my sister’s cock. She placed a hand on Cassie’s thigh, her soft warm breath hit Cassie’s cock as she moaned from her own hand, and she looked up at Cassie with big, wanting eyes.
“I… I wan uhhn….May I? P-aaaa-please?” Gail whispered across Cassie’s cock, her lips parted slightly, as her hand creeped closer towards Cassie’s base. Cassie clenched her hands, bit her lip, but finally she took her right hand and placed it in Gail’s hair at the back of her head, then her left took Gail’s hand from her thigh and wraps it around the smooth, soft, wide base of her cock, giving Gail’s hand a light squeeze. Cassie groaned even from that contact, having never felt another girl’s hand down there, or anything else for that matter, and they were much softer than mine.
Cassie then, using both her hands, positioned her tip against Gail’s lips, already a drop of pre-cum smeared onto them, which caused Gail to instinctively lick her lips, and she delighted at the somewhat sweet taste. Then, together, Cassie pushes Gail’s head forward just as Gail goes to suck the delectable cock into her mouth, causing Gail to go much further than intended, her lips hitting their hand wrapped around Cassie’s base, Cassie’s tip almost at her throat. They both moan loudly, Gail’s vibrating her mouth around Cassie, who groans and squeezes Gail’s hand onto her base hard, the sudden intense pleasure almost driving her to an orgasm then and there.
“You two aren’t planning to keep the fun to yourselves?” I asked as I finished stripping of my own clothes, my cock just as hard and eager as Cassie’s. Though, part of the reason for the blush on my face was because I remembered that Cassie is indeed bigger than I. I was getting shown up to my girlfriend by my own sister. But that thought barely had any effect at that moment, because I had a shit eating grin at the stunning sight before me. I had my admittedly sexy, voluptuous sister with her boobs bouncing free as my almost as sexy girlfriend plays with herself and sucks on my sister’s girl cock. I walked over next to them, slightly behind Gail to the left, looking down at their preoccupied hands.
“What… nothing for me? Oh, wait… I know.” I chuckled as I knelt down beside them both, groping Cassie’s boob and giving her nipple a quick tug as I lowered myself, but she was too preoccupied with Gail sucking her cock like it was a delicious popsicle, not that I could blame her. I almost even felt jealous, almost. I leaned forward, lifting Gail’s shirt and bra up just enough to bare her lovely, perky breasts and her little pink erect nipples. I leaned forward to suck on her left one, easily pulling her whole breast between my lips, tongue teasing her nipple with flicks and swirls.
I also pulled her hand, currently going to town on her pussy and clit, up and out of her skirt and panties even as she protested and tried to pull her hand back. I gave her a light nip on the breasts, instead wrapping her soft wonderful hand around my cock, to keep her busy. She hesitated, then slowly began to stroke me, her fingers covered with her slick juices from moments before, which lubed me up quite nicely. While she did that, I place a hand on either side of the waistband of her skirt, pulling it and her panties down in one go, all the way down to her knees, which made her shiver and groan more around Cassie’s cock, which in turn made Cassie jerk slightly and groan. I grinned to myself around Gail’s soft tit, loving that I could make a chain reaction of pleasure between them.

I took this cue and slid my left hand slowly down Gail’s smooth stomach, then down each thigh once, teasing her, before finally I brought my hand down to her core and plunged a long finger inside, curling it up into her G-spot with ease. This caused her to buck/jerk slightly and moan loudly, her mouth slamming down to nearly take Cassie into her throat yet again, Cassie gasped loud and leaned her head back from ecstasy.
“Oh fucking hell…. Chase… do that again… Gail… your mouth feels amazing. I… I may not last long.” At this point Cassie began to thrust into Gail’s mouth, her cock pulsing ever so slightly, a drizzle of pre-cum started to slip out of her tip, coating Gail’s tongue. Gail’s eyes looked up at Cassie eagerly, her moans from my hand almost continuous as I relentlessly flicked and curled into her G-spot. Gail lifted her hand off of Cassie’s base, causing Cassie’s hand to join her other hand at the back of Gail’s head, and as she placed her hand back on Cassie’s thigh, Gail began to bob her head back and forth quickly, each time going all the way back down to where their hands had been, timing her mouth movements to Cassie’s thrusting but moving twice as fast.
Upon hearing Cassie’s voice and the thinly veiled struggle within it, as well as feeling Gail’s drenched, hot pussy begin to contract around my finger, I knew I was about to get a two for one orgasm. I chuckled with glee, pulling my mouth off of Gail’s boob and bringing it up to her ear to whisper teasingly.
“You want my sister’s cum in your mouth? Tastes good huh? I’d sure love to see it.” Without giving her a chance to answer or react, I slipped another finger into her wet pussy, stretching the walls a bit as they swirled and flicked and thrusted into her like mad. I even slid my right hand down her back, down over her small but plump ass. My fingers inside her began to make her go crazy, as she moaned and groaned endlessly on Cassie, sucking faster and faster, her lips like a vice. Cassie kept gasping from each of Gail’s movements, her cock pulsing more and more as she tried to hold back the flood of cum filling it.
I grinned evilly, thinking to myself that Cassie isn’t the only devious one in the family, I gave Gail’s ass a slap, positioning my hand perfectly, then without warning I slid my middle finger between her cheeks, pressing it firmly against her tight little ass hole, causing her eyes to go wide and her hips to buck forward onto my fingers with what sounded like a muffled cry, the buck caused her to orgasm instantly, her body spasming, tightening hard around my fingers as they became covered in juices, her mouth slammed all the way down onto Cassie’s base, shoving her swollen head into Gail’s tight throat.
Cassie also instantly gave off a cry of pleasure, her hands clenching hard in Gail’s hair, her hips trying to buck as her tip exploded with shot after shot of hot, thick, ropes of cum, straight into Gail’s throat. Gail gagged slightly at first, but refused to move her head and managed to take all of Cassie’s load, which I could tell was a big one. As both of their bodies finally calmed down, and all hands were removed from each other’s’ bodies, Cassie slowly pulled her hips back, her still mostly hard cock sliding out of Gail’s lips who almost seemed wistful without it. As Cassie pulled all the way out, a bit of her left over cum dripped onto the floor between the girls, and she dropped onto her knees, leaning into Gail.
Cassie and Gail stayed there for a moment, before Cassie whispered something in Gail’s ear I couldn’t quite make out. Right as I opened my mouth to speak, Gail turned and tackled me, kissing me deeply and eagerly. I only took a brief moment before I kissed her back just as passionately. Its only as I opened my mouth further to tongue kiss her, and realized was tasting Cassie’s sperm, that I knew what was going on too late. Before I could react Gail pushed a decent amount of Cassie’s cum as far into my mouth as she was able, causing me to cough and sputter as she sat back up with a giggle, her face bright red in a blush but her eyes gleaming.
“That’s what you get knob.” Cassie turned to face me, kneeling next to Gail, putting an arm around her shoulder. “Though I gotta say, you have great taste in women.” At this both she and Gail laughed some more.
“Yeah Chase… that’s what you get! For not warning me, and….” Gail blushed a bit and looked to the side. “For not doing it all the way…. Dammit. Teasing me isn’t nice.”

Anonymous 14/12/04(Thu)07:12 No. 22901 ID: f5b1c2

What do you have against linebreaks?

Anonymous 14/12/11(Thu)13:37 No. 22949 ID: def664


Anonymous 14/12/13(Sat)05:11 No. 22968 ID: def664

Fuck me and my taste in fapasta

Anonymous 14/12/19(Fri)19:05 No. 22993 ID: 988526


bump AnonKEYBOARD 14/12/29(Mon)03:03 No. 23026 ID: cce2a2

Update this pls

Anonymous 15/01/08(Thu)01:05 No. 23084 ID: 988526

bump fuckers. someone continue it

Anonymous 15/01/11(Sun)13:08 No. 23098 ID: def664


Face it. It's dead. It's been like a month since the guy last said anything.

And I actually thought this story was going to get resurrected

BUMP! Anonymous 15/01/12(Mon)00:30 No. 23101 ID: 988526

Same, but writers are faggots

VAGINAL SPIDERS 15/01/15(Thu)04:38 No. 23113 ID: 58a838

Jesus Christ it's been like a year since I've been here.

I keep telling myself to get back to this, but full time actual adult employment is tough on creative thinking time.

No promises, but I'm going to try to read through everything that's been posted since I quit like a fag, and I'll steal what I like/ignore what I don't.

Don't wait up for me though

Anonymous 15/01/16(Fri)06:01 No. 23120 ID: 988526

Unless you mean ignoring the one non-canon shit chapter, doing ignore what been posted. Lets try not to fuck the continuity.

Anonymous 15/02/01(Sun)14:28 No. 23189 ID: def664

Totally not in denial that this story is never going to get continued *bump

Anonymous 15/02/03(Tue)06:16 No. 23200 ID: c350f2

update this pls my dick is killing me!!!

Anonymous 15/02/16(Mon)22:22 No. 23281 ID: def664


Anonymous 15/03/03(Tue)12:15 No. 23342 ID: def664

Why did this have to die again? Was it just to get everybody's hopes up for nothing?

REBOOT AnonyMPC 15/04/01(Wed)16:45 No. 23438 ID: a609fb

Since this story's been abandoned, I thought I might take it on. It's a little out of my wheelhouse, but it does have incest, which puts it right in my interests and... well, we have to stretch outside of our comfort zone once in a while, right?

The thing is, I just can't continue someone else's story. It doesn't feel right. And my style might wind up clashing with the OP's enough that a continuation would be jarring. Also, if you're familiar with my work, you know I like a little more explanation and setup.

So, I've decided that I'm going to reboot the story, like Hollywood does, except unlike Hollywood, it's possible the original author might just pick up where they left off, and that's more than okay.

So, let's begin...

Chapter One:

My little sister Cassie seemed different since returning from her summer adventure program, but I had no idea how different. She just seemed distant, moody.

I thought she was just suffering from a bad case of puberty. I was right about that, but that was only a small fraction of what was going on. Her time at the Moreau Girls Development Island Adventure Camp had changed her, and not just giving her confidence and leadership skills and self-reliance like the website she'd found when she begged our parents to send her claimed to do.

If anything, it was the opposite. She was shy, she wouldn't go out unless we dragged her. She used to love dressing up in skirts and frilly blouses, but now she wore baggy shorts and a long t-shirt. Only her long hair and the necklace she wore around her neck would have made her look girlish.

But again, I didn't think too deeply, I just thought it was puberty. Or maybe she missed her new friends at camp. She did talk about them, in vague but glowing terms, saying they opened up a whole new world for her. Her friend Kat would chase her through the woods, and she spent a lot of time swimming with her friend Octavia, or Robin who's beautiful singing voice made her feel jealous. But after the first welcome home party, she withdrew.

I missed her. She was twelve, I was fourteen, but we always felt like partners in crime. She may not have dressed like a tomboy, but she acted like one around me... maybe just because she was imitating me, she wanted to be like me, like little siblings often do with their older siblings. And I liked having her around because of it, who doesn't like being worshipped, right? Also, she really was fun. We'd fight, but it was more play-fighting than anything, we'd get into wrestling matches that sometimes seemed to get intense, like a matter of life or death but by the end we'd be laughing and exhausted no matter who won (I usually let her win in the end).

That had stopped, even before she went to camp, I was just starting to get worried it might be weird, if I accidentally touched her breast or butt or something. No, the truth was, I was worried that I enjoyed it too much when I did, that I might cross a line, or she'd start feeling weird.

Yet, she seemed so down, I had to do something, and the only thing I could think of was wrestling with her.

School hadn't started yet, and our parents were at work, and Cassie was down on the couch watching TV with a blank expression on her face. I plopped down beside her... she looked at me, then away. “Camp really changed you,” I said.

She made a strangled honking sound of surprise, kind of like a... quack, I guess, then caught herself and said, “What?”

“Yeah, you're even more of a butt-head than ever.” I nudged her shoulder with my shoulder, and her panicked expression softened, became a tentative smile. It was just a mild insult, stingless because she knew I didn't really mean it. “Come on, admit it, you just lied around on the beach all day.” She didn't, actually, because she didn't have a tan, her skin was pale, nearly white. It was almost like she didn't get any sun at all. That was weird, actually, but they probably just used SPF-100000000000 sunblock.

“I did not,” she said softly. “I did... lots of stuff. Stuff you wouldn't believe.”

“Nuh-uh,” I said, giving her a look over. “You look soft. Like you haven't even been exercising at all.”

“Looks can be deceiving.” She looked away from me, fingered the little necklace she got at camp idly.

“No, I don't think so,” I said. “I bet I could take you down. One round. Of course, you're too chicken to fight me.”

Her eyes slid towards mine. “I am NOT a chicken.”

“No? Prove it.”

“I don't want to.”

“I thought so. Chicken.” I made mock chicken sounds at her.

“Don't do that. It's offensive.”

“To who? Chickens? It's meant to be.” But I needed to let her off the hook. “Come on, if you're too chicken to fight me, let's settle it another way. A video game... let's just do SOMETHING,” I said, my voice going pleading, and then I added, sincerely. “I missed doing stuff with you.”

“I missed doing stuff with you, too,” she said. And I thought maybe there were tears in her eyes. “But it's different now.”

“Only if you let it be.”

She took a deep breath, almost a sigh, then stood up... and crouched. “Fine, come on.”

I grinned, and leapt to my feet, facing her, then crouched as well. I moved first, a feint, but she expected it, and after a few more false starts, we collided, becoming a mass of limbs each squabbling for dominance. She actually was stronger than she was before, and gave me a real fight as we fell to the floor climbing over each other. Her skin seemed weirdly soft, too, a little oily, even before we started sweating.

Softness wasn't the real surprise, though. The real surprise was when I suddenly ran into something surprisingly hard, where there shouldn't have been anything hard. What the hell was THAT?


Chapter Two

I dismissed it immediately. Who wouldn't? Some things, the mind isn't capable of comprehending until you're forced to. I made absurd rationalizations... it was just her knee, despite that her knee was nowhere near there. We were moving around a lot, maybe I just lost track. I looked back at her, and she seemed to be taken aback too, pushing me with her hands to keep me away while her legs were wrapped around me.

I wasn't going to go down that easily, so I reached up. I wasn't going for her chest, but I thought she reacted like I did. “No, don't!” she said, but I didn't listen. And my hand did brush against her breast, which seemed bigger than I'd ever noticed, felt bigger than it looked, and I thought, “Oh shit,” as I had before when I accidentally touched her inappropriately. But I couldn't back off, my hand went for her shoulder, and got snagged under her necklace.
“No, don't touch my face...” she cried, and jerked away, suddenly... so suddenly, that my hand snapped the chain to her necklace. It went flying into a corner.

Cassie's body rippled, like a pool of water on a rainy day, and suddenly, the sister I knew was gone. Her soft lips were entirely gone... instead, protruding from her lower face was an obscenely larger orange beak, turned upwards. More than that, I now saw that her white skin was covered, not completely, but in patches, by soft feathers.

She wasn't human. Not anymore. Not completely.

It had happened in the camp. I'd heard about these things... they were whispered on conspiracy theory websites I'd frequented, but I thought they were always bullshit. Secret experiments in genetic cross-breeding, experiments that only worked on the young, and worked especially well on girls. The rumors said that they'd developed a holographic image inducer, that would make them LOOK normal, as long as they kept it on them, that they could be among us and nobody would know. Of course, that detail was why I didn't think it could possibly be real, after all, it was like something out of the X-Men. I think Nightcrawler had one in the comics.

Now, though, I knew, that was Cassie's necklace, why she wore it all the time. She was some fusion of human and animal.

“No...” she whispered, realizing what happened, looking down at her hands. She climbed off me and ran off up to her room, with a sound like a long mournful quack.


Oh... oh, no... I meant to take a break here, since this was about where the other one started, and then reread the original story make my 'adaptation' of the rest. But now, as I edited this and checked against the original, I see my mistake now. I simply misread the title all along, I thought it said “My Sister is a Duckgirl.”

Wow, I'm embarrassed. My apologies. I guess I should abandon this. I've got nothing against futa, but it's not really my bag... even writing duckgirls was stretching it, really.

By the way, on an unrelated note, happy April 1st.

Anonymous 15/04/02(Thu)07:06 No. 23439 ID: 5cd970

That's almost funny enough to make up for the fact that I almost thought there was something new in this story and I got exited.

Anonymous 15/04/13(Mon)05:25 No. 23474 ID: 433925

This is fucking nice
>kind of like a... quack,
>Her eyes slid towards mine. “I am NOT a chicken.”
>“Don't do that. It's offensive.”

I love your subtle foreshadowing

Anonymous 15/05/30(Sat)08:51 No. 23618 ID: a5fcdc

it's sad to see such a great story die

teasing Tim 15/07/20(Mon)17:54 No. 23745 ID: 8138a8

The last line written thus far is "Teasing me isn’t nice.” I refuse to let this thread die like that.

Anonymous 15/07/29(Wed)02:47 No. 23777 ID: def664

It's been months. But for some reason i still have hope this this will be continued.

Anonymous 16/08/24(Wed)10:48 No. 24633 ID: 3350f2

Can't let a classic fall off. BACK TO 1!

Anonymous 17/12/21(Thu)21:37 No. 25244 ID: 3e4500

please dont let this die

Cassie and Chase NewAnon 18/06/02(Sat)00:46 No. 25586 ID: bfb93f

did you ever complete a chapter where Cassie got to butt fuck Chase?

Anonymous 18/06/02(Sat)04:59 No. 25587 ID: 031f95

I doubt this story will ever be finished or added onto.

I love your writing. Honestly, I wish you'd take this on that way I know eventually this masterpiece would be complete in some way. I get its not your thing but a man can have his dream.


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