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Fucking Appendix(now with editing) Soli 14/08/07(Thu)06:52 No. 22201 ID: cd8c01

Hey guys. Soli again. At least a couple people seemed interested in the rough draft for the first chapter of Fucking Appendix I posted yesterday. So as promised, here is the edited first chapter, along with the second. If you like it, let me know. If its a piece of shit, let me know that too. Either way, be sure to check back often, as I will likely be updating frequently with new chapters. Once again, I give you Fucking Appendix. Hope you enjoy.
I read the words on the screen again, sure I must be misreading them. They couldn't say what I thought they did, and yet there they were.

"Do as I say, or Eve dies."

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I guess it really started the day my little sister, Eve, came down with appendicitis. Even though she was three years younger, fourteen to my seventeen, we were always close, possibly owing to the fact we were both enrolled in an online form of homeschooling. That meant that for most of our lives, we were each other's only constant contact, and I always thought of her as a friend as well as a sister.

She took after our mom in that she was a petite, freckly ginger, tiny all over except for the ass and b cup breasts she had recently developed, and was maybe a bit overly proud of. It was often a topic around the house when she insisted on walking around in just her bra and panties, and I often had to politely suggest she get dressed, to which she would usually just roll her eyes, and maybe put on an overly small pair of shorts.

Though she was never exactly bubbly, she was always generally cheerful, and rarely complained about anything. That's why, when I came into the living room one summer afternoon and found her curled up on the couch looking less than happy, I decided to try and cheer her up. "What's wrong sis, got the red tide blues?" I teased as I plopped down beside her and gave her a playful nudge in the side.

I expected a playful smack, or maybe for her to help a throw pillow to live up to its name. What I got instead, was a yelp of pain from Eve, as she squeezed into a tighter ball and tears began to stream down her cheeks.

"Holy shit, Evie! What's wrong?" I half yelled, jumping up off the couch and putting one hand on her arm and pushing back her messy red hair with the other so I could see her face. She was shaking and sobbing as if she had been shot, and I was admittedly terrified.

"It h-hurts so b-bad, Adam.(yes our names are Adam and Eve. Please hold all jokes til the end thanks.) Oh f-f-fuck it h-hurts." Her voice was low, and little more than a moan eeking out between her sobs. I knew almost immediately what was wrong.

"Is it right here?" I asked, standing up and waving my hand over the area of my appendix. She nodded slightly in response. "Shit, I'm sorry Evie, I think its your appendix. We need to get you to the hospital. Can you walk at all?. In response, she tried to put her legs down to get up and almost instantly pulled herself back into a ball as pain shot through her body. She shook her head violently.

Our family has always had bad luck with our appendixes. In fact I'm the only one on my moms side who still has one. This was actually the second time I had seen it. Two years earlier while visiting my cousins, one of them had to be rushed to the hospital when he fell off his bike and caused his appendix to burst. He nearly died in the ambulance on the way, and spent the next three weeks in a hospital bed, and nearly the next month bedridden at home.

Thankfully I knew what to do in this situation. "OK Evie, I'm going to call an ambulance, just hold on ok." She nodded slightly in response, as I pulled out my phone and dialed 9-1-1.

The dispatcher who picked up was a real bitch, seeming more annoyed that I'd interrupted her in the middle of reading a magazine or something, than concerned. I made a mental note to remember her voice so that if I ever saw her, I could shove a copy of Cosmo right up her ass. It took nearly ten minutes of inane questions, some of which I had to answer multiple times, before she finally told me an ambulance was on the way.

Once I finally had confirmation the ambulance was on its way, I threw on my shoes, grabbed my car keys, and sat on the couch beside Eve, gently putting my arm around her in an attempt to comfort her. "It's gonna be ok Evie, the ambulance is coming." I told her and held her close, leaning my head against hers.

She looked up at me through her tears. "Thanks Adam." She half whispered as if she was struggling just to get words out. Then she lifted her head and kissed me. The kiss was mostly on my cheek, only slightly overlapping onto the corner of my lips. At that point I didn't even really notice, and even now I'm about eighty percent sure it was accidental.

The ambulance arrived after about fifteen minutes, and as I expected, they wouldn't let me ride along. There was a moment when I was sure she was going to jump off the gurney, when she heard I couldn't ride along, but I reassured her I would follow them there, and it seemed to calm her down. I jumped in my car to follow, and took the opportunity to call our mom.

Our mother was a nurse who worked for a nonprofit that provided care to homeless and low income people in the city at reduced costs. She didn't make a lot, and her job kept her out of the house most of the time, but between her salary, and child support from our dad, who decided two years earlier that he was gay and ran off with his soulmate, Robert, (pronounced Row-bear) we did pretty well. When she answered, I told her what was happening, and although she was worried, she told me that I had done the right thing calling 9-1-1 first, and told me she would meet us at the hospital.

It was a twenty-five minute drive to the hospital, and once we arrived, Eve was almost immediately rushed into surgery. Our mom beat us there by a few minutes since her job was in the city, and was already filling out the required consent forms. I felt helpless sitting in the waiting room, not knowing how bad it was, and worried she might end up bedridden like my cousin, or worse. I tried playing a game on my phone to distract myself, but soon gave up when I realized I was looking up at every single noise.

After what seemed like forever, but was actually only a bit over an hour, the surgeon came out and told us Eve was out of surgery and recovering, and that we could see her but she was unlikely to be awake. Relief washed over me as the tension I had been too distracted to notice building throughout my body finally released. My mom wrapped me up in a hug, thanked the doctor, and we made our way to the recovery room.

As it turns out Eve made it in time to prevent her appendix from rupturing, but only just. Luckily, she had a good surgeon, and we were happy to hear that she would likely be ready for discharge sometime the next day, and was expected to make a full and swift recovery.

She was asleep when we got into the recovery room and only woke up for a few minutes the rest of the night. After a few hours, Mom suggested I go home, but I convinced her that she needed rest more than I did, and that I would rather stay. She kissed us both on the foreheads, and then left. I held Eve's hand the rest of the night and slept in the chair beside her with my head on the hospital bed.

When I woke the next morning it was to Eve running her hand through my hair. "Hey kid, how ya feeling?" I asked groggily.

"Haha! Better than you look right now bro!" I touched my face and felt the lines the woven blanket had left on one side. My hair was also a total mess, and I was kind of glad I couldn't see how ridiculous I must look.

"Does mom know you're awake? I'll call her." Without waiting for a response I started to pull out my phone to call.

She reached out and grabbed my hand. "Not yet, I want to just relax a little. Whatever they have in that IV is awesome. Like really fucking great. Actually, it's kinda making me horny." She squeezed my hand and smiled, knowing saying things like that weirded me out.

"Dude, you're gross. You're lucky your appendix is gone or I'd slap you in it right now." She laughed a little and stuck out her tongue at me. I knew my sister was a virgin, and we were always open about our "relationships," but she was still my kid sister, and any mention of her and sex still made my insides squirm a bit.

"Just give me like fifteen minutes and then you can call ok?"

"Yeah, I guess. I am gonna call a nurse to check your bandage though, alright?". She nodded and I pressed the call button on the console on her bed. A couple minutes later, a sweet, if a bit frumpy, middle aged nurse, who's hospital badge identified her as Tilly, came through the door.

"Well good morning dear. How are you feeling?" She asked smiling.

"I dunno it hurts a bit," Eve said with a sidelong glance and a slight wink only I could see.

I smacked her lightly on the hand and turned to the nurse. "She's joking, ma'am. I think she might be enjoying the pain meds a bit too much," I said with the best stern brother look I could muster in her direction.

The nurse laughed, "I don't blame you there, sweetheart. When I had my knee surgery last year, I felt the same way!" She gave Eve a knowing grin and took a minute to check her vitals, and the IV. "Well what do you say we take a look at that bandage? If you wouldn't mind stepping out for a minute young man?" She said looking in my direction.

"No!" Eve almost shouted, tightening her grip on my hand as I started to get up. "I mean, can he please stay? I just feel a little less nervous with him here.". I thought that was kind of odd, but was happy that I was able to make her feel better.

The nurse seemed a bit dubious but nodded after a few seconds. "If that's what you want dear. Ok let's have a look"

I turned away as the nurse pulled back the blanket, and lifted Eve's hospital gown to check the stitches, it wasn't that I had never seen Eve in her panties before, I just wasn't sure how I felt about seeing her with a big gash in her side.

"Oh wow!" Eve called out squeezing my hand slightly and tugging. "That is so crazy looking!" Against my better judgement, I turned to look. The incision site itself wasn't really all that impressive, just a small line maybe a little over an inch long that had been stitched closed and still looked a bit yellow from the disinfectant.

What caught my attention wasn't her stitches, but a few inches lower. Just above the edge of the blanket, peeking out at me, was a little tuft of red fur, and just the slightest bit of the place where her labia meets. I didn't want to look but I couldn't seem to stop myself.

My heart raced and I quickly turned away again and pretended I had only seen her stitches. I guessed the doctors had to cut her panties off before surgery, for who knows what reason, and I had no idea if Eve had known that when she insisted I stay with her. The nurse finished changing Eve's bandage and then once again, left us alone in the room.

"What's wrong Adam? Since when are you squeamish?" She asked, in an obviously teasing tone.

"It's not that."

"Well what then, why won't you even look at me?" This time she sounded a bit upset, so I forced myself to face her. I was sure both sides of my face must be bright red now, instead of just one.

"Eve… You're not wearing any underwear, and I kinda saw your, um…"

"Really?" She lifted the blanket to look under it. "You saw?" I nodded at her. "Saw this?!" She quickly whipped the blanket away leaving me an even clearer look than before.

She began laughing wildly, as I threw the blanket back over her. "The fuck, Eve! Jesus, you must be high!"

"Oh relax, Adam. It's not like you've never seen before. We used to take baths together, remember." She rolled her eyes at me.

"Yeah, when we were kids! Jesus. I have to use the bathroom."

That image stuck in my mind, her fair, freckled skin contrasting against the beginnings of a firey red patch of pubic hair. The perfectly smooth outer labia of a young girl, with everything neatly tucked inside. It seemed odd that at fourteen, she was only beginning to sprout hair, but puberty hits everyone differently, and maybe her fuzz patch was just a bit slow, to catch up with the rest of her body.

I tried to shake the image and those thoughts from my mind. A brother is never supposed to see that side of his sister. It seemed, however, that the more I tried to think of something else, the more strongly it pushed itself into the forefront.

I got up and made my way to the bathroom. I didn't really need to use it, but it was the only way I could think to hide my embarrassment, not to mention the inexplicable erection growing in my pants. Unsure of what to do I spent the next couple minutes splashing cold water on my face until my heart slowed to normal and my penis returned to its flaccid state.

Not feeling entirely comfortable sitting alone with Eve while she was high, I took out my phone and called our mom. I figured if I made it sound like she called me, Eve couldn't be mad, and maybe I could avoid a bit of awkwardness. She didn't flash me again after I told her I'd spoken to mom, and that she was on her way, and I felt like I had succeeded in bringing her back down to earth. What I didn't know then, was that the real awkwardness was still yet to come, later that day, when we all finally went home.


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Anonymous 15/03/14(Sat)22:09 No. 23377 ID: 1c2b70

>>23258

Great stuff


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Anonymous 15/03/16(Mon)23:16 No. 23381 ID: d95c68

OP Please continue; I'm dying, this story is one of my favorites and I think right now it has the best chance of finishing. Any updates would be amazing.


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soli 15/03/17(Tue)05:13 No. 23384 ID: cd8c01

An update will be coming. I recovered my story, and I have been working on it. Right now I'm adjusting to a new phone and trying to find a good writer app for windows phone so that I can continue without a ton of hassle.


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rin!y7chl82msE 15/03/18(Wed)09:24 No. 23390 ID: e08288

>>23384
Been using WPS Office on Android. It's pretty nice imo, and irrc there's a version for Windows phone.


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soli 15/03/18(Wed)22:34 No. 23392 ID: d1e861

I was using some shitty app that I don't remember then name of, then after my phone was restored I switched to jotterpad x. Now that I have a windows phone, all I can seem to find is the office suite that came on the phone, which is a pain in the ass because I have to scroll all the way down manually, and when I loaded my story from a txt file, its got all these stupid symbols in it


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soli 15/03/18(Wed)22:34 No. 23393 ID: d1e861

I was using some shitty app that I don't remember then name of, then after my phone was restored I switched to jotterpad x. Now that I have a windows phone, all I can seem to find is the office suite that came on the phone, which is a pain in the ass because I have to scroll all the way down manually, and when I loaded my story from a txt file, its got all these stupid symbols in it


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Anonymous 15/03/27(Fri)22:52 No. 23418 ID: a96dbd

Still waiting for next chapter.
Keep it up OP, don't leave us !


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Anonymous 15/03/30(Mon)18:42 No. 23430 ID: 81c193

OP plz


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Anonymous 15/04/20(Mon)10:21 No. 23488 ID: 33b83a

>>23393
Pleeeeease op


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soli 15/04/21(Tue)22:11 No. 23489 ID: cd8c01

Hey guys. Sorry, I know its been awhile. It is coming, I've just been really busy with work and it has kinda been stifling the creative juices a bit. Hopefully ill have the next chapter done soon. I've been doing a bit of writing the past couple days. It's just been a but slow.


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Anonymous 15/04/22(Wed)22:51 No. 23493 ID: b71ab4

>>23489
Tight op tight. Like my bung hole


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Anonymous 15/04/23(Thu)01:36 No. 23494 ID: 12b8e1

>>23489
I love you OP ! I thought that story was dead and wouldn't have an end ever !

Good luck for the writing, I hope next chapter will come out soon


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Anonymous 15/05/14(Thu)10:34 No. 23553 ID: 1874c2

>>23489
Bae its been like 4 weeks


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soli 15/05/14(Thu)18:29 No. 23557 ID: 21be5e

Fear not, for I am nearly done with the next chapter. It will likely be posted later today after I get out of work!


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Anonymous 15/05/14(Thu)18:50 No. 23558 ID: 46fbb4

>>23557
i'm so glad you are still alive. so many unfinished stories here like the lara croft one that's been here for like 5 years now lol


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soli 15/05/14(Thu)21:57 No. 23559 ID: cd8c01

I am indeed alive. The writing certainly hasn't come as quickly and easily as when I first started, mostly due to work. It's tough to motivate yourself to write when all you really feel like doing is kicking back and playing Xbox or something. I promise I will not abandon this story before it's done though. It will have a conclusion.


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Anonymous 15/05/17(Sun)05:26 No. 23577 ID: ae7ff4

>>23559
Looking forward to the next chapter!


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Anonymous 15/07/15(Wed)18:08 No. 23738 ID: 7437b4

>>23559
Come on man! Don't leave us hanging! Any idea when the new chapter will be up?


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soli 15/12/12(Sat)08:39 No. 24029 ID: cd8c01

Holy shit. I cant believe how long it's been since my last post. Terribly sorry guys. Honestly things have been a bit nuts for awhile, and I just haven't really had the inspiration to work on this until the past couple days. Every time I started, my ideas just seemed to fall flat. But I think I finally have it figured out. So I hope this chapter was worth the wait. Enjoy anons.




Eve gave Ella one final hard thrust, as if punctuating a sentence, before allowing her rubber phallus to slip free of Ella's ass, and quickly dropping it over her hips and onto the floor. Then as Ella slowly rolled off of me, Eve set to work lazily licking the excess cum from us.

It amazed me what a sexual being Eve had become in such a short time. Though, I suppose she might have been having sex with Ella for some time, seeing it for myself was still new and somewhat incredible. What amazed me more, was how my own sex life had evolved. I had gone from a veritable sexual nonentity, to double penetrating a hot young girl with my sister in just a matter of weeks.

It was almost too much to absorb, and I found myself lost in my own thoughts as Eve climbed up on my other side and began to tenderly kiss my chest. In fact I almost didn't notice when she began to speak.

"So Ella, did you like that?"

Ella turned to face Eve, her soft hand coming to rest on my chest. "Are you serious? That was the fucking hottest fucking thing I have ever fucking seen! I can't believe you guys fucked!"

Unable to contain ourselves, Eve and I both burst out laughing, both at the knowledge of our true relationship, and the expletive laden way Ella had chosen to call attention to it.

Ella, in response smacked me on the chest. "Dude! I'm serious though. I can't believe that just even happened!"

Eve sat up slightly, and suddenly took on an air of seriousness. "Yeah. We need to talk about that." She gently reached over and took Ella's hand.

Before she could begin to speak, Ella jumped in. "Oh! Don't. Worry. I won't tell anyone. I'd look pretty fucked up too."

Eve smiled at her friend, with a patience that was almost maternal. "That's great. We both really appreciate it. That's not what we need to talk about though."

Now Ella sat up, clearly confused. She didnt speak, but waited for Eve to explain what was going on.

Eve took a deep breath and prepared herself. She was obviously nervous, and I gave her a little squeeze of support. After a few moments, she began to talk.

"Ella, I know you've wanted Adam for a long time, and he's been drooling over you since practically the moment he saw you. I also know you like to tease him when I'm not looking, because I've never let you go for it with him. I've always said it would just be too weird for you to be with my brother, and I wouldn't want to have to take sides if it went bad, but there's more to it than that."

Eve hesitated for a moment, as if suddenly unsure of herself. There was no shame, merely a fear of how her friend might react. Despite everything, I knew Eve cared deeply about Ella, and wouldn't want to lose her.

"The truth is, I wanted him too. I always told myself that it was just because he was my big brother and I looked up to him, or that it was just a phase and I would just get over it. Then, when I was in the hospital, I realized that if I didn't at least try and something happed... Well I guess I would have regretted it."

Ella still said nothing. Her expression was unreadable, and in that moment I wished mind reading was a real thing. I couldn't tell whether she was angry, amused, disgusted, or anything else. She simply sat, eyes fixed on Eve, who was clearly becoming more and more nervous.

"So, I guess I started teasing him too. He just never took the bait, until you came over and we put on that show for him. After you left, we talked. A lot. And that's when it really started, although he's still been really hesitant."

Eve stopped talking and looked directly at Ella. I guess she was waiting for some reaction from Ella. Ella however, just sat there, her face a blank canvas.

It seemed like an eternity before Ella finally spoke, and when she did, there was thinly veiled fire in the voice. Still, no hint of that emotion touched her face. "So what's your point exactly? Adam's yours and you gave me a pity fuck before telling me to fuck off?"

Eve drew back as if struck. She clearly hadn't been expecting that sort of response. Still, I could see why Ella thought that was what Eve was saying. In that moment I thought we had blown it, and I dreaded the idea of having to use our contingency plan. After what I had been through, I hated the idea of becoming Linoge myself.

"Babe! No! That's not what I'm saying at all! Ella, you're my best friend. I love you. I want you to be happy. Basically, what I'm saying is, I- no we, want you to be a part of this with us. If you're willing."

Now Ella looked confused. It was the first real expression I had seen from her since Eve began to explain. "So, like, a three way? Isn't that what we just did?"

Eve smiled at Ella. "Yeah, but not just sex. Like all of us, together. Look, Adam and I cant be together publically, and he can only stay single so long before people start to wonder if something is up. So if you and Adam are together publically, it means we all can be secretly without anyone suspecting."
"So you want me to be his fake girlfriend so no one knows you're his real one, and maybe I get to fuck you guys sometimes. I don't know if I want to be used as a cover again."
Laid out bare like that, our idea really didnt seem very fair to Ella, and I found myself feeling bad for her. No one wants to feel used. It didn't really matter that I really was interested in her. In the end, a relationship with her would just be pretending. That's probably why I was shocked by Eve's response.

"No, it's not like that. Well, I mean, it is, but you wouldn't have to be his pretend girlfriend. It can be the real thing. He can text or call you, take you out, hold your hand, kiss you, or whatever. Just, no using the "L" word, and no sex without me, for now at least. That's ok with you, right Adam?"

For the first time during this whole conversation, I realized that I hadn't even really been a part of it. I tended to be more of the quiet, social awkward type, preferring to observe rather than actually participate in social interactions.

Now that I was put on the spot it took me a few seconds to think of what to say. We needed Ella, and despite my misgivings about using her as a cover, I would have to to be with Eve. After what Eve had just said, I felt like being honest was the best way to go.

"Of course. Look Ella, I'm sure you know I've been into you for a long time. I just always thought you were out of my league, and I was scared to make a move. I'd like to think that even if all this hadn't happened, I would have eventually worked up the nerve to ask you out. I don't know. I really would love to get to spend some time with you."

Ella laughed so hard she practically snorted. "Uh huh. Tell the truth, you just want some more of this." She spread her legs and gently ran her fingers over her silky smooth pussy.

Well, she was partly right. I did want more, but I wasn't lying to her either. Ella was more than just some sexual fantasy. In fact, I had liked her since I first met her. She was beautiful, sure, but she was also fun, and funny, and she could be incredibly sweet. Not to mention, she had always been really friendly towards me, and seemed to go out of her way to include me when she came over to hang out with Eve. I just never suspected she might have actually been interested in me in that way.

So, once again, honesty is the best policy. "Of course I do, but I really do like you. I always have. You're really a great person."

I was a bit worried that this admission might upset Eve, but she just smiled, and then leaned over to kiss me gently. Then to my surprise, she pulled Ella in, and guided her to kiss me as well.

Ella's kiss wasn't quite so gentle as Eve's, but before she could get too worked up and decide to fuck me again right there, Eve spoke up. Her tone was much more serious than before. "Ella, there's something else we need to talk about."

Ella pulled back instantly. "Oh my god! You're pregnant!"

Despite her attempt to be serious, it was obvious Eve was barely suppressing a giggle. "No. Ella.... Look. They um.... They sent me the video."

Ella looked confused for a moment, and then her expression turned angry. Really angry. "What the fuck! You ask me to help you and be Adam's girlfriend to cover for you guys and now you tell me this? So, what? If I don't do what you want you'll fucking expose me or something?" She started to rise up, and for a second I was sure she was about to throw a punch.

Seeing Ella so pissed spurred me into a more active role than I had intended. The last thing we needed was for Ella to decide to start a fight, which seemed only seconds away. So I grabbed her, rolled her over onto her back, and pinned her down. Then I leaned down and kissed her. Of course, she didn't really want to be kissed at that moment, but it served the purpose of throwing her off enough to attempt to talk. "Just listen Ella. It's not what you think."

"Adam, let her up." Eve was calm and collected, despite Ella's near violent outburst. With some reservation, I did as she asked. Ella seemed calmer, but there was still rage bubbling beneath the surface.

"Ella, I'm not threatening you. I'm offering to help you. See, I made a virus that can make sure no one else ever sees that video. All you have to do is send it to them, and if they try to do anything with the video other than delete it, their whole system gets fried. I was going to give it to you either way, but I guess I did wait until now so I could use it as a bribe if I had to. Never a threat though." That wasn't exactly true of course. We had discussed using the virus as a bribe, but we had also talked about using the video as a threat if we thought she was going to turn on us.

I was still amazed that Eve had the technical ability to actually code a virus, but she had demonstrated it for me by flashing a virtual drive or something like that. It was a bit beyond what I was familiar with.

Ella's anger faded to a sort of tentative enthusiasm. "Are you serious? You can do that?"

Eve smiled at her. "You bet your ass babe. I made it look like a video, so you can just send it to them as if it's another dirty video, or an apology, or whatever you want. When they try to watch it, it will say the file is corrupted, and will replace the real video with the virus. If they try to send it, upload it, or even watch it, BOOM! Dead computer."

Ella practically threw herself at Eve. There was no more need for talking at that point. Later we would discuss the finer details of everything, but in that moment our love triangle had just begun, and it was time to celebrate.

The lines between our bodies faded, as we became a mass of lips, and tongues, and hands, and flesh. We fucked hard and long, and by the time we were done, we were all exhausted, and finally collapsed together to sleep.

Eve set an alarm so that we could separate before mom got home, and we all lay there together in a heap of naked flesh and drifted off to sleep. The last thing I remember before slumber took me, is noticing the open laptop, pointing toward us, and wishing I had covered it so that smug bastard couldn't watch.

Shortly before mom was due home we all got semi dressed, and I grudgingly returned to my room for a couple more hours of sleep. I missed the feeling of their bodies against mine, and wished I could have stayed in bed with them, but there would be plenty of time for that later.

Around lunch time, mom woke up and came out into the living room. We were all huddled together on the couch watching a movie. Ella and Eve still wore only long t-shirts and panties, and I was just in a pair of men's pj pants, but if mom noticed she didn't say anything.

Eve jumped up as soon as mom came in, and ran over to her. She whispered something in mom's ear and her face lit up. "Oh I'm so happy for you two! I was wondering when you were going to stop stealing glances and go for it."

She came over and hugged both Ella and myself, smiling the whole time. Oddly, it seemed as if she was almost relieved, and I suddenly wondered if she thought I might have been gay or something. Behind mom, I saw Eve flash me a quick wink. Everything was working out perfectly.

Mom settled into the kitchen to make everyone a quick lunch. All the while, she asked us how we finally decided to go out and other little questions. Thankfully we had prepared a story about how Ella had been the one to suggest I take her out. It fit pretty well with my social awkwardness, and Eve filled in any blanks in our story that mom asked about.

It was all turning out to be surprisingly easy. Mom believed it, and soon the few people our own age who we actually associated with would too. We even decided that that night would be our first date together. It was just a movie, but mom made a big deal out of it being "my first date ever," which I guess it really was, if you didn't count meeting up with a girl in the parking lot of a renaissance fair for a quickie. Still, it didnt come with the jitters I had always expected to have when I went on a first date.

I was so excited about everything, that I hadn't even picked up my phone all day, and it was shortly before my date that I finally did. Ella was off in Eve's room getting ready as I waited in the living room. I guess it wasn't a surprise that there were texts waiting.

"That was quite a show! Well done!"

"I know you must be excited, so I'll let it slide that you haven't responded."

As soon as I finished reading them, another popped up.

"Well hi there kiddo. You know, Ella is a real spitfire. Why don't we see what she has in mind for tonight. This time I don't want you to do anything, just let Ella so whatever she wants. Lets see if she can follow the rules :)"

I didn't bother to respond. At this point I figured he was enjoying it all too much to do anything to Eve just because I didnt respond to his text. He would just have to be satisfied knowing I read it. Still, I knew I had to do what he said. I expected Ella would try to push the boundaries, I just hoped she would respect Eve enough not to actually cross them.

When Ella finally emerged from Eve's room, I was surprised how conservatively she was dressed. She wore a loose black skirt that came almost to her knees, and a matching black V-neck t-shirt.
Mom was thrilled, and insisted on taking pictures of us together before she had to rush off to work. It was a bit embarrassing, but I didnt mind too much, and minutes later, mom was gone and it was just the three of us again.

"So Adam, ready to see my real outfit?" Ella hooked her thumbs into the top of her skirt suggestively. Then I understood. That outfit had been a show for mom's benefit. I nodded. "Okay close your eyes.......Okay now."

Opening my eyes again, I was very pleasantly surprised. Her outfit was still black, but now her skirt was much shorter, only coming to about an inch below her ass. In place of the t-shirt was a loose fitting halter top that stopped right around her belly button. She gave a quick twirl, and I became aware that her undergarments were of the flesh variety. It seemed easy access was the name of the game.

"Wow," I said. It wasn't a very articulate response, but it drew a giggle from both girls.

Eve came up to me then and planted a long slow kiss on my lips, letting her hand slide down into my pants and wrap around my quickly hardening shaft. "You guys have fun tonight, okay?" Then she turned to Ella. "And no fucking until you get back. I'm horny too you know."

Ella just grinned wickedly at Eve, and then smacked her ass. "We'll see."

I was tempted to say fuck the movie, and just stay there for another night of debauchery, but I really was excited for the date. So grabbing my keys from the hook by the door, we set out.

To say the drive was interesting would be an understatement. Ella spent most of the time with her legs spread, slowly masturbating and saying things so dirty they would make a porn star blush. She only calmed her teasing when we stopped for fast food before the movie, which she insisted would have tasted so much better with some of my "special sauce."

When we finally reached the theater, she quickly straightened her outfit, and used the mirror to fix her hair, which had gotten a bit mussed while she fingered herself in my car.

As we reached the ticket booth at the theater, I was surprised by her choice. I had fully expected some sappy chick flick that I'd want to kill myself halfway through. However, Ella had other plans, and insisted we buy tickets to some sci-fi horror movie that had actually been out for awhile. So, tickets in hand we made our way into the theater. I offered to buy snacks for us from the concession stand, but Ella said she had brought a snack already, giving a not so subtle glance down towards my groin. I couldn't help smiling at her brazenness.

It only took a moment after actually entering the theater before I understood why Ella had chosen that movie. We were actually a little late, but the theater was still completely empty. She quickly lead me to the back left corner, furthest from the door, where the seats with moveable armrests were, which she immediately lifted when we sat down.

As soon as we sat she leaned back and draped her long smooth legs across my lap, parting her knees slightly and giving me a little peek at her pussy in the dim light. Even barely visible as it was, it was beautiful, and I had an almost irresistible urge to take her right then. After all, fucking in a theater had always been a bit of a fantasy of mine. Still I had made a promise, and I wouldn't break it. So I contented myself letting my hand drift up her silky thighs, stopping just short of the sweet bliss that nestled between them. I could tease too.

We ended up not quite having the whole room to ourselves, as a small group of teenagers came in almost immediately after us, but they settled in near the front, where they would have had to actually get up and walk back towards us to really see us once the lights went down. It was a bit disappointing in a way, but at the same time seemed to heighten the taboo of the situation. In fact, as they were sitting down the one girl among the small group looked up at us, actually making eye contact with me. It was at that moment that I let my hand slide all the way up and rub against Ella's sweet slit. She squirmed slightly and let out a soft groan.

The girl's eyes widened slightly, and I saw her bite her lip and give a quick glance at her companions and then back up at us, before finally turning to sit with an expression that seemed almost grudging.

Her three male companions seemed totally engrossed in their phones, and never seemed to notice as she turned to glance at us frequently in the dim light of the pre-movie commercials, and it was during one of those glances that Ella noticed. She grinned as she looked back at me, and pulled herself up to lock me into a kiss that was filled with an unbelievable level of passion. I had never really thought of myself as much of an exhibitionist, but knowing someone knew what we were doing, and more, that the watcher really seemed interested turned me on. It was actually a bit of a disappointment when the trailers began and the lights dropped, though I still thought I saw her trying to catch glimpses of us.

Although I had been interested in seeing the movie when I first saw the trailers, it didnt interest me nearly as much as Ella. So naturally I didnt mind that she seemed totally uninterested in watching it at all.

To my surprise, it seemed the group of teens with little miss curious weren't all that into it either. "Fuck yeah bro. He's here, let's roll." One of them practically shouted.

"Ahhhh shiit," one of the others jumped up high giving the first guy. "Let's. Go get fuuuuucked uppp."

They all started to get up and leave the theater, except for the girl. "Yo Sarah, you coming?"

She just sat there staring at them. "Are you fucking serious Brad? I thought you were taking me out to a movie, then your friends show up, and now you want to go to a party? No I'm not coming. I'm going to watch the fucking movie, and then I'm going home, and you can lose my number."

Brad looked like he had just been slapped. "Whatever bitch. You're a shit lay anyway." She flipped them off as they walked away, and as soon as they left the room Ella burst into a fit of hysterical laughter.

Sarah however didn't seem at all amused, and despite her earlier curiosity, didn't turn back towards us. "I'm gonna go talk to her, wait here," Ella announced and quickly hopped up out of her seat, giving me a quick kiss before trotting off down the aisle to the front of the theater.

I watched as she plopped herself down beside the fuming girl, and half expected to see some sort of fight break out. Instead, after a couple minutes of talking I couldn't make out over the start of the movie, Ella leaned over and pulled the girl into a hug. Moments later Ella was leading her towards me by the hand, with a broad grin I could just barely make out by the light of the screen.

I could also see now that Sarah was actually pretty hot. She was probably about Eve's height with a lithe swimmers physique. Like Ella, she was wearing a short skirt, though not quite as short. It actually had probably a couple inches more fabric, and hers was white. Still it did a good job showing off her legs, which were nicely toned despite her slender frame.

Above the skirt she wore a tight T-shirt which may have also been white, or maybe pale blue. It was hard to tell in the dim light, but I could tell it was one of those with such thin fabric as to make it constantly a bit see through, and I could just barely make out the edges of her lacy white bra beneath as she got closer.

Her tits themselves were tiny, probably only a very small b cup at most, but they fit her body beautifully, and I liked the way her long, straight blonde hair brushed across them as she made her way up towards me. She was legitimately beautiful, and if I wasn't already involved with two girls, she would have certainly been the type of girl I would go for.

"Adam, this is Sarah. Her douchebag boyfriend just ditched her, so I thought I'd invite her to sit with us. You dont mind do you?" The truth was I did a little, as even though she had seemed curious, I doubted we would be able to really have too much fun with her sitting beside us. Still I was never one to be rude.

"Fine with me. Hi Sarah. Sorry about your boyfriend."

She smiled at me as Ella retook her seat, and then plopped herself down on my other side. "It's fine, I was going to dump him tonight anyway. He's got a tiny cock and I don't think he's ever even heard the word clit."

That shocked me a bit, and I literally had no idea what to say. "Uhh...sorry?"

She laughed. "It's cool. Soooo, you're really hot and Ella said you've got a big cock, and that you wouldn't mind me watching her play with it?"

"Whoa. Um. Ella?" I stammered, turning to her. She was busily texting away on her phone, but looked up as I spoke and I mouthed Eve's name at her. She just grinned at me, and leaned over, snapping a picture of Sarah with her phone, and then went back to texting.

I looked back and forth between Sarah and Ella. "Shit, um. That sounds great, but-"

"Shut it Adam, it's fine." She held up her phone to me, showing me she had been texting Eve. I was surprised at how quick she had told Eve what had happened, and even more surprised to see that Eve was totally fine with it. She even said that Sarah could join in, as long as we didn't have sex.

She took her phone back, and sat upright, dragging me into a kiss. "That's so fucking hot." Sarah half whispered biting her lip and gently massaging her tits as she watched us make out.

Ella grinned at her as she pulled out of our kiss. "So, Sarah. Do you wanna watch orrrr." She let the sentence trail off, and instead ran her fingertips up the girl's thigh, which elicited a shiver from her.

"Oh god. Seriously? I'd fucking love to." She quickly threw up the armrest between us and scooted up against me. "You guys are both gorgeous, and I got so turned on by what you were doing before." She leaned in as if she were about to kiss one of us, though I'm not sure which, but Ella put out a hand and stopped her as she looked at her phone again.

"Okay, first, you need to know something."

Sarah suddenly drew back as if she were afraid Ella was about to admit to having herpes. Ella half giggled, waving her hand as if to shoo away the girl's first thoughts.

"Oh god, no! It's nothing like AIDS or that I have a dick or anything." Sarah seemed to relax a bit at that, but wore a bit of a puzzled look. "But, if you want to join, you need to know, I share Adam with my best friend."

Sarah's eyes shot wide, but it seemed to be more out of genuine interest than anything negative. "Oh fuck! And that works? Is she here too?"

Ella got serious then. "No she's not, and it works for us because we all trust each other. But if you want to join in, we need to trust you to. So if you do you've got to have a really open mind about what I tell you next okay, and you can't tell anyone about any of this. If that doesn't sound like something you can do, then you can still watch, but we can't let you join in"

"Oh my godddd. Yes! This is getting me really fucking hot. I don't care what it is. I want in." I'm normally a pretty good judge of character, and although I didn't know Sarah, and was a bit shocked by her openness, she seemed genuine. Still I wasn't sure telling her our secret was a good idea, and I gave Ella a questioning look.

She ignored it and continued talking to Sarah. "My best friend, and our other lover, is Adam's sister." And there it was. They way she laid it out so bluntly, as if daring Sarah to object shocked me, and for a moment I though she would do just that.

Instead, her hand moved down and into her skirt as if of its own accord, and she half moaned a response. "Ohhhh shiiit. That is so fucking dirty. I fucking love it." Her eyes were closed, as if she were trying to picture what Ella had just told her, and I could see her hand working down below.

Personally, I found it ridiculously hard to believe that a random girl of about my age could be so easy going about my situation, and almost harder to believe that Eve was okay with it. So i found myself wondering if it was all one of Linoge's schemes. Still Ella seemed comfortable, and Sarah seemed very comfortable, so I did my best to relax and just let go of my worry. All my fantasies seemed to be coming true lately, and even if things were going to go bad, I thought I might as well enjoy it while I could.

It was actually kind of funny to me how much my life was starting to feel like some harem anime. All the aspects were there. There was a villain, the sweet girl who really loved me, the sultry temptress, and now the blonde bombshell who just had to get in on it. Only instead of competing, they all seemed content with sharing me. Also, I didn't spout a nosebleed or pass out at every sexual advance.

Still laughing inwardly at the absurdity of it all, I reached out to Sarah. It was a light touch at first, and I ran my fingers up her thigh much as I had with Ella before. She shuddered at the contact, and before I knew what was happening, she had lifted herself up and was feverishly removing her panties, which like her bra were white and lacy.

Now that we were alone in the theater, I really started to wish we had chosen a different movie. Although it was great that we were alone, a monster movie that takes place almost entirely at night made it pretty hard to properly appreciate the visual delights of either Ella or Sarah's bodies. Still it would be handy in case a stray moviegoer or employee happened to pop in, so I tried not to be too down about it.

At least I could somewhat see as her panties came off and she spread her legs wide, revealing a gorgeous pussy with puffy outer lips that seemed to signal she was nowhere near as experienced as her seemingly ravenous sexual appetite made her seem.

Personally I considered that a good thing. I've never been the type of guy who bought into the idea that guys were supposed to be promiscuous while girls were supposed to be pure, and I've always thought that it was great for a girl to be open about and proud of her sexuality. Still, a part of me wasn't big on the idea of being with a girl who had been around every block in the state, especially since all my experience came from three girls.

None of those thoughts really occurred to me at the time however, as she grabbed me and pulled me in to start making out like her life depended on it. She must have been stupid horny, as I could actually hear the squishing sound of her fingers plowing into her soaking wet pussy. I must admit, I wasn't far behind her, especially when I felt Ella's arms encircling me from behind and her soft lips on the side of my neck. One of her hands slipped under my shirt, and she gently ran her nails across my chest which caused my flesh to break out into goosebumps. Her other found its way into my pants, and within moments had pulled out my cock, which was so hard it was almost trembling.

"Oh fuck!" Sarah half moaned as Ella pulled me back and she first caught sight of my now exposed shaft. "I need that inside me so bad!"

Ella wagged her finger at Sarah. "Sorry, no sex. At least not here. I'm not even allowed to."

"Awwww, but I've never had one that big before, and it looks sooooo good."

Ella stroked me slowly, pointing the head of my dick right at Sarah. "Well, why don't you consider this an audition. If we really like you, then maybe you can come with us later and meet Eve and we can all get fucked."

Ella didn't wait for a response, but instead spun me around and pushed me back into my seat. Then, dragging Sarah out of hers she knelt down in front of me and directed Sarah to do the same. Having two beautiful girls on their knees in front of you is a sight that could never get old, especially when your cock is sticking up between their faces, and you know the pleasure that is only moments away.

Sarah's mouth found its way around my dick first, at Ella's not quite gentle suggestion. She practically shoved the girl onto my dick so hard I bottomed out in her throat. Still, Sarah didnt seem to mind, and I started to think she might be a bit of a submissive.

As Sarah sucked, Ella took the opportunity to reach into her shirt and unclasp her bra, and then remove it all without Sarah's mouth ever leaving my dick. "Hmm, small but nice. We can work with that." Ella said as she roughly squeezed Sarah's tits that were now completely uncovered, and then dragged her up to lock her into a passionate kiss. I had to agree.

They were maybe slightly bigger than I had first suspected, but definitely in the small b range. I didnt mind that. Size was never a big deal to me, and they really did look nice with her little barely there nipples. In fact, I found i really wanted to suck on them.

So, I decided I would do just that. It wasn't normally like me to be quite so aggressive, but since it seemed like she liked it, I grabbed her and pulled her up on top of me, and immediately sucked one of her tiny nipples into my mouth.

"Oh fuuuuuck. God I want to fuck you so bad right now." She moaned and wrapped her arms around my head as I sucked on and teased her nipple with my tongue, and I could feel her shifting her hips, trying to get my dick to find her hole. I have to admit I was tempted to let her.

Instead I reached down and positioned my dick so the underside of my shaft was pressed against her pussy, then grabbing her ass, I began to make her grind on me, much the way that Ella had done with me before.
"Good boy Adam." I heard Ella say as I felt her hands roaming over both mine and Sarah's bodies. It was nice, but I had a better idea. I reached out and laced my fingers into the back of her hair, and then began to guide her head down to where Sarah's pussy was grinding against my dick, totally without me guiding her anymore.

Ella got the idea immediately, and seconds later I felt her tongue against my balls, then sliding up along my shaft, and then it was gone "Oh fuck! Yeah lick me. Lick my tight little ass!" Sarah was going nuts on top of me, grinding like she was going to die if she slowed down. To be honest if she didn't soon, then both of us would likely be wearing my cum out of the theater.

Although I sort of liked the idea of splattering her, or maybe both of them with cum, and then having them walk out without cleaning it up, it turned out it wasn't to be. Moments later Sarah began to shudder violently and buck against me erratically.

She locked her lips onto mine and shoved her tongue into my mouth as her orgasm took her, and by the way she moaned, I suspected my mouth was the only thing keeping her from screaming.

When her convulsions finally died down she collapsed against me, almost gasping for breath, but still lightly rocking her hips as if to try to eek out any last remnants of her orgasm that might not have been released. Meanwhile, I could feel Ella lapping up the juices that were now soaking my balls and the bottom of my shaft.

"Mm yummy. My turn." Sarah however seemed to be in a daze and made no attempt at all to move. That is, until Ella stood up, pulled her back by the hair, and began to kiss her while wrapping one hand around her throat. This caused Sarah to start grinding harder again, and I suspected she really did like it rough.

"Uh uh. Its my turn, you already came all over his cock, now I want to."

Sarah let out a disappointed groan, but obliged, shakily getting to her feet and stepping back. I expected Ella to take up the same position, but instead she turned around and began to rub her ass against my dick. "Mmm that feel good baby?" She asked.

"Oh yeh. I love that ass." To prove my point I gave it a little slap and a squeeze, which made her gasp a little.

"Mmm. Don't you wish you could just stick your big hard dick in it right now? Better not tire yourself out. You might just have six holes tonight to fuck instead of four."

My dick pulsed as she talked. The idea of fucking all three girls, both in their pussies and their asses was erotic beyond belief. Still, I had no idea If Sarah would let me, or even Eve for that matter. That really wasn't something we had discussed.

As if reading my mind Ella spoke up. "Sarah, you'll let Adam stick his big cock up your ass wont you?"

Sarah had returned to fingering her pussy, and her other hand had begun massaging my balls between Ella's legs. "Oh god yes. Anything. You can fuck all my holes any way you want. Ive only ever had Brad's little prick and I want yours so bad!"

That actually surprised me. I didnt really take her for only having been with one person, considering how open she had been with us so far. Still, that was too good an offer to turn down.

"Mmm good. We have a couple strap-ons at home, so we can all fuck each other really good." Then leaning back and whispering in my ear, "and Eve wants us to use one on her tonight like you did with me."

That sent another surge through my dick which elicited an "Mmm" from Ella. "Now why don't you suck his cock while he finger fucks me."

Ella leaned back against me and pulled down the armrests on either side of me, and then threw her legs over them, spreading them wide open. Then she lifted herself up lightly, causing my dick to spring free, and almost shoot right into her pussy. "Oh wow, looks like someone has a mind of his own! Rub this pussy baby. It's all yours."

I didnt need any more instruction, and it seemed neither did Sarah, as her mouth engulfed my dick almost as soon as it was free. She gagged slightly at first, as she shoved it down as far into her throat as she could. It was impressive actually as she made it almost all the way to the base on her first attempt. But she wasn't content with almost and kept trying until, after a few more up and down motions, I felt it bottom out, and her tongue stretch out and begin to lick my balls.

"Oh wow, you're good" Ella said watching as our new friend swallowed me whole.

It was actually hard to focus with that level of stimulation, but I managed to find Ella's clit and start massaging it. With my other hand I pulled out one of her tits and began teasing the nipple which became instantly hard.

I remembered Ella telling me she liked clit stimulation best, so I didnt bother plunging my fingers into her the way Sarah had been doing to herself, and instead focused on circling my fingertips around her clit. She meanwhile, had locked one hand into Sarah's hair, and was forcing the girl's head up and down so that I was basically throatfucking her. She didn't seem to mind at all.

"Don't-uff blow in her-uhhh mouth Adam." Ella, whispered to me between moans, while pulling her shirt up. "I want you-oh fuck to shoot it right over my-ohhhhhh my pussy. Then I can- oh my fucking god Adam!" She didn't manage to finish her sentence as an orgasm took her and she began to moan loudly, pushing Sarah down hard on me as she did.

I was actually worried she might hurt her for a second, until I heard the sound of her fingers pounding furiously into her pussy, and then a loud groan as she started to cum again. That did it for me too. "Oh shit. I'm gonna-"

Before I could even finish, Ella yanked Sarah's head up with one hand, and began stroking me hard and fast with the other. Within seconds the pressure built to its breaking point, and I felt a surge like an explosion shoot through my cock.

The cum gushed out, shooting all the way up to land between her tits and leaving a long gooey string going straight down all the way to her pussy. a couple more spurts followed, each landing a couple inches lower than the last. After that a couple more small spurts landed right above her clit, and a but dribbled out onto her hand.

"Oh fuck that's so hot." Sarah moaned, and without Ella even telling her to, she leaned forward and first sucked the last of the cum from my cock, before going to work licking Ella clean. She didn't seem the least bit squeamish about the taste of cum, rather she seemed to love it.

Ella meanwhile let her legs down off the armrests and started to lick off what had ended up on her own hand, enjoying the feel of Sarah's tongue lapping the jizz from her body and paying special attention to what had slid down onto her pussy. "Mmm good girl. I think you pass. So Adam, what do you think? Should we take her home to meet Eve?"

I looked down at the blonde bombshell on her knees in front of me, sweet little cumslut that she was. She smiled up at me. She really did seem to be a sweet girl beneath all the horniness, and for a second, I really felt bad about bringing her into our sordid situation. I even wondered what might happen when Linoge found out, if he hadn't already.

Still, we had basically promised she could have sex with me, and I didn't want to send her home to think about how she had lost a boyfriend, or to feel rejected by us.

"Yeah. Let's go." The movie was only half over, but who gives a shit? We had better things to do


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Bkil 15/12/12(Sat)09:41 No. 24030 ID: 0365bc

That update was well worth the wait. Is Adam going to accumulate more girls into his self proclaimed not-a-harem-story life?


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soli 15/12/12(Sat)09:49 No. 24031 ID: cd8c01

Probably not. This story is almost done. I hadn't planned Sarah actually, but then as I was editing what I had already written, and began to continue the story, there she was, sitting in the theater.


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Anonymous 16/01/15(Fri)09:53 No. 24080 ID: 1eeea4

oh wow i thought this story was dead. Keep the updates coming plz.


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Anonymous 16/04/08(Fri)12:13 No. 24184 ID: 30fc83

The comment above ^^^ is also me. I might have spoken too soon.


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Anonymous 16/04/10(Sun)09:41 No. 24190 ID: ac8f1a

>>24031
Shit. When the fuck will this finish? I read the entire thing in one day, and checked the dates. Now I'm worried it's going to be another year or more before you're done. Fuck.


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Anonymous 16/04/28(Thu)10:50 No. 24230 ID: 4d28f4

Soli for the love of god FINISH THE STORY


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Soli 16/06/05(Sun)06:02 No. 24310 ID: cd8c01

Wow guys. I cant believe its been almost 2 years since I started this story. Honestly, I expected it to be much shorter, and to be finished a long time ago. However, I'm pleased to report, that I have licked it back up, and have been busily writing, and I almost have a chapter ready to go up. Not only that, but this chapter will finally bring into play the identity of linoge.

Its been a long time coming, but the story is swiftly drawing to its conclusion.


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Soli 16/06/07(Tue)06:13 No. 24318 ID: cd8c01

Ok guys. I know its been quite awhile, vut here, finally, is the next chapter. I decided to hold off the part about linoge until the next, as I had a new idea for how to do it, but I guarantee that the next chapter will be quite revealing. By the way, sorry about the weird way the punctuation in quotes changes at one part of this story. My writing app has decided to insist that I use the UK method of punctuating quotations.



It was pretty quiet in the lobby of the theater as our movie had been starting pretty late, and there were only a couple still scheduled for the night. Still, I couldn't help enjoying the looks I received from the few patrons and employees who caught sight of me walking out with a girl on each arm. Especially considering that more than a passing glance at them would make it pretty clear that we had been up to no good.

Sarah had neglected to put her undergarments back on, and instead stuffed her bra into her purse and her underwear into my pocket. A souvenir as she put it. In the light of the lobby, I could see that her shirt was indeed a pale blue, and if you got within a few feet of her, it wasn't hard to make out her nipples beneath the sheer fabric. The increased light also finally afforded me the chance to get a better look at her features.

The first thing I noticed was that her hair, which I had initially thought to be totally straight, actually was very slightly wavy and fell to just beneath her breasts. She had thrown a bit of it over each shoulder, I assumed to preserve a bit of modesty on the walk out, since it obscured her beautifully perky breasts just enough that you couldn't tell they were bare under her shirt from a distance.

Next was her eyes. They were a beautiful shade of blue, which almost perfectly matched her shirt. The blue eyes and blonde hair really gave her that all American girl look, and I wondered if she ever spent any time as a cheerleader. Looking at her you would never suspect the kind of raw sexuality beneath the surface, and she sort of reminded me of Elisha Cuthbert in the girl next door, both in the way she looked, and her overall persona. That was fine with me. I had jerked off to her more than any other actress I could think of.

It felt good strolling through that lobby with the girls, knowing the envy that every guy who saw us must have been feeling. Especially as we walked out the door and caught sight of the guys who Sarah had been with before.

They saw us almost immediately. "Yo! Sarah what the fuck?" It must have been Brad who called out, and he almost immediately began walking towards us at a pretty fast clip.

Sarah didn't even bother to look at him. "I told you to fuck off Brad. And I wouldn't fuck with us. Adam does MMA, and he will seriously kick the shit out of you."

That was a total lie. I was in good shape, and until recently had worked out pretty often, but I had never been in a real fight in my life. If it had come down to it, I felt like I could probably take the guy one on one as he was a short scrawny little guy. Still, I wasn't sure I wanted to test it.

Apparently he didn't want to find out whether it was true, and immediately slowed down, opting to try to talk to her from a distance rather than muscle her away from me. "Sarah, baby. I'm sorry. Just stop and talk to me."

Sarah stopped, though by her expression, I guessed that forgiving him wasn't really on her agenda for the night. Still she turned to face him. "What Brad? You want to beg me to forgive you and tell me how this will never happen again? I've heard it over and over. We're done!"

Brad approached her, and I could tell by the shift in his tone that he thought he was going to win, despite what Sarah had just said. "Come on baby. I just thought we could have a little fun. You know, get a little crazy with my boys. They heard how you get when you drink, and I thought we could.... you know"

Sarah actually laughed. "Oh so you just wanted to get me drunk and have a little gang bang with your buddies right? "

"Ahh, come on baby-" He reached out and touched her arm as he spoke. That turned out to be a mistake. Before he could say another word, Sarah slammed her knee into his groin, hard, and he just crumpled.

As he lay there moaning and grasping his balls on the ground, Sarah squatted down right in front of his face. "Take a good look Brad, because you are never going to see this pussy again. I'm going to go be Adam's now, and do every single dirty thing he can think of. Then, when we're done, im going to get down on my knees and beg him for more."

Sarah stood and started to walk away, and I almost felt sorry for the guy, until he decided to open his dumb fucking mouth again. "Fuck you bitch! You can't walk away from me. You know you'll come back, and I'll remember this shit you little whore!"

Sarah stopped again. Then looked directly at me and smiled, but it wasn't a happy smile. Rather, it was the smile of a person who was about to totally ruin someone's day and was totally thrilled about it.

She turned around and squatted in front of him again. "You know what Brad. You're right. I cant just leave you like this. You know that thing you always begged me for?" Brad opened his mouth to say something, but before he could say a word, a stream of piss hit him right in the face.

He choked and sputtered as she unleashed on him, trying to move away, but still in too much pain. When she finished, Sarah reached into her purse, pulled out a tissue, wiped, and shoved it into his mouth. Then as she stood, she kicked him hard, right in the ribs. "Enjoy motherfucker."

Ella and I stood there in shock as she turned around and ran back over to us with a look of pure joy on her face. Together, we all ran to my car and jumped in, and the last we saw of Brad in the rear view mirror was him lying on the ground with all his buddies crowded around him.

Ella turned around and looked at Sarah as we drove off. "Holy shit. That was fucking intense. Remind me never to piss you off."

In the mirror I saw Sarah grin widely. "Yeah, unless you want to get pissed on."

There was silence for a couple seconds, before we all burst into laughter so hard that I nearly swerved into another lane of traffic. Ella immediately pulled out her phone and called Eve.

She spent the next fifteen minutes or so telling Eve everything that had happened that night. "Oh wow, she seriously peed on him. That's nuts. I really want to meet her. Is she coming back with you?"

Ella turned and looked in the back at Sarah. "I think so. You are right Sarah?"

Sarah leaned forward, grabbed Ella and proceeded to shove her tongue into her mouth. While they made out, I heard Eve's voice through the phone. "Um, hello?"

Ella held up the phone, but Sarah didn't seem interested in breaking the kiss, so I took it from her hand. "Hey Evie. They're kinda making out, so I think that's a yes."

Eve laughed. "Good she sounds like a lot of fun."

"Yeah, I think so too. I wish you came with us though."

"I know my love, I miss you too. So hurry up and come home so I can have some of that big dick for myself."

"Okay, we're like twenty minutes away, so I'll see you soon. I love you Eve."

"I love you too. Bye." With that I hung up the phone, and moments later the girls broke their kiss.

"Sorry, I'm super horny right now and you just looked so fucking kissable." Sarah then turned to look at me. "So do you, but I wouldn't want you crashing the car before I get to have you inside me."

She leaned back in her seat, and as if to further make her point, began massaging her pussy. "Sooooo, you and Eve, are you really...?" She let the sentence trail off, but I knew what she was asking.

"Yes. We are. Does that bother you?"

She closed her eyes and continued slowly masturbating. "Uh uh. Tell me about it. Please." So I began to tell the story, leaving out some of the nastier bits, and totally avoiding Linoge of course. She didn't speak the entire time, content to just listen. After a couple minutes, Ella reached over and took my hand and pulled it down between her thighs, and I gently fingered her as I spoke. For awhile, the only sound in the car was my voice, and the soft moans of the two beautiful girls riding along.

I don't think either girl noticed as we pulled into the driveway right as I was finishing the story. In fact neither even opened their eyes until I stopped the car. Finally Sarah spoke. "I don't care what anyone thinks. That's really romantic. Eve sounds like an amazing girl. I cant wait to meet her.

I pulled my hand from between Ella's thighs to turn off the car and unbuckle my seatbelt, and she turned around and leaned between the seats and gave Sarah a quick kiss. "Well, you're about to. Just follow us." With that we all got out and made our way inside.

When I opened the door, everything was dark, and for a moment I started to panic. I was sure something terrible had happened.
"Eve! Evie where are you?" I called out, terrified that Linoge had done something to her before I could get back. There was no response. "EVE!" I practically yelled.

Then Ella's phone rang. "Hey babe, where are you.........uh huh. Okay got it." She hung up and then turned to me. "She said for you to go get undressed and then to meet us in your mom's bathroom. Oh, and to turn on your damn ringer."

I had forgotten that I had turned off my ringer for the movie, and immediately pulled out my phone. My heart was racing as I pulled it out and saw a missed text from Eve, telling me to send the girls in while I got undressed, and that she had left a present for me in my bedroom.

I breathed a huge sigh of relief as Ella took Sarah's hand and led her away. Of course that relief turned to annoyance when I saw a text from linoge as well.

"Well well well. Looks like Ella is a better friend than I thought. And that Sarah, wow. You're becoming quite the ladies man Adam."

I stuffed the phone back in my pocket, and made my way into my bedroom. There on the bed was Eve's gift, or gifts to be more precise. I was actually pretty surprised at what I saw.

There was a pair of fuzzy handcuffs, four leather cuffs with buckles and a metal loop, four short lengths of black rope, one of those buttplugs with the fake jewel on the end, a candle and lighter, a vibrator, a blindfold, and a leather paddle. Lying in the middle of it all was a note. I picked it up and read it.

Adam,
I love you so much. You're my reason for getting up in the mornings. I wish so much that we could be open about us. I want you to know that I will always be yours, and that anything you ask of me I will do happily. I am yours mind body and spirit, and tonight I want to make my body yours to play with any way you choose. These toys are for you to use on me and Ella("and Sarah?" written in above) any way you like. Have fun and don't hold back baby. I love you.
Yours always,
Eve


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Soli 16/06/07(Tue)06:13 No. 24319 ID: cd8c01

No sooner had I finished reading, than I received another text. "Oh my what a gift. Seems like they want it rough. Why don't you really let the beast out tonight. See how rough they really like it. Don't let me down. BZZT!"

My hands shook, as I attempted to respond. I didn't want to hurt any of the girls, least of all Eve. Try as I might, I couldn't think of anything to say other than that I was going to kill him when I found him. I decided to leave it. I was pretty sure he knew what I was thinking.

I stuck my phone back in my pocket, then stripped off my clothes, intentionally leaving my phone behind. I may have had to do what he said, but I wasn't going to bring him along. I tossed my clothes aside, "accidentally" landing my shirt over my laptop, and made my way to the bathroom.

As I entered, I understood exactly what was going on. Mom had fallen in love with this place as soon as she saw it for one reason. It had a huge jacuzzi style bathtub, and the girls seemed to be thoroughly enjoying it.

They giggled as I entered, my cock swinging freely as I made my way towards them. "Mmm yummy." Sarah said from beneath Ella who had been straddling her and kissing her neck.

Eve sat across from them, seemingly content to just watch for the moment. "Adam be a dear and refill my glass would you please." She held out an empty wine glass towards me, and I saw that there were two full glasses, and two bottles and an additional empty glass sitting beside the tub.

"Mom is going to be pissed you got into her wine." I said, though I still picked up the open bottle and poured some into her glass.

Eve laughed. "Sweetie, who do you think bought it for us. She brought it after you left. Said it was to celebrate your first girlfriend.".

I shook my head. "Oh geeze mom." Honestly I wasn't that surprised. Mom was ok with us having a little wine as long as we were home. Still I never expected her to buy us a bottle, much less two. To be honest though, a little liquid courage was just what I needed for what was likely to come.

"Just take it easy. Don't get whiskey dick or we are all going to be very disappointed." Ella chimed in.

I poured myself a glass, likely the only one I would drink as I never much cared for wine in the first place. "Don't worry, I'm only having a little." With that I climbed in beside Eve, who almost instantly wrapped her arms around me and began to kiss me.

"Mmm, I missed you." She said after finally breaking the kiss. "Do you like your presents? I've always kinda wanted to try bdsm." Sarah moaned her approval, as Ella sucked one of her nipples into her mouth.

"Yeah, but how did you get all that?"

Eve smiled. "Amazon gift card. I think I like this girl. She seems fun."

"Sarah? Yeah me too." As I spoke, Ella climbed off of Sarah and came over and stretched herself out across Eve and I. Sarah meanwhile scooted over next to me.

Ella laid her head down on my chest and then picked up her glass of wine and took a sip. "You should have seen the way she sucked his cock. I mean all the way down her throat without even slowing down. She might even be better than me."

Sarah grinned, sipping at her own glass of wine. "Brad always liked watching me suck. He bought a bunch of really big dildos and wanted me to deep throat them while we fucked. Honestly that was more fun than actually having sex with him. I mean seriously." She wiggled her little finger to demonstrate her point.

Eve laughed. "Well you won't feel that way with Adam's cock inside you." She reached down and gave me a little squeeze as she spoke. "He definitely isn't small."

"Oh god I know. I wanted to fuck him so bad in the theater. Like you have no idea. But are you sure it's ok? I mean he's your man, and I don't want to, like, do anything that's going to make any of you not like me."

Eve took a sip of her wine. "Yeah, it's fine. I want to play with you too. I just feel like what we all do together is for fun, and what we do when its just the two of us, well, that's for love, you know?" Sarah nodded. "Just don't try to go behind anyone's back, and for now accept that I'm the only one who gets him one on one, and we'll be just fine."

"I can handle that." Sarah said, and then emptied her glass. "I think I need a little more wine though."

A little more wine turned out to be a bit of an understatement, as over the next half hour, the girls polished off both bottles. I only ever had that one glass. Thankfully, mom had the foresight to buy the weakest wine she could find, so while the girls all got rather tipsy, none of them seemed drunk enough to end up spending the rest of the night leaning over the toilet.

Overall, the bath turned out to be a great idea, and even though we were all naked, and there was a good deal of touching and kissing, it wasn't really all that sexual. Ella and Sarah traded horror stories about their exes, Sarah asked to see Eve's scar and then for some inexplicable reason, decided to kiss it. They even goaded me into telling them how I lost my virginity, as embarrassing as it was.

Finally, once the bottles were empty and we were all thoroughly pruny, Eve turned off the jets and opened the drain suggesting we take the party to my room. So we all got out and grabbed towels. Of course, it made no sense to dry ourselves at that point, and instead ended up drying each other, which quickly degenerated into fondling and making out more than actual drying.

With that done, Ella led Sarah off to my room while Eve gathered up the towels and clothes, and I cleared away the bottles and made my way to the kitchen to put the glasses in the dishwasher. When I turned around, Eve was standing in the doorway behind me.

"I really do love you you know." She said, throwing her arms around my neck when I approached her.

"I love you too Evie. You know I dont need all this right? I'm happy with just you."

"I know." She said, and then kissed me gently. "I know you would be with just me and never complain. It's just the kind of guy you are. I also know that no matter how loyal a person is, they cant stop themselves from being attracted to other people, or wanting them. Honestly, I've never really met another guy I had any interest in, but since I started experimenting with Ella, I've found myself really interested in girls. So, I want to play with girls, and so do you, and if we do it together, no one ever has to get hurt. So that seems pretty good to me. Plus it's a lot of fun.". She gave me a grin that was both sheepish and mischievous.

"Yeah, I guess so. I just wanted you to know. All I need is you." With that I kissed her, and we both made our way to my bedroom to find the other girls.

As we entered my room, we spotted Ella and Sarah, clearly not content to just wait, busily attaching the cuffs and ropes to each of the bedposts. They were both still naked, and I couldn't help smiling a little while watching them scurry around, sometimes crawling on hands and knees on the bed as they worked.

I hung back by the doorway for the moment, enjoying the visual feast before my eyes, as Eve giggled and went to join their efforts. The three of them truly were a sight to behold. There was the tall Latin seductress with legs for days, the petite all American girl next door, and finally the firecracker redhead blossoming from sweet and innocent, and into a genuine sexual entity.

I was living a fantasy life, and I knew it. No one gets to be that lucky, and deep down in the pit of my stomach, was always this gnawing dread that sooner or later, the curtain would be pulled back, and the fantasy would be over.

I hated that fear. Even in moments where I should have been happy beyond all measure, it kept me from fully enjoying it. I wanted to let go, to just be with Eve, and Ella, and maybe even Sarah, but I knew that when that curtain was pulled back, he would be standing there. The architect of both my happiness and my dread.

He had pushed me to places I never would have gone on my own, and if things were different, if he had done it to help instead of for his own sick enjoyment, I probably would have been grateful. Still, Linoge wasn't my friend. He didn't care about me, or Eve. We were just a game to him. A game that I intended to make sure he lost.

I'm not sure how long I stood there staring, lost in thought, before I was snapped to attention, by the three giggling, half drunk girls dragging me towards the bed. They quickly shoved me down on it, and wasted no time buckling my arms and legs into the leather cuffs.

"Heyyyyy. I thought I was supposed to be tying you up", I complained playfully. I was actually a bit pleased, since I couldn't very well follow Linoge's suggestion if I was tied down. It felt good to disappoint him.

"Wait your turn stud" Sarah purred, leaning down to nibble my neck and run her hand over my chest.

"First we need to loosen up a bit more with a little game" Ella chimed in, pulling out what appeared to be a bottle of Tequila.
"What th- Where the hell did you get that"? I asked. Ella just put a finger to my lips to shush me.

"Okay. Rules. One. Adam gets blindfolded. Two. We take turns doing something naughty with him. Three. He has to guess who it was. Five. If he gets it right, that girl takes a shot. Everyone got it?
"You skipped four", Sarah chimed in, laughing so hard she could have snorted. She was clearly a bit drunk already.

"Um, I dont know if more alcohol is a good idea. I mean-" Ella put her finger back on my lips.

"Shhhhhhh. It's a great fucking idea. Relaxxxxx. Ok. Here we go". Ella quickly pulled the blindfold over my eyes. "Can you see anything"?

"Uhh. No. Look I-". Before I could finish my sentence, soft lips met mine. The kiss was soft and delicate, but passionate at the same time. The feeling was unmistakable. It was my Eve.

The kiss was wonderful, but far too short, and as she pulled back, I desperately wished my hands were free so that I could stop her. She set my very soul on fire.

"Okay oo wus it mate"? One of the girls asked in a phony British or Australian accent. It was horrible, and all the girls burst out laughing at it.

I wondered for a second if I should get it wrong on purpose, so Eve didnt end up plastered, but I didn't know what would happen if I got it wrong, and I figured a shot or two couldn't be too bad. "Evie", I announced confidently.

"Woooohoooo", Ella practically yelled. "Shot time babes..... Holy shit dude. You're a fucking pro, girl. Ok. Next."

The next girl was as easy to figure out as Eve. I knew within seconds of my cock entering her mouth that it must be Sarah. I didnt have much experience with her obviously, and both Eve and Ella were capable of deepthroating, but not as quickly and effortlessly as I was now sliding down the throat I was in. She definitely had skill when it came to giving head

"Hey there Sarah", I said grinning broadly.

Her mouth immediately popped off my dick. "Awww how did you know"?

Eve answered before I could. "Because you should join the fucking circus. Jesus how do you swallow his cock that easy"? Sarah just giggled in response, then made a "blegh" sound as she took her shot.

The game progressed for a couple more rounds. First Eve settled her pussy over my mouth, and as if I wouldn't have known otherwise, her little tuft of fiery pubes gave her away. Next was Ella who settled her ass on my cock and gave me a little lap dance. Another easy one since I had already had one from her.

Next up was Sarah again. She rubbed the head of my dick against her wet slit. Unfortunately I didnt get that one. I knew it wasn't Eve, because the pussy was bare, but I wasn't totally confident it wasn't Ella. Apparently the consequence for missing it was all three girls took a shot.

That was where the game broke down, to my relief. All three girls were getting pretty drunk, and I didn't want them to pass out and leave me tied up.

Eve wasted little time, and climbed on top of me, ripping off the blindfold, and kissing me passionately as she began to rub her pussy against my dick. Meanwhile Ella laid down beside me, popping one of Eve's nipples into her mouth, and seconds later I heard the buzz of the new vibrator turning on.

Sarah, who reputedly got wild when she drank, seemed to be living up to expectations. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw her putting in the plug, lighting the candle, and then picking up the paddle. Moments later there was a loud smack, and Eve moaned into my mouth. Whether it was pleasure or pain, I didn't know, though it was probably both.

Sarah giggled madly. "Smack" went the paddle again. "Smack smack". Eve started to whimper a bit, and when I opened my eyes I could see tears forming in the corners of hers.

I pulled out of the kiss. "Okay. Enough Sarah."

"No!" Eve blurted out suddenly. "More. Please. Spank me harder. Pleeeease".

"SMACK!" This time Eve actually yelped. I tried to pull free and stop it, but I couldn't get out of the restraints. I didn't like it. At all. Eve being in pain was not a turn on. It wasn't hot, or fun.

Turns out I didnt have to stop it. Eve did it for me. She quickly jumped up, grabbed Sarah by the throat, and slammed her onto the bed beside me. I had never seen this side of Eve before, and it honestly scared me a bit.

Ella seemed totally unperturbed. She simply rolled over and started sucking me as I watched the unfolding spectacle.

Eve had grabbed the candle, spread Sarah's legs wide open, and begun pouring the hot wax all over her. Sarah squealed as the hot wax dribbled over her erect nipples, and directly onto her clit. Still both girls were smiling, which was a bit of a comfort. Maybe it was just rough sex after all.

Sarah definitely didn't seem at all bothered. In fact, the roughness seemed to be driving her crazy. The girl's whole demeanor screamed "please, someone fuck me"!

Apparently that someone would be Ella, as she got up and pulled a strap on out of a bag beside the bed, and quickly slipped it on. As she approached, Eve retook her position on top of me. Meanwhile, Ella grabbed Sarah by her long blonde hair, and pulled her up off the bed.

Sarah moaned a mingled mix of pleasure and pain, but obliged willingly as Ella laid down beside me and pulled Sarah on top of her, much the way Eve was on top of me. We penetrated the two girls almost simultaneously, and I was treated to the sounds of their pleasured whimpers.

Eve rode me slowly, passionately. With her it was so much more than just sex. Even with the other two girls there, Eve made love to me. Sarah on the other hand, looked like she had just entered a bouncy castle. She rode the strap on like her life depended on it. Hard and fast, and without mercy. She clearly wanted to cum. Bad.

Even so, it was Eve who got there first. Even with our slow, sensual lovemaking, she found that magical bit of heaven much quicker. She moaned loudly, not bothering to hold back, and if I hadn't been so sexually active in the days leading up to that night, I may have came along with her.

Part of me wanted to. I liked the other girls, even had some feelings for Ella, but Eve was the only one who truly made me feel complete. Still, I didnt want to disappoint the others.

Sarah wasn't nearly as loud when she came. It was more of a long shuddering groan. It was still sexy, but it didn't have the same effect as Eve's cries of passion.

"Ella, I want it". Eve practically whispered as she very slowly rode me. I wasn't sure what she meant, but Ella seemed to know, and she pulled Sarah's panting body down to her and whispered something in her ear.

Sarah grinned and hopped off of Ella, and then quickly relocated, to directly over my face. Before I knew what was happening. Her pussy was grinding on my mouth, while she laced her fingers into my hair.

Having came already, she was much less vigorous, and her hips rocked slowly and methodically against my mouth, as I ran my tongue over her clit. She tasted nice, and oddly enough, smelled even better, and I wondered if she had sprayed perfume on herself sometime between our bath and when I came to the bedroom.

I didnt have long to think about it though, as there were more pressing matters. Namely, the fact that Ella was now pressing a strap on into Eve's asshole. I could feel it pushing in, threatening to squeeze out my cock if I let it.

Eve closed her eyes and grimaced a little, clearly in a bit of pain from the incursion into her forbidden garden. "More lube," she whispered to Ella, and then I felt something cold drip on my balls, followed by Ella's soft hands wiping it away.

This time, Eve didn't grimace when it slid slowly inside, but instead let out a little gasp, that seemed to be primarily pleasure. Slowly we began to thrust into her, rhythmically in and out.

The feeling was incredible, a tightness and pressure that was unbelievable, heightened by her soft moans and nails digging into my chest.
In and out we slid as my tongue worked feverish circles around Sarah's clit. She was the first to cum, and pressed down on my jaw almost hard enough to hurt as she did so. This time there was no long low grown, but a series of high moans and gasping breaths instead.

The sound of a girl's orgasm always excited me, which is probably part of the reason I had never been a big fan of porn stars. I hate the idea of someone moaning for no reason. Sounds of pleasure should never be faked if you ask me.

After Sarah came, she collapsed off of me, panting for breath and gently petting her swollen pussy. This let me put my full focus on Eve, who quickly leaned down and engulfed me in a kiss. I could tell from her breathing that her own orgasm wasn't far off, and she began frantically unbuckling my arms.

When they were free she pressed them to her beautiful perky tits, guiding me to squeeze them and pinch her hard nipples between my fingers. When her orgasm took her it was like a wave washed over her. It was so powerful that her eyes began to roll back into her head and the sounds that came from her were less moans and more like guttural grunts, as if she came so hard her voice was unable to articulate.

Eve shuddered slightly as Ella pulled the strap on out, and for a minute just laid there, head resting on my chest, panting and practically purring with satisfaction. It felt good to see her so pleased.

Unfortunately the moment couldn't last forever, and I still had two girls waiting to have me inside them. Thinking about it, I guess it wasn't that unfortunate at all. I'm sure any number of guys would give their left nut to be contemplating the question of which girl they should fuck first.

It was a pretty clear choice. After all, both Eve and Sarah came twice, and Ella hadn't gotten to at all. So as Eve slipped off of me and entwined herself with Sarah, gently kissing and fondling the blonde beauty, I sat up and unbuckled my legs.

Once they were free, I grabbed Ella by the arm and pulled her next to me. "Mmmm, finally", she half whispered as I leaned down over her to kiss her. Her hand immediately went to my cock and began slowly stroking it. "How do you want me, Adam".

The truth was that I really wanted to take her from behind. Her ass was a thing of beauty, and watching it bounce as my rock hard member penetrated her sweet pink pussy sounded incredible. However I knew I still had Sarah waiting for her turn, and that doggy style was a sure way to deplete pretty much any guy's sexual stamina, regardless of how much practice I had been getting.

Thankfully an idea presented itself, and I directed her to lie down on her stomach and pull one leg up while keeping the other straight. She seemed a bit unsure of what I was directing her to do, and to be honest I wasn't totally sure how well it was going to work myself.

Once she was in position I straddled the leg she held straight, and entered her sweet pussy. Any concern about difficulty or awkward angles instantly dissipated. It felt incredible, and better, I could grab and squeeze her ass while I fucked her, but it wasn't so intense as to make me cum too quickly.

"Mmm, that feels really good Adam. Oh fuck. God, I've been waiting all night for your big cock inside me". She turned her body so that she was more on her side so she could look back at me, while reaching down with one hand to massage my balls as I pushed deep inside her.

After a couple minutes her hand left my balls and I could feel her start to rub her clit. "Fuck. Harder baby. Fuck my pussy hard, please".

The pet name was unexpected, and for a second I worried it might upset Eve, but when she leaned over from Sarah and began kissing Ella, it became pretty obvious that it didnt bother her. So I obliged her and quickened my pace.

I still didnt want, to get too excited and blow my load yet, so I focused more on force that speed, making my strokes long, but hard, pressing deep inside her with every thrust. I soon felt her body begin to tense, and she head her breath as she rubbed her clit madly.

"Uhhhh-uh-hhhhh. Oh fu-uck. Yeah Adam. Oh. My. God". Hearing and feeling Ella cum like that almost pushed me over the edge, and I stopped thrusting and just ground my dick deep into ger as she came, so that I wouldn't fill her up right there.

Before I even knew what was happening, Sarah had squirmed out from under Eve, and pushed me back from Ella, causing and audible pop sound as my dick sprang free of her pussy. It was actually starting to ache a little, and I wasn't sure how much longer I could go without cumming without my dick literally exploding.

I momentarily thought about taking a break, but that idea was quashed quickly as my dick slid down into Sarah's throat. She sucked hard and greedily, cleaning away every bit of the mingled juices of the two girls I had just fucked.

My dick freshly sucked clean, she rolled Ella over and climbed on top of her presenting her ass, which was still plugged, to me. "Please, please, please fuck me Adam. Give me that big dick. I need it inside me so bad".

Before I could oblige her, Eve got up off the bed. I thought at first that she had decided to put a stop to it, by instead she wrapped her arms around me from behind and started to run them up and down my chest and stomach, until one of them found my dick.

She gently pushed me forward, positioning my head right against Sarah's soaking wet slit. Then she pushed me a little more. My dick sank in effortlessly. It wasn't because she wasn't tight, because she definitely was. She was just so wet that entering her was like going down a slip n slide.

Eve wrapped her arms around me again, and started guiding my motions. It was as if she was fucking Sarah with my body. The rhythm was slow, methodical, and Sarah pressed hard against me every time I sank all the way into her, and moaned her approval with every thrust.

Like I I said before, I usually hate straight porn because the girls moan so much and sound fake. The way Sarah was doing it didn't seem that way at all. She wasn't loud or over the top. It was more like soft little hums to let me know how good she felt. It was actually incredibly hot.

Sarah soon began to kiss Ella frantically, as she took matters into her own hands(or pussy I guess) and began slamming herself back against me hard and fast. It was pretty clear she was close to cumming again. Three girls, four orgasms on my dick. I was pretty proud of myself.

"Fuck. Oh fuck. Eve, can he cum inside me? Please"? She slowed down as she asked, as if trying to hold off her orgasm, or mine, or both.

Eve was silent for a moment, and the asked, "Are you on birth control"? It hadn't occurred to me before. If she wasn't, then what we were doing was incredibly stupid. She could get pregnant, and that would definitely fuck up everything.

Still, this little primal voice inside me whispered, "Do it. Cum inside her pussy and get her pregnant. Mark your territory forever". The urge was stupid, but strong.

Before I could either listen to it or push it away Sarah answered. "Unfff, implant", she groaned, holding up ger left arm to show the little bump of her birth control just under the skin.

In response, Eve pushed against me, forcing me deep into Sarah, and said in a voice barely above a whisper, "Do it Adam. Cum in her little pussy my love".

Sarah clearly heard, as she immediately started slamming against me even harder than before, and Ella reached around her ass, and started pressing on the plug. "Oh fuuuuck. I'm cumming", Sarah practically squealed.

That was when the edge came and passed. I saw stars as my world exploded before my eyes, and I pumped what felt like a gallon of hot sticky cum into Sarah's pussy. Im not sure I had ever came so hard in my life, and if it weren't for Eve holding onto me, I might have collapsed.

No sound escaped my lips as a load so big it actually began to overflow and spill out onto Ella's pussy below spewed from my engorged cock. It was like the force paralyzed my vocal chords, and made even the most guttural animalistic sounds impossible.

As my orgasm finished, I did basically collapse back against Eve, who held me close and leaned around to plant a soft kiss on my lips. I felt dizzy, and was shocked as I looked down and saw cum literally pour out of Sarah as my cock slipped out of her. Thankfully it all spilled onto Ella, who had reached a hand down to catch it and stop it from running onto the bed. I really didnt want cum stains all over my bedding.

"Holy fuck, Adam", Ella said, scooping up my cum before it ran down her pussy and onto the bed, "That's a lot of fucking cum."

I tried to laugh, or speak, or anything, but all I could manage was a shrug and a nod as I tried to catch my breath. Three girls at a time was fucking exhausting.


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Phoenix!!xlZGywLzWw 16/06/10(Fri)01:06 No. 24331 ID: fe6dc2

Top quality, man. I love this story and love you picking it up again.


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Anonymous 16/06/10(Fri)06:23 No. 24334 ID: 2d9dd5

>>24319
It's been so long I feel like I have to re-read the entire story first! Gah! Anyway, I really do love your content. I have to ask, would you be at all interested in working on stories together?


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Soli 16/06/10(Fri)10:31 No. 24337 ID: cd8c01

Ha, thanks guys. I have another chapter well on the way, just trying to figure it out because it feels like its going way too fast.

To your question anon, thats a pretty hard one to answer either way. Do you have any stories up on here? Beyond that, its a difficult commitment to make because my time for writing, and often motivation to do so is limited.

I do however have 2 or 3 other stories that ive started working on and may start to post once I finish this one that id be pretty open to hearing ideas or suggestions about.

One is along similar lines to this, very real world, one is a post apocalyptic story with biblical aspects, and the third is sort of between two timelines and covers a few characters in each time and also partly post apocalyptic.

Sex isnt the focus of the second or third, but will be an aspect unless I opt for a more mainstream approach.


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Anonymous 16/06/10(Fri)14:27 No. 24338 ID: 2d9dd5

>>24337
I suppose it's possible to maintain version control like git so that multiple people can edit it on their own time. But I understand if you'd rather not. As far as stories of my own up so far, I do not actually have any yet but have been inspired to start. I really love the works of AnonyMPC. I'm looking forward to your next installment either way, keep it up!


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Anonymous 16/06/15(Wed)15:01 No. 24354 ID: 7e2d9f

Really enjoying this story so far. Been following it for about a year do glad you kept writing it. Keep up the good work! :)


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Soli 16/06/29(Wed)04:37 No. 24396 ID: cd8c01

Ok guys. Here we go again. Gonna try to go ahead and wrap this one up pretty soon and start posting another I've been working on. As long as I feel in the mood to write, this one should be over within the next few weeks or so. Hope you guys have enjoyed it. Anyway here's the next chapter.



Exhausted, I collapsed onto the bed, while all three girls scampered across the hall to the bathroom to clean up. After a couple minutes of catching my breath, I decide I should probably go too. I could already feel the mixture of cum and girl juices drying on my cock, and if I didnt go wash it off, im sure it would have smelled pretty bad before too long. So with almost inhuman effort, I pried myself from the bed and made to follow.

Each step was like walking through wet cement. My legs were jello and I felt as if I had just gotten off one of those centrifugal force fairgound rides where you get inside and it spins so fast you get pressed up against the sides.

Still, onward I trudged, until I came to my pants crumpled on the floor. I hesitated, dreading pulling out my phone, but still part of me hoped that I had left him terribly disappointed by covering my webcam and leaving my phone behind.

Gingerly I bent down, nearly losing my balance in the process, and pulled my phone free. I wasn't at all prepared for what I found when I flipped on my screen. Nothing. There was no text, no threatening voicemail in a robotic voice. I mean sure, he had never done that anyway, but he could have.

A wave of relief washed over me. Maybe he had been called away by business, or had been so annoyed he didnt even bother to say anything, or who knows. But for that night I had been free, and it felt incredible. Of course, I had no way of knowing then what the next morning would hold, or the events that would follow. So with a new spring in my step, I crossed the hall into the bathroom with the girls.

When I entered, Sarah was sitting on the toilet. She looked up at me with a look of shock on her face. "Oh. Um... I'm not like, going, or anything. Im just getting the cum out...."

I laughed, "It's cool. Ive been in here while Eve peed. Not a big deal either way".

"Uh yeah, totally not peeing in front of you. If you're into that I am not the girl for you." We all laughed a bit at that, and I turned my back and made my way over to the shower where Ella and Eve were already washing away the smell and grime of our sex.

You would think fitting three people in one shower would have been cramped and uncomfortable, but the bathrooms in our place were seriously awesome. The shower was pretty huge, and even when Sarah joined us, we still had room to move around without shoving each other against the walls.

I wish I could say we had super crazy slippery shower sex that left all three girls panting on the shower floor with me standing triumphantly over them, cock proudly hanging like a medal of honor. Sadly, we were all pretty much exhausted, and though we helped each other clean up, and there were certainly some kisses and gropes shared between us, that was the extent of our sexual activity.

The girls had mostly sobered up by the time we got out and dried off, and all looked pretty bushed. Still none of us were quite ready to go to sleep, so still naked, we made our way back to my room and all climbed into my bed.

We talked for a bit, sharing stories, and deciding what to do about Sarah, since taking her home was pretty much out of the question at that point. Eve came up with the idea that before mom came home, she and Sarah would go into her room, and she would introduce her as a friend who came over to keep her company while Ella and I were on our date.

I wondered about whether Ella should go too, but our mom was pretty lax about the idea of a girl sleeping over with me, so we didnt think it would be a big deal. Ella practically purred when she found out she would get to spend the entire night in bed with me.

Honestly, I was more concerned that Ella might try to take advantage of the situation and break Eve's rule about not having sex without her. Still, the events of the past couple nights had made me feel much better about Ella than I had when we were planning to make her our cover.

She seemed to be taking the whole thing very seriously, and had been much more considerate of Eve's feelings, which lead me to believe she wasn't nearly as self centered as I had thought. Maybe she loved me, maybe she loved us both. That was ok, as long as she knew Eve would always be what was most important to me.

Once we had things settled, I set an alarm, noticing that I still didn't have any texts, which pleased me greatly, and we turned on a movie. It was some comedy with Kevin Hart. I wasn't particularly interested to be honest. I had three beautiful naked girls cuddled up with me. I was content. At some point I fell asleep. I guess we all did.

When I woke up, it was nearly noon. Mom would have been home hours before. I instantly grabbed my phone in a panic. It was dead. Looking up, I saw that my charger wasn't properly plugged in. "Fuck fuck fuck."

My panicked muttering caused the girls to stir, which was when I noticed there were only two. Eve was gone. I wondered if she had woken up and retreated to her own room before Mom had gotten home. I prayed to a God I didnt believe in that that was the case.

"What's going on?" Ella mumbled, still half asleep.

"My god damn phone died. Get dressed quick! Sarah, stay in here with Ella until I go find Eve and see what's going on."

We quickly got dressed, and I silently slipped out of my room. Sneaking across the hall I peeked into Eve's room. She wasn't there. "In here." I heard her call out from the living room.

I turned and made my way down the hall towards her, still trying to be as silent as possible. "Where's mom?" I whispered as I reached the living room.

Eve was sitting on the couch with her knees pulled up to her chest. I couldn't read her expression and once again I started to panic.

"She's out. Oh God Adam. She found us." My heart sank. Our worst nightmare had come true. A million thoughts began to race through my head.

Would she send one or both of us away? Would she hate us, call us disgusting, and wish we were never born? Would we ever be able to be together again?

Eve's face was wet with tears, and I rushed over to her, wrapping her up in my arms. "Oh god Adam. What are we going to do?"

I couldn't answer. I didn't know. The only thing I could think of was to run away. We would get far away where no one knew us. I loved Eve too much to stop. I had to be with her.

"Eve, what happened?" I asked.

Her voice was hollow as she recounted the morning to me. "I guess your phone died. I woke up because I heard mom call my name from the hallway. She looked in my room, and then when I wasn't there, she turned around, and the door wasn't closed....and she saw us. All of us, naked in bed together. She didn't even say anything. Just froze, and then ran out. So I threw on my clothes and went out. She was grabbing her keys, and when I called out to her, she was crying. She just said she would be back and we would talk. Adam I'm so scared. I don't know what's going to happen."

Looking up I saw Ella and Sarah at the end of the hallway, Ella had tears in her eyes, and Sarah just looked shocked and terrified. Ella walked over and wrapped her arms around both of us.

"God. Im so sorry sweetie. It will be ok. I know Adam wont ever let anyone take you away from him. No matter what. Look, you two need each other right now. I'm gonna call my mom, and I'll get her to take Sarah home too. I know this is breaking the rules and I'm sorry, but I love you, both of you, and I'm here for you. If you run away I'll go with you if you want."

Eve looked up at Ella and threw her arms around her. "Thank you," was all she managed to say. Twenty minutes later, they were leaving. Sarah handed me a piece of paper with her number on it as she left, and asked me to please let her know what happens, and told us she really liked us, and how she really hoped everything would turn out ok, then she leaned down and gave Eve a hug. Ella followed suit, and then they were gone, leaving Eve and I alone.

"Eve. I-I don't know what to say. I fucked up. I'm so sorry. I-"

She grabbed me and drew me into a kiss. I could feel the tears on her cheeks. "Stop. It's not your fault. You couldn't have known this was going to happen."

"I should have checked. I knew we needed to be careful, and now I might have ruined everything... Ella's right though. I won't let anyone separate us. Ever. If you want to run, then let's run. All I care about is being with you."

"I know Adam. I just... Oh god. Just take me to bed, please. One more time. I need you before...I don't know."

Honestly, at that moment, sex was the furthest thing from my mind, and I was about to say that it wasn't a good idea, because we didn't know when mom would be home. Then it dawned on me. She knew. Our secret wasn't a secret anymore. It didn't matter if she found us in bed together, because she already had.

I scooped Eve up and carried her to my room, entering it as if a groom carrying his bride across the threshold. That gave me an idea, and I gently laid Eve down on my bed, telling her to wait there and I would be right back.

She looked up at me with a puzzled expression, but nodded. I hated to leave her alone, but I needed her to know how I really felt, and I couldn't think of a better way than what I intended to do.

I made my way out of my room, and opened the hall closet. After a minute or so of looking, I found what I was after. It was a spool of thin nylon cord mom had bought for something a few years before. I took it into the kitchen, cut off two short lengths, and tied them into adjustable loops, and then turned and went back to my bedroom.

Eve had taken off her clothes while I was gone, and now laid there naked on my bed, waiting for my return. She sat up when I entered, a curious, but still sad look on her face. I sat down in front of her and took her left hand.

Extending her third finger, I slipped one of the loops of nylon onto it, rolled it down, and then tightened it enough that it wouldn't slip off. "Eve, I am yours, and you are mine. Forever. I love you."

New tears began to stream down her face, but now there was a smile there. She took the other loop from my hand and, taking my hand, pushed the makeshift ring down over my finger. Between sniffles she managed to give her own vow.

"Adam. I- Oh Jesus. I love you, more than anything on this earth. I would give anything never to leave your side. You have always been the only man in my heart, and you always will be. I will be yours forever."

She looked up into my eyes, tears still streaming down her cheeks, and I smiled. Leaning down, I planted a tender kiss on each cheek, and then one directly on her lips. She melted.

Our kiss was slow, deliberate, like we were fully aware of each minute muscle movement involved. The rest of the world, meanwhile, simply melted away, until only we were left. In this state of heightened senses, I felt every light touch as she slowly removed my underwear, the only thing I had bothered to throw on in my earlier haste.

Things moved as if in slow motion as Eve moved up the bed and reclined against the pillow. Though there were still the traces of tears staining her cheeks, her legs spread eagerly as I followed her, tracing the delicate contours of her legs with my fingertips, and then my lips.

Her back arched as my lips reached her inner thigh, as if even such slight contact was near orgasmic. Normally I'd have lingered, exploring her delicate folds with my tongue, and slowly brought her to orgasm. Looking in her eyes however, I could see that foreplay simply wasn't important in that moment. She needed me inside her, and I needed it too. I needed to make the whole world disappear, and leave only the two of us, coupled in our passion.

Even so, that urge wasn't the primal animalistic need I had felt the previous night when the other girls had been there. This time it was simply my love for her spurring me on.

Slowly I drifted up, my skin brushing gently against hers, until we were face to face. Her kiss was tender, filled with a longing that ached to be satisfied. I could feel her fear in it as well. She was afraid that we would never be like this again. So was I.

Still, the longer we kissed, and the longer our bodies remained pressed against each other, the less it mattered. In that moment we were together, and we could imagine it would be that way forever. We could pretend, just for a little while, that everything was okay.

Her body tensed as I entered her, and then swiftly relaxed, as if I had pushed out the last shreds of fear and doubt. Then, finally, there was only us.

Her left leg came up and wrapped around my right as I slowly began to slide myself in and out of her, spreading her wetness up and down my shaft. She felt like heaven, like her body had been perfectly designed just for me, as if she, like the biblical Eve, was made from a part of me.

None of those thoughts occurred to me then. The only thing on my mind was how amazing she was. Her beautiful hazel eyes looked right into mine, never losing contact as I pushed deep inside. Her pale freckled breasts heaved with each thrust, their pert nipples hard with arousal. Even her scent was intoxicating. It was hard to place, but it reminded me of sunflowers.

I leaned down to kiss and nibble at her neck, which stretched out to grant me access. "I love you Adam," she whispered into my ear. Before I could respond, she began to moan softly. Her back arched, her leg pulled me tight against her, and her arms wrapped around my back to do the same.

She pulled at me as if trying to sink every last bit of my dick into her, as her pussy, which was already incredibly tight, clamped down tighter and began to spasm. Her muscles squeezed deliciously around me starting from the base of my shaft and spreading down to the tip, coaxing me to spill my seed inside her. But it was too soon. I wouldn't let what might be our last time be a quickie.

I took a few deep breaths, willing myself not to cum yet, and slowly Eve's orgasm passed. As it did, she pulled herself up, and locked me into a passionate kiss. Her tongue explored mine, staking claim for queen and country. Then without warning, Eve shifted her weight, and rolled us over almost effortlessly.

Before I even knew it, she was on top of me. Her small hands pressed into the muscles of my chest and her hips began to rock gently. Her motions were fluid, her pussy like waves crashing over and then receding down the length of my throbbing dick.

I slid myself up the bed slightly to pull myself into more of a sitting position, and Eve's rhythm never faltered. At this angle, the fact she was on top of me put my face at about the level of her shoulders, giving my lips access from her own lips all the way to her breasts. Her lips were where I started, pulling her mouth to mine and kissing her deeply as her hips danced on top of me.

Slowly I moved lower, to her neck, her collarbone, down the center of her chest, before finally finding my target. She hummed as I took the erect peak of her nipple into my mouth, gently sucking and rolling my tongue around it, delighting in its firm yet soft feel. She in turn laced her fingers into my hair, pulling my mouth tighter against her breast as her pace quickened.

I knew she was going to cum again, perhaps even before she did, and as the precipice approached, I grabbed her hips, holding her back from going over. Its not that I didnt want her to have another orgasm, just that I wanted to prolong it. I wanted to hold her back as it built up stronger and stronger until she was ready to explode. Then I would let her cum.

We spent the next several minutes that way, I would release my hold and allow her to get right to the edge, and then hold her back. Over and over. Finally, when she closed in on her orgasm for the fifth time and was practically whimpering for release, I let her go.

Finally free to cum, she went all in. She rode me fast and hard, impaling herself on my dick as if trying to force every possible bit of it inside her. Even with the copious amounts of sex I had been having, and the stamina increase that granted me, I was no match for her eagerness.

Under other circumstances I might have slowed her down, or pushed her down on me harder and swiveled my hips to grind into her, to make her cum while still holding off my own orgasm. Right then though, cumming with her seemed like the mist natural and appropriate thing ing the world.

It didn't take much longer before she started to tense, and I could tell that despite the edging, she was still trying to will herself to hold it off as long as possible. Still, her willpower was no match for the force of her impending orgasm, and the battle was short fought.

Within seconds her breathing quickened and she began to moan, and I too felt the familiar pressure down below my balls. "Oh fuck! Cum with me Adam. Cum inside me pleeeeeease."

With one final loud guttural moan, her orgasm overwhelmed her, sweeping her away on a tidal wave of pleasure, and the sudden rhythmic clamping of her pussy coaxed mine out as well. I erupted deep inside her, filling her to the brim as hot sticky cum gushed out of my throbbing shaft.

She latched onto me, twitching as each powerful surge of my cum shot into her. He breathing came in ragged gasps and she was slippery with the sweat of our exertion. "I love you Evie," I whispered into her ear, wrapping my arms tightly around her as if I never wanted to let go.

When I finally pulled back from her I noticed something. Eve was crying. It wasn't a few tears running down her cheeks like before. She was legitimately sobbing. I wrapped her up in my arms and held her close as the strongest sense of deja vu I had ever felt struck me. It was just like the dreams I had been having, but it was also more than that, and I couldn't figure out why it felt so familiar.

I couldn't say how long we stayed that way. It could have been as little as a couple of minutes, but by the time we pulled apart Eve's breathing had slowed down, and the sweat had mostly dried. Her crying had also mostly stopped as well. Finally, Eve suggested we make our way to the shower to wash away the smell of sex before mom came back, and I grudgingly agreed that it was likely a good idea.

Our shower was a bit subdued, and though our hands found each others' bodies, the excited playfulness and overt sexuality just wasn't there. We simply had too much on our minds to be able to enjoy it in the way that we normally would have. Once we were both clean and dry, we resigned ourselves to getting dressed and going out into the living room to await our fate.

We talked for awhile about what we were going to do. At one point I suggested that we just say we all got a little too drunk and hot, but that nothing had happened. Eve rejected that idea offhand. Our mom wasn't stupid, and we both suspected that after seeing us like that, she had put two and two together. It was obvious with how much time we had been spending together. We were terrified about what was going to happen, but we both knew we had to face the truth.

We also talked about running away together. It was a nice thought. We could disappear and live out or lives as totally different people. No one would ever know the truth. Sadly, it was a fantasy. Neither of us was eighteen yet, and we wouldn't even begin to know how to get fake IDs or anything like that. No, we would face the music, and if we were separated, we would wait for each other, for as long as it took. Once Eve was eighteen, no one could keep us apart.

Eventually we ran out of ideas, and fell silent. For awhile we just sat there, side by side, both lost in our thoughts. Finally, after what could have been five minutes or an hour , I broke the silence. "Just say it was me."

"What?" Eve looked me as if she had never heard the language before, and was attempting to translate them.

"Just say you guys didn't know your limits. You got drunk, and I took advantage. If I take the blame at least you'll be ok. You won't have to have your life fucked up."

Eve looked like she was about to slap me. "Don't you fucking dare Adam. We got into this together, and we're going to face it together. Besides..." She held up her hand to display the makeshift ring on her finger. "That doesn't explain this. It's not coming off unless I have another one to put in its place."

I couldn't help smiling at her. Sure, we were young, and neither of us had much experience with the world, and maybe we were a but naive, but what was between us was real. We knew it with every fiber of our beings, and we wouldn't give up on it, no matter what.


With nothing left to say, we fell silent, both lost in our own thoughts, quietly analyzing every possible scenario of how things would go, and planning for each one. Eventually I got up and made us some sandwiches. Neither of us had much of an appetite, it was more just to distract ourselves, as was the movie I pulled up on Netflix. At some point, I must have fallen asleep, and my dream was unpleasant to say the least.

It started off as many others had. Eve and I had sex, and when we finished, she began to cry. A wave of guilt and rage directed at myself washed over me. How could I do that to her? She was too young. She didn't fully understand her feelings, and wasn't ready for that sort of thing anyway. What I had done was horrible, and I deserved to be punished for it.

Her voice was a hollow echo as I retreated into myself, a shell of disgust building up around me until I was encapsulated in a dark void of it. I could almost feel her wrap her arms around me. Almost hear her tell me how much she loved me, and how happy she was.

That couldn't be. It was wishful thinking. I had hurt her. Wronged her on a level so deep that she might never recover. I had stolen her youth, her innocence, the love she had reserved for someone who would deserve it, some future man who would have come along to sweep her off her feet and show her all the best things in life.

The wall around me shattered as I was yanked roughly up. I pressed hard against the ceiling, unable to move, or speak. I could only watch as shapes that roughly resembled men grabbed at Eve below me. I watched as their shaped swirled and shifted, until they became me. I couldn't say how many there were, maybe three, maybe twenty. They were like a dark undulating mass of bodies merging and dividing, but always clawing at Eve. My Eve. My love.

They forced her roughly onto the bed holding her down by her hands and feet, hands roaming across her body. One of them made its way between her forcibly spread legs, shoving a grotesque mass which only vaguely resembled a penis, and not so vaguely resembled a blade, into her.

Eve screamed, calling out for me to help her. I tried but the more I struggled, the more forceful the shapes below me seemed to become, their violent lust whipping into a frenzy. Then another appeared below her, seeming to appear out of the bed itself, and forced its own bladelike appendage into her ass.

Eve screamed and cried, begging for it to stop. I wanted to help her, but I couldn't. I was helpless, suspended above forced to watch her raped by demons who were somehow me, until finally I was released and fell. Only, I didn't really fall. I just sort of appeared on top of her.

Her legs were wrapped around me, and I was inside her. The sounds coming from her had turned to those of pleasure, and she whispered the she loved me. But no, it was wrong. I was hurting her. I must be. I was destroying her life.

Suddenly there was a laugh behind me. I turned to see him there. Linoge. He looked just like the character from the movie, complete with a silver wolf's head cane. He leered at me, eyes glowing a deep blood red, and a snarl on his lips that showed too many teeth.

He laughed again, a laugh that sounded far too kind for his visage. The laugh was familiar, almost comforting, and that made it all the worse. "Oh Adam, how far you've come. But now it's all over. Oh well, all good things must come to an end."

With a twitch of his cane, I was yanked back and off of Eve, her fingertips brushing mine slightly as we tried to cling to each other. Then mine were behind my back, tied or cuffed I couldn't tell. I could only watch as Eve, now fully dressed, was lead away by very serious looking people in suits. They had no faces, and yet somehow I could still see the disgusted sneers they shot at me as they passed.

Men held me as well, and somehow I knew they were cops. I was going to jail, and Eve was being taken far away, where I could never find her.

Our mother stood in the hallway, weeping. I heard her asking where she went so wrong between sobs, then she repeated it, as if a VHS tape being rewound and played again. She was a perpetual loop of horror, and sadness, and rage at a son who had ruined all of our lives.

I struggled against the men holding me and somehow broke free. My hands broke out of whatever held them, and suddenly I was running to Eve. I had to hold her one last time, to tell her how much I loved her. I had to.

Then Linoge was in front of me, a sneer painted across his face. He leaned in close and whispered. "Wake up, Adam. Wake up."

"Adam. Wake up, sweetie." I groggily opened my eyes, fighting my way free of the dream. There, laying against me, and tenderly kissing my cheek, was Eve. I wrapped my arms tightly around her, trying to banish the images my dream had conjured.

"Mmmyeah. I'm up."

"Sorry to wake you, but mom just texted me. She just picked up Uncle Trev from the airport, and they're on the way here."

"Ahh fuck...," was all I managed to say. I knew we would have to deal with mom, but I wasn't expecting Uncle Trev to be coming over too.

Suddenly I sat bolt upright so quickly I nearly knocked Eve off the couch. "Uncle Trev!" I almost shouted, and then in a much lower voice, that was barely even a whisper, "Linoge."


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Anonymous 16/06/30(Thu)18:26 No. 24401 ID: b0002e

Almost missed that this was updated. Nice story, I understand most authors want constructive criticism but I have none. Only please keep it up and thanks


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Anonymous 16/07/03(Sun)03:46 No. 24404 ID: 4fffaa

I hope you expand on who Uncle Trev is. There's really not much info given on him, which would have been useful in snippets had you intended this from the start (I'm guessing you had been intending Eve to be Linoge, until you seemed to change your mind with the anonympc bit).

hope to see an update soon


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Soli 16/07/03(Sun)20:10 No. 24405 ID: 21be5e

I actually intentionally left out introducing him before now for a reason which will become clear in the next chapter. Thanks for reading though guys. I actually dont care so much about criticism. I think most of us just like to see that someone is reading our stories.


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Anonymous 16/07/04(Mon)06:27 No. 24408 ID: 140df5

I read up to the start of the Linoge stuff before and stopped because I was getting attached to the characters and didn't want to see them wind up in a Shindol plotline. Just picked it up again ... thanks for an enjoyable read. Pretty cool how you can take a lot of the editorializing/criticism in stride as well. Definitely waiting for more.


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Anonymous 16/07/07(Thu)13:44 No. 24414 ID: 15cbab

Psst... you named the uncle Tommy at the beginning...


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Soli 16/07/08(Fri)01:42 No. 24416 ID: cd8c01

Welllllllll shit. I had totally forgotten about that. To be honest, when I started the story, I only had a general idea of how I wanted it to go, and the uncle angle hadn't yet crossed my mind, so I forgot I ever even mentioned one. But thanks for calling my attention to it. I'll either work that out, or just fix the name when I edit the full story.


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Anonymous 16/07/08(Fri)04:49 No. 24418 ID: 020d44

Oh, I had assumed there were two uncles. Wouldnt that be fine too?


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tSade!O9S.2cqv5k 16/07/09(Sat)19:26 No. 24421 ID: 2700cc

That was a lovely and hot story. The twist was a bit jarring and I felt that you didn't quite follow through with it (the main character stopped thinking or referencing it rather quickly) but didn't detract too much from the story as a whole. Thank you.


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Anonymous 16/07/10(Sun)10:03 No. 24422 ID: d31b4a

I mean, there could be two uncles, but introducing a character we've never heard of just to be a plot twist is kinda cheating. (And if it is the uncle she mentioned, the context makes more sense.)


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Anonymous 16/08/01(Mon)13:57 No. 24536 ID: 8ba34f

looking forward to the next chapter :)


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Soli 16/09/05(Mon)10:23 No. 24664 ID: 5fc065

Just popping in to say that I'm still working on this. I've written and rewritten the rest of the story a few times and just haven't been able to get it the way I want it. It will eventually get posted though.

In the meantime, I've also been working on a new story. So far I have four chapters and about 20,000 words. This on focuses much more on the characters and story rather than just raunchy sex scenes. I plan to start posting chapters of that pretty soon, so if you're interested, keep an eye out for it. Right now I'm tentatively titling it "The Killing Jar."


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Anonymous 16/09/07(Wed)09:56 No. 24668 ID: a117c7

Thanks for the update


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Anonymous 17/03/01(Wed)17:42 No. 24944 ID: be7601

Please continue this story


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Anonymous 17/05/22(Mon)06:34 No. 25035 ID: 79b3b3

Don't die on me dammit! The love in this story really wiggles the heart.


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Anonymous 17/07/09(Sun)07:09 No. 25087 ID: 9fa565

>>24664

I need the rest of this story in my life. Just stumbled here and read through the whole thing.


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fuuuuuuuuuck Anonymous 17/07/21(Fri)01:10 No. 25099 ID: d68ed0

So I just found this lovely gem and have really been enjoying it. Would love to see how you wrap this up, Soli.



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