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The Lolly Anne Conspiracies (tg, magic, ped*) AnonyMPC 12/04/04(Wed)22:59 No. 15727 ID: a609fb [Reply] [Last 50 posts]

Writing's become slow and chore-like again, so I've decided that my latest effort to get myself inspired will be to clear my backlist... over the next few weeks, I'll be editing and posting the stories that I have completed but not released. This does not include MPC4 which is still slow-going.

First up, another of my 'Sci-Fi Serials'. This one deserves a bit of a warning because it's a bit different than my usual stuff, focusing on men who transform into little girls. (I realize there's another 'guy turns into sexualized girl' story that just started, and apologize if it seems like more of the same).

The Lolly Anne Conspiracies (tg, magic, ped*)
Installment 1: "The New Lolly Anne" (additional codes: Mg*, MMg*, g*g*, 1st*)
(* indicates that the code applies due to the bodies of the people involved... since the story involves magical transgenderism, the minds involved will be different)

The first time it happened, I had no idea what was going on. In that respect, I’m like many others. Even those who chose this life, who knew it was coming, have told me that when it first happened they were surprised and wondered if it was a dream that first time.

In my case, that it was a dream was a natural conclusion, since the night before I’d had my share of those. Unsettling dreams about being held down by somebody laughing while I screamed. That’s common too.

When I first woke up that morning, just for a few moments, I felt strange, like my eyes weren’t quite right. For one thing, colors seemed to be more vivid, and subtly different shades of the same color stood out. If I didn't know better, I might have suspected I'd been shaking off the effect of some kind of psychotropic drug, but I didn't feel high, so I assumed I was caught in that place in-between dreams and reality, where they mixed a little too freely. Whenever I get like that I can usually choose whether to wake up fully or descend once again into slumber. I was still drowsy, and knew I didn’t have to go to work that day, so I decided to sleep in.

I must have spent an hour or so in that state, drifting in and out of consciousness, the comfort of my bed and dreams which were growing more and more erotic, when a noise jarred me. Somebody was coming through the front door.
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Anonymous 14/05/12(Mon)12:51 No. 21733 ID: 56e91c

Mint as always your an amazingly talented writer. Nothing makes my day like checking the thread to find that you've posted a chapter.


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Anonymous 14/05/12(Mon)17:46 No. 21734 ID: 860611

I just found this and read through part 1. I'm tired as so I scanned through and saved the rest of the story into a txt file. I can't want to continue reading though!


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AnonyMPC 14/05/12(Mon)19:01 No. 21735 ID: a609fb

>>21641
I've got plenty of stories where it's just nothing but porn, but I write this because I enjoy a little plot, too. Though, "a grim spiral into unending pain and suffering"? That seems a little much. I mean, there's less violence than in the average episode of
Once Upon A Time.

>>21689
Well, you should give up hope of seeing the story finished, because, as a serial, I don't intend to 'finish' even if I write 100 parts. Though at the rate I'm going, it'll probably just trail off long before that.

>>21733
I think you may be accidentally responding on the wrong story.

Thanks to everyone else who responded positively, glad you're still enjoying this despite the long wait between installments.




Growing Pains Dede 14/01/23(Thu)21:39 No. 20887 ID: 620eb5 [Reply]

Everybody remembers when they discovered masturbating for the first time. Mine was the day my family moved to Texas. There were four of us, me, my mom, my dad and my older sister, Courtney. Our old house in Nebraska was huge and I had a whole side of the house to myself practically, but now I was sharing the other side of a thin wall with my sister.

She unpacked some and then excused herself to go for a walk around our new neighborhood. We had always lived in the middle of nowhere, and so moving to a packed suburb was a big change for us. We'd be going to a school with 1700 other kids instead of 80 or 90. Also, for the first time we'd be seeing very little of eachother at school. With so few other kids around, we were bound to run into eachother frequently. Dad told me when you went to a school that big, you often didn't even meet everyone after four years.

I would be an 5th grader that year and my sister would be in 8th. She had always been a little on the chubby side with long blonde hair and loved wearing shorts that barely covered her asscheeks and tank tops. Despite there being very little selection in Nebraska, she always seemed to have a boyfriend since as far back as I remember. I wondered how long it would take for that to happen here.

That night she came in a little after sundown and we had dinner together. She retired to bed shortly after and I did the same. I was watching something on the History Channel when I heard something knocking next door. At first I thought she was hanging a picture or something, but when I turned the sound off I heard her moaning and her headboard hitting the wall.

I turned my TV off and slipped out of bed. Her bedroom door was closed, but her closet connected to the laundry room, so I opened the laundry room door quietly and slipped inside. The door into her room was open and I could see dim light coming through.

I crept up to the sliver of light and whenI pressed my eye to it I could see her bent over on her elbows and knees. Her pale ass was up in the air and her black thong was around her legs. A tall, skinny guy a little older than her had two handfulls of her ass and was fucking her raw. I stared in shock, but didn't leave. I could feel myself getting hard and knew that I was going to stay and watch this. Sure, that was my sister Courtney, but somehow this was the best thing I'd ever seen.

Her tummy was hanging down between her thighs and her huge white tits were spilling out of the top of her pajama shirt and bouncing as the guy drilled himself into her bare. She was moaning rhythmically with his thrusts and I could hear her wetness as his cock slapped into her soaking hole. Her hair was in her eyes and I could see her red lips hanging open.

I thought about her mouth as I began masturbating for the first time, finding it immediately intoxicating and almost mind-altering.
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Dede 14/03/22(Sat)21:02 No. 21399 ID: 620eb5

Beth wouldn't tell me anything until I told her what Stacy had said. I tried twice to give her the quick version, but she wasn't budging, so I took my time and explained in detail what she had said. Halfway through, she unzipped her jacket and slipped her hand inside her red tank top. I had to fight to keep my attention on driving while she began massaging her nipple and breathing more quickly. I could see her stomach where her shirt pulled up and noted the definition on her snow white, freckled skin.

I couldn't be sure if it was from working out or if she was just thin enough and spent enough time throwing up from drinking that she had developed abs. Knowing her, it could easily have been both.

"Don't stop" she sighed at me.

"That's it, I swear".

"Tell me how she fucked you after. I want details" she moaned.

I continued and she unbottoned her jeans, sliding a hand inside them and leaning back. She let the jeans slide halfway down her hips and I heard her finger pumping into her soaking pussy just a moment before I could smell her. I had to try to keep from panting audibly as she switched hands so she could lick her fingers.

"It's up here" she said between moans and pointed a wet finger at one of the really high end subdivisions. There were million dollar houses in this neighborhood.

I must have had a doubtful look on my face because she laughed icily like she had earlier, "Expecting something a little different?"
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Dede 14/03/23(Sun)23:57 No. 21413 ID: 620eb5

I couldn't believe that, but it made me twitch.

"That was the first time I'd ever kissed a girl. I didn't even know I was into that until she was leaned over me yelling. Fucking a guy with a girlfriend excites me, and when her face was so close to mine, I did the thing that felt the most right."

I was about to stop and ask her a question, but then she pulled her panties to the side, showing me her swollen, pink lips. She dragged a finger through them and I watched them curl silkily around her fingertip until it pulled away wet.

"Don't talk" she demanded.

I held her panties to the side and sunk my tongue into her for the first time, my aching cock hanging uselessly between my legs. Her flavor was so enticing that I buried my tongue deep and rolled it inside her.

"I kissed her and she just stood there, so I pulled back. I saw how red her face was, but not with anger. I got up from my chair and she stood up straight, backing away."

She told me how she crossed the room hungrily, Stacy reaching the wall with her back and how she kissed her again and pulled Stacy closer by the small of her back. Stacy tried to pull away and break their embrace, but Beth slapped her across her face and told her to shut her mouth.

"She was so submissive. Once I slapped her it was like she was waiting to be told what to do next. I see why you like her" Beth moaned as I sucked on her clit, determined to get her off. She was drenched when I began but was soaking my face too now as she told me about my ex succumbing to her.
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Anonymous 14/05/10(Sat)22:50 No. 21715 ID: 5f279f

...hhnnngg...

...

--aaagh! Cliffhanger! FUCK!!

Please, please continue!




The List (Anne) Anonymous 13/04/04(Thu)05:33 No. 18631 ID: f8f661 [Reply]

I’m a virgin. My names Noah, I’m twenty years old and I’m still a virgin. And no, it’s not because “I never had the chance” because I’ve had some slutty girl friends. It’s because I’m a loser. It really is as simple as that.

I dated this girl, Tiffany, back, in 8th grade. She was my first kiss and my first oral, but then she left me for some goth guy in the 11th grade. I heard all about how they fucked behind the grade school. I cried in my bedroom and listened to Green Day like a little bitch.

I really want to have sex. I mean its gotten so bad that I’ve called into work just so I could stay home and have a day-long beat-off session that ended up ruining my computer monitor. I don’t want to go into details but lets just say that sometimes I’m like a rocket.

I don’t want to be a loser either. It bugs me. Like deep in my brain it bugs me. I’ve read a few self help books and they all basically tell me that to get laid I need to not be a loser, but to not be a loser I need to get laid! I need the confidence. I need to fuck some chick.

But there in lies the problem. I don’t want it to be “some chick”. I want it to be the chick. Or, shall I say, the “chicks”. I have a list. I know, kinda dorky, but whatever. I have a list of all the chicks that are relatively close to me, and I mean that in both proximity and relation. A lot of them are ugly. They play DnD with me and my friends or they work with me.

I crossed all of them off the list. Then I was left with seven beautiful women on a piece of notebook paper. I wish I could post pictures but for all I know their boyfriends or someone would come on here and see this post. God knows they’d whoop my ass six ways to Sunday.

Anyways, I need a plan.

I’m not very good with plans. At least not sinister ones. I’m good at planning car trips or vacations. But I’ve never plotted to sleep with a girl that probably thinks of me as a brother, or a stranger. I guess I should start with picking a girl.
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Anonymous 14/04/03(Thu)11:00 No. 21476 ID: 5519d8

bump


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Batts 14/04/03(Thu)12:10 No. 21477 ID: 5519d8

I had nightmares all throughout the night. I don’t remember the specifics but I remember waking up and immediately calling into work, changing into sweatpants and an undone buttoned up shirt and going out by the pool. I didn’t feel like doing anything.

I mulled over the other girls on my list. There was my old Math teacher, the girl with the god complex, my ex, my internet friend from when I was in junior high (she was hot, I fucked up, kind of a long story). They all seemed so distant. Like, Anne was the easiest and I fucked that up.

She wanted me. Had wanted me. She was right there, practically begging me to fuck her and I told her to leave. I’m such a fucked idiot, I swear.

I need confidence so that I could move passed Anne and go for girl number 2 on the list. But I needed to get laid to get confidence. Or at least that’s how it should work. Whatever, I don’t know. I just want to fuck. Damn it, I shouldn’t have told her to go away.

“Oh hey,” Anne’s mother began. “I didn’t even see you there.” She was wearing work clothes, and it wasn’t until then that I realized how late it was. The sun was already going down.

We made small talk. It was boring but in the end worth it I suppose.

“So, I’m taking us all out to dinner tonight. Dress nice, okay?” She walked away before I could make a comment. I wasn’t sure what to think. Dinner? With Anne? After the awkwardness of last night. I guess I don’t have a choice.

I didn’t see Anne at all. She must have stayed in all day.
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The+Other+Rick 14/05/04(Sun)14:43 No. 21684 ID: b91629

That last bit about the pic; that was fucking classy. Fuck yeah man. I love this god damned story. Please, if you will, continue said story for all our reading pleasures.




Mg Uncle Rick 13/12/26(Thu)20:42 No. 20527 ID: a77b98 [Reply] [Last 50 posts]

My name's Rick, and this is my story.

Growing up in a big, religious family can make it difficult to find a place to whack it. My deeply religious family wasn't Catholic or Mormon, but they had similar views on contraception. I was the seventh of nine children, and yes, my brothers gave me hell about that when Star Trek Voyager came around. My parents also had a habit of picking up strays. Visiting missionaries, battered women, church members who'd fallen on hard times, we took in all sorts. One girl stayed with us all through her high school and college years, and we pretty much adopted her in all but name. My siblings and I all refer to her as our sister. It was only later that I was told she'd come to us to escape an abusive situation at home. I never questioned it growing up. It was simply the kind of thing my parents would do. They're amazing people, better than I'll ever be.

However, my parents fertility combined with their hospitality meant that privacy was an almost unheard of commodity in my home. I shared a room with up to five brothers when we were at our busiest, all of them older than me. My oldest brother discovered girls about the time I was discovering words, and everything he learned, or though he'd learned, was quickly passed down the line. That kind of early knowledge, combined with the inevitable onset of hormones, our conservative Christian upbringing, and of course the tight, crowded quarters, well... It's enough to give any guy a complex. My brothers all seem like pretty normal guys these days, but I sometimes wonder if any of them are as fucked up as me. I mean, hell, I'm pretty sure I seem normal most of the time.

Unsurprisingly, my moral upbringing ended up clashing with my pubescent lusts. My memories of my teenage years were filled with alternating stints of holy dread which inevitably gave way to primal indulgence, and back and forth and back again ad nauseum. I know now just how truly pointless all that angst and self loathing was. I probably would have come to terms with my atheism much sooner if it hadn't felt so much like giving up, or copping out. I sometimes think back on all the missed opportunities I had in high-school, the girls I broke up with because I 'couldn't control my lusts,' the time I walked away from a threesome with two of the hottest girls in my school because I wanted to be a good Christian. Even now, it makes me want to reach back through time and slap my teenage self.

Even so, I don't blame my parents. They're good people, who truly believe in their faith and their God, and they did the absolute best job they could raising me. I wouldn't even be here except for their belief that prophylactics are morally wrong, and that big families are a blessing from God. I've had a better life than most. I became an atheist after my freshman year Message too long. Click here to view the full text.


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The+Other+Rick 14/04/30(Wed)14:43 No. 21653 ID: b91629

Dude rick, what is the total word count on this masterpiece?!? I swear, I could totally see myself owning a hard copy of this. Again, I am happy to share this monicker with you, as you do it well. Glad to know that you have the writers' itch, because I and many others will be looking forward to your words to come. Thank you.


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Word Count Anonymous 14/04/30(Wed)23:03 No. 21657 ID: d8c23c

If you were to copy the content of the story, and none of the additional posts, into Word, with 0.5" margins all around, it would amount to 94 pages. Convert that to small book format, 200 pages. Truly a masterpiece.


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Anonymous 14/05/01(Thu)04:37 No. 21666 ID: faf5b0

Holy. Shit.




Anonymous 14/04/29(Tue)18:09 No. 21649 ID: 620eb5 [Reply]

Cole woke up to the sound of the interstate and checked his phone.

He remained in bed, laying in the divit of his sunken mattress looking at the shadows his ceiling fan made. How they carved across the popcorn-textured drywall and then bent sharply when they reached the corner where the wall began.

This wasn't his idea of entertainment, but still held his attention, much like watching a fire. Watching the shadows helped his hangover. He tried not to overthink it and let the patterns massage his sore brain.

The feeling that he had somehow misplaced his keys came and then he realized what was missing.

Laurie's friend. What was her name? She had been in bed with him when he had fallen asleep. Becky Something. She was related to someone that he had played football with in highschool. He couldn't really remember their conversation because he had been so drunk at the time and mostly had wanted to pass out at that point.

She made him get up off the sofa and show her his room, though. Once they were in his room, she was all over him.

He remembered mumbling that he had a girlfriend, but that it had no effect. He had been so drunk that all he could really do was follow along.

Becky had on her shirt from work the day before still, a camouflage pattern polo shirt from the tractor supply shopand some jeans. Underneath, she had on a sturdy black and white polka dot bra and a lacy black thong. He had watched propped against the wall as she slipped out of those as well and he saw that she was shaved smooth and tanned while naked.
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Anonymous 14/05/03(Sat)19:47 No. 21674 ID: a3754e

Short and simple, and not what I'm usually into, but I liked it




Sextra Terrestrials- The Geelien's [Goo-girl, loli, absorption/mergin Anime+Lover!nBUK81G80s 12/10/27(Sat)20:44 No. 17537 ID: 5d8438 [Reply] [Last 50 posts]

ctrl+f: Geelien the following link for detailed info:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BQfq-cNJXMu_-k7P5aXS92wln1fnu8Ex8Yku68MxtrI/edit

otherwise, enjoy

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1-1

(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, GOO-GUY, YURI, VIOLENCE

Chapter Summery: Follow the daily life of a teen Geelien and her family lucky enough to be chosen to visit Merkolova as representatives of their race.

- Merkolova, 2012 (earth year equivalent) -
- 4:43 P.M., Nycalus (Monday), second week of February (2) -

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Chapter 11-1 Anime+Lover!IjAskBW1NY 13/11/12(Tue)03:44 No. 20170 ID: 7c6761

Chapter 11 is done ^_^
it comes in three parts

By the way, in the event that I forget about this thread, 7chan goes down or i somehow can't update this thread, you can find this story on FictionPress, with all the formatting in place: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3104271/1/Sextra-Terrestrials-The-Geelien-s

(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, SHOUJO-AI

Chapter Summery: After a lunchtime chat with her friends and confronting the Nex that started the rumor, Celine finally decides who will be her first girlfriend.

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- The next day, Telios (Tuesday) -
- 10:40 A.M, Local School, Cafeteria -

“So, how's your day going so far?” asks Gina.
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Chapter 11-2 Anime+Lover!IjAskBW1NY 13/11/12(Tue)03:46 No. 20171 ID: 7c6761

11-2

(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, INCEST

Chapter Summery: After a chat with her new girlfriend concerning a part of their relationship, Celine gets an unexpected invite from Sakura.

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- 2:47 P.M. -
- Kellen residence, living room -

Entering her home, Celine happily declares...

“Mom! Dad! You won't believe what happened at school today!”

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Chapter 11-3 Anime+Lover!IjAskBW1NY 13/11/12(Tue)03:47 No. 20172 ID: 7c6761

11-3

(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, VIOLENCE

Chapter Summery: Already delighted with her own little private Shakra exhibition, Celine gets an opportunity that she never thought she'd get.

Disclaimer: I don't own Shugo Chara! or any related characters that appear in this work of fiction.

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Just a few steps from the door to the arena, Celine could hear thunderclaps and walking into the brightly lit, sizable room, the first thing Celine sees is the raised circular fighting arena, it was about four feet high and the current occupants were Amu and Utah, already engaged in their training which Celine was quite excited to have such a close view of the action as she hurries closer to the side of the fighting ring.

Amu was dressed in a T-shirt and jeans, while Utah wears a yellow sundress. Each of the fighters wore varying amounts of the protective Void Armor, Amu only wore the chest guard, while Utah, along with the chest protection, wore wrist and shin guards, along with long, black flat containers strapped to her legs that Celine knew contained a limited amount of water Utah could readily use.

Celine quickly saw the reason for Utah's extra protection as the twin-tailed blonde was in close range to Amu as they were briefly trading punches and kicks, though many of them blocked or dodged.
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Dan's mom and her boyfriend Anonymous 13/07/16(Tue)23:13 No. 19383 ID: 225153 [Reply]

I've never told anyone this story before. It's true and I still jack off thinking about it 20 years later.

I was 14 and a freshman in high school. My best friend's name was Dan. It was a Friday in spring and I had plans to sleep over at Dan's house and then go to the renaissance festival the next day. We rode our bikes to his house after school and proceeded to listen to music, order pizza, watch movies, the usual.

Dan's mom came home from work at about six that evening. She was totally hot, but I can't remember her name, but I want to say it was Heather. She was shorter than me and skinny, she couldn't have weighed more than 100 lbs or so. She had blonde hair and small tits, but I was always attracted to flat, thin chicks. She looked young, like maybe she had Dan when she was still young, but I never asked about that. When she came into the kitchen from the garage, we were finishing the pizza. She said "Hey guys," and put her purse and work bag on hte counter. She was wearing a business suit that made her look like Christina Applegate in Don't Tell Mom the Babysitter's Dead. She did her thing and we went to the other room to play video games.

Later on around nine, Heather's boyfriend showed up. We were watching a movie and we heard him come in and yell "Heather, it's James!" I remember his name because it was the same as my brother's. They went into the kitchen and were talking and laughing and putting beer in the fridge. They were pretty loud and Dan was getting pissed. He yelled "WE"RE TRYING TO WATCH A MOVIE, JEEZUS!!!" They both yelled back "Sorry!" in unison.

A couple hours later, we were in the kitchen gettind more soda and talking about whatever. Heather came from out of her room in jeans and an oversized t-shirt. It was obvious she wasn't wearing a bra because her nipples were poking out. I remember wondering why they were so hard because it was actually kind of warm in their house. She asked Dan what we were doing tomorrow and if we wanted to go to the beach with her and James. He told her we had plans, and while they were talking, she was getting more beers out of the fridge for her and James. When she bent over, the neck of that huge shirt gaped open. I got a perfect glance for about three seconds. Her tits were small and perky and her nipples looked like pencil erasers. I had an instant hard-on.

When you're 14, it doesn't take much for your dick to get hard. But when you're 14 and you get a glimpse of nice tits, it will control your life until you "take care of it." That's all there is to it. Looking back, I should have just gone to the bathroom, cranked one out into the toilet, and been done with it. But all I did was think about was my friend's mom's tits and how I could possibly get another peek. We continued to watch m Message too long. Click here to view the full text.


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Anonymous 13/07/17(Wed)22:50 No. 19396 ID: 225153

Do you guys read the last page of of books first? Do you need to know how a movie ends before you watch it?


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Anonymous 13/07/18(Thu)09:01 No. 19397 ID: e9230c

>>19396
might like to know what genre of book/movie they're getting themselves into. that said... i enjoyed it.


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Anonymous 14/04/24(Thu)18:24 No. 21603 ID: 76da3b

i liked it. no tags kept it surprising, like op was surprised...




The Long View Ed Said 13/09/14(Sat)04:40 No. 19712 ID: a1a3c6 [Reply]

(Loli, Shota, inc., kink, etc.)

I held most of my weight on my elbows, and looked down into her eyes. They stared back up at me, wide, maybe a little scared.

“Are you sure you want to do this?” I asked.

She sucked in a quick breath and nodded – her lips parting to let her breathe quick and deep, and she opened her thighs a little wider. My balls had been resting on one of them, and I felt them swing free for a moment before landing against her vulva. As I rolled my hips back to get into position, my cock dragged across her mons, and the soft patch of her pubes ticked the underside of shaft. The sudden stimulation sent a shudder through me, and my member burped out a thick rope of precum that I could feel dripping down her tiny mound and labia.

I lined up for the first thrust, looked deep into her eyes, and thought back to the moment that had lead us here.


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John Caker 13/10/22(Tue)08:10 No. 19977 ID: cf9877

keep going, this is f-ing amazing


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Rain 13/10/24(Thu)09:24 No. 19986 ID: 63b67a

And I begin the wait eagerly. This is absolutely excellent good sir.


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Anonymous 14/04/20(Sun)07:41 No. 21580 ID: 2bb384

op this is taking forever




Bounty Hunter Fel Nanapriss 14/04/15(Tue)07:55 No. 21549 ID: 58b3b2 [Reply]

Hello everyone, I am looking for a story that use to be on Guro-chan. It was called Bounty Hunter Fel. I am hoping that someone saved this story and can post all the parts to it. Thank You.


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Anonymous 14/04/16(Wed)06:52 No. 21553 ID: 27eddb

>>8547


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Nanapriss 14/04/16(Wed)13:06 No. 21555 ID: 58b3b2

my mistake. Changing location.




Rent-A-Daughter (Mg, ped, cons, 1st, cosplay, slow) AnonyMPC 11/09/10(Sat)00:32 No. 13668 ID: a609fb [Reply] [Last 50 posts]

The last of my 4 completed stories before I go into hibernation to complete My Private Camwhore 4, is Rent-A-Daughter. Be warned it's a bit slower in pace compared to my other stories, and with very limited actual sex. I'll also be doing a slower posting pace than before because it still needs more editing than the other ones did, but I just hope starting the posting will light a fire under me to edit more.

Rent-A-Daughter by AnonyMPC (Mg, ped, cons, 1st, cosplay, slow)

Chapter One:
It was the biggest moral lapse in my life and yet, at the same time, one of the most fulfilling experiences I’ve ever had. It made me a criminal, but more importantly, it made me a father… at least, sort of.

The day I got a daughter seemed like any ordinary day at first. I was working a little extra, by choice, in my home office, which was the second bedroom of my two-bedroom apartment. I worked from home, making a decent living at a job that let me set my own hours. I considered it a great job, about the only good thing I had going for me.

I’m not making excuses, but when this happened, it was a pretty low period in my life.

I was unhappy, and had been for a while. I knew something big was missing from my life. Most obviously, I was lonely. I hadn’t had a date in three years, and a girlfriend since I got out of college, six years ago. My dating life, when it was active, was not very notable either… my last girlfriend cheated on me and it pretty much wrecked me, making me too shy to try again. I guess subconsciously I didn’t want to let somebody get close enough to hurt me.

I wasn’t just romantically isolated either. I didn’t have many friends aside from the distant, more-or-less anonymous types you make on Internet fan-boards. My parents were both dead, my dad of a heart attack when I was eighteen , and my Mom eight years ago, while I was still in college. Both hit me hard, but I knew my Dad wasn’t healthy. Mom’s death was so sudden and senseless. She was murdered in a robbery by a meth head, who was later killed by police. In the comics this would have made me into a grim vigilante, patrolling the streets looking for justice, but in reality, the whole event just left a hole that my ambition slowly drained out of. It was a wonder I was hired at all when I got out of school, but I had good marks and my company had an aggressive recruiter.

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Anonymous 14/04/09(Wed)07:59 No. 21514 ID: b43944

AnonyMPC,

I have never read anything like this before, and I doubt i ever will again... But, wow... This is truly a brilliant story, I'm not usually into this stuff, and randomly clicked on this on a whim... But I can truly say that I fully enjoyed it, the narrative was amazing, the pace was perfect and it was pretty heart-wrenching when she left... And then it was a brilliant ending that gives closure, I would have hated this to have ended on a cliffhanger... I haven't been able to get it out of my mind for some reason since i first read it 3 days ago... For some reason it really hit me... I dont know why, i'm not anything like this, and I never really even associate myself with 7Chan, leave alone this part of it... So you have truly written a masterpiece here...

I commend you sir, on a truly great story...


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Anonymous 14/04/10(Thu)07:59 No. 21525 ID: 7f5ddb

WTF man!

I have never, ever commented on an imageboard before, but this story just forced me to.

This was excellent, I'll save this on a txt.

You're an awesome writer.


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Anonymous 14/04/10(Thu)10:31 No. 21527 ID: e04f9a

Have to agree, amazing story, even learned something about myself and why I tend to go for broken women. It wasn't like something that the characters are like, just a scene when I pictured it, it hit me and I understood why I go for those women.




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