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Rent-A-Daughter (Mg, ped, cons, 1st, cosplay, slow) AnonyMPC 11/09/10(Sat)00:32 No. 13668 ID: a609fb [Reply] [Last 50 posts]

The last of my 4 completed stories before I go into hibernation to complete My Private Camwhore 4, is Rent-A-Daughter. Be warned it's a bit slower in pace compared to my other stories, and with very limited actual sex. I'll also be doing a slower posting pace than before because it still needs more editing than the other ones did, but I just hope starting the posting will light a fire under me to edit more.

Rent-A-Daughter by AnonyMPC (Mg, ped, cons, 1st, cosplay, slow)

Chapter One:
It was the biggest moral lapse in my life and yet, at the same time, one of the most fulfilling experiences I’ve ever had. It made me a criminal, but more importantly, it made me a father… at least, sort of.

The day I got a daughter seemed like any ordinary day at first. I was working a little extra, by choice, in my home office, which was the second bedroom of my two-bedroom apartment. I worked from home, making a decent living at a job that let me set my own hours. I considered it a great job, about the only good thing I had going for me.

I’m not making excuses, but when this happened, it was a pretty low period in my life.

I was unhappy, and had been for a while. I knew something big was missing from my life. Most obviously, I was lonely. I hadn’t had a date in three years, and a girlfriend since I got out of college, six years ago. My dating life, when it was active, was not very notable either… my last girlfriend cheated on me and it pretty much wrecked me, making me too shy to try again. I guess subconsciously I didn’t want to let somebody get close enough to hurt me.

I wasn’t just romantically isolated either. I didn’t have many friends aside from the distant, more-or-less anonymous types you make on Internet fan-boards. My parents were both dead, my dad of a heart attack when I was eighteen , and my Mom eight years ago, while I was still in college. Both hit me hard, but I knew my Dad wasn’t healthy. Mom’s death was so sudden and senseless. She was murdered in a robbery by a meth head, who was later killed by police. In the comics this would have made me into a grim vigilante, patrolling the streets looking for justice, but in reality, the whole event just left a hole that my ambition slowly drained out of. It was a wonder I was hired at all when I got out of school, but I had good marks and my company had an aggressive recruiter.

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Anonymous 13/01/27(Sun)10:43 No. 18208 ID: 895bba

>>16134
I totally agree with this anon- I really felt like it was a love story, and thoroughly enjoyed it.
I can tell you really put your heart into it, AnonyMPC - thanks for making my night.


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AnonyMPC 13/01/27(Sun)18:05 No. 18209 ID: a609fb

I'm really happy people are still enjoying this, but... the story's complete, and it (along with all my work save one) are available on my website at http://www.asstr.org/~AnonyMPC so... next time it gets to the last page, just let it die. It makes me feel guilty to be bumped on a completed story that's over a year old when there are plenty of fresh and ongoing ones on the board, especially since I have several ongoing (and so regularly-bumped) serials here already. I do sincerely appreciate the urge to promote my work to others who may not have seen it (it always makes me warm inside when I see it, especially when it's on some other forum that I don't directly post to, at least not under my writing name), but, I don't know, maybe bump one of my serials to talk about and link to one of my standalones you really enjoyed, rather than a dead thread?


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Anonymous 13/01/28(Mon)14:20 No. 18215 ID: f5b1c2

>>18209
90% of the posts on this board are contentless bumps of dead threads. Mods don't care.




TheAntidote!2y1il5Qy0g 13/01/08(Tue)13:37 No. 18070 ID: 043fc2 [Reply]

Hey everyone. I've been posting this story elsewhere for a while now, not sure why I never came to post it here.

Fair warning, the content of this story is not for everyone. Or even most people. Contained hereafter is a story of mother/son underage incest, cuckolding, and impregnation.

I've been working on this for quite a while, so at this point it's fairly long. For those of you not already navigating away, I hope you enjoy. Story will begin in the next post.


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Anonymous 13/01/26(Sat)00:38 No. 18195 ID: 3c8793

great sex scenes, but am I the only one hoping the husband goes postal and kills them all? I know that isn't what the fetish is, but it would be awesome. Maybe this just isn't my genre.


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tSade!O9S.2cqv5k 13/01/26(Sat)06:52 No. 18197 ID: e1353d

A lovely, sexy little romp. Yummy!


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Anonymous 13/01/27(Sun)08:34 No. 18206 ID: d122c6

>>18195
All fetishes aside, that would be awesome.




Leap of Faith Fluffins 10/12/27(Mon)09:26 No. 10610 ID: 2a26a0 [Reply] [First 100 posts] [Last 50 posts]

First time writer here, r&r, plzkthx.
Contains: All futa, All underage
(remember, boys and girls, pedophilia is illegal in the US, only fap to it, never do it IRL)

Nov. 12, 2010.
Hi, My name is Faith Woods, I’m 14 years old, shoulder-length straight red hair, still-growing B cup breasts, perfect 6.5:1 hip:waist ratio (I’m kind of a math nerd), I'm 5 feet tall with a healthy does of freckles, and I’m not a normal girl. I mean, I try to be normal. I go to a regular middle school, have normal friends and a totally normal family… it’s me that isn’t totally normal. And hell, I didn’t even know I was abnormal ‘till about a week ago.
See, last Wednesday night, I grew a dick.
Yeah, I know, that’s about how I reacted when I saw it. I woke up Thursday morning to get ready for school, I felt something funny between my legs. I didn’t really pay it any mind, I thought it was my tired mind playing tricks, so I got up and went to the shower anyways. So I was too tired to even glance in the mirror, I just slipped off my panties and started the water.
Once it got heated, I stepped in, and I immediately felt weird. The drops that should have been falling on my crotch were stopping short. I still felt them hit me, but it felt like whatever they hit was sticking out from my legs instead of recessing in. I looked down, the steamy water gently clearing my head and waking me up a bit, and I saw it.
The first thing I did was squeal. Not like a big yell or anything, just a little ‘Eep!’ as I saw something on my body that I knew wasn’t there the last time I looked. The second thing I did was lose my balance and fall backwards. I landed directly on my ass, It hurt. A lot.
I sat there for a few minutes, I was just staring at the mound of flesh sitting there. It was about as thick as… like a whiteboard marker. And it was almost as long. It was just long enough to dangle down and just kinda sit there on the floor; it was really soft and floppy, I was a mix of afraid, shocked, and a little bit intrigued. I mean… I just grew a DICK. Like, a real-life, honest-to-goodness penis. The first thing I did when it sank into my head (which was after about 20 minutes of staring blankly at it), was to pick it up and examine the new area. I had a pair of balls it seemed, too; pretty small, by comparison to the size of my new member, though I had no reference to any real male anatomy, they just seemed… dinky. I breathed a sigh of relief when I felt my normal equipment still residing neatly where it belonged under my new testes.
All this manhandling had started to give me an erection. Of course, I had no idea what was happening then; I felt things tightening in my crotch, the weight of my cock suddenly became more prominent as it began to lift slowly up. I took my hands away, terrified that I had broken it or something, and felt everything becoming tighter and more intense as my memb Message too long. Click here to view the full text.


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Rin!y7chl82msE 12/08/16(Thu)11:59 No. 17021 ID: 6ed160

>>16534
Well, that might be a...
-puts on sunglasses-
Leap of faith.

YEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!

On topic: Sucks that people just stop writing. You get absorbed into a story, and poof! Gone.


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Anonymous 12/08/20(Mon)15:41 No. 17050 ID: da14b7

OMG more! Can I throw $ at you to make more?


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Anonymous 13/01/27(Sun)08:25 No. 18203 ID: 94d89b

please please please please




Having sex with my little cousin for the first time(mg, ped) BeYourMind 12/10/21(Sun)23:45 No. 17469 ID: ffcc96 [Reply]

Hi everyone, please allow me to introduce myself before the story begins. Will try to make it short.
I'm a 20 year old guy with quite a few taboo fantasies. I'm currently home due to fall break at my university, and haven't been able to fall asleep, so I figured I'd try writing down a story of mine for you people to read.
Been pondering about doing it for a long time, but have been too nervous about posting too much personal info. Because I'm stupid I'm leaving an e-mail at the bottom of the story for anything you might want to say to me(don't expect to get much out of it by flooding me with negative, useless feedback). I'm hoping to get some replies from "likeminded" people, and am very happy to receive criticism on the writing and such.
This is a quick draft that I wanted to post before going to bed. I have a test coming up tomorrow, so I hope to polish the story a bit as well as write the follow up(which I think is pretty fucking hot).
Anyways, here’s a little background info on me/the story's beginning. I always was an average kid in a lot of ways, although a bit ugly compared to the other kids my age. As a preteen/teenager I was always really fascinated with video games as well as programming, and ended up spending a lot of time in front of the computer.
As a result of this I quickly learned about porn, and at around age 12 I stumbled upon child porn. I didn’t realize I had entered an extremely taboo zone. I was just really curious about what the girls in my class looked like naked, and I’ve never been able to find the typical surgically enhanced porn stars to be attractive in the same way I do with teen girls. At some point I grew aware of how not normal what I was doing actually was. A lot of my friends had had their first girlfriend experiences, while I’d never tried anything with a girl, and my selfesteem was suffering a lot during this period. Around this time a depression started growing inside me, and I’ve been dealing with it up until now.
Last year I dropped out of law school because of a lot of psychological problems, and my illegal taboo fantasies were growing stronger than ever sending me into a lot of inner moral complexes.
My family was fantastic in supporting me, however, and weirdly enough I found a lot of confidence in practicing Starcraft really hard during that period. I also met a 14 – year old girl, who I became close with, and she helped me slowly accepting that I am in fact not just an average guy. I’m a pedophile, and I doubt that’ll ever change. I don’t have a moustache, don’t take pleasure in raping infants and I’m actually well functional social being, but yes I’m a pedophile, and one of my biggest dreams are to have sex with a young girl. I realize this’ll never happen in a way that leaves all parts involved satisfied, but coming to acceptance and in control of myself has given me a drive and Message too long. Click here to view the full text.


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Anonymous 12/12/28(Fri)18:26 No. 17983 ID: 951b47

>>17980
Shut up, Meg


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Anonymous 13/01/12(Sat)01:17 No. 18107 ID: 9711cb

>>17980
Are you telling me that we have a female in our midsts?


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Anonymous 13/01/26(Sat)09:39 No. 18198 ID: d22ae4




An entry into a Bad Romance Terrified to give 12/03/21(Wed)21:07 No. 15558 ID: 20b283 [Reply]

Me and a bunch of authors have decided, given how a lot of people are making a mint off shitty romance books, to attempt "bad erotic fiction," which we're going to do at an upcoming convention in May. The contest includes some local and syndicated authors, many who probably will have to get drunk for the panel, just to read one another's attempt at styles in a semi-sarcastic mockery of popular books on the market. I thought some of you might enjoy one of my submitted pieces, which I don't mind posting here because it's not likely to make me much money, and I'd like your feedback.

Warning: This is awful on purpose. Hubert is not a real author (I felt it sounded awkward enough to give it that extra spaz punch) and the styles attempted for this piece are: "Gary Sue" wish-fulfillment, unrealistic attitudes towards women, friend zone obliviousness, and ADHD style of writing done by someone who has probably never had a real sexual encounter in their life but probably jacks off to Boris Vallejo posters. One of the authors who got a peek said, "It took days to get through the first few paragraphs, but the sex scene was too hilarious to be considered bad." I figure if I make the first part badly written with run on sentences, I will win the "terrible pentameter" award, if there is one, and if not, I will make it one and award it to myself. Because it's that kind of competition.

[M/F, pathetic, FreeBSD]

Data Center Fun
A Tale of a Hot Girl Who Came to Her Senses
by Hubert Schlotzsky

It was late at night, and Dr. Rock Mustang had been working really hard on reworking a FreeBSD kernel to the latest module for a webcam that he had reverse engineered, even though he had an non-spec USB peripheral board, but that's what he expected from the crap they had in post-market parts bought from Hong Kong. He grimaced at the thought that his pointy-haired bosses were stumbling around like inflatable clown punching bags, bumping into one another and self congratulating themselves in saving 64 cents while the true heroes, techs like himself, were the ones that suffered in the daily trenches of support.

"We have to install 32 servers," said his manager, a unfortunate pimply man stuffed into a tweed coat that made him look like the kind of cheap Chicken Kiev frozen dinner that was on sale at Shop-Rite for $4 except when on sale for $3 with a coupon, but you had to buy 4 at once and it was the kind of dinner one could only eat 3 of in a month before you got sick of them. "... by tomorrow morning."

Rock looked at the clock. It was already twenty two hundred hours. "When is morning for you?" he asked.
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Anonymous 12/03/23(Fri)18:37 No. 15580 ID: c1bebf

>>15573

Duck is also a popular brand of said tape.


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Anonymous 12/03/31(Sat)00:52 No. 15691 ID: 8fc5e5

>>15573
lol. Rock also sounds like the kind of super nerd that would call it Duck tape despite it more commonly being called duct tape nowdays


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Anonymous 13/01/20(Sun)13:36 No. 18163 ID: e48516

I printed this off and put it in a binder/I love you.




Summer of the Succubus (fb, incest, magic, semi-mc) AnonyMPC 13/01/14(Mon)17:57 No. 18123 ID: a609fb [Reply]

This is another attempt at an ongoing serial, and was inspired by a picture I saw on hentai-foundry. I say inspired by rather than based on, because I did not attempt to copy the picture in a lot of particulars, however, the picture still serves as a spoiler for the first part (will be the second post), so take that into account when you decide whether or not to look... it can be found here: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/faustsketcher/174102/One-Hell-of-First-Time

So, without furthur ado...

Summer of the Succubus (fb, inc, magic, semi-mc)

Episode 1: "Release" (Additional codes: 1st, reluc, b-solo)

She was aware, but only barely so. She could sense what she needed to become more than that, a thread of arousal, nearby but always dancing just out of reach. And like a starving man attempting to fish with his bare hands, no matter hopeless it seemed, she had no other choice but to try and grab, no matter how weak she was, how painful each attempt.

And then, suddenly, just when she thought she'd lost it completely, she snagged it, barely, like at the tips of her fingers, if she still had fingers, but she had gripped onto the sexual energy and with what seemed like more strength than she had, pulled herself out of her prison and, for the first time in forever, touched another mind. The arousal was gone, but she still held on to something, the after-effects, powerful in its own way.

Her prison, her trap, was pulling back at her... maybe if she had been here just an hour or a week she would have the energy to fight out alone, but no, it had been too long since she'd fed, she knew that she had only one hope, in order to be safe, she had to get into this person's mind... this man's mind, she could sense that much already, it was a male, which was a lucky break. Men were easier.


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Anonymous 13/01/19(Sat)04:42 No. 18158 ID: 360620

>>18156
Only after finishing the story did I realise it was written by you
No wonder it was so good


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Anonymous 13/01/19(Sat)07:19 No. 18159 ID: 171bd5

>>18156

The concept is derivative but I trust you to make it interesting, which you did.


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Tr3d!d2oTvxNG42 13/01/20(Sun)08:41 No. 18161 ID: 5bfe97

>>18156
As the Anon above me said,
The title wasn't too outrageous to me,
However, if it was anyone but you, it wouldn't have delivered as a great story.




FIRE It Hurts To Blink!!IwAJMuMwuv 13/01/14(Mon)10:29 No. 18122 ID: 06fea4 [Reply]

Good evening, /elit/. It's been a very long time, hasn't it? I'm glad to see you're well. I wrote a short story for you. I hope you like it.

As an aside, I would like to recommend you take some time to read the Machine of Death anthology, which can be freely downloaded. There are a lot of great stories by many talented authors, all based on the theme of a machine that can predict the manner of one's death. This is my take on that premise.

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"I always thought breaking into a place would be, I don't know, louder."

"Feeling let down?" she mocks gently.

"A little bit." I admit as I pull open the window. "You know, I had the weirdest feeling that I could die from slicing my arm while I was doing this. Like, I could just sit down and try to bleed out, and the world would get the fuck over itself when they found out."

"Like that'd work. Even if I let you do that we'd probably drop a lighter or something. Then everyone'd be like, well, he obviously came here to start a fire, and that's what got him."

Clambering through the window, I pause for a second and turn around. "You know what? Fuck the Machine."
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Anonymous 13/01/18(Fri)07:20 No. 18150 ID: f86d9c

Jesus fuck, it's Blink.


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Tr3d!d2oTvxNG42 13/01/18(Fri)11:56 No. 18153 ID: 5bfe97

Oh my god Blink. I've missed your words so much.

My heart, she sings.




uncle grumbles 13/01/02(Wed)10:29 No. 18008 ID: 89aba0 [Reply]

Another tale from the Lily-verse.

As always, I invite feedback, especially the negative kind.

I want to do better.


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"That is incorrect."

Sherry collapsed back into her chair. So close! The eleven other girls in the class relaxed, for a moment, and whispered amongst themselves. Five of them, including Sherry, were only a point away from winning. The rest were only two away, except for Tran, the new girl, who had forfeited her last question, unable to speak, and was short by three.

It was the most evenly matched game anyone could remember. Some of that was luck, but some of that was skilled play; it was part of the game to get as many players as possible as close to winning as could be.

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Anonymous 13/01/12(Sat)05:05 No. 18108 ID: 27d021

>>18083

I'm not sure if I like the idea of introducing canon outside of your role as an author. It breaks the fourth wall, if you get what I mean.


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uncle+grumbles 13/01/12(Sat)19:57 No. 18111 ID: 89aba0

>>18108 "breaks the fourth wall, if you know what I mean"

I do, very much, and frankly, I don't much like it either.

But while I do have a fairly complex setting and backstory in mind, so far the stories that have revealed themselves to me do not explain it well.

I do have a chunk of dialog sitting around which provides some information about the larger world the Lily works in, but it's not much better than this, being exposition of the "let me explain" sort, almost as clumsy as I what I did here. It's got a big hole in right now, but if I can fix that, I might post it just to for grins.

So...yeah, I'm still struggling to find my way with the Lily, and here I took the lazy way out so that folks could be reassured that there is a larger context for what's happening.

As always, thanks for the criticism, which is entirely justified.


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dafuq 13/01/14(Mon)21:34 No. 18125 ID: b2a6c1

>>18108

It's not breaking the fourth wall it's exposition.

Breaking the 4th is when a character inside the story reacts in a way that indicates they know they're in a work of fiction, such as by sending off a friend by saying "See you next chapter!", or by randomly interjecting with "But the reader already knows this..." when making a point.

Exposition is revealing things about the story (or setting in which the story takes place) outside the confines of the story, such as in a forward, afterward or in the case of an author explaining his setting in a response post. ;)

Get your terminology straight!




Melissa Imhotep!jE19dxWPqM 13/01/11(Fri)08:36 No. 18097 ID: f2e1ee [Reply]

A story about a young girl masturbating and using diapers. Enjoy.

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Melissa was nervous, yet excited. Her stomach felt heavy and her head felt light. She knew that what she was about to do was wrong, but that only fueled the excitement even more. She stood naked in her room in front of a mirror, alone at her house, holding an unopened package of Pull-Ups training pants. It started one night when Melissa was masturbating, as she often enjoyed doing at night before she went to sleep. Her thoughts suddenly converged on the thought of herself in a diaper. The thought struck her unexpectedly, yet was oddly satisfying. After climaxing, she felt dizzy, exhausted, and confused. The same recurring fantasy came back to her every night, and an occasional morning. In the fantasy, she for some reason had to wear a diaper. The feeling of it wrapped around her, the shame, the safety, all excited her. She started to masturbate at least two times a day, sometimes up to five. She felt insatiable. During school, and family dinner, and hanging out with her friends, she was distracted and withdrawn, the desire to play with herself constantly tugging at her mind. Eventually, the next step became clear. She was going to somehow obtain diapers, and see what it was really like.
That Friday, when her parents left, she put her plan into action. She rode her bike down the block to the grocery store, and grabbed a package of Pull-Ups training pants. She tried hard to maintain a calm on the outside, but inside she was aflame. The simple act of touching the package made her legs weak. Walking to the cashier, she felt outside of herself. As she purchased them, her heart was pumping. Did he know why she bought them? Did he think she just had a younger sister? Her face was becoming very flushed, no matter how hard she tried to remain calm. She tilted her face down in shame and handed over some babysitting money. The nervousness and embarrassment was battling with the excitement. What she had been imagining for so long was becoming a reality.
She stood naked in front of her mirror, holding the package in front of her peach-fuzzed sex. The excitement was making her light headed. She ripped open the top of the package and pulled out one of the training pants. Immediately she could smell that delicious perfume. It instantly took her back to being a little child. She carefully cracked the diaper open, bent over, and stepped into it. She loved the way it slid up over her slender legs, the way it smelled, the way it stretched to get over her hips and butt, and the way it came to rest snug against her sex, gripping her tightly. At this point, Melissa was about to explode, she had to masturbate. She slid one hand down into the diaper, like she'd imagined doing, and her fingers came to rest against her very slick and wet sex. She had never felt herself so wet before, good thing it would all be soaked up. Carefully, she slid two fingers inside hers Message too long. Click here to view the full text.


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Imhotep!jE19dxWPqM 13/01/11(Fri)08:36 No. 18098 ID: f2e1ee

As she lay there, wet diaper on, frilly dress hitched up around her waist, laying face down with a few pillows between her legs, and residual orgasms causing her to tremor, she reflected on what she was doing. She knew if anyone saw her right now she would never be able to talk to them again, the humiliation would be too great. Though her parents never talked about it, she knew there was a general notion that masturbating was somehow bad. When a girl at school brought it up, the girls roundly dismissed the idea, though she felt they were not quite being upfront about it. Furthermore, she had never even heard of anyone deriving pleasure from a diaper, of all things, and this worried her. She felt sort of shamed and guilty for some reason, like she was being dishonest to the people she knew by hiding this new private aspect of herself. She had to admit that this secret aspect also made it more exciting, somehow more powerful that it was wrong and shameful and bad.
After a minute of thinking, her body took over and she fell asleep. When she woke up, she looked at the clock and saw she had been asleep for about two hours. It took her a second to realize what situation she was in. Some primitive part of her brain urged her to do it all again, right there, but after humping herself into the pillow a few times she realized that she was way too exhausted. Time to clean herself up. She rolled off the pillows onto her back, then sat on the edge of the bed. The warm pee in her diaper squished against her. She then swung her legs off the bed and slowly stood up. Once again she waddled to her bathroom, and got a look at herself in the full length mirror. What a sight she was, her hair on one side was tangled and sticking up from rubbing against the bed. Her blue Alice dress was soaked in the front and back with sweat, and the inside of her tights were also soaked, but not with sweat. She figured that pushing herself into the diaper squeezed some of her pee out. It made the saddle of her tights transparent to the wet diaper below. She sat on the edge of the tub and turned the faucet on, a bath sounded really nice. She undid the corset style ties on the back of the dress, and let it fall to the floor, then rolled the white tights down, and stepped on them to finish getting them off. Wow, look at this diaper. It is at the absolute bursting point. Clearly it was made for a much smaller child then she with a much smaller bladder, but it performed it's duty well. Sliding the diaper down, it hit the floor with a plop. She could see that again she had secreted a lot of thick vaginal fluid. It had been mixed with her pee and smeared all over the inside of her legs and even on her butt. Her masturbatory act must have spread it around a lot. She took out her pigtails, and at this point the bath was hot and full, ready for her to climb in.
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Anonymous 13/01/11(Fri)18:57 No. 18101 ID: c1bebf

This is fucking hot.

You should put some spacing between your paragraphs, but that is a minor issue.


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Anonymous 13/01/12(Sat)23:24 No. 18114 ID: dd3462

Yeah, you have beautiful orgasms descriptions !
Keep up that good work ^^




PADE, Inc Cake Johnson!!DlAwZ1LwEx 11/11/26(Sat)00:20 No. 14381 ID: 43ebe0 [Reply]

tags: sci-fi, transformation, weird, loli, underage, ff, whatever else my sick, perverted mind can add in

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This is my first time posting here but I thought you guys might like to read this. I got chapter 2 planned out but I'm always open to suggestions for further chapters. Please excuse any typos. I skimmed this story a few times, but it's a big one, so I might have missed a few. Sorry if the structure isn't all that great, I'm not very good at this. Anyway, onward.

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"Scientific test subjects needed! Get paid for your time!"

Jack's friends told him it was a bad idea. It seemed that everyone knew someone-- their cousin's best friend's fiance, who knew a guy who met a guy that died taking part in one of those research studies. It was dangerous money. But the way Jack figured, it couldn't hurt to go downtown and check out this "PADE Inc" and see what they were all about. As he boarded the bus, Jack hoped the decision would be cut and dry. He was desperate for money since he had lost his job, but he wasn't sure HOW desperate. He didn't know, for instance, if he could resist signing up if the pay was good and all that would happen is he'd lose a few fingers. Or a testicle. The further the bus drove away from the sights of town he was familiar with, the more it felt like Jack had to do this. In his head he started making a basic list of how much limb loss or diseases contracted he'd be willing to take for how much money. As the bus turned onto a bumpy country road, nearing its destination, Jack concluded that he would probably consider cancer as a reasonable risk if he could get a couple hundred grand. In any case, he felt a very strange sensation, a sort of finality to his experience, as if this was the only thing he could do. Going to this research lab suddenly felt like his destiny in a weird way.

The bus turned another corner and through the window Jack could see where he would be getting off. It looked like a farm. On very large barn, with a smaller building attached that appeared to be the main entrance. The bus slowed to a stop.

"This is it?" Asked Jack as he stepped off the bus.
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Anonymous 12/08/19(Sun)13:33 No. 17043 ID: 8d422e

Bump for Cake, hopefully, the Cake is not a lie.


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Anonymous 13/01/07(Mon)07:42 No. 18061 ID: 2a0004

>>14385
lol, less permanent than this thread I guess.


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Anonymous 13/01/07(Mon)22:53 No. 18066 ID: fa0ceb

Cake Johnson, please keep writing this beautiful, beautiful tale.

Dear, god, I love this board!




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